Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 10:25 AM · On: Revelation and Deceit
Wow that was some intense stuff there. I hope Turner realises this is not right or good and grows a backbone and stand up to the evil twit. I'm so happy the guys are strong together and not letting the bozos get to them. Go get them guys
Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2012 09:29 AM · On: Revelation and Deceit
Holy shit! Ok that was bad.
I hate it when Brian and Justin fight. Especially when Brian lets his pride and ego get in the way of seeing what's really going on. Yes, Justin made a bonehead decision that could have easily gotten him killed (just like dumpster boy), but he did it to save Brian because all the rest of Brian's so-called friends thought he was guilty of the crime. You do what you have to in order to protect the person you love. Brian would have done the same thing.
Glad he finally calmed down and saw the situation for what it was.
And Fin is so right. Brian would never be interested in either one of those losers. For a one time fuck, yes. For anything else, no way. And he never had to force himself on anyone. They always fell all over themselves to get his attention! Come on!
Author's Response: Ha! I agree with everything you said, but what a couple of dimwits to think that they would be believed. Don't worry - father and son are about to fight back. It may have some repercussions that they do not consider, however (how's that for a teaser? LOL!).
Thank you again, my friend, for all the comments - that is what keeps me writing.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Revelation and Deceit
I am so happy to see you are back, I was starting to worry you would let us waiting forever,i love your stories and you always pested ofen enought to kept us going.
Im worry about fin's campaing but i', happy to see he is sticking with Brian. i can't wait to see what are they going to do to fix things.
GGreat chapter
Author's Response: Hi, Luisa! I'm sorry it's taken me a while to post this. Normally I can at least update them within the 30-day window before they disappear off the "most recent' list, but having 3X more students to teach this year has really bogged me down more than normal.:( I am hoping to wrap up my Christmas story and the Elvis one fairly soon, though, that should definitely help me update faster. And I have some time around the holidays, too.:) I will try hard to post a little quicker if I can - promise!
BTW - don't ever be afraid that I won't finish one - I have NEVER abandoned a story and unless I'm deathly ill I will continue that promise. I will always update within weeks, not months. Believe me, that is one of my own pet peeves, so I completely understand your concern. Thank you so much for the kind comments and letting me know you are reading my stories - that means more than you know to me.:)
As far as this story goes, I definitely have some more excitement coming up for the boys that will ferret out one of the enemy. I hope you will continue to enjoy their journey - it will certainly be full of twists and turns. Thanks again for your support!:)~Kimberly
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 10:09 AM · On: Revelation and Deceit
“Where do you think YOU'RE going, Sunshine?”
I loved that bedroom scene, but the rest of the chapter was even better!
I was in the middle of my housework and thought I would just glance at the website when I saw this update... Well a little dirt wouldn't hurt anybody. LOL.
I could not turn away from this. Even though I knew what Kip and Marv were planning, it was still suspenseful and shocking. I thought Brian was going to completely loose it with Justin. This has got to be my FAVORITE chapter. so far.
I can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! Thanks so much for the comments! You're too kind.:) I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter so much.:) Ha! Love the pun about housework and 'dirt' - LOL! I had actually thought about Brian completely throwing Justin out of the RV altogether, but I have some scenes coming up that meant he needed to be there, and I thought Brian would need his continuing support, so I ultimately decided not to do that. I will try my best to not let so long go between the next update.:) Thank you again for all the kind words - it makes me very happy.:)
Reviewer: PENNY (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 07:55 AM · On: Revelation and Deceit
OH MY LOVIN LORD. HOW DID YOU GET THOSE PICTURES? I SAW TOMMY. I NEARLY HAD A HEART ATTACK AS WE SAT TWO ROWS BACK. HE WAS SO CLOSE YOU COULD REACH OUT AND TOUCH HIM. HE REALLY CAN SING. I ENJOYED IT SO MUCH. I DIDN'T KNOW HE CAME OUT TO SEE PEOPLE AFTER THE SHOW. IT'S NICE TO FIND A KINDRED SPIRIT IN YOU. THANKS FOR YOUR IMPUT IN WHAT TO READ NEXT. I WILL READ THE WEDDING STORY TO SEE HOW THIS ONE CAME ABOUT. I WISH I COULD WRITE BUT HISTORY IS MY STRONG SUIT. YOU WILL HEAR FROM ME AGAIN, AS THIS IS FUN.
