Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Return to Debbie's
I decided to reread this story to try to get into the spirit of the holiday. It's a great story that is a bit over the top, but fun and loving to read. I am hoping that now that we are in the holiday season once again that there will be more chapters and maybe a conslusion to the story. Thank you so much for the enjoyable read.
Author's Response: The remaining chapters are all outlined. I just need to get them written. You are right it is the holiday time and a perfect time for updates. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Return to Debbie's
what's happening here?
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Return to Debbie's
Nice chapter. Lots of nice people, who like each other and are enjoying
the holidays. They are happy and the joy is contagious as I smile
while reading this story.
I know I don’t really get a vote, but I do hope that
Carl and Debbie get married. You know – sometimes the timing
is just right for something. Well this is it – time for them to marry.
I give Debbie credit for making a statement. But it is simply
time. Everyone is together and want this.
Michael? Well what can I say? It looks like he will go along with it.
But – he sure can screw it up. We will see.
Thanks for the chapter and of course, thanks for the story.
DavidR
Author's Response: David....Thanks for commenting. I see that you have your usual faith in Michael. (smile) We'll have to see how things play out, won't we? And of course, you get a vote about whether Carl and Debbie get married. You are entitled to your opinion. Of course, I never know what The Muse has in store about these things. (smile) I'm glad that you're enjoying this story. I started it over a year ago because I wanted a happy holiday story. Of course, then The Muse took over and the story has taken on a life of it's own with twists and turns even I never expected. I'm glad to know that it makes you smile.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Return to Debbie's
Great chapter! Have a great week, hun! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like the chapter. At the moment, It looks like the weekly updates are all that I handle, so please be patient with me. More to come....
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Return to Debbie's
I just love this story.
Please keep on writing because you are gifted writer.
I am still waiting to about Thorpe, the dog series and Justin's entry to Milan.
Have a nice summer and please write, you are a great one.
Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting and letting me know that you like this story. The Gathering is keeping me pretty busy at the moment. Once this story is complete....I will resume posting on The Thorne Saga II. I really hate to have unfinished fics. (smile) I will also begin Part II of And So Moving Forward, which will let us all know what happened with Justin's entry into Milan....although this story has hinted about that. LOL I will be continuing to write all through the summer...not to worry....with the usual breaks as I go off on assignments. Thanks for hanging in there with me.
Reviewer: camm76 (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Return to Debbie's
I always look forward to a new chapter of this story. I love the whole series! After this christmas story is done, will you be continuing on the series? I hope so.
There is another story I think kind of belongs to this series, but I don't think you wrote it. It goes back a few years, while Brian is on a business trip he runs into Paul for the first time since college. And Justin is flying to meet Brian and ends up meeting Jason on the plane. They all hang out together and become the good friends they are now. Can you please help me find this story. I've looked and looked and can't find it again.
Thank you
Author's Response: The story that you are looking for when Brian runs into Paul and Justin meet Jason on a plane is called "Seeing It Through" by Lois. When I was writing "Talisman of Time", Lois allowed me to borrow Paul and Jason for my stories. As soon as I get a chance, I will repost both of her stories. Of course, Nicky didn't exist in the Lois stories, but he's here now. LOL In the meantime, I'm glad that you're being entertained by this long running Christmas story with all the characters and all the chapters. (smile) Believe me, once I finish this epic tale, I will return to Thorne and my the continuation of my other stories. Thanks for hanging in there with me. (smile)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Return to Debbie's
i can't imagine what justin got himself into now but i'm sure brian will refresh his memory and mine.
things are falling into place nice. hope mac and laurie can make it in for dinner. the more the merrier.
Author's Response: We'll have to whisper the more the merrier because we all know how Brian feels about holidays....which is probably why Justin has earned himself a trip in the hot tub. LOL In spite of how long it's taken me, things are really starting to fall into place. A few more chapters to close out Christmas Eve...and then the chaos of Christmas at Bri-tin can really begin. (smile) Then who knows what can happen.....
