Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2015 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 13
Look like Mel had lost Jenny as well as Gus. There will be no turning back if she to make it tough situation.
Dun give Jenny a hard time on this custody thing. Please make it light for her as she dun deserve it.
As always Brian is wonderful and thoughtful when come to Justin hand situation. Well is a good thing that Brian begin to be more receptive towards Shane.
Thank you for this wonderful chapter. Next chapter plssss.
Author's Response: I think that Mel has some fight left in her, and the next chapter will reveal the showdown for Jenny Rebecca's permanenet custody :o
Yes, Brian and Justin are so wonderful together, and I really wanted to higlight that fact in this story. No matter what obsticles life gives them, they face it together.
Thank you immensely for your support of this story!! I'm so very grateful for your comments, and I'm thrilled to know you are enjoying reading it!!
The next chapter will be posted soon :)
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2015 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow! This was good stuff, like a soap opera. I know I'm hooked. Soooooo glad JR is outta there. Mel was losin' it! Also glad to see Shane is continuing to be good for Gus.
Author's Response: Thanks!! :) It does read a bit like a soap opera, doesn't it? I hand't thought about that aspect before :) I am so delighted to know you are enjoying the story!!
Yep, JR is now with her dads, but the next chapter will reveal the battle for her permanent custody.
I think that Shane and Gus are good together, and they are good for each other. More will appear in upcoming chapters about their relationsip, as it blossoms.
I'm very appreciative of your continued support of this story, and your perceptive and encouraging comments! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2015 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 13
Can't wait for the custody hearing. After listening to Ms Malone, couldn't Lindsay and Mel be charged with kidnapping themselves?
That Justin's hand seems to be getting worse at times, worries me. Brian's pressure and stress problems too.
Author's Response: The custody battle will appear in the next chapter, and we'll find out who wins permanent custody of JR...oh, my :) You make a very valid point regarding Mel and Lindsay potentially being charged with kidnapping. Since Brian and Michael gave their verbal consent years ago , even though it wasn't legally binding, neither one had been aware of that fact at the time, and they'd told the two women that they had teir 'blessing' to take the kids to Canada. Presently, Michael's only concern is winning the permanent custody case for his daugter, which hopefully, will all work out in Jenny Rebecca's favor.
I know it's sad to see that Justin's hand getting worse as he gets older, as well as knowing that Brian's heart and blood pressue issues are compounded by the intense stress of his job. More will occur in upcoming chapters regarding both of those problems.
Thank you so very much for your insightful comments and ongoing support, I appreciate them immensely! I'm so happy to know you are enjoying this story!!
Reviewer: Cristina (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2015 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 13
Loving this history so much! Without angst among our boys just perfect! It's a pleasure to read! Thank you. :)))))
Love Gus & Shane. <3
Author's Response: You are very welcome :) I'm thrilled to hear you are enjoying this story!!
Yes, you're right... Altough our boys may face some diffucult situations, Brian and Justin always stay by each other's side and support one another.
I'm glad you like the coupling of Gus and Shane. They are good for each other :)
Thank you immensely for reading, and for your inspiring feedback!! Both are so greatly appreciated!!
Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2015 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 13
Finally Jenny is out of her vile mother's clutches. She has some definite anger issues. I'm glad Brian is finally accepting Shane.
Author's Response: It is a great relief to have Jenny with her dads. The next chapter, however, will have the 'showdown' between the family, with JR's moms and dads, each vying for permanent custody.
Brian is slowly adjusting to Shane, so he has some moments of acceptance that are better than others :)
I'm very grateful for your kind feedback and for reading this story! Both are so encouraging! Thank You, for your ongoing support!!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2015 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 13
I'm crying happy tears over here. Thank everything holy that J R is going to live with her dads. I could just reach out and strangle Mel for putting her through that bullshit. Please update soon my friend, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Awww...I'm glad the tears are happy ones ;)
I completely understand about wanting to strangle Mel. I htink there might be a few people in line for that one, LOL! We'll discover in the next chapter what happens in regards to JR's permanent custody.
I can't say 'Thank You' enough, my friend, for your continued support and your kind, inspiring comments!!
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 13
Love this story so much. Finally Jennyis with her dads ... and I hope permantly.
* hugs *
Author's Response: I am so deeply appreciative for your kind support! So delighted to hear you are continuing to love this story!
The next chapter will reveal the outcome of Jenny's custody. A wee bit of angst will of course accompany that particular part of the story :)
Thank you very much for your encouraging comments!
*hugs*
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2015 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 13
Jenny is safe and with her family. Mel and Linds got what they deserved. Well, not all that they deserved but I'm confident that you will punish them good.
Here's hoping temporary becomes permanent custody but then there may be no more story, how sad.
Do you have a lot of twists and turns in your head / heart?
Author's Response: Yes, gratefully, Jenny is safe and sound living with her dads! Mel and Lindsay, along with the rest of the family, will all come together in the next chapter, for the purpose of determining permanenet custody of JR. But even after that particular outcome is established, there is much more to this story as a whole, before it ends :)
There will be a few more twists and turns, but the only thing I can say about that (without giving away any spoilers) is that this family always sticks togeter to support one another.
Thank you very much for reading and for your thoughtful comments!! I appreciate both, so immensely!!
