Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2014 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay, so now I'm obviously thinking that something bad happened to Justin when he was away in New York. I like that you show Craig's good and bad moments as a father, and it's interesting to see such an early part of Jusitn's life protrayed. I love seeing *married* JustinBrian depicted, and I wonder how much this emotional turmoil invades their lives at Britin.
This story is very artful and appears to be well-thought-out. I like it a lot so far! And I like the POV that you chose.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this beautiful comment. It means a lot to me that you've found this story and are enjoying it. Hope you continue to read and like the subsuquent chapters, too!
Reviewer: Snow (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2013 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is very well written. I really love how you're going through the three distinct periods of time. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. "Well written" is music to my ears. I'm so happy that you can't wait for more. Chap 2 will be up soon.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2013 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
"Talk to me. What is it?"
This first two chapters were very gripping. I'm dying to know what is going on.
Loved that aunt and love the banner!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the sweet feedback. All will be revealed in the coming chapters. I have to admit I'm in love with the banner, too. Tatjana Yurkina is absolutely wonderful in creating them.
Yeah, that aunt . . . we haven't seen the end of her. LOL
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
I like it so far. Good job!
:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback. I'm happy to know you like it. Next chapter will up soon.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm loving this story so far. I am curious though as to what Justin could be painting that takes such an emotional toll on him. Is he painting out his feelings about leaving Brian for New York? Could it be that he's reliving his bashing? I can't wait to find out.
Update soon please~JP
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this great feedback. I'm happy you can't wait to find out what Justin's going through. Next update will be posted soon.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi, my friend - so glad to see this posted on here.;) Tanya did such a fantastic job with your banner, too, and that photo of a young Justin sitting amongst all the paint supplies is hysterical! Looking forward eagerly to more of this - and to seeing you again in June! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi, Kim. Yeah, Tanya outdid herself with my banner. It's so perfect for the story. Isn't 3 yr. old Justin just adorable? LOL
June is rapidly approaching - see you soon!
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