Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2017 04:33 PM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation
Superb
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation
Hi, Louchelle.:) Still enjoying this story immensely. Love the little touches like the color of Brian's drapes and pillows, and the "Blood Ball" - perfect name for it! Will there be some sort of "bloodbath" occurring there? (sorry - couldn't resist - ha!). I like this lovestruck Brian, but I'm a sentimental sap anyway.:) So nicely written and full of emotions between the two boys. Love the eroticism you've written between them - very hot as well as sweet in spots.
As for Michael -ewww! Hope Brian doesn't wind up with 'blood poisoning' - ha! Looking forward to the Blood Ball as well as the other events in your story. You've gotten a LOT of reviews for this one - well-deserved, my dear - kudos to you!:)
Author's Response: Thanks Kimberly! :) I had to throw a little Michael in but didn't want the whole 'I love you Brian blah blah blah' to happen haha. I'm still figuring out how to portray the Blood Ball...but it's coming...slowly HA -__- Thank you for the compliment and for reviewing! Means a lot to me! :)
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2011 06:21 PM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation
Thank gawd you had Brian glamour Mickey after the feeding because for the life of me I do not want this entire Michael-Brian thing happening here, in fact if you can get Michael to dissappear that would be just fine.
So, what's coming up next? Is the Blood Ball coming up or there is gonna be something to help the plot thicken?
Cant wait
Marla
Author's Response: I felt like I had to add Michael but without the 'I love you Brian blah blah blah' shit lol I'm in the process of writing the next chapter :)
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2011 01:17 PM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation
i really liked this chapter, the only thing troubling me is brian feeding off michael. did the glamoring work? wonder what deb would do if she found out.
Author's Response: Yeah, it the glamouring worked on Michael...Glad you liked it!! :)
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation
Fuckin' awesome! :)
Absolutely perfect! I love the whole crossover thing you've got going and how it all ties together... and even though Eric has only been in it once so far, and quickly, I like where you've got him and Sookie's relationship, too. Justin should fit right in at the Blood Ball... provided that everyone knows he belongs to Justin and Justin sticks close. Knowing the Blood Ball that Sookie was invited to, it would be all too easy for a human with uniquely delicious blood to be pursued too much... especially by the wrong vampire.
Oh, and I have to say I love your description of Ted... perfect! He's a sweetheart and would be a real catch in a society that prized consideration and chivalry. Can't wait for more of this story!
Reviewer: ergenie (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation
And I love the turned out of this story..... can't wait for the next chapter, esp the Blood Ball...... cheers!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :))
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Chapter Eight: The Invitation
keeps getting better and better. wondered when the blood ball would be happening. good chapter. love this story.
Author's Response: Thank youu! :))
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