Author's Response: Hi, Penny! I could have very well been at the same show as you; I actually saw Tommy three times - once on opening night (Saturday) - nosebleed section, believe me! Then on Monday (1st row seats on the right) and then again on Wednesday up in the balcony. I had heard him sing on the "Joe's Pub" videos but never in person. I had no idea what a beautiful voice he has! So clear and powerful - not to mention he's not bad to look at, either - LOL!
I had no idea there was an 'after-party' after opening night, either, until we walked down to the lobby and an employee mentioned it. We just happened to buy opening night tickets at the last minute, and boy, am I glad we did! It was out under a huge tent in the parking lot, complete with free food, drinks, and music played by none other than Randy's boyfriend, Brian! I knew who he was because I had seen his pictures before, but it was so surreal seeing him - and Randy - in person! I had just purchased a new video camera and believe me, I put it to good use! I don't know if you ever go onto Live Journal, but I have an account there under the same name and posted some video of him at the after-party. As far as I know, it's the only live video of him outside of his plays that I have ever seen.
I also managed to get my photo taken with him, both then and in October when I saw him in D.C. for "Habit of Art." ( I know - I'm officially obsessed now!) You would not believe the hoops I had to go to to get him to come out into the lobby afterward, but it worked and I got my "Tommy" poster finally signed by him - yay! So I'm two for two, and I'm planning on going to the convention in Cologne next June - can't wait. I'm kind of petrified to go alone, but I will just to get to see him and Gale at the same time! That should certainly inspire me to write some more - LOL! Thanks so much for the reply, Penny, and for reading my stories - that makes me very happy!:)
Reviewer: PENNY (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 07:24 AM · On: Revelation and Deceit
I AM A HUGH BRIAN & JUSTIN LOVER. I WAS SO UPSET WHEN QAF ENDED AND THE WAY IT ENDED. I DIDN'T KNOW THIS SITE EXISTED. I AM A LITTLE DENSE WHEN IT COMES TO THE INTERNET AND WHAT IS OUT THERE. I FEEL I HAVE DIED AND GONE TO HEAVEN READING THIS STORY-HOW DUMB IS THAT. RANDY HARRISON AND GALE HAROLD ARE MY FAVORITES BAR NONE. I HAVE SEEN ALL OF GALE'S MOVIES AND MOST OF HIS STAGE PERFORMANCES. I WAS FORTUNATE TO SEE RANDY IN MASS A FEW TIMES. I MUST SAY YOU HAVE QUITE A CATALOG OF STORIES HERE. I AM GOING TO READ MYSELF THROUGH THIS CATALOG. THIS IS PROBABLY THE WRONG PLACE TO START. I WILL HAVE TO GO BACKWARD A BIT TO CATCH UP. I TEACH SCHOOL SO HAVE A FEW DAYS FREE TO READ DURING CHRISTMAS VACATION.
Author's Response: Hi, Penny! I was thrilled to read your comments! Thank you so much for the feedback! I am so honored.:) Yes, this one is actually the sequel to "The Wedding Present," which is on this site and is complete. You may want to start there with that story first.:P)
I have some others that are still works in progress that I update regularly; you can tell if they're complete because it will have "yes" or "no" underneath the banner indicating whether it is a completed story or not. All of mine with the exception of the five I have going right now are all finished. May I suggest some? Readers seemed to particularly enjoy "Stirring Up Trouble," "I Don't!" and "Tender Loving Care." They are all variations on Brian and Justin's relationship as far as how they met, but they always wind up happy by the time I'm done with them. I LOVE these boys and wouldn't have them any other way! There are also a lot of my stories that are 'canon' or could be 'canon,' meaning they could have taken place after the show went off the air. Also, "Remember Me" seemed to be a real favorite, too, but it's quite angsty - for a long time, Brian thinks Justin has died but he hasn't.
