Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2019 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
Omg such raw pain like a dagger to the heart. This broke me to see the suffering from all sides. Will there ever be a way back for the friendship between Jesse and Brian and what will this do to Brian and Justin. I’m in floods.
Fantastic work x
Author's Response: Hey Vicki !
Always such a pleasure to read your reviews. You're reaching the hard part of the story, at least in the past. I promise you things will get better, eventually, but for now it's going to be tough for the boys.
So glad you're enjoying this story! I really loved writing them here and creating this universe. I'm considering writing a sequel soon, just to revisit this world.
I really hope you're okay my friend :)
A huge hug to you <3 <3 <3
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
Jesse wasn't wrong, but Brian was beat down again. Now I guess the booze starts up again and Brian will try anything to dull the pain how much pain can he take before he snaps.
Author's Response: I guess you're right. Brian doesn't deal well with pain. And at the moment, he hates himself so much he won't even see how much pain he will cause to the persons he loves.
Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2016 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
Hi my friend! So much pain, so much hurt. For both, Jesse and Brian. I think Jesse’s got a point. I can understand his rage and his accusations in his situation mainly because of his damaged legs. Who wouldn’t react this way? But also, I feel so sorry for Brian. How could one live with this guilt. Especially with his past. He’s already blaming himself for the car accident. It’s so tragic! And a big compliment because you’ve written this so lifelike. I think there’s no other way Jesse could have behaved at this moment, in his situation. Again, I’m somehow glad that I know what’s coming, so I’m prepared for the pain and hurt Justin and Brian will have to endure. Again, a big hug and warmest regards, a.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2016 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
Oh God, that was so sad... My heart goes out to both Brian and Jesse... At least Jesse is letting Aaron back in his life, I hope things work out for them.
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: The past is hard to read from there, but I hope the present will make up for it :)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2016 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
Oops, I just saw the response to my older review... For some reason I'm not getting the notifications... Okay back to the fic!
Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Thank you for all the comments Kathleen! It makes my day again :)
* Hugs from France *
Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2016 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
Oh man. That ending packed a punch. Poor Brian but, fuck, poor Jesse. I can feel his depression so much and I can tell that he isn't thinking straight because of it. And I can completely understand that. He will probably cope better in time, but it is so fresh right now and such a devastating change at the moment. But I wanted to tell you GREAT JOB for depicting that as well as Brian's guilt and Aaron's and Justin's support.
Author's Response: Glad you 'enjoyed' it :) This is going to be quite a journey for Jesse, but for now, you're perfectly right, he is completely depressed. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
Oh no...I mean...I can't really blame Jesse for being so angry but it just seems so unlike him! Is there something else going on that we don't know yet, or is he really just fed up with Brian? I mean, my guess is he's fed up but...youch...Poor Brian. Poor Jesse. Poor everyone!
Gaw...This is so sad...I can't. I don't want to read anymore but I HAVE to because it's so good!
I don't want to watch Brian tear him and Justin apart, but I know he will. I don't want to see Jesse suffer because has there ever been a more supportive person in the history of everything? And Justin is going to be an innocent victim in the fallout. His only crime is having a psychopath get obsessed with him.
I'm out of words because my heart is so sad for what I know is about to happen. So, good job. As always you leave me feeling so much and needing more. :)
Author's Response: Hey Kristine! Well, Jesse is taking it bad, that much is pretty clear. I'm not sure he is fed up with Brian but he is angry and reacting strongly for sure. And unfortunately, he blames Brian for his condition...
So, yes, the past chapters are not going to be easy from now on, but I hope the present ones will make up for it! I also promise you it wil get better, eventually :)
As always, thank you so much for your support. Reading your reviews always bring a bright smile on my face :) I hope everything is good for you and that you had a wonderful vacation! And I just saw you posted your new chapter, so happy! I will read it very soon (like right now lol)
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2016 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
Wow! Intense chapter! Brian's vigil in the hospital is eerily similar to the wait for news of Justin's bashing in canon. And Aaron has taken the role of Justin's mother, (mis)placing the blame on Brian out of anger and fear. And Brian, as stoic as ever, accepts that blame.
Things are definitely becoming clearer with regards to how Brian and Justin wound up where they did at the start of this Fic. Anxiously looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback :) You're right, things are becoming clearer now and the past chapters are going to relate exactly how all of this had affected them to the point where Justin finally left. I hope to make up for it in the present ;)
Thank you as always for your feedback on this story, it means a lot. More as soon as I can :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2016 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
If you wanted to get technical about it, you could claim it was Justin's fault since the guy was trying to elimenate the compition. You could even say it was Jesse fault for getting in the way. But the truth is it was a sick man's fault. Brian acted the way Brian does, if Justin had been there he would be the one paralyzed. On the bright side Aaron has stepped up to the plate. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Exactly. Jesse is wrong to react the way he does. So wrong. It will be a long road for them now. And yes, at least Aaron acted on his feelings in the best way possible.
Thank you so much for your comment my friend :)
Reviewer: Gloria (Anonymous) · Date: July 01, 2016 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
So many feels!!! Tears...omg those poor boys!
Beyond heart breaking...poor Jesse...my heart breaks for all of them.
Author's Response: :( I promise it will get better! Well, eventually... lol
Thank you as always for your amazing support Gloria :)
Reviewer: peacock (Anonymous) · Date: July 01, 2016 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
Gut wrenching.
Author's Response: :( they're going to live a hard time in their lifes... But I promise they will eventually learn and grown up more along the way, Jesse included.
Thank you for sharing your feelings on this with me :)
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: July 01, 2016 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
oh the pain is tangible. WRite more soon so we can understand Justin and Jesse's friendship and hopefully Brian and Jesse reunion
Author's Response: I promise to write more very soon!! Thank you as always for your amazing support :)
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2016 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
Oh! That chapter was painful! Great job writing it! You captured the emotions nicely.
Author's Response: It was! And the angst is not over yet. I'm crazy, I know lol Thank you for your support and your comment :)
Reviewer: Magita (Anonymous) · Date: July 01, 2016 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 24: Turning Point - Part Three
I love your writing every chapter is as long as a book The only thing i dont get is Justins maner in witch he acted when he found out about Brian fucking Lindsey i dont get it he was soo forgiving out of character for a gay man in love ..
Author's Response: Justin did not forgive when he found out. He forgave after many years, and truly for the sake of Brian and Gus. I mean, holding a grudge would have prevented him from moving on and there would have been no point for me to write about a reunification in the present then. But I can safely say that Justin was deeply hurt by Brian's actions and only overlooked them in the past so as to convince Brian not to force Lindsay into an abortion. In the end, it's the also the principal reason why he left Brian, but I haven't reach that part yet, so... In the present, he might have made peace with Lindsay, but I doubt he will ever forget.
Thank you for commenting. I hope you can appreciate the other aspects of this story regardless :)
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