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2009 01:52 PM · On: The More The Merrier...Maybe
What´s Michael going to do and how will Ben react? And Debbie? I´m looking forward to the next chapter. Will we see another chapter of the Thorne Sage II soon? Hugs, Sunny
Author's Response: You know you're going to have to be patient to see what happens between Michael/Ben and Michael/ Debbie. Don't worry, I will get there. (smile) Now about everyone's favorite Shar Pei, I will begin posting chapters of Thorne Saga II as soon as The Gathering is complete. I dislike having this many unfinished fics...so I'm doing my best to complete them one at a time. So, please continue to hang in there with me. (smile) Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2009 01:14 AM · On: The More The Merrier...Maybe
Interesting indeed. LOL. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you liked the chapter. We'll just have to see how things develop. More to come...
Reviewer: Adam (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2009 01:00 AM · On: The More The Merrier...Maybe
Can't wait to see Debbie's reaction. She always be the front line of Gay Pride. But I want her to be happy too. Really happy.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Back at the end of season 4 of QAF when Debbie made here decision not to marry Carl, it was a gesture of support. I just thought it was time to re-examine the decision from a perspective of a new group of people. I also wanted to acknowledge some of the changes in the world in the time since. We'll have to wait to see what Debbie's reaction is going to be. Like you, I want to see her happy too. (smile) More to come....
Reviewer: Sandy (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2009 08:32 PM · On: The More The Merrier...Maybe
I love the story, and don't really care how slow the updates are--as long as they keep coming eventually. Keep up the wonderful work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting and letting me know that you love this story. I have slowly come to terms with the fact that there are a lot of characters all doing things worth mentioning...so it's taking a long time to tell this story. I'll do my best to keep the updates coming. It's good to know that you'll be there to read them...even though they take a while. (smile) More to come...
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Afterward
I´m so happy that you´re back again.I love reading your stories. Now I´m curious about Michael. Hugs, Sunny
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Afterward
Now that Daniel and Michael arrived at Woody's, things should get very interesting. LOL. "But Ted wasn’t finished. “It wouldn’t do any good anyway. Gus will always think that Justin belongs to him.” But what about Brian? Gus loves his daddy as well, right? LOL. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. And, not to worry, Gus definitely still loves Brian. LOL But at six going on seven, Gus still thinks of Justin as His Justin...I think that Ted was right this isn't going to change. (smile)
Reviewer: anjul02 (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Salt Lake City
Yeah...you're back! Big cheer for you! :-))) Can't wait to read about Michael's reaction to the gathering at Woody's!
Reviewer: Lori (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Salt Lake City
So glad to see you are back and updating. Read the last chapter and groaned at the end, cant wait to see what happens with Michael.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Afterward
i was so happy to see an update on this fic thank you so much, i am looking forward to the next one. Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. It's so good to know that you're still hanging in there with me on this story. I'm working to get another chapter posted in a few days.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Special Delivery For The Rehab Center
Great chapter, looking forward for more. :D
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Special Delivery for the Vic Grassi House
Hi, I enjoyed these last few chapters. What wonderful people your characters are (except you know who). With all those kids and all those people, finding the time to spend at the Vic Grassi Hospice and at the Rehab Center is so fitting for these people. . However, it is kind of bitter sweet and I did feel a sense of sadness. I am reminder that Vic is dead, and these guys are very sick. Christmas eve is still a day and not everything, Christmas or not, is wonderful. At least for me, it’s a good reminder. Blake’s comment: “Life is really just a series of moments,” said so much. Thanks for that. Michael? If nothing else, you have kept his character consistent. It’s Christmas so I will just move on to another topic. I enjoyed the debate whether Carl and Debbie should get married. Both sides have a point. Although no one has asked me, I vote ‘yes’. Now that everyone is there, what a great way to celebrate their love and the love of their family. I think this celebration should super cede Debbie’s protest. Thanks again for the story. It is wonderful reading. DavidR
Author's Response: So you're back from your trip and all caught up on the chapters. This is good news. I'm glad that you're enjoying the last few chapters. Let's face it the characters on QAF have so much, I just wanted them brightening a few other lives. The can't change the situation for those at the Vic Grassi House and The Rehab Center, but they can bring a touch of the holidays and a few moments of joy. Now about Michael, you have to admit that he's had a few surprising moments in this story. (smile) But Michael is still Michael, and he just doesn't take changes well. (smile) We'll have to see what The Muse has in store for Carl and Debbie. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Special Delivery for the Vic Grassi House
Great chapter. :D
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad that you liked the chapter.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Trouble Arrives
Brian is hilarious. LOL.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: lynn (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Together Again
Great chapter.
