Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 5 - TO CATCH A THIEF- WHAT NOW ??!!
I do not understand what has stopped you to write this story continues
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 5 - TO CATCH A THIEF- WHAT NOW ??!!
I hop you have not given up on this story... Looking forward to the update :o)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 5 - TO CATCH A THIEF- WHAT NOW ??!!
poor brian to be stuck with such a dilema. should he or shouldn't he? are you posting this story somewhere else? it seems that i'm the only one reading it.
Author's Response: An' HELL !!-That's poor me !!!-LOL-NO - I'm not posting it anywhere else-I tried postin' the first chapter in LJ -But nobody was interested !!!-LOL- You know -This really made me laugh -You've so beautifully knocked me down without meaning it -!! -You can't imagine how much you've made me laugh with your innocent remark -!! -But hey -At least you're really reading this story - -An' I am hoping that others will follow suit -Bless you for this -!!- You are Cute -!!-Hope to be great pals with ya'-Do you write too???!!-Lemme know -I'll like to read some -Bye 'n' huggs -
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
An excellent start to the story, I look forward to reading more. It does need to be Beta-ed and some of the punctuation corrected - just to make it flow a little better. But overall - well done!!!
Author's Response: Thanx for that pat on the back !!-I am so new to this that you can't imagine 'n' I DON'T know anything 'bout this BETA an' stuff -If you could explain it to me -I'd be greatfull -What the hell is it -I do read a lot o' writer's thankin' their BETA'S -But I've no idea -I've no idea 'bout Co-AUTHER'S TOO-Though I've writtent 'DOPPELGANGER'S '-Name there-coz Dops is my friend -I had to write that -Coz they asked me for it -But everyday I'm tryin' to undderstan' more 'n' more -Its not easy :o)))- !!! -An' please don't think I'm dumb !!!- LOL -I'm not !! -But all this is so new to me -If you can help me out here -nothing like it -Like I said this m' first -An' Im glad you like it -I hope to get better with time an' encouragement -Thanx a ton for givin' it a shot 'n' reading my fic -Huggs -The next chapter's on -Go ahead -
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 4 -The Break In
i liked this chapter, and hope when brian comes home to find goldie locks sleeping in his bed he'll keep him there forever.
Author's Response: Hey! I'm really glad that you liked the chapter-An' you're really"Dead Pan Cenre" on the "Goldilocks" bit -You surprize me -!!!- Coz I've thought of that word too !!-Infact wait till you read the rest !! -LOL - The end ofcourse -Who's to say where the story leads us - !! -
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 3-THE CONVERSATION
you better fix this and fix it fast. all the anger and pain is finally out. now it's time to rebuild and find the love again. they fought each other to be apart now it's time to fight each other to be together.
Author's Response: Thanx for that out right threat !!! LOL - :O)))) !!! - I'm glad you're with me on this !! - I'll see what I can do 'bout that ! ;O) !
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 2-THE MEETING
read the two chapters and like their povs. if indeed justin walked away from him then he has every right to be so angry. but if brian let the relationship fizzle away because of his own fears then he better rethink that anger.
Author's Response: Both the guys have their own guilts an' each o' them did their bit to let it go actually -Its because of their nature an' characters that they drifted apart -Brian we all know is a complex character inspite of tryin' to being blatent 'bout everything -An Justin grows up to be a determined little 'Prick' -What With bein' so persistant all the time !!!-Now after all these years - What can we say an' do 'bout both o' them !!! - Read on - :o) !! - I'm so glad that you're there with me in both their POV'S -
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 2-THE MEETING
So very Brian to fight with himself internally, realize and admit his real feeling to himself, but be so brusque externally. Can't wait for the conversations.
