Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2015 09:45 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
The beginning of the chapter was so sweetly-tempting – Brian is a well known seducer. You always describe his technique so richly and precisely, I almost feel like I’m the one experiencing this bliss :D
The dance was perfect. Like Brian and Justin, I immediately thought of the prom dance, but this one was something special – like it symbolizes the new beginning for them. I hope they will remember this dance above that painful one.
--- Which clown threw up on our cake--- - oh my God. Oh my God, I’ll never stop laughing! That was *so* Brian, so in canon, so refreshing and realistic that I almost fell of my chair! I’ll never look at that cake the same now :) Before Brian’s remark, though, I was astonished at how beautiful it looks. The rainbow cake! I’ve never even thought this might be possible. I still want to taste it!
The ending was amazing and hilarious. I think it’s a perfect story for anyone who’s in a bad mood – it’ll cheer them up 100%!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 03:05 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
"I'll do it...because it makes you happy."
Awww... That's why I like this story. And loved the playful banter. Really, really loved the cake and chocolate fiasco.
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 03:19 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
Hi Kim. OMG, this whole chapter gave me a bad case of the giggles, so funny ; ) I think my favorite parts were the announcements Emmett and Deb made over the sound system and the dogs in the tent. Ha- “Who let the dogs out” I can just imagine the DJ putting that one on and everyone bursting into laughter. Looking forward to the epilogue : ) *Hugs* Janet
Author's Response: Hi, Janet! So good to hear from you; I've been thinking about you and your mom. Will send you an email as soon as I can take a breath! I'm happy that you enjoyed this chapter; I guess there's more than one way to create a chocolate lab - ha! thank you for reading, and for your feedback, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2015 03:36 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
Testing email response action. Sent on 10/10 at 8:36 pm CT.
Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2015 12:54 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
It turns out that my review on chapter four where I predicted a Brady Bunch moment where the dogs would create havoc during the reception including knocking over the cake was right after all!
I must admit I hope that Brian's comment to Gus about always being the first son doesn't mean that he's thinking about him and Justin having children. I'm just not one of the those people who think Brian would ever want to be a full time father and I think adopting a dog would be as far as he would go in the parenting direction.
Author's Response: Hi, Rixa! Yes, you were extremely accurate about that.;) We all knew they wouldn't behave the entire time.;) As for another child, not to worry. The story will end with the next chapter, and won't include that issue.
I'm glad you've been enjoying this 'verse. Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment. ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 08:18 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
LOL The whole scene with the dogs was priceless! I also adore the boys's banter during all the chapter, and the cake...Wow! As colorful as Debbie, you got that right!
The boys's hapiness is a delight to read. Thank you for such a funny and lovely story, Kim. Eager to read the epilogue :)
Author's Response: Hi, my friend - thank you for reading, and for taking the time to leave feedback; both are greatly appreciated. Glad you enjoyed it, and I thought the cake was in line with what Emmett might have come up with. I would have loved to have seen how he staged their wedding on the show (if only we had had one!). Thanks again for the support. ~Kim
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 06:20 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
Well we knew those dogs were going to escape eventually. The chaos was great and I loved the chocolate lab remark from Gus. Great chapter of this wonderful story!!! Bill
Author's Response: Thank you reading and for the comments, Bill. One more chapter to go, and then it's back to "Stallion." Thanks for the support. ~Kim
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 03:09 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
Being owned by a black lab in my youth, I am rolling on the floor here.
I can see Brian's face as the cake is coming at him. LOL!
Author's Response: Hi, Sandra! Yes, you have to love labs. Big, sweet, lovable lugs of a dog! I adore them.:) Thank you for reading, and especially taking the time to comment! One more chapter to go.~Kim
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2015 02:50 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
What a great, funny chapter, laughed our butts off and would have loved to see that on the screen. Cake picture, fabulous. lol
Author's Response: Thank you, Lindc. I'm glad you all enjoyed it. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback. ~Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 02:26 PM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
Great chapter! Tricky and crew sure made it memorable lol.
Btw....I think we got a double posting of the chapter my friend ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, Tamara - I fixed it. Sometimes it's hard to tell when you post into that little text box that it's actually posted, so I must not have realized that. Thanks for pointing it out. Sigh...not sure how I felt about this chapter, TBH, and it appears from the lack of comments that perhaps others felt the same. I'm going to post the remaining epilogue in the next day or so, and then get back into my regular WIP posting again with Stallion. I'm itching to start a new story, but will hold off until I have it completely done, I think. I may post a one-shot here and there, though, for the holidays. Thank you for reading, Tamara, and for being so supportive. ~Kim
Reviewer: Prisca512 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 06:08 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
My sides hurt from laughing!!!!! But seriously, ever the romantic Brian insisting on their first dance before cutting the cake and choosing the perfect son for his Husband. I love to see Brian's softer side when it comes to Justin.
Well done, my friend, I'll be chuckling over the image of Brian trying to save their cake for quite some time. thanks for sharing!! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Melinda. I appreciate that more than you know. I'll have the epilogue up in the next day or so, and I CAN say that Tricky isn't quite done yet! Thanks again. ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 05:52 AM · On: Three Chocolate Labs
I feel so bad for Emmett. The cake was a masterpiece and all destroyed. Tricky sure knows how to make a mess. It took Ted and Carl to take him down and clean him up. Let's hope the married couple manage to shower without the four legged contingent interrupting again.
Author's Response: Hi, my friend - As always, I'm grateful for your reading, and for the feedback. Funny you should say that about Tricky, because he's not done quite yet! I will have the epilogue up shortly, and then it's back to Stallion. Thank you again for all the support you give me and so many other authors. Wish we could clone you! ~Kim
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