Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 06:34 PM · On: Shifting Emotions
Its going to be fun road trip with two blond and two brunett.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2016 08:54 AM · On: Shifting Emotions
I feel so sorry for Justin all he wants his dad to be proud of him and love him. I'm worried about the snake in the grass, really hope Brian finds him fast and boots him. Cannot wait to see the trip in the RV, I think funny moments maybe ahead,
Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2012 10:33 AM · On: Shifting Emotions
You had me laughing with the image of Brian going into the headquarters for the first time. Knowing how bad he hates even Justin's clutter, i can just imagine the expression on his face! Too funny! And then that slogan and sign. OMG! And once he finished with them, the staff had no idea what had hit them. I love Brian Kinney! LOL
Craig is an ass. I've said it many times already and I'll keep saying it. And no, it will never stop hurting Justin no matter how many years go by. That's something you never get over.
So glad Tony and Justin are going on the road with them. SOMEBODY'S got to try to keep them in line! This is gonna be fun! LOL
Reviewer: J (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2011 01:10 PM · On: Shifting Emotions
I know, it's taken me a few days to review... I loved the chapter. I'm actually running late because I wanted to read the chapter. Hope you'll update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading the chapter and leaving feedback, J, I really appreciate that! Be assured I will be updating it just as soon as possible. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story as I do so - thanks again, my dear.:)
Reviewer: lee (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Shifting Emotions
this will take me a long time to write, but i'm gonna try. i borrowed lindc's laptop while she is working and have been reading as long as i can stay awake. they have me on meds that are helping me heal but cause sleepiness. my left side is traumatized so have to type with my right hand-not good as i'm left-handed. good one huh?? this story is going so well. i am very impatient for chapters i guess. don't forget to put all the nastiness, slander and bs into this story, as it is prevelant, even if it is behind the scenes often. it should be worse because the candidate is gay and not main stream america. have to sign off sleep overcoming this brain. take care and thanks for this story and your prayers fo me. it is very much appreciated. love u
Author's Response: My dear Lee - you almost made me cry when I noticed it was you reviewing; I think this review means perhaps more to me than any of the others because of the effort it must have taken you to write it. I didn't realize you were left-handed and that is where you sustained injury. But I know you have to be a very strong and determined person to overcome what you have so far, and I'm confident, then, that you will find a way to perservere and triumph over this as well.:)
As far as the story goes, you can be assured that there will be the typical mud-slinging that always rears its ugly head in politics (looks like that's beginning to happen already in the real world ahead of next year's election!). And you're right - I see it being especially vitrolic in light of not only Fin's sexual orientation but also due to Craig and Stockwell being involved behind the scenes. I'm so glad you especially like this story, because I definitely see it being a long one - I just don't see any way to end this one too soon because of everything I've dredged up and do it justice; I feel like I'm writing a soap opera, so maybe I'll be able to pull in some fans of "All My Children" and the other soaps once they go off the air - ha!
You really seem to have a wonderful group of friends there at the hospital who care so much about you; you are fortunate that you work with such a dedicated, compassionate group of people. I will continue to pray that you have a full and speedy recovery from your injuries, and in the meantime whenever I write another chapter of this I will be silently dedicating it to you, my friend. Take care and a *big hug* to you.:) ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2011 11:21 AM · On: Shifting Emotions
Yay! This is my favorite series of yours, so I'm happy to see an update! I cannot wait to see how this all pans out, what with the mole in Fin's campaign, Justin's dad cavorting with the "enemy", and the father/son roadtrip in the RV. I can actually picture Tony and Justin getting involved in all sorts of shenanigans -- I really like how the two of them interact, so I can't wait to read more! And I just have to say -- whenever I see your banner for this story I seriously drool. I know I've said this before, but those pics of both Gale and Randy are my favorites! Great chapter once again -- keep writing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you, Kemma! I'm glad you managed to plod through that huge chapter! It kind of ran away with me this time - LOL! I do like this banner a lot better than the old one I had, too.:) And I agree with you - I like the idea of the two blond bookends conspiring together on the trip. I can see the two of them, also, as fierce protectors and defenders of their partners when the hecklers emerge, which I imagine they will at some point... And be assured that the two pairs of partners will be continuing their 'normal routine' (wink, wink) while they're away on the trip. I see a lot of issues emerging in this story - Brian and Fin's evolving relationship, Justin's turmoil over his father, especially when his connection with Turner is revealed, Justin's wish for a child, Tony's wish to have a more committed relationship with Fin, Fin's campaign...and just what is up with that homeless kid? Whew! I'm tired just thinking about it - ha! Thanks so much for reading so many of my stories and taking the time to leave me your thoughts, Kemma; I appreciate that so much.:) ~Kimberly
Reviewer: BROODING BRIAN (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2011 07:25 AM · On: Shifting Emotions
I REALLY LIKE THESE LONG CHAPTERS. THIS ONE WAS A GREAT READ. THE ROAD WILL NOT BE TOO SMOOTH WITH THOSE FOUR BURNING UP THE PAVEMENT. WILL BE INTERESTING TO SEE THIS UNRAVEL, OUR TEAM HAS BEEN BROKEN UP FOR A WHILE. I WENT IN TO READ TO LEE AND LINDC HAD ALREADY READ TO HIM, BUT HE WANTED ME TO READ IT AGAIN. HE IS REALLY ENJOYING THIS STORY FOR REASONS HE TOLD ME YOU WOULD UNDERSTAND. HE IS A FIGHTER THIS YOUNG MAN-I GIVE HIM CHOPS FOR SURVIVING ALL HE IS GOING THROUGH. HE ASKED ME TO REVIEW AND SAY THANKS FOR THIS GREAT STORY. LATER
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Always a delight to hear from you in addition to the "lead peep!" Ha! So glad you (and Lee) liked this one. The fact that you were going to read it to him, only to find out that lindc had already beat you to it, just tells me what a caring group you are. It's such a shame they've split you up - I really hope that's just a temporary situation.:) Tell Lee he's welcome - I am just thrilled that he likes it so much - that makes me very happy.:) And I'm very thankful that he's apparently going to be okay. I will continue to keep him in my prayers. Thanks again for taking the time to leave a review for me - you are all very special.:)
Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2011 03:03 AM · On: Shifting Emotions
Nice build up. I have a feeling Adam is going to be a problem.