Author's Response: Am really workin' on their conversation's -Not so easy as I thought it would be -!! - ;O)))) !!! - Please be patient -Will post ASAP - Thanx -I'm glad you're enjoyin' the read -
Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 2-THE MEETING
whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy r u this cruel please u have to update ASAP ok now that i got that out of my chest lol i want to say that ur doing great this be in ur first time writing bri/ jus fanfic keep up the good job see ya
Author's Response: Thanx for the encouragement-I'm glad you liked it -AM workin' on the next chapter s and will try to post it ASAP !!-
Reviewer: Sam (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 2-THE MEETING
you will have to put spaces in between the writing before I can read it. Its just a huge block of text at the moment so its too hard to read
Author's Response: I've done it -It was an error - :o)))1!! -Please go ahead an' give it one more try -Thanx-
Reviewer: tessa (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
I'm glad you changed the Justine to Justin, it was abit weird reading it like that lol but I knew what you meant so its ok. I dont think Brian could ever hate Justin even if he wanted to so I think Justin is just scared, hopefully they can talk and fix things soon.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
great chapter from Justin's pov, can't wait to read Brian's pov!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it -I loved writin' it -An' yes -Brian's POV will be posted by the end of the day -HOPEFULLY -Am wrting' the last coulpe o' lines -Hope you like that one too - Thanx for bein' patient - :o))))) !!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
like the story, but please watch your spelling. justin(no E on the end unless you changed him into a girl), and been not bin. embarassement not embracement.
Author's Response: Thanx for pointin' that out -Its a typing mistake -that's all -An' as far as 'bin' etc goes -As you will soon find out -when you r ead more -That I write coz that's my thought process -That's my writin' style -But I mean -no offence -I'm glad you liked the story -Will be postin' more soon -
Reviewer: Aran (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
Great start! Looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Thanx for the encouragement-This is my first fic -Will be postin' more chapters very soon -
Reviewer: Poppieshaze (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
please stop putting "e"s at the end of "Justin", it always makes me picture him as a trans...
Author's Response: Yeah -!! I'm goin' thru those Justin spellings - It's just a typn' error - I know its Justin -I've written it at some places -But then my hand slips again -SORRY !!! -I'M pretty new at this -So....please be patient while reading -In time there won't be mistakes - :0))))) !!! -Thanx -
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
I think that I'm going to like this story, and i get why it's so stream-of-consciousness, being all in Justin's head for now, but I hope that in future chapters, it becomes more puctuated, paragraphed, and linear thus facilitating comprehension. It's hard to read. But I like your premise, and a closed-off Brian is a vulnerable Brian who I like to read about. But, please don't make him be with someone else. It's painful to read about, and I just don't see it happening.
Author's Response: Thank-you for being so patient an' goin' thru with it - There was a serious error in printing -I'm pretty new to all this -so I'd Just printed it out -not realizing that I'd have to paragraph in the final page before printing- But I've corrected my mistake -The following chapters will be better and not so full of blunders -But you'll have to excuse some of the mistakes which occur - By 'n' by I'll probably become more savvy in all o' this - Thanx again for you review -It only helps me in correcting my mistakes 'n' improving -
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
It's too hard to read without formatting. you need to do paragraphs.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the fuck up -I'm really new at this -An' I didn't know I had to edit it in the final page -Now I've done it - Pleas read it again -An hope you enjoy it -
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
This story is much too difficult to read in this format :-(
Author's Response: My appologies -I've changed the format an' edited it -Am new to all this -Hence the F**k up - Please bare with me - Go ahead '' read it again - Hope you enjoy it -
Reviewer: Sue (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
Great story- tell me more! But please,get some punctuation and indents.
Author's Response: Thanx so much for being so patient an' goin' thru it in the way it was formatted -That was a fiasco - I've changed it -Read it again -an' hope you enjoy it now more -I'm just gettin' the hang o' all this -Am new to it -But I'll get there -Hugs to you for actually goin' thru it -in the way it was - coz when I saw it myself -it was like -Egadd -what's this !! -Took me a while to set the whole thing again -Thanx for your patience -If you want to -read it again -Its the way it was supposed to be -now -
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
I can't read it! No separations between paragraphs.
Author's Response: I've amended this horrendous mistake -please forgive 'n' go ahead an' read it now - Am very new to this -N am still gettin' the hang o' it -This is my first fiction - So please be patient -Will become more savvy with the varios terms - with time - :o)))) !!! -Go ahead 'n' give it another try - please -and Thanx -
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 1-The meeting
The story may be good but it is difficult to read with no paragraphs. Could you please resubmit the chapter with paragraph breaks?
Author's Response: I've done just that -I'm sorry for this -Like I'm telling all -I'm really new to all this -So Fu***ked up - But I've got the hang of the final editing -I was shocked myself when I viewed it back -It was really like Egaddd !! -No one's gonna even try to read this one - But please go ahead 'n' try it again -An' hope you do enjoy it - The other chapters will follow soon -Thanx -You're a pal -
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