Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2019 01:52 PM · On: Burgers and Surprises
Hi again! Oh my Goodness, this is so hilarious, it’s perfect! Every moment. I was chuckling so many times. So many wonderful moments. How you describe Gus’ expectations regarding Brians behaviour towards his "date", the talk between Brian and Lilys parents, Lilys behaviour and this “I’m your daughter-in-law, the interaction between Brian and Justin, the talk where Lily explains that Gus had not only a girlfriend before but “a girlfriend for every schoolday” and this “You’re not this boy anymore” hahaha :-) Just amazing! Thanks and warmest regards!
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 12:43 PM · On: Burgers and Surprises
That date was just so romantic and sweet and cute and OMG beautiful. Lilly really is a little madam isn't she and so cute with Gus. I'm so proud of how Brian is coping with it and acting for Gus but I think he is enjoying it and loving treating Justin to a good date. I'm glad Brian treated Jack nicely here it must be hard when a loved on suffers with head injury long term affects and he knows double after Justin's as well.
Fantastic work xx
Author's Response: Aww..thank you! Lily is a hoot, we had such a great time imagining a girlfriend for Gus and how she would behave. Brian and Justin are in a very good place in the end of Entwined, and Brian with his son and father and we just had to write a scene that reflected just how much they meant to each other.
Thank you again :D
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 02:04 PM · On: Burgers and Surprises
When picking up Lilly who would have guessed she would call Brian her father-in-law? When they went to the burger place, Gus was adorable tasteing the juice,pulling out her chair,etc he and Lilly were so cute trying to act grown up in fact the only child at the table was Jack
Author's Response: Gus is trying hard to please Lily :) He is an amazing kid. And Lily is a sweetheart. As for Jack, he can't resist his son and grandson :)
Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 04:28 AM · On: Burgers and Surprises
Awwww, Jack is coming along too. Of course, he has proven to be more of a handful than Gus (although Lily seems like she may have some quirks as well LOL.) Lovely chapter! Can't wait to see how the date goes!
Author's Response: We just had to include Jack, knowing Brian would be so happy to deal with him at the movies ;)
Reviewer: xJustSayingx (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2017 09:16 AM · On: Burgers and Surprises
Loved this chapter so much, Gus and Lily are really cute :D
Brian trying to make romantic gestures is hilarious, him holding the door for Justin was so sweet ^^
I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi Sarah!
Gus and Lily really are so cute, right? :D And Brian? We can tell you we had a good laugh writing that story LOL
We're so happy you're enjoyed this story so much. Thank you for letting us know, it's deeply appreciated :) The next chapter will be up very soon!
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2017 02:12 AM · On: Burgers and Surprises
OMG! I laughed so hard throughout this entire chapter. That Lily is a trip... I know there is only supposed to be one more chapter, but man this story is just sooo wonderful that I hate to see it end.
Author's Response: Hi Carrie!
Aw, we're thrilled you laughed at Brian's predicament! ** happy dance ** And yes, Lily is a hoot, right?
One more chapter for now, but we could be convinced to write more dates in the future ;)
Thank you deeply for your wonderful enthusiasm :)
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 10:27 PM · On: Burgers and Surprises
This is great. I'm so glad that Jesse and Aaron are there too. Love the first story. Lily is a handful- but so is Gus. Justin is having fun playing his role - now the ultimate would be a nice sex scene after they drop off Gus and Lily- I do believe Brian would pretend to be annoyed at Justin and make him "pay' even if he did throughly enjoy the 'date'.
Author's Response: Hi Sandy!
We're very glad you're enjoying their date and the fact that all the 'family' is here! Both kids are so precious LOL And what an interesting idea about a nice sex scene! Well, chapter 3 is already written and almost ready to post, but the good thing about that kind of story, is that the readers can motivate us to write more in the future :)
As always, thank you for your wonderful support, we appreciate that so, so much ♥
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2017 01:01 AM · On: Burgers and Surprises
Great second chapter with a very interesting take on Jack Kinney. Lilly is a hoot. Can't wait for more. Bill
Author's Response: Hi Bill!
Thank you very much for your review :) We're thrilled you enjoy Jack Kinney here, who is a very interesting character in that universe. And Lily is so good for Gus, right? ;)
We should have the last chapter up very soon :) Thank you again!
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
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