Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2017 01:30 AM · On: Monday
Lol
Author's Response: :))))))) thank you for reading!
Olivia.
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 03:25 PM · On: Monday
very nice story I like it a lot
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! Super happy that you like it. :)
Olivia.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2017 12:45 PM · On: Monday
Ohh gosh...ted the matchmaker...lols...that was amazing...loved it...and i love the banner too..thank u.
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Teddy is adorable- I had to add more of him. Thank so much for continuing to read and review!!
I love hearing what you have to say!! :)))))
Olivia.
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2017 06:56 AM · On: Monday
I LOVE this, LOL!! You've got the characterization down and my love for coffee and Brian. It's funny how Brian always gets names of tricks wrong (deliberately, I'm sure), and his nonfat, lowcal diet (except when Michael brings over the KFC/pizza/hamburger & fries meals, lol).
Author's Response: Aww, thanks!!! Glad to hear your enjoying this!!! I soo agree- Brian purposely forget tricks names and his awful lowcal diet, I'm happy to say, is destroyed in this story.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! Olivia.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2017 04:41 PM · On: Monday
Lovely start...i am guessing a blond with sunshine smile is behind this name misspelling..cant wait for more...thank u for sharing.
Author's Response: Possibly, maybe.....:) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!! You'll find out pretty soon the rest. It's a super short story. Olivia.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2017 04:32 PM · On: Monday
The question is was there really a Brad or did the worker mishear Brian's name. Short attention span perhaps?
Author's Response: Hmm, that's a good question. You'll find out very soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!! Olivia.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2017 01:11 PM · On: Monday
Hi, Olivia! Great to see a new story from you! Funny beginning. And I can just imagine Brian scowling over having the wrong name on his coffee cup! I'm thinking someone (maybe a cute blond, perhaps?) just wrote the wrong name on his cup?
Now I can't wait to see how this progresses! So delighted to see you posting again! Looking forward to the rest. ~Kim
Author's Response: Kim- Thank you so much for reading my story. I'm super happy to be back to posting, it's been a while. Ha, maybe, we'll see. Hope you continue reading! Olivia.
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