I am glad that Brian was able to calm Michael down. Looking forward for more.
Reviewer: Endless-x-Rain (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Together Again
I love your series, and I think that it's been interesting so far watching how the plot of this series and your writing style have developed up to this point. One thing I've noticed is that your writing is very dialogue-heavy in contrast to the relative sparseness of your descriptions and details. If you don't mind me throwing out this bit of concrit, a goal that you could work toward to further improve your writing would be to try and balance these two aspects out - dialogue and description. Your story is already very good, but from experience I would say that striking a good balance between amount of dialogue versus description will make your writing much richer than it is right now. Anyway, I look forward to reading more from you and more of this series! ~Endless
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Adventures In Wrapping
Hi! Like I have stated before, you are a great writer and I hope you keep up with this series about Brian ane Justin. I loved the way you have extended the show with you story. I am still waiting for Milan and Thor. Have a nice spring!! Thanks again for writing! You are great!!! Debbie
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you like my stories. I have tried to keep the characters and the spirit of the QAF the series alive, using all the characters and adding a few new ones. You don't need to worry. Once "The Gathering" is finished, I will finished "Thorne Saga II" and then return to writing "And So Moving Forward". I'm like everyone else, I really dislike unfinished stories. (smile) Your favorites will be returning soon. LOL More to come...
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Adventures In Wrapping
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting and letting me know tht you liked the chapter. More is coming.....
Reviewer: Jcat (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Here We Go
Oh yay! You're back! I have been jonesing for an update. Can't wait to see how everything turns out.
Author's Response: Thanks for you kind words. It's good to know that I was missed. (smile) Although, I hate it when I have breaks in the posting. This story will be continuing through to completion. More to come....
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Here We Go
You're back!! I keep on loving this story, and I really like your pacing. I know you say that it takes you a long time to tell a story, and you're right, but I appreciate not having to tax my imagination to gap fill. You do it for me! All those little conversations that I just wish I could be a fly on the wall for, you give to me. Nice to be able to look for your frequent updates again!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting and letting me know that you understand why it takes me so long to tell a story. It will take me a bit to get back to my normal posting, but I'm working on it. More to come....
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Here We Go
Is Michael finally letting Brian go? :D Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: As we have seen Michael is growing in his own unique way. Daniel has made a big difference. So we have these jeweled moments from Michael one minute, and his whiney, clinging to Brian the next. But Michael like all of us, is a work in progress. Thanks for commenting. More to come....
Reviewer: sandy (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Arrivals 107
I love this story. Can't wait to read more. Please!!!!
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Arrivals 107
Hi again, Well – I am back from my trip and so far have only read up to Chapter 39. The first 30 chapters I read on my flight (going). That was great as it certainly help make my flight seem shorter. Just two quick comments. I thought it was funny that when Mac explained the ‘extended’ family to Philip, you left out Danny. I’m not sure you can summarize just who Danny is in just two or three sentences. Actually I am not sure that Philip would understand the relationship of Danny to the rest of the ‘extended’ family. What I like so far in the story are the characters. They all seem like nice people, they get along well with each other, and finally they seem to like one another. As a reader, I too like these people. Enough for now. Happily I have many chapters waiting for me to read. As always, thanks for writing this story. DavidR
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Arrivals 107
Great chapter.
