Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2015 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 12
Ooh..seems that Shane going to be permanent addition to your story in relationship with Gus. Okay can accept that.
Don't get it. Mel already experience Jenny runaway from home once, now pushing Jenny to a limit again. Mel will lose her daughter, if she continue her scheme.
Finally completed your latest chapter. More more please. Can't wait what you have install for us.
Author's Response: Thank you immensely for commenting! Means so much!
Yep, Shane and Gus will be an ongoing item. After all the emotional and physical turmoil Gus went through with the car accident, he deserves the happiness of a healthy, romantic relationship.
The saga between Mel and JR will continue for a couple more chapters as the custody situation comes to fruition.
I'm delighted for your ongoing support and encouragement!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2015 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 12
What a wonderfully long chapter. First off why is Melanie so Gestapo with poor JR? I do feel that once a judge sees Gus' video the ruling should go in JR's favor. How did JR end up with blue eyes? Her mom is Mel and dad is Mikey. Justin should not have forgotten to tell Brian about hiring Shane. Shane and Gus, a good match. Next chapter asap!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so delighted you liked this chapter!! :)
You're right, Mel and Mikey both have brown eyes. I wrote JR to have blue eys because her grandmother, Debbie, has blue eyes, as did her great uncle, Vic.
Mel is raging because she was so angry about her percieved interference in Gus' life by Brian, and that Gus left home to go live with his dads after he graduated. So Mel figured (not logically) that one day, JR would want to go live with her dads, and since JR's brother is Brian's son, and JR's dad is Brian's best friend, Mel couldn't stand the thought of her daughter being interwoven any furter into Brian's life. In the show, Mel hated Brian, for one, and two, she was angry when Lindsay and Micahel both filed for visitation rights with JR, and won, so I decided to carry that dynamic over into this story.
We'll discover in the next chapter the results of Michael and Ben filing for custody of their daughter.
Yes, I also believe that Shane and Gus are a very good match :) They are good for each other.
The next chapter will post soon. I'm so grateful for your comments, and I'm happy to hear you are continuing to enjoy this story!!
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2015 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 12
And I hope the judges ruling is that Mel is an unfit mother who will lose custody of JR. Start packing JR hopefully you are heading for Pittsburgh.
Shane is exactly what Gus needs and aren't his fathers just the very best.
Thank you for continuing this wonderful story.
Author's Response: I'm so delighted you are continuing to enjoy this story!! Thank you so much for such encouraging comments!! They are truly appreciated!!
Shane will be very good for Gus; and Gus for Shane :) Indeed, Brian and Justin are the perfect match! They compliment each other so wonderfully.
The next chapter will focus heavily on the custody battle for JR. Let's keep our fingers crossed that she can soon be packing that suitcase.
Thanks again for reading, and for your feedback!!
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2015 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 12
Mel's losing it. Guess she doesn't see that her behavior is one of the reasons the kids want to leave her and Lindsay and live with their fathers. Her hatred of Brian has given her blinders. If she doesn't want Jenny to have contact with the Liberty Ave. gang, she should have gone to the sperm bank instead of asking Michael.
Gus and Shane make a nice couple. Brian will just have to get use to Shane being around. He'll be good for Gus.
Author's Response: I truly enjoyed your comments! Thank you so much for taking the time!!
Yes, I think Gus and Shane will be very good for each other!
Mel definately has some issues, and she's always despised the fact that Brian is Gus' father. You're right that her hatred of him is what's giving her blinders. I'm sure she also doesn't like the fact that Brian has maintained good relationships with everyone else. And, since Micahel and he will always be friends, that is yet another connection to Brian that she will never be rid of.
The next chapter will reveal what happens with custody of Jenny Rebecca.
I'm so grateful for your supportive feedback, and for reading the story!! I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2015 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 12
I'm so happy for Gus! He deserves someone sweet like Shane. I'm glad Brian has started the ball rolling to get Ben and Michael custody of Jenny. Poor kid. Mel is unbelievable!
