Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2016 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 18- Life goes on
I'm finally catching up!! I loved this chapter and especially Molly being so close to her brother. Also, Craig being such good person is refreshing. An I love Michael too. Thank you :)
Author's Response: Hooray! I am glad you are enjoying it. Molly and Justin aren't annoying each other for a change! Yes Craig, and Michael are good guys.
Thank you so much for reading :)
xoxo
Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2016 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 18- Life goes on
I'm sorry that you took "Hurry Please" as anything other then a compliment meaning how much your story is enjoyed. That I can't wait for the next chapter. I don't know how you would take it to mean anything negative and tell me that you don't appreciate It? I have been with your story from the begining and was taken back by that. Sorry again!
Author's Response: I know you didn't mean anything bad it.
Not a problem at all!
Thanks :)
xoxo
Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2016 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 18- Life goes on
I liked Molly and her helping Brian, and giving advice to her brother. They are closer now and that's nice to see. They really had no interactions much in the show. Poor Brian ,I really felt bad for him sitting far away from Justin at the party. I just wanted to go up behind him and give hime a push towards Justin. He is not secure in Justin's feelings for him becaus he's sacred of rejection, even though Justin made him promise that they would still be with each other. Hopefully he'll go to the prom and everything will be right as rain. How many chapters are left? Awaiting for next chapter. Hurry please.
Author's Response: Molly acts like a real hero here, helping those in need! ;)
The boys will be able to be apart forever, don't worry.
There are two chapters left, and I will post them every Sunday, as I have been for the past months. I like that you are eager to read, but I don't appreciate being told to 'hurry'.
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts :)
xoxo
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2016 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 18- Life goes on
Still loving this story, Cait! And I think you portrayed their subsequent return to 'normal' living very realistically. I also enjoyed the way you described their longing for each other, and especially Molly's involvement in this chapter. That was great!
Really like your QAF version of this well-known movie, and as aways I will be looking forward to more; wondering how the prom will go (my theory is that Brian may get teased somewhat by his college friends, but in the end he will be unable to resist showing up, perhaps unexpectedly like he did on the show). But I'm sure however you write it, I will enjoy it. Thank you again for being a writer on here, Cait; we deeply appreciate it. ~Kim
Author's Response: That's great! I think spending some time apart is realistic. Also, this happened in the movie (the remake)! After spending all that time with only each other, any time apart is too long! I aged Molly a little so that she could help the boys.
Brian's friends have changed their opinions a little about Brian while he was away. He may need some encouragement to go after his love...;)
Thanks for reading. I really appreciate the support. I will always love writing for midnight whispers
xoxo
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2016 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 18- Life goes on
No beta! One would never know. It's hard seeing the boys apart after being so very close. Thankfully Molly is talking some sense into Justin. Though inviting Brian to the prom might be a problem.
Author's Response: Good to know! Molly is an expert at schemes, but this plan was good natured. An invitation to prom will make Brian think...
Thanks for reading :)
xoxo
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2016 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 18- Life goes on
Loved this update. It's a little sad because I hoped the guys would have continued their relationship in a more positive manner. As for going public, I think B&J would cause several of their friends and families to lose their minds.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! It is sad, but all hope is not lost!
I do wonder why people tend to expect bad behaviour from characters they don't like as much. The boys' friends and family may just surprise you ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
xoxo
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