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Riding Together
Love the story (which i wish was updated a little faster but I understand the muses can be difficult to work with) Small typo: ... a rid was scheduled ... Should be .... a ride was scheduled.....
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting and letting me know about the typo. It has now been fixed. (smile) I'm glad that you like this story, and I'm trying my best to update as quickly as I can. (smile) I'm glad that you're reading with me.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Riding Together
no horses yet? when will justin ever leave NY? poor gus is so hopeful. will they all be going to the hospice for christmas eve? with brian's full schedule, at least in his mind, i hope he finds the time. lol
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Nope...no horses yet. With opportunities opening up in NYC for Brian in this series and with Justin's career taking off, I suspect that they will be in NYC for a while..definitely interfering with Gus' plans for horses at the mansion. LOL But we'll have to see what Santa has in store. (smile) We'll also have to wait and see what happens for Christmas Eve and the hospice. (smile) I'm glad that you're still reading with me.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Riding Together
Looking forward to the Christmas festivities at Britin. Should be interesting. LOL. Great chapter.
Author's Response: I'm getting to Christmas as fast as I can. (smile) I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2009 12:34 AM · On: The Old House, Part II
Great chapter. Looking forward for more. :D
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 04:43 PM · On: At The Old House
nice family. i'm glad to see philip was smart enough to leave cael with cj and vicki
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 08:58 AM · On: A Little Bit Of Chaos
"No one noticed as Lindsay looked longingly at Brian and Justin," what she's not over brian yet and still wanting to be where justin is? this was a great day and night.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Who won't look longingly at the relationship between Brian and Justin. (smile)
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2009 05:21 AM · On: A Little Bit Of Chaos
Well I am glad everyone enjoyed decorating christmas cookies and had a fun time spending time at Britin. :D Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Isn't decorating cookies and spending time together what every family forward to for the holidays. (smile) No drama....just fun.....LOL
Reviewer: heygirl1 (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 02:34 PM · On: A Little Bit Of Chaos
Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad that you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Santa Land And Beyond (Sidebar)
Lovin this story. Just caught up reading all the chapters. Love the dynamics of all the adults and kids. The media room group is a riot, as are Den and Teres in the kitchen. Love how Michael is being nice, hopefully he'll pursue Ben and eventually work things out.
Author's Response: Thanks for commentng. I'm glad that you're all caught up. I can't believe how much has been happening. Thanks for reading with me.
Reviewer: MattMel (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Santa Land And Beyond (Sidebar)
How sweet!!! more soon? Please.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying this little holiday story. I'm doing my best to keep up with the almost daily updates. I'm glad that you're reading with me. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2009 08:20 AM · On: The Cookies Await
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 02:18 AM · On: The Media Room At Bri-tin
Sweet chapter. :D
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it.
Reviewer: Heygirl1 (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2009 10:26 AM · On: The Media Room At Bri-tin
Great chapter. I really enjoyed Brian making new and happy memories about Christmas.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. You have to admit that nothing makes Brian happier than torturing his favorite targets. (smile)
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2009 12:34 AM · On: Wrapping At Bri-tin
I am glad that Debbie and the rest of the gang finally gotten the chance to see Britin. :D i wonder what Brian and the guys are up to? Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm sure that Brian and Justin never intended to keep everyone away for so long....but you have to admit, they've been pretty busy over these months. I'm glad that you liked the chapter.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Wrapping At Bri-tin
i just want to say thank you for your daily updates, it is so fun reading your storys it makes you laugh because they are always up to something sneaky. Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you're enjoying this story and the sneaky side to the characters. Sometimes in QAF the series, we would only get glimpses of the humor, just enough to know it''s there.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Wrapping At Bri-tin
"Bits of holiday fluff" are not supposed to have cliff hangers!! What are they doing in the media room?? You rock. Your stories make me happy.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like my stories. Thanks for commenting. And, what's one little accidental "cliff hanger" between friends?(smile)
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Bri-tin
I am really enjoying this series. Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you're enjoying this story. More to come....
