Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2019 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
What are you doing to me girl, happy tears once again. I wish this story could be made into a movie it’s so good. I love how the bond between Jack and Brian is going. He is getting the dad he should of had growing up. Everything in this chapter grabbed me fully and I’m wondering what’s going to happen with Jesse now. I’m so hooked in this I never want it to end.
Im doing good, I finally finished my last chapter and as soon as I get it back from the beta it will be posted. I do hope that you enjoy it 💕💕💕
Author's Response: Brian and Jack's relationship was a delight to write, that's also why I consider writing a sequel to Entwined. I'm so glad you could finish your story! You must be excited :D
Thank you again for all your wonderful reviews Vicki!
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
A wonderful chapter Jack and Gus love each other and the best part Jack and Brian have come to love each other-even with the difficulties Brian and Jack have found a way to love and enjoy each other for the first time in many years Brian has a "Dad". I loved this chapter, how Brian's"family" accepts Jack it was really beautiful!
Author's Response: The present part of the story is showing how much they had grown up, especially Brian. And now that they had all accept and embrace their feelings, I have a feeling they will be okay. More than okay ;) I'm so glad you liked this chapter!
Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
And again, a short second review. I have to repeat myself... HOT and Beautiful. Ant it feels so good to see them together, relaxed, happy, content! Hug!!! a.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I remember it being so good to write this chapter, without the usual angst :)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2016 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
Just when everything was starting to get back to normal. Will Jesse's return help or hinder this family reunion? I hope Brian doesn't freak out too much, and he accepts Justin's help working through his emotions... On to the next chapter! Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: That is the question, right? Will Brian freak out or not? * evil author * LOL
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2016 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
This chapter made me IMMENSELY happy!
Hopefully, the happiness will continue with the arrival of Jesse.
Author's Response: LOL! I LOVE to have an extra review from you! * happy smile *
Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2016 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
Hi again! The next review because I've already read the last two chapters this afternoon. Thanks for writing this scene - it's beautiful and hot and it's good to see them happy at last. They are so cute together. I couldn't imagine one of them with anyone else. They belong together. I just hope it'll last. I'm a little bit afraid because of the return of Jesse. How will Brian react?
And I hope you will update soon. :-) Maybe I'm a little bit crazy, but I'll stop reading at this point. I think the next chapter is painful again and I can't stand it... Think I have to wait for the next chapter hoping it will be more comforting.
Warmest regards and again thanks very much for this wonderful story so far! a.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this scene! They are so good together right now. As for Jesse's return causing troubles for them, well, we will have to wait and see ;D
I've just finished the next 'present chapter', but I need a few more days to have it corrected before publishing it. Also, this one will be centered mainly on Jesse and his story. And * ahem * I don't blame you on not wanting to read the next chapter right away, as I can safely say this is the most painful so far, and I still haven't finished torturing the boys in the past, but I promise it will get better.
Thank you again sincerely for all your reviews on this work, it means more than I can say. I hope you will enjoy what's to come, even with all the inevitable heartache the characters will go through.
♥ Warmest regards back at you ♥
Reviewer: solkeera (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2016 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
i'm glad you keep doing this story, i really love it and i can't wait to read the next chapter
thank you for your work
Author's Response: Hi Solkeera,
I'm sorry for the late response, RL is keeping me very busy lately :)
Thank you so much for letting a review on this story. I'm always so thrilled to read that new readers enjoy this! I had to take a break lately but I hope to work on the next chapter very soon.
* hugs from France *
Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
Oooo Jesse is back!! Yay! Well, yay for Justin and hopefully yay for Brian.
Let me say, that these chapters are so good at relieving all those nasty emotions from the past. It's hard to reconcile just how much Brian has changed, but it's so good - and such a relief - to know that no matter what happens in the past, they'll find their way back to each other. So thank you so much for writing it this way.
Also, when Brian says how much he's missed them being together I almost melted. I could just FEEL the regret he felt at all those horrible things he did. But at the same time I feel like he does deserve this second chance...