Also, may I suggest "A Kinney Christmas?" That would be a nice one for this time of year. Or if you're looking for funny, maybe "Justin Taylor: Man In Tights" where they go to the Renaissance Festival, or "Roughing It," where the boys go camping (I mean, really - can you see Brian camping? LOL!). Anyway, sorry for the long comment but I get particularly excited when I see a comment from someone new.:) I LOVE and cherish ALL my readers, though.:) Thank you again for taking the time to comment - you made my day.:)~Kimberly
BTW - I also saw Randy in "Tommy" and "Habit Of Art." I have some photos of him on my author's page if you want to take a look.:)
Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 07:11 AM · On: Revelation and Deceit
Well here I am reviewing this great story. My lord, you must have some inside info on political campaigns. This is quite the story. I think most people are aware what goes on to some degree in campaigns, but this one is going to be really something. I really like Fin, but am more anamored with Tony. He and Justin sound like they are a lot alike and enjoy the same kind of "man". This will be a lenghty one as I feel it will take time to get this all to come to it's wonderful ending. Waiting for more . I have been enjoying your new Christmas story-endearing.
Author's Response: Hi, Kym! You are too kind - thank you! I'm delighted that you feel the story is true to what 'dirty politics' would actually be like. I must watch too many news shows and read the paper too much, beause I honestly have not had any exposure to the 'wonderful' world of politics personally. And I think you're right - this one is stacking up to be an extremely lengthy one - I just have too many issues to resolve any time soon.:) I'm glad you like Tony - you have read him perfectly. I always meant for him to be a good friend to Justin - sort of a kindred spirit as they work to understand their passionate and headstrong lovers.:) They will continue to remain close throughout the story as father and son attempt to bond during this up and down journey.
I'm glad, too, that you're enjoying the Christmas story. Tricky and Gus will figure prominently in that one eventually, once I get the boys back home. But it's going to be quite chilly at Britin, at least for a while - ha! The boys will work it all out eventually, though. Thanks again for all your support, Kym; hope you have a great Christmas!!:)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 03:30 AM · On: Revelation and Deceit
OMG .. aggrrr .... can't find the words in english to describe Marvin and Kip. I'm glad Brian explains the scene with Marvin ... haha I can't remember the man, only Brian naked in that room.
This chapter is wonderful as always. But now I want an update really quick. Aggrrr I want always quick updates of your stories ... sorry.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Dear! Don't apologize for wanting quick updates - it's when readers don't care that I would be worried! I had to actually go back and look at the episode to get the guy's full name - I could remember Brian saying, "Why, Marvin, you old dog!" but I couldn't remember his last name. Thank goodness they had it spelled out in the episode in the boardroom.:) Thanks as always for reading and commenting, my friend.:) I will try hard to get this updated soon - I do have a little extra time coming up and I should be wrapping up both the Christmas story and the Elvis story soon, that should help. *Big Hug* back to you.:)
Reviewer: JULIAN (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 12:38 AM · On: Revelation and Deceit
HEY! IT'S ME JULIAN AGAIN. KEEPING UP WITH YOUR GREAT STORY HERE. HAVEN'T BEEN READING FOR AWHILE AS I HAVE BEEN TRAVELING FOR BUSINESS. THIS STORY IS TYPICAL I THINK OF MOST POLITICAL CAMPAIGNS. WHERE EVER YOU CAN FIND DIRT DREDGE IT UP AND THROW IT OUT THERE WHETHER IT'S COMPLETELY TRUE, SOMEWHAT TRUE. OR A BOLD FACED LIE. IT DOESN'T MATTER IF THE PUBLIC BELIEVE OR DISBELIEVE IT. IT'S OUT THERE. THE RETALIATION WILL BE SWIFT AND BRUTAL FOR THE SMEAR MASTERS. WONDER WHAT THE PAYOFFS WERE FOR THE SMEAR CONSPIRATORS? IF THIS COMES OUT IN THE RAGS I WONDER WHAT MARVIN'S FAMILY WILL THINK IF HE'S THE CONSUMATE BUSINESS TYCOON HE MAKES HIMSELF OUT TO BE? MAYBE HE DOESN'T HAVE THIS FAMILY ANYMORE AND MAYBE HE IS OUT OF THE CLOSET NOW AND CAN HAVE SOME MORE SKELETONS IN HIS CLOSET. INTERESTING THO.