I loved Brian take charge attitude. Such a man! No wonder Justin can't keep his hands off him.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for your comments, my friend.:) You may be right about Adam....all will definitely not be smooth sailing coming up - and not sure about Justin and Tony in the same RV together - ha! But it should make for some very interesting times onboard the campaign vehicle as well as some controversy; but the boys aren't known for backing down or hiding their lifestyle so I'm sure they'll be up for the challenge. I'll get this updated just as soon as I can. Thanks again for tackling that huge chapter - LOL!:)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 10:04 PM · On: Shifting Emotions
Wonderful chapter as always.
Uhh "win with fin" * shudders * . Can't wait to see the new slogan.
I know Brian will be an excellent campaign manager ... he already is. See them standing side by side on the table. That must look really really great.
Por Justin for having such an asshole a father.
Can't wait to see both couples on the road trip with (in !!) a Queensize-bed !!
Love the conversations between Fin and Tony.
Question: Brian and Justin are talking about a RV. Fin and Tony are talking about a luxury RX. Is that the same? if I look on the internet a RX is a car and a RV is a camper, motorhome!? Picture please * giggles *
* hugs *
Author's Response: Hi, Marny! AARGH! No, it should have been an "RV," not an "RX!" I changed that - sorry about the typo! (Tears my hair out...!). Thanks for pointing that out. Not sure if the little blond co-conspirators working together is a good thing from Fin and Brian's standpoint, but it should make things quite interesting anyway...! I will dig up a good photo of the RX I have in mind for their road trip coming up - LOL! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, my friend. *Hugs* to you.:)
Reviewer: Megan Rose (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 12:13 PM · On: Shifting Emotions
That's what I love about Brian; he doesn't waste any time!! I love your scenes with Fin and Tony, too. Totally what Brian and Justin will be 15 years in the future. I am both looking forward to/dreading this road trip, and I bet the boys are, too!
I have to give you so much credit; you obviously really put a lot of research and thought into your stories and scenarios, and it shows. Keep it up, bb!
Author's Response: Thanks, Megan! I'm glad you like Fin and Tony; I know some readers probably prefer that I stick to just the two main 'boys,' but with the story plot I can' t really do that and do it justice; besides, I've actually grown fond of Fin and his partner, and you're right - I like to think of them as an older version of Brian and Justin in the future. The road trip should be quite interesting, both inside AND outside the RV (wink, wink...). And I'm not sure if it's a good idea to put the two blond co-conspirators together in the same place - I think they manage to get into a lot of trouble bouncing ideas off each other, but it certainly makes their partners' lives more interesting as a result....
Thanks so much for tackling this humongous chapter, Megan Rose - and thanks for the review; it gets a little discouraging at times not to see a lot of feedback. I treasure every reader I have but especially those that take the time to leave me their thoughts and let me know they enjoyed what I wrote. For that and especially to the others who so faithfully read and review, I thank you.:) ~Kimberly
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2011 07:57 AM · On: Shifting Emotions
wonderful chapter as usual. hurricane brian apt description of our boy. i read this chapter to lee. he loves this story. don't write one for him as he feels this one is for him. it takes him back to his family's trials and tribulations in the political arena. he is doing well. said to say hello to you and thank you for your prayers. they have split up our team. don't know for how long-but i am not a happy camper. thinking about changing hospitals. we'll see what happens down the road. lol
Author's Response: Hi, dear friend! So glad to hear that Lee's doing much better - tell him I'm thrilled to hear it! I'm sorry to hear, though, that they've split your team up - how sad.:( I hope it will just be temporary. I would miss you guys if I didn't hear how you all are doing, and I've gotten a little spoiled getting reviews from both Brian and Lee from time to time in addition to yours...:) Take care and keep in touch - tell Lee I hope he has a quick recovery and I'm very thankful he's going to be okay.:)
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