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Anticipation, Part 2
Well lets see if Debbie and Hunter get the chance to visit Brian and Justin at Britin soon. LOL. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. You have to admit that Debbie and Hunter have been persistent in their desire to be invited to Bri-tin. We'll have to see how things work out. I'm glad that you liked the chapter.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Anticipation, Part 1
i also just want to say that i love all your storys and that you update so often please keep up the good work you are doing. Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you like the stories, Each one does seem to be a little different, so I'm glad that you're giving them a chance. I like the frequent updates too. I hate to make you wait for what happens next....and with a story with this many characters....you'd have to go all the back to the begiining to keep everyone straight. Thanks for commenting and for reading this one with me.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Anticipation, Part 1
Just wanted to say that I am loving this, AND the fact that you update so frequently.
Author's Response: I so glad that you like this story and are reading this with me with the frequent updates. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Dinner At Debbie's
Brian is being his usual self. LOL. I am looking forward to when Brian and Justin will have everyone come out to the house? LOL. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. So much going on....so little time. (smile)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Arrivals 106
i too winder what stories debbie will be hearing. carl's glad to have him home.
Author's Response: Oh, you can just imagine the gossip that must be floating around Liberty Avenue as Carl is seen first hugging....and then having breakfast with a handsome man in uniform. (smile) After all, we know how the Liberty Avenue crowd loves to gossip. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Arrivals 106
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you....and I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Arrivals 105
that will be what, taking eight kids to see santa. that should be fun. glad the girls got along so well, but i wonder what trouble they're going to stir up for brian.
Author's Response: So, you don't think that Melanie and Lindsay will greet Brian with good tidings of the holiday season, huh? Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Bri-tin
well having molly keep clothes there is one way for brian to stop these impromtu dates. lol
Author's Response: Knowing how Molly feels about her "dates" with Brian, I'm not sure that keeping clothes at the mansion will deter Molly one bit. I think that it will just make it easier for her. Of course, she still has to have Jennifer chaperone these dates. LOL Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Pittsburgh
Hi, I just wanted to wish you a happy new year and to say hello once again. I am so glad you have continued – giving us The Gathering. I haven’t read it yet as I am taking a long trip (vacation) and have printed off the first 17 chapters, so far. I have a long long flight, and lucky me, to help time pass I have your story. So -- I am thanking you in advance as I know I will really have one terrific time reading. I won’t be able to comment, and I won’t be back for about a month. So thank you, thank you, thank you. This is one traveler who is going to have a long but enjoyable flight – in part ecause of you. DavidR
Author's Response: So there you are....I think that I've posted thru Chapter 27 or 28 so far. Hopefully, these chapters will at least get you thru your flight one way. I'm not sure what will happen on your flight back.(smile) However, I hope that you have a great vacation. So you'll be gone a month. I always expect that my stories will post and conclude sooner they they actually do, but this is a holiday story....so courtesy dictates that it should posted by Valentine's Day....so that I don't conflict with all the Brian and Justin Valentine stories that are sure to post. I look forward to your comments, when you return. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Pittsburgh
Well I just hope there won't be too much drama since Michael showed up at the dinner. But I doubt it. LOL. Great chapter.
Author's Response: You have to admit that Michael is known for creating drama whenever he walks into a room.(smile) I'm glad that you likedthe chapter. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Pittsburgh
what a way to ruin a pleasant evening. i am so glad that they all get along but i fear gretchen isn't going to be very happy when jenny arrives and wants her grandpa.
Author's Response: Let's face it, Carl is going to be in high demand this holiday season with both Jenny and Gretchen. (smile) As for Michael....it is the holidays....he has to be on his best behavior to insure getting presents from Santa Claus. (smile) Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Gerri (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Pittsburgh
Oh hell!!!
