Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2019 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 2
fucking Lindsey
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2018 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 2
Looks to me like September has been in touch with Justin. Brian didn't leave a number where he could be reached if she heard from him? Justin needs to show up if only to spike Lindsay's plan.
Reviewer: kim (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2011 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great story ..I am captivated already ! I hope Lindsy gets some attitude adjusting ..because she is getting on my nerve. Who was september talking to, jus? i can't wait for the update. Thanks for sharing ur writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Kim. September may or may not have been talking with Justin. Thanks for the review. <3
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2011 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 2
What happened to Justin? Where is he off to? And that bitch Lindsay...I am not even gonna bother with that excuse for a human being.
Great job there sweetie, cant wait for the next update.
Marla
Author's Response: Ah, thank you Marla. Questions will be answered soon. As for Lindsay, yeah. I'm not usually a anti-Lindsay person, but for this I thought I would try it out. Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 2
What a great story. I love the tension and drama. Your style of writing is very well done and easy to read. It flows nice and makes for a well told story. I will try to wait for the next chapter!
Lori
Author's Response: Why thank you. It makes me happy to know that someone likes how I write. Thank you for reading and reviewing. <3
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
ok, I'm totally hooked - where is Justin - why would he ever leave his daughter? - what is September up to - and more importantly - who is behind it - and why?
Very intriguing story - can't wait to see wherre you go from here! Nice pace, good storytelling. Thanks.
loving life,
Charle
Author's Response: Why thank you. Some questions should be answered soon. <3
Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 2
Interesting, the plot thickens...
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2011 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 2
wonderful chapter.
how terrible for justin to lose his sister and jen her daughter. but that still doesn't explain why, if his conversation with september is anything to go by, he set up this ruse to have brian think he abandoned the baby and left town when he didn't leave at all.
what a bitch! lindsay! i can't even begin to think of anything nice to say about her.
Author's Response: Haha, who says it was Justin that September was talking to? Thanks for reading and reviewing. <3
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2011 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 2
This is getting good. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading the reviewing. <3
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