Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2018 02:11 AM · On: February 13

Hi, Ashita! LOL! I can definitely sympathize with Justin's dilemma about having his food at the top of the shelf when you are short! It seems like every time I want something, it's at the top. I have resorted to much of what he did in this chapter to get to the food - ha!

I like how you mixed in humor with angst again in this chapter. I love how Justin was able to tell the Twinkies were knockoffs, and it was clever how you wrote a flashback about Justin having an experience with his potential stalker. I am dying to find out who it is, and the background behind that!

Thanks again for another very enjoyable chapter! This story is currently one of my favorites, and I look foward to each part. :) ~Kim

Author's Response:
Hello Kim! Ihave to confess that I'm on the tall side, so I rarely have a problem with reaching the top shelves. Once in a great while it's a bit of a stretch, but not like poor Justin. My sister on the other hand, took after our grandmother and is always hopping and stretching and contorting herself in weird ways to reach them.

The funny thing is, I didn't plan to put the two parts together in the same chapter. The Twinkie discovery was supposed to happen in the previous chapter. But when I wrote the last line of that section, it just ended in a natural place and I put the Twinkie discovery in the next onewhere the grocery store trip gave me an opening to use that small section.

And thanks! I'm glad that you're enjoying it! ~Ash

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2018 12:58 PM · On: February 13

Twinkies strike again. Really Justin should know better what with a stalker somewhere around. At least he did get his twinkies and learned that Brian has found a replacement.

Author's Response:
I don't think it really hit Justin until then just how serious this stalker business is; the memory was a sort of wake up call that he's just as much in danger as Brian is with this person. Befoe, he was so focused on the threat against Brian that he didn't really think about where he fit into the equation. And those Twinkies...man, they just can't seem to find a middle ground on that yet.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2018 11:48 AM · On: February 13

It was so funny the artist's eye foiled her husband's plans !! But who was the man in the store?

Author's Response:
Yup! That's it exactly. Brian might have an eye for colors and fonts, but Justin's is just as good when it comes to details. Neither of them is going to win this battle. And as for the guy...well that's the mystery, isn't it? we'll have to see what happens. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2018 09:30 AM · On: February 13

Omg who was that, Justin really could have had a bad panic attack over that. And Justin sweetie Twinkies really are bad for you as much as you love them they are. We don’t have them in Ireland so don’t come here until your craving goes lol.

Brian is going to freak out when he hears about the person who did that to you and you better tell him because if he finds out from someone else you will be sorry.

Fantastic wirk seriously brilliant xx

Author's Response:
Justin could have definitely had another attack then; luckily, he was distracted before it got out of hand. And yeah, keeping that from Brian would be a very bad idea... And I don't think Justin really cares that they're bad for him. LOL! We'll have see what happens next. Thanks!

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2018 09:08 AM · On: February 13

Sly little twat...lols...both are fun.

Lovely story.

Author's Response:
They do seem to enjoy one-upping each other. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2018 08:46 AM · On: February 13

Lol I knew Justin would have quietly set Brian up 😂 It is so funny both of them trying to one up each other

Author's Response:
Brian really should have known better. It's never that easy when it comes to Justin. Thanks!

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