Author's Response: Such a perfect reaction. LOL Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: MARY (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Pittsburgh
OHHHHHHHHH SNAP MICKEY IS GONNA BE PISSED HAVING A FAMILY DINNER WITOUT HIS WHINY ASS LOVEEEEEEE IT LOL
Author's Response: Michael seems to be experiencing that a lot lately....walking in at Debbie's to find that joyous dinner is in progress. Maybe, he's getting used to this. (smile) Of course, Michael still thinks that it's all about him....even during the holidays. LOL Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Elli (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Salt Lake City
I love this story. But I'm curious where Thorne is in this story. Thank you for sharing the story with us. Elli
Author's Response: I wrote this story before Thorne was created. I considered going back and putting Thorne in the story, but I felt that I would be wielding too many characters. And, you know that Thorne would definitely steal every scene...thinking that he was supposed to be the center of attention. (smile) I'm glad that you're enjoying this story anyway. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: anjul02 (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Salt Lake City
I really love this new installment! :-) Especially the short time between updates! The kids are too cute and the new characters promise lots of fun! lol♥ Thanks for sharing with us! Hugs Anja (from Germany as well ;-))
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like this story. I will admit there are a lot of characters, which is how I think it should be for a family holiday. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Susi (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Salt Lake City
Hi, I just wanted to tell you that I really love this story. It's funny and adorable. Did you have help with the German parts in the first chapters? Because I'm reading chapter 19 right now and even though I'm German I have to read the English part sometimes to understand what you mean. If you want help with these parts you can write me: susi01@web.de I can't wait for the next chapters.
Author's Response: I did have help with the German, of course judging by the emails I received about my creative German (smile) I'm beginning to wonder if I accidently picked up my original translation instead of the corrected version. (smile) Let me check the German again. So Sorry! Thankfully, I always give you the translation to make up for these little glitches. (smile) I'm glad that you like the story anyway. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Arrivals 101
I love your stories and how often you update. This is a scenario that I wondered about in the show too, and I am enjoying your version.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you were wondering too. Thanks for commenting and letting me know that you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: sjmpets (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Arrivals 101
previous chapter. brian is all bluster, mel's still a bitch and gus is his father's son. gotta love emmett. making them feel at home when they aren't was really nice.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the chapters. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: poppieshaze (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Salt Lake City
i'm reading your talisman series and i wanted to read lois's "see me through" and other stories introducing jason and paul but the link on her geocities site doesn't work, do you know where i can find them? thanks and keep writing!
Author's Response: There is a link to "saved stories" on the home page of the midnight whispers site. Locate Lois in the list. You will need her stories 1623 and 1621, and they should be read in that order. At the moment the easiest thing is to just copy each story into a program like MSWord, then you will easily be able to read both stories about Jason and Paul. Of course, you will remember that Nicky did make his appearance until my story "Between Now And Then." If you have any problems....just let me know. Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you like the Talisman series.
Reviewer: msv713 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Germany
Happy to see the continuation of the story. Where's Thorne in this story? Look forward to seeing how the families will come together and interact with each other.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you like the story. There's no Thorne in this one. I wrote this one before Thorne came into existence. I hope that you like the story anyway. (smile)
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 07:55 AM · On: Germany
I can't wait for the two families to meat. It should be interesting. Feel free to upload as many chapters as you like at a time, I'm sure we can handle it ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'll just try to keep up with my daily posting. (smile) I'm glad that you're reading with me.
Reviewer: sarahrei (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2008 11:20 AM · On: New York
I am so happy you are continuing this. But, one question...did I miss the part in Italy? I was looking forward to finding out what happened with J's painting and the vacation. I hope more comes up in future chapters. I can't wait to hear more about M and Ben...and how it is impacting B/J. Should be an interesting holiday!
Author's Response: No you're not missing anything. The vacation trip has already happened, so you will hear references to it in this story. I just have posted that story yet. Eventually, i'll get the order all straightened out. But this is the holiday story. If you will remember, Carl told Melanie that his kids were coming to spend Christmas with him. This is the story of how that plays out. Don't worry...I hardly ever write a story without all the QAF characters being around. I hope that you like this little take on Christmas.
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