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2015 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 13
OH HAPPY DAY - CHAPTER 13 IS UP
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thrilled to know you were happy to see the new chapter :) I sincerely hope you enjoyed reading it!
Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 13
another great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you, so very much! I'm delighted to know you enjoyed it! Your feedback is immensely appreciated!!
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 13
Another great lovely long chapter. The custody twists are surprising - Mel should have covered her back better but then it's a good thing she didn't - she probably would never have been found out if she just let Jenny see her dads without all the shit she caused. It's good to see the kids are where they're the happiest - those girls need to learn if you're going to have kids they become a priority (I could go on a complete rant right now about selfish and harmful parenting - but I'm sure you get the idea...) Now that the kids are sorted I'm starting to feel a little worried about Justin. Getting older and having painful joints from previous injuries beginning to hinder the things I love doing and feeling like I'm losing part of myself, I feel complete sympathy for Justin. Drugs are helpful but the side affects suck. Justin's heart must be slowly breaking knowing that bit by bit he's losing the use of his hand. I love how you show Brian's love and understanding. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your dedicated, ongoing supoort of this story! I'm greatly apprecitive of your insightful feedback!
Regarding Mel...sometimes in life, it is the simplest things that go unnoticed or get overlooked (which in this case was a good thing). I'm certain that she never thought about the aspect of JR's custody or citizenship being callenged, at least by Michael. Unfortunately for her, she also didn't give consideration to the fact that if Brian ever found out, coupled with her sore lacking of parenting skills, that he wouldn't do someting to help JR. The next chaper will reveal the solution to JR's permanent custody. I completely understand about wanting to rant against selfish and harmful parenting :)
You're exactly right about how previous injuries to one's joints only compounds and worsens with age. It isn't pleasant, and actually becomes more painful and debilitating. Brian is certainly Justin's stronghold through it all, however it doesn't make the situation any less heartbreaking for Justin, as you said.
I'm so very delighted you enjoyed this chapter!! Thank you again for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 13
I want to thank you for gettin Jenny out of that home and back to Pittsburgh. I'm not sure how Mel can defend her actions to the court and expect to win. Poor Justin, his hand is not getting better. Shane and Gus are so cute together.
Author's Response: It is indeed a great relief to see Jenny now safely in both of her dads' care :) The answer to her permanent custody, though, will be revealed in the next chapter.
I, too, like the dynamics of Gus and Shane together. I think they'll continue to be a good match for each other.
It's sad that Justin's hand is getting worse as he gets older. Yet through it all, Brian is at his side :)
Thanks immensely for your marvelous feedback!! It's wonderful to know you are enjoying this story, and your continued support is greatly valued!!
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow! Great Chapter! So much happened! I'm so happy for JR... Gus is in love, Brian growing fond of Shane, miracles never cease...
Now the battle begins, I can't wait for the showdown... Mel and Linds really are delusional...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I can't thank you enough, my dear friend, for your wonderfully encouraging comments!
There was a lot happening in this chapter, and the next one will also be full of action; we'll find out the solution of Jenny's custody battle.
Gus and Shane are a neat couple, although Brian is still struggling at times about accepting the fact his son is in love :) But we wouldn't want Brian any other way, LOL!
Mel and Lindsay clearly have issues. A bit more light will be shed on that aspect, too, in the next chapter.
Thank you again for your attentive feedback! I'm so inspired by your ongoing support!!
Hugs, hon.
Aislin
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 13
Great chapter. Loved Brian to the rescue. Glad that Jenny is safe with her fathers but am concerned about the court fight for custody.Also feel bad about Justin's hand issues getting worse. Was really happy to see an update. Bill
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Bill! So thrilled you liked this chapter!
Yes, Brian always seems to have a plan and knows precisely what to do. It's an admiring quality that he would do anyting to help Jenny, as much as he would for Gus. The next chapter will reveal the solution to Jenny's custody.
As Justin is aging, his hand, unfortunately, will continue to give him increased problems.
The next chapter will be posted soon. I am very grateful for your continued support of this story and your thoughtful feedback!!
Aislin
Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2015 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 13
Yay for Michael and Ben such touch felt chapter and intense Brian to the rescue I so love this story so much
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your kind and encouraging feedback! I'm so very grateful for the continuing support!! It's wonderful to know you are reading and enjoying this story!!
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 13
wow - another great chapter - so full and so well done - talking to a few friends tonight we agreed that his story could be a whole post 513 season - loving the relationships and interactions - and thanks for more Gus/Shane, too
anxious for more as always
Charle
Author's Response: Thank you, Charle!! Your kind and heartfelt words are both humbling and inspiring!
I'm thrilled you and your friends are reading and enjoying this story; it means so much!
The next chapter will be posted soon. I'm so grateful for your continued support!
Aislin
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love that the Karma train ran Mel over spectacularly.
I also love that Gus has found Shane. He will be good for Gus, if he can survive Brian. (LOL)
Author's Response: Sure enough, Brian is a challenging and daunting force to be reckoned with, LOL!
You're absolutely right...Karma did indeed come face-to-face with Mel. Of course having Brian's assistance certainly helped :)
I'm very grateful for your ongoing feedback and for reading this story! Thank you!
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