Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2018 02:23 PM · On: January 13 (Part One)
mikey just had to tattle, I don't know what he had to gain, but it sure isn't Brian
Author's Response: Of course, he did; he's not happy unless he's causing problems. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2018 03:37 PM · On: January 13 (Part One)
Love Yasmen. Would love to read how Joanie went to the pearly gates and had her sanctimoneous self turned away. Michael is going to get himself in so much trouble if he keeps on in this fashion. Deb can't tell Justin how to deal when she didn't do so well with her one and only pregnancy who never grew up.
Author's Response: I think I read a story somewhere where Joan got to the Gates, and was told that Peter wanted to talk to her personally; and she was all thrilled thinking she was about to commended for her righteous life and; well, that wasn't the case. I can't remember the title or who wrote it though. Deb...the Eternal Wet Nurse. Hmmm...I wonder if I can work that in somewhere into the story. Thanks!
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 10:18 PM · On: January 13 (Part One)
Grrrrr Joan really pisses me off and wow I wanted to bitch slap her for talking to Brian like that. No mother should ever do that it’s not human and it’s not heart or motherly.
Michael better run because Brian will be after you.
Author's Response: Joan really should not throw stones; she is a horrible person, and I beleive that there is a special place in hell just waiting for her.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2018 08:20 PM · On: January 13 (Part One)
Mikey! What a creep. He knew that news would send Joanie to see Brian.
Author's Response: He is indeed. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2018 12:51 PM · On: January 13 (Part One)
Ooh...that was one amazing speech Brian made to his mom - ha! So in character, too! And I love his assistant, Yasmeen. Something tells me that Michael is going to get it now - and well he should. Once more, he couldn't keep blabbing about something!
Can't wait now to see how Brian handles the two mothers! Thank you for posting this on here. I can't fathom why you don't have many more reviews for this story, because you are doing an amazing job! Looking forward to reading the rest of your story, and any others you might post in the future. :) ~Kim
Author's Response: I love when Brian gets to tell his mother where to stick it; there is not nearly enough of that in my opinion. Yasmeen is actully based off of one of my betas and her rants. She cracks me up. Mikey will definitely get what's coming to him eventually. :) As for the reviews, well, I can sort of understand why people might hesitate to read a WIP. I've been disappointed myself when I've gotten involved with a story and it's never finished. :)
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