Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2018 08:45 AM · On: March 22 (Part Two)
Everything looks so good, I would like to be there!!
Author's Response: So would I! *sigh* Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2018 09:52 AM · On: March 22 (Part Two)
Damn Brian is on a roll tearing into Mikey and then letting Linds have it too!! Loved every word he said to her. I wish she'd take a long long walk off a short bridge. Loved the altenating POV's for these two chapters I love seeing events from each of their eyes. Already looking forward to more!
Well done!!
:)
Author's Response: Oh, we haven't even begun to see what happens to Lindsay; as well you know now. :) Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 07:16 PM · On: March 22 (Part Two)
Wonder what Deb & Jen will say when they see their nursery work changed. Anoter fun chapter, loved devious Brian getting rid of the twinkies. Bill
Author's Response: They'll likely be unhappy until Brian pointedly reminds them that it's not their nursery; and then Denb will still be all huffy and Jen slightly abashed. Or, at least that's how I imagine them acting. I suppose we'll have to wait and see. And Brian to get rid of the Twinkies. Somehow, I have a feeling that will come back and bite him on the ass. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 04:14 PM · On: March 22 (Part Two)
Brian is so good in this , I LOVED LOVED LOVED how he handled Lindsay. She needs taking down s notch or two with her entitlement attitude. Brian doing all of that fodxJuatin even handling the mom brigade is amazing. Justin is going to be so happy and so proud of him. Lol omg the stories of Justin as a kind cracks me up and reminds me of a story I can’t mention here if my buster when she was younger.
Fantastic work as always x
Author's Response: Another Lindsay smack down was definitely needed; and the boys aren't through with her yet... Brian must have learned patience over the years, because I know that if I had been in his place, as soon as I saw them, I would been, "Oh, no you don't. Go home! This is MY project." It was sweet of him to put up with their antics for Justin's sake. Kid sotries are the best! :) Thanks for reading! :)
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