Author's Response: Awww...I'm so happy to hear that you like the budding relationship between Gus and Shane! Gus certainly does deserve it, doesn't he?!!
Yep, Mel is something else! The next chapter will reveal the custody solution for JR, along with what they all went through to get to that point. Of course Brian and Justin are right there, all the way!
I'm so very grateful for your continued supportive comments and for reading the story!! Thank you so much!!
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2015 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 12
well - ok - I don't know if I have told you lately how very much I am loving this story - such a sweet glimpse into every day life for this family - something I really relish
I love how protective and supportive they all are of each other - except for the munchers who I desperately want to throttle - but I'll leave all that up to Brian - no one deals with them better than him
and the treat on top of all that - this Gus romance storyline - there are far far far too few Gus stories out there - and that is a real shame - thank you so very much for this one - I only hope that we get to follow that one much much farther
BTW - I also appreciate the long chapters you thrill us with - you give us so much more to enjoy than most - and I for one love it!
can't wait for more - can't wait for the girls to find out the consequences of their crap - and for Gus and Shane to ... give us more!
thank you
Charle
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Charle! I'm so delighted you enjoy the dynamics of the day-to-day interactions of this family. They are indeed sweet, and very committed and supportive. Thank you for your insight on their lives!
I agree...throttling the munchers would work well in this story! :)
I'll defintely delve deeper into Gus and Shane's relationship and their issues as the story progresses. I've really enjoyed writing about Gus and JR as older teenagers entering into adulthood.
It's wonderful to hear that you're liking the long chapters. I debated on that matter when I began posting them, but I wanted to give as much information in each chapter as possible, and not leave a lot of cliffhangers, so I just went with it :)
More to come soon! Thank you for reading and for your informative feedback! I apprecite both so immensely!!
Aislin
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2015 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 12
Really , what's wrong with Mel ?? She's treating her daughter almost like a prisoner!
But fortunately there are Brian and Justin ....
Gus and Shane, ahh, seems to be a good thing for both of them :)
Love your epic long chapters!
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you like the longer chapters in this story! Thank you for letting me know :) They can be quite epic though, I agree :)
Mel is a unique character. Very demanding and very control-oriented. For JR's sake, it's a good thing she has the support and help of Brian and Justin! The next chapter will reveal so much more of this particular dynamic.
Yes, Gus and Shane seem to be a good match! We'll learn more about how their relationship progresses in future chapters.
Thanks bunches for your comments and for reading this story! So glad you are enjoying it!!
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2015 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 12
Ohh I almost forgot...I realize you're probly got all your ideas regarding the legal stuff but I thought I d throw some stuff out there for you to consider/research/put into the story.
dual citizenship
emancipation...if so then have GUS apply as guardian. I know this sounds weird but think about it. Gus lives with Brian and Justin. This will allow jenny to "live" with them and then have "visitation" with the Pitts crew (just thought of that) whenever and however long they want.
have Jenny change her name.
OK there was more but I can't remember. but these are the main things. Look em up, toss em out, tell me to go to hell. Just a few ideas.
Author's Response: I truly appreciate your feedback and ideas! Thank you!
I've already written the plot regarding Jenny's custody, but I did research my 'solution' to hopefully make it all plausable. I only hope that it reads well in the next chapter :) It's sometimes difficult because there are so many resources, and occasionally, they contradict one another. I suppose I can only wish for the best :)
I'm grateful for your insight and your suggestions! Thanks again for sharing them with me.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2015 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oh hell man! What a ride! I m calling this chapter The Rapunzel Syndrome for obvious reasons. Good thing she has five Prince Charmings on the way to save her. (I'm counting Gus.
As for Gus, I m glad he s getting over Conner but the same thing Brian though wen through my mind as well. What if Shane is a gold digging con? Hmmmmm......
