Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2019 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Truce

I am loving Brian here, seeing him like this is great because its showing all sides to him. You get the Brian hexis showing the world. I loved the conversation between him and Justin on the street, I could feel The flirty undertones between them. Then the talk between Jesse and Justin was really great. I hope they become friends xx



Author's Response:

Brian is intrigued by Justin, to say the least. And Justin is attracted by Brian, even though I'm sure he'd prefer not to be. The sparks are about to start ;D

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Truce

 Justin isn't the only one wondering about Brian's past. After talking to Jesse maybe Justin will talk with Brian in the privacy of their apartment.  



Author's Response:

I have a feeling things are going to heat up very soon :D

Thank you again for all the comments! I hope you will keep enjoying this one :)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2016 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Truce

Hello again! Great chapter! This time, because you make me laugh. The conversation between Emmett and Brian is so wonderful. It’s so great to imagine Emmett repeating after Brian and then later Brian’s confusion about Emmett’s behavior. Funny! And then finally, they have their first real conversation – again, you have done a real good job, how you let them come closer and how they behave – each in his own way which his somehow so untypical and which is already or again a proof of their deep bond. Brian who cares and Justin who let someone come closer. Great! And I really like Jesse and that he and Justin seem to get along so well with one another. Thanks!!!!! And a big hug! a.



Author's Response:

Hi my friend! As always, it's a pleasure to read your thoughts and to rediscover each chapter through your eyes. I'm delighted you like it!! From now on, the boys are going to get to know each other way better LOL

A big hug to you!!!!

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