Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2018 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 12- Worry

This is heartbreaking. I feel sad for the loved ones. I know this is just a story but this kind of thing happen in real life :( 

i hope justin and brian will be found



Author's Response:

Stories can be reflective of real life, it's true

xoxo

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 12- Worry

Don't know will keep reading

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2017 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 12- Worry

That was soooo romantic.....love it.



Author's Response:

A little island romance is all the boys need ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2016 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 12- Worry

I didn't expect for the the Novotny's and Jennifer to head home, but it makes sense. Now, I'm wondering who will find the boys... well, they seemed to have adjusted pretty well to their situation fortunately ;D Looking forward to the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

It would have been an incredibly hard decision for them to make, but they could not stay searching forever.

Despite their situation, the boys are having the time of their lives together.

Thanks for reading and for reviewing!

xoxo

Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2016 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 12- Worry

Really enjoying this story, great idea, and look forward to each chapter. Thanks so much.  Do believe B &J have a real "thing"going; think will continue!

Hope next chapter is soon

 



Author's Response:

I am incredibly humbled and joyful that you liike this story so much!

Thank you for reading and for your wonderful support :)

xoxo

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 12- Worry

So sad that they had to give up.  Is it going to be years before they get rescued?



Author's Response:

It is sad, isn't it? :(

Never fear; it isn't going to be quite that long

Thanks for reading

xoxo

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2016 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 12- Worry

I had to play catch up. Life has been chaotic! 

Great chapter! It is so discouraging that the search has been abandoned so soon; although, in regards to the police, I know this is very realistic. They are only allowed to spend so much time in the aftermath utilizing expensive manpower. So many loved ones have had to endure this in a RL situation. You are writing that so well. 

Now... the boys. It's so nice to see them getting so close. It does seem like just the two of them in the world. I guess in their present habitat, that's all they have right now. It will be curious to see, down the road, how they adapt to each other if they get rescued. Separation anxiety after such close attachment... or something else? 

Still enjoying this story immensely, and looking forward to more. Thanks for the update! :) 



Author's Response:

Hello!

The sad truth is that it is realistic. The boys loved ones will continue to have hope, even though it gets harder and harder to maintain.

Being all alone must be romantic, and despite everything, the boys are having the time of their lives. Anything could happen if they are rescued...

I am glad that you are enjoying the story. Your support and reviews are wonderful. Thank you :)

xoxo

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 12- Worry

Another wonderful chapter, Cait!  I'm not disappointed at all that you extended the sex scene.;)  I just wonder how long Brian's condom supply can last (wink, wink).  I loved the imagery of them kissing in the rain. Very romantic. :)

I think the three returning to the States is realistic. Unless you are endlessly wealthy, just the day-to-day expenses of such a search would be extremely high; more than they could afford.  I wonder how they will continue the search remotely now, however.

As for the boys, I could see some more danger possibly.  Poisonous snakes?  Flash flooding?  A stingray, etc.?  I think there could be all sorts of adventures ahead for them.

I will be curious to see how you eventually resolve this, and once they are rescued if Brian reverts back to his 'typical' self for fear of everyone realizing how hard he has fallen for a high school boy.

Still really enjoying this one, Cait! Thank you for posting this on here.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hey there!

I just knew you would like the extended sex scene ;)

Keeping spirits up back in the US will prove to be a challenge for everyone.

Indeed, there are many possible dangers and adventures the boys could face...

Thank you for reading and for your support. It means a great deal

xoxo

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