Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For My Heart's Desire
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2016 07:03 AM · On: Monkey See, Monkey Do

I love how Gus is with Alex it really warms my heart

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2014 10:53 PM · On: Monkey See, Monkey Do

Oh, your Gus is precious.  It's hard for Alex to be mean and sarcastic when the person she is aiming it at totally doesn't understand and continues to think she is awesome at every turn.  LOL.  Gus is like her very own cheering section - and even SHE knows he cant fake it.

Brian teaching his dad about the meaning of marriage and why someone would want to do it is... surreal. And very sweet.

I hope you update this story again soon.  You write fantastically long chapters.



Author's Response:

Hi, Michelle - Thank you for all the wonderful comments on this story; this means so much to me, and it is very motivating for me as a writer. And yes, the chapters ARE long - LOL!  I glad you like them.  I'm enjoying writing the 'idol worship' of Alex by Gus; it IS hard to be mad at someone like that.;)  I should be updating this soon. I'm working on a new story that has multiple chapter that was supposed to be for the fan fiction summer challenge that I didn't have done in time. As soon as I get that done, I will definitely be working on this one.

Thank you again, Michelle, for reading and for all the feedback! *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2014 06:29 AM · On: Monkey See, Monkey Do

Wait... How old is Alex again, LOL?

"I want you to look at him, Fin; really look at him."

That scene with Brian and Fin surreptitiously watching Justin and Tony was my favorite. I also loved the argument Brian gave Fin for marriage.

Nice chapter, :)

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  I'm so happy to see you still reading this one.;)  I think the part with Brian and Fin watching their soul mates was one of my favorites, too.  And I'm glad you liked Brian's argument for marriage; it's hard to write his opinion on that, and still keep him in character. I'll get this updated again just as soon as I can; thanks again for reading and for especially commenting.  It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 06:31 PM · On: Monkey See, Monkey Do

Dang Kim I had forgotten how much I truly love this story. Everyone is so well written and I especially love Fin and Tony they are amazing OC's. Love the progress with Alex and I do so hope Justin can help her make something of her talent as she reminds me of him quite a bit now. Loved Alex and Gus spending time together if nothing else I know that little boy will be good for her too. Can't wait for more as usual my friend.

:)



Author's Response:

Hi, Susan! What a delight to read your comments, and to hear from you. Thank you for continuing to read this story, even though the updates are longer in between than I would like.  But I WILL get it done. Still have a ways to go yet, though  I am thrilled that you enjoy Fin and Tony's relationship; out of all the OC's that I have created, these are probably my two favorites (well, Tricky is my favorite non-human OC - ha!).

Will get this updated again just as soon as I can; I still have Christmas and the inauguration to go, along with wrapping up a lot of loose ends.;)  Hope you continue to enjoy it. Give the furry baby another belly rub and kiss from me.;  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2014 02:41 PM · On: Monkey See, Monkey Do

I WAS TOLD OF THESE LAST TWO UPDATES. SORRY I WAS ON VACATION WHEN THE FIRST ONE CAME OUT. JUST GOT BASCK AND LEARNED THEY WERE HERE. NICE TO HAVE YOU BSCK FROM YOUR MANY ENDEAVORS. ALEX IS COMING AROUND FINALLY UNDER THEIR TUTALEGE. I HOPE FIN AND TONY GET MARRIED. AFTER THEIR TALK HE MAY CONSIDER IT EVEN THOUGH HE HAS A LOT OF IRONS IN THE FIRE. I THINK TONY WOULD FEEL MORE SATIISFIED TO BE MORE THAN THE BOYFRIEND OF THE GUV. OUR CLICK STILL ARE WAITING FOR THE BABY TO APPEAR LINDC, ESPECIALLY. SHE IS INTO BABIES RIGHT NOW. HA!!. LUV 2 U.

Author's Response:

Hi,Sweetheart! I'm always so happy to hear from you. I hope you had a wonderful time on vacation!  Tell lindc she just may get her wish, but it would be a while yet.;)  I do hope you are doing well. When I went to NYC this past July, I immediately thought of you at the fountain in Central Park.;)  That park is amazing. Got to see a lot more of it this time with my nephew, and one of my photos I tweeted was even favorited by the Central Park twitter account.  I was so excited - ha!  It was a shot of the arches  in front of the fountain, with people silhouetted inside.;)

 

I have to move onto my other WIP now, but will do my best to get this updated again just as soon as I can.  Please stay in touch whenever you are able to. You will always hold a special place in my heart, along with lindc, Brian and the others. Sending my love back to you as well.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 06:43 AM · On: Monkey See, Monkey Do

Hey Kim! I've got to tell you, this chapter touched me in a very personal way. I can relate to both Alex and Emmett in the respect that I know what it's like to be a foster child. As for Fin and Tony, I think the wise father should listen to his son ;)

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara! I consider it a great honor if you were moved by this chapter; hopefully I did it justice.;)  As for a stubborn man's dilemma about his partner...hmmm...will have to wait and see on that. But it will be answered at some point before I'm done with this.;)

Thanks for reading, and for your comments, dear friend. *Hugs*  ~Kim

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