Author's Response: Hi, Julian! So great to see you've been catching up with the story - thanks for the thoughtful comments! In a previous chapter, it was mentioned that good old Marvin and his wife are divorced and she lives out of state. I don't much think she cares WHAT he does now, as long as her alimony stays intact. There WILL be some events coming down the pike that will reveal them for the liars that they are, along with Stockwell, too. Not sure just yet how I will handle Craig, but I really don't see much chance of a reconciliation there between him and Justin - too much has transpired between them now.
I hope you will continue to enjoy the story - thank you for checking in!:)
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 08:03 PM · On: Revelation and Deceit
I hope Marvin and Kip get their asses kicked very soon. It would be great if Marv's wife came forward and exposed Marv's many indiscretions. And Kip has to have screwed someone else over in the past. Brian needs to get to work investigating...or having someone investigate. Hope Andrew gets exposed soon...and that his mother bitches him out big time.
Author's Response: Hi, Deb! Thanks for reading and for the feedback! Yeah, those two (or should I say three) are a real piece of work, aren't they? Why Brian would have even allowed himself to get into that situation with Marvin especially is beyond me - yuck! He normally would have been too confident to even consider it - that episode always confused me because of that, but I can still see that long, lean naked body of his draped over the chair sideways (yum). As far as Adam goes, do not fear - he will not go undetected for too much longer. Thanks for taking the time to comment, Deb - don't know if it's the holiday or what but I was starting to feel a little lonely over here - ha!~Kimberly
Reviewer: Lee (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2011 06:03 AM · On: Revelation and Deceit
Good one. the three t's need to go. Typical campaign smears with a gay twist. Can't play fair. Now the rebuttal and some kick-ass get even plans. Glad Fin is in Brian's corner and Tony being the lawyer he is is bound to come into play. Love this story so much and know it's going to be really long like I LIKE. Thanks for the dedication-very thoughtful and wonderful.. Some people who we know are going to be a tad jealous. Ha Ha!! They are on their way to do their thing away so they may not read this for a while. Just kidding they will think I'm lucky and have a great friend in you. Next few chapters should be quite fun in the way things unfold. Love your imagination. love 2 u and thanks again.
Author's Response: Hi, Dear - couldn't resist a dedication to someone who told me this one is his favorite.:) I think the other readers (and your friends) will understand. I cherish each and every one of them but you've been through so much these past few months I couldn't take the opportunity not to mention you.:)
(Sigh)...I'm glad you like long ones because this one may go on FOREVER! Well, close to it, anyway. There are so many different plot lines woven in here, some of which I've just barely touched upon. I really wanted to get this chapter posted ASAP, though, because I felt bad about neglecting it. This Christmas story and my paper grading workload has bogged me down a little more than normal. But I will keep plugging along until they are all finished, I promise!
BTW - I hadn't even noticed there WERE "three T's!" Too funny! You're right - they definitely need to go. Now that the shock has worn off, you can be assured the four men will come back swinging! Thanks again for all the support, Lee. *Big* hug to you and your friends.:)
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