Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2019 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Drifting to the breaking point

I don’t know how Justin stayed as sane as he did putting up with what Brian was doing.  I wanted to shake him and shout wake up and stop what you are doing. I would have slapped Lindsay silly she was such a bitch for doing what she did. My heart is breaking for Justin. 



Author's Response:

Justin is quite a character in this story, right? I love him to death here <3 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Drifting to the breaking point

Brian can't help himself in his guilt over jesse, he has come self-destructive he's slowly becoming his own worst enemy.



Author's Response:

You're absolutely right :)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2016 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Drifting to the breaking point

Hi my friend! What should I say… This is such an intense and sad chapter. But I think they would have split up anyway. And although Brian tries to stop his way of acting, his self-destruction, it seems as if there was already too much broken, as if it was already too late. The pregnancy seems to be the final straw. But the result is Gus and without Gus I don’t think that Brian would have been able to change his life, being able to believe in love or believe in being worth to be loved. So, as tragic and painful as it all is, everything seems to be somehow necessary. And In the present they get their second chance! Very well written. Warmest regards and a big hug! a.



Author's Response:

You're absolutely right. Gus is the reason why Brian will finally be able to move on. So, yes, it's painful but right now, Brian's fears and guilt are leading his life. He is scared out of his mind. He is lost. He feels guilty for so many things. He needs a shrink if you ask me LOL 

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2016 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Drifting to the breaking point

Tears... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I know. This chapter and the next one in the past are not my favorite parts, I wonder why...

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2016 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Drifting to the breaking point

So this is it, right?  It's over?  I survived?  :(  So painful...Even through all of that Justin was sticking around.  But the baby is just too much.  And I don't blame him.  How more supportive can one person be?  My heart bleeds for him...

And stupid Brian!  He knew it was over.  He didn't even bother telling Justin, he just went straight to mourning their relationship.

As always, this is so well done.  I am looking forward to more!  :)



Author's Response:

Ahhh, no, it's not over yet, but it's getting there real fast. Justin is a wonderful guy, but he's only human. And Brian's reaction to Lindsay's pregnancy is going to be a breaking point, I'm afraid.

Brian is reacting badly. Being a father completely freaks him out and he also knows Justin is going to leave him because he can't deal with it. So * ahem * still bad times coming, but hey, we all knew we would get there eventually, right?

So, angsty chapters are not done yet, but it will get better... eventually LOL

Thank you as always for your amazing support!! I always love to read your thoughts :)

Reviewer: peacock (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2016 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Drifting to the breaking point

Wow. Just wow.



Author's Response:

Hi my friend!

I hope this was the good kind of Wow (well, if I can use the word 'good' regarding this chapter)  Thank you so much for following this story :) More to come very soon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2016 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Drifting to the breaking point

So now we are pretty much caught up on the past.  The pain and hurt of that time really shows.  This was an intense chapter and I can't wait to see how you plan to top it.



Author's Response:

Hi my friend! Yes, we're pretty much caught up with the past, even if I still have some more things to say about that time. And you're absolutely right, this is a painful process. And * ahem *, I'm not quite finished with it yet, but we're getting there.

As always, a huge thank you for continuing to follow this story. You're wonderful!

I should have the next chapter posted in the next couple of weeks at the latest :)

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2016 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Drifting to the breaking point

Wow! What a comeback! It may have been a while since this story was updated but it did not disappoint! The heartache affecting everyone here is palpable... but I believe that such heartache can only occur when there is true love at the center. I feel awful that the boys have had to go through this, but since you've given us peeks at the future, I have tremendous hope that they will get their happy ever after, or their own version of it... eventually.

I also hear that there are congratulations due... much happiness with your new baby! 



Author's Response:

Hi my friend! Aw, thank you so much for your thoughts! The boys are going through the most difficult time of their relationship, but I agree 100% with you. They wouldn't suffered so much if they didn't belong to each other. Unfortunately at the time, it wasn't enough, but they will learn valuable lessons from that time, too. And, yes, they will cherish what they have even more in the future.

And thank you so much! My baby girl is doing great and now that I can rest a little more, I can also resume my writing. Expect another chapter soon!

* hugs from France *

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2016 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Drifting to the breaking point

Wow!  This chapter definitely served up the angst!  At least Justin truly understands Brian and all his demons.  But how much can he take!



Author's Response:

Hi Lorma!

This is definitely one angsty chapter and I'm afraid it's not finished. Both Brian and Justin are in a bad place right now, and as we already know, it isn't going to get better. As you say, Justin can only take that much and Lindsay's pregnancy is already a step too far. Only his love for Brian is making Jutin stay for now, but love isn't always enough.

I'm slowly but surely approaching the end of this tale. I think maybe about five more chapters, maybe more but not too many. As always, a huge thanks for your never-ending support, it means the world to me :)

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