I hope you'll show us when in the past Brian realizes he's messed up and started to make these changes. It'll be interesting to see how he handles himself given the mistakes would be so fresh. To know that he still feels so deeply in the present means it must have been heartbreaking for him in the past...
Oh look at me ramble...It's just so good! I love every word!
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Author's Response: Brian had changed so much since that time. He began to explain it to Justin in the previous 'present' chapter, but yes, I will definitely follow his thinking process once Justin will leave him. But be warned. He hadn't done his last mistake yet.
And yes, Jesse is back! I'm eager to write about the present now. The past is so dark, it's not a joyful ride to say the least. The contrast between those two times of their lives is important for me. Everyone can have a second chance at happiness.
Kristine, you're amazing with your reviews, thank you so much!!!
Reviewer: krussell87 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2016 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
Ughhhh.... I love this story!!!!!
Author's Response: And I'm SO HAPPY!!!! Thank you :):):):):):)
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2016 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
I absolutely love the description of the reunion sex- I commend you on the sharing of emotions and actual lovemaking.
So happy to see Brian and Jack together; although still having a hard time with Brian forgiving all.
Can't wait to read what you have in mind for the reunion.
:Lastly, just wanted to say that I'm very happy that your muse has returned and that you have returned to writing again. I'm always thrilled to see a new chapter posted in this universe.
Author's Response: Hi Sandy!
Thank you so much for your compliment on their reunion! I'm so thrilled the readers liked it, considering I really wanted to do it justice. It seems the readers begging me to write it has really inspired me ;)
I always saw Brian, as fucked up as he was at times, as a very forgiving man, much more than other characters of the show. That's probably why I write him that way with his father. Although I think for him to be really happy, it was time to let go of his resentment, considering it took him 17 years to forgive Jack. But their relationship is sincere and real now.
I still have a few chapters to write before reaching the end of this tale. I wanted to thank you sincerely for all the support you've given me, chapter after chapter, since I've began this story. You've a great help and a great support and I can't thank you enough for this. Really... :)
* hugs from France *
Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2016 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
Great chapter. And beyond hot. Can't wait to see what happens with Jesse... whom I've decided I don't like. ;-)
Author's Response: Hi Frances!
So glad to see a comment from you my friend. Thank you so much!
I'm also really glad you liked their reunion. I can't believe it took me more than a year to achieve it, but I'm happy with the result :) and LOL Jesse is not your best friend right now? Well, I understand why. Maybe he will grow on you by the end of the story and maybe not ;)
Thank you again for your wonderful support on this :)
* hugs from France *
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2016 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
What a lovely little interlude from the unusal intensity... But from Brian's reaction to the news of Jesse's return, I'm guessing there will be more drama to come!
Great update!
Author's Response: Hi my friend!
I'm glad you enjoyed this angst-free chapter. It was refreshing to write about the boys in a good place after all the angst of the previous chapter. The past is so angsty to write, but hopefully, the present part is now less stressful for everyone, even if i still have more to say about it. Thank you so much for your never-ending support :)
* hugs *
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2016 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
Oh this was a wonderful chapter. I love how Jack is so happy and carefree. Everyone is in such a good place, especially Brian.
Author's Response: Hi Lorma!
*happy dance! * So glad you liked it! They all are in a good place right now, it was time. More surprise to come soon! Thank you sincerely for your feedback on this :)
* hugs *
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
So nice to see everyone having a wonderful time and Jack and Gus playing. Now we learn that Jesse is back. Can't wait to see what you have planned next.
Author's Response: Hi my friend!
The present part is far less angsty than the past one now and I loved writing this chapter after the primo angst of the last one. So glad you liked it too! Thank you as always for all the support you're giving me :)
* hugs *
Reviewer: Tasha Terrilyn Tania Roberts (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2016 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Loving life
I really loved this chapter love Gus and jack the Ending thou can't wait for next chapter this fic gets better every time 💜
Author's Response: Hey Tasha!
I was so glad to see a review from you ♥! I'm glad you liked this angst-free chapter! It was refreshing to write about it. I have a fondness for Jack and Gus too :) Thank you so much for all the support
* hugs *
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