Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2019 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Searching for Jack

You’ve made me cry with the beauty in this chapter. I loved the moments in the case with Brian and Justin you can feel them growing closer again. Then the moments between Justin and Jack those really touched my heart so much. He has such innocence and it’s sad but sweet the way he reacts to Justin. I really hope Brian and Justin end up back together they are meant to be.

Author's Response:
Hi Vicki!

Jack is a wonderful character to write about in this fic. I remember this chapter, I had a great time writing it. From now on, the present will be easier, the past harder. But I promise beautiful moments and with Jack, too :)

Thank you for all your reviews. I hope you're okay, as well as your family. XOXO <3 <3 <3

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Searching for Jack

So glad Justin went with Brian-he has a way of calming Brian, with the two of them to split up helped find Jack before nightfall. Justin helped keep Jack calm and telling him Brian just wanted to find him, poor Jack thought Justin was an angel even when being brain damaged Jack had a point.

Author's Response:
Justin is exactly what Brian needed to deal with Jack's disappearance :)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2016 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Searching for Jack

Hi again! A beautiful chapter. Although they are looking for Jack, which is somehow exciting, for me this chapter feels so quiet, peaceful, haven’t got better words for it. Brian and Justin just seem to be at peace with each other. Again, it’s just beautiful how you describe what they feel when they just touch or kiss. Great! Beautiful development between them!

And then this amazing moment when Justin realizes that Brian had told his father that Justin was his savor. I loved this moment while first reading it and the second time I love it even more.

From now on, I always have to read two chapters I think – I’ve told you before, I can’t endure to see them in too much pain…. :-) No, I overdraw a little bit…

By the way… I’m very pleased to see answers to my reviews but I don’t expect them. They are for you – also as a thank you for sharing your talent and this brilliant story! So, take your time and I hope your trip was great?! Warmest regards and a big hug! a.

Author's Response:
I love this chapter, too. It's a turning point in this story for both Brian and Justin. For Brian because he is finally embracing fully that he wants Justin back in his life and for Justin because he realizes how much Brian had changed over the years. And I loved writing about Jack here, too. So, I'm always happy to see the readers reacting to it!!

LOL I have tortured them so much in this story! I promise you by the end, though, they will be happier than ever, disgustingly so ;)

As always, thank you so much for your amazing support!! Warmest regards and a big hug right back at you :)

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