This is the first story I've read with Gus being older than 5-12. So a sex scene involving Gus was a little weird. I keep having to remember he is 18.
Otherwise a very good chapter overall.
Author's Response: JR indeed has a terrific support system!
I tink tat Sane will be good for Gus, and vice versa. We'll ave to see ow teir relationsip progresses. Tat is, if Brian doesn't totally 'wig out' on im :)
I agree that writing a storyline where Gus is legally considered an adult and can do many adult activities (such as having sex), was a little akward at first for me to write, because I kept picturing him as this adorable kid, LOL. But as time went on, it did get easier...luckily.
I'm so happy to know you liked this chapter! Thanks so much for your feedback!
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2015 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 12
Wow, Shane has integrated into Gus life very nicely. Now if Justin can just keep Brian from pummeling him... He, he, he...
I feel so sorry for JR, but now that Brian's hired an attorney I can't wait for the showdown between Canada and the US...
Great Chapter Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Thank you so very much, Kathleen!! I'm so delighted you liked this chapter!
Brian will certainly have a reaction to Gus and Shane having sex...oh, the suspense :) Justin might have to referee, LOL!
The next chapter will reveal the results of Brian's help to get custody of JR for Ben and Michael. Showdown will soon commence!
I'm so grateful for your encouraging and supportive comments!!
Hugs, hon, Aislin
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2015 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow Gus is moving forward and it looks like he has a good partner. Me thinks Brian may not be so happy with Gus's choice for a while lol. Omg Mel is living nightmare, way to go to ostrsize your kids
Author's Response: Yes, I think Shane and Gus will be good for each other. And I have no doubt that Brian will have a 'queen-out' moment when he finds out :)
Indeed, Mel is a very interesting and scary character in this plotline. We'll see in the next chapter what happens concerning custody of JR.
I'm so glad you are continuing to enjoy this story! I appreciate your encouraging feedback immensely!! Thank you!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2015 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 12
Nooooo....it can't end here lol. I really can't wait to see what happens with the munchers. Mel has lost her rabbit ass mind.
Author's Response: I know, I left a little bit of a cliffhanger here :( I truly tried not to, but the chapter would have been VERY long.
I love your comment about Mel loosing her mind :)
Thanks so much for reading and your continued support of this story!! More to come soon, and we'll find out what happens with custody of JR.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2015 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 12
I like how long each of your chapters are!
How nice to see Gus recovering.
I hope for JR's sake that Brian can get her into her dads custody. Mel is such a bad mother.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the long chapters in this story :) I try not to end each chapter with major cliffhangers, and so there's usually a lot of information packed into the chapters :)
I think that Gus is indeed recovering well, and Shane seems to be a positive influence, who is good for him.
The next chapter will shed some light on Mel and J.R., regarding custody, and Michael and Ben's petition for their daughter to live with them.
Thank you so very much for reading and for commenting! Your encouraging feedback is immensely appreciated!!
Reviewer: Qaf4life (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2015 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 12
Im just in love with your story it's so beautiful. I'm glad Gus is getting back to normal and I love Shane as well Brian and Justin are so HOT and for Mel let that bitch suffer lol looking forward for the next chapter
Author's Response: I'm so delighted you are reading and loving this story!! It means so much to hear that! Thank you!!
Yes, Gus is improving greatly and I think he and Shane compliment each other well.
Brian and Justin are still the hottest couple ever; they're so perfect together.
The next chapter will deal heavily on what happens with Mel and J.R.
I appreciate your wonderfully supportive feedback immensely!!
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2015 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 12
Shane and Gus that was a surprise. Hope it works out for them. Mel is about tofeel the wrath of Kinney and that is a good thing. Great chapter. Bill
Author's Response: Thanks immensely for your encouraging, supportive feedback, Bill!! I think Gus and Shane will be good for each other. Yep, I do believe that Mel will soon experience a side of Brian she never expected. More to come, soon!
Thank you so much for reading and for commenting!!
Aislin
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