Reviewer: FallBackTrick (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 4
*TEARING UP*
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 2
Still a good story. Spelling has become worse. Almost doesn't make sense
Author's Response: Simple...
don't read it then.
I have a beta and I double check honestly we do the best work we can and no we aren't perfectionist. You're only on chapter two so the fact of the matter is the story is still developing as is the writing. I can say 'yes there are mistakes' and honestly I'm okay with them.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good story. Bad spelling.
Reviewer: Maha (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Authors Note
Hey, i dnt usually leave comments.. actually i never leave comments lol but I felt like I had to for this. Just want to say well done.. this story is WOW , I did not expect ANY of this plus lmao my emotions , 1 min wanting to cry the next laughing. Once again well done =]
Author's Response: Hey,
I'm so sorry about the delaid response. I worked so hard on this story and I have never been more proud of something before. Thank you so much, I know the feeling trust me I did the same while writing it.
=)
Reviewer: . (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Authors Note
I have just finished reading your story. Thanks very much for sharing this wonderful story and your talent in writing with us on MW. Hoping there will many great stories to come. Pls take care
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
This was honestly one of my favorite stories to write.
There are always stories in the works.
Take care of yourself as well.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Authors Note
Keighley, thanks for writing this story. I really did enjoy it!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Kat. Thank you again for all the reviews and reading it.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Authors Note
thank you for writing and sharing this great story with us. :-)) rose
Author's Response: You are more than welcome hun, thank you so much reading and reviewing to the story.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 24 & 25
Yea, Daph and Kris FINALLY made that first steip! I'm so glad they are working things out. Now, are you going to get into how and why Brian was injured? I had forgotten about that with all the other drama that was going on. I'm still curious about that.
Author's Response: Haha that was all my beta's idea she is awesome.
Yes, Tomorrow you will finally know what happens to Brian. It's okay I understand that I forget sometimes but I promise it will explain everything.
Reviewer: bec (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 24 & 25
Okay, a few reviews back I said I was confused as all hell and would give to the end. So, I did understand the dynamics of the entire group by the end. And I'm so very glad (being a B/J entirely) that Justin and Brian worked out there problems. Milo has his dads back and their a family again. As for the rest of the group, I'm gonna jump right in and say Kristen needs therapy, lots of therapy. From my point of view Brandon did not betray her, she betrayed him, pushed him away with no explanation, wouldn't talk to him for weeks. No, he shouldn't have jumped in with Emmett right away but as far as he knew Kris was done with him, so he got out of town, he was only working with what he knew and that was nothing, so I don't pity Kris and I don't feel she has the right "not to forgive him or Emmett". And Daphne has a tiny bit of responsibility too, she knew what was going on with Kris and never once did she think to go to Brandon and say "hey, give her a bit of time", makes me wonder if she wanted Bran gone so she could have Kris to herself. Same with Michael and Ben, don't really care that Ben feels that Emmett betrayed him because he had already betrayed Emmett (amazing that Michael actually figured this out first, lol). To me Ben was the bad guy in this entire situation (no matter how much I want to blame Michael), Ben was the one who was in a committed relationship and was too much of a coward to explain it to Emmett. So Happy Girl for Justin and Brian, couldn't really care about the others, but I do give Brandon cudo's for sticking with Em and creating a loving family for their daughter. Kris could have told Bran, they could have dealt with it like adults and possible had more children and she could have had her happy ending too but if she is in love with Daph well, then her releationship with Bran wouldn't have worked either. Thank you for sharing your words with us and hope to see more in future. bec
Author's Response: Hey Bec,
One your thoughts and feelings for the story are very much appricated in the ascept of they are yours so I can't tell you it's wrong or right.
The thing with Kris is simply I am her...We push people away in a way fro them to protect them yes it's screwed up but her thought process was simply she didn't want to ruin his life or feel like he was with her for their kid. In that mind set we are not deserving of the happliy ever after we would rather suffer in silence then to drag others in to our issuse. I think Kristen thought she was protecting Brandon in a screwed up sense she would rather her hurt him now then in long run. So yes it's screwed up but there it is....Personally I loved Kristen in every aspect meaning I felt her story was right in some ways yes it was wrong and you feel it was her fault however I do not. I loved her and her story more than anything.
Michael was written as the good guy in some point I have written tons of stories where he is the bad guy but I thought it was nice idea to make him good which it wasn't supposed to be like this but he was...Ben's exucess he was young and stupid we all do things we aren't proud of and the truth is yes he hurt emmett and yes there was a lot of it but the truth we can fault him for hurtin Emmett but we can't fault him for some intention of not hurting anyone.
Brandon and Emmett were this complex thing that happened..they helped each other when they were hurting...and being litterly broken apart so they leaned on each other..they did everything they could for their daughter and yes, Emmett in retrospect did the same thing but he wasn't like Kristen going to make Brandon be with him and as for Kristen being a bitch in some aspect she was confused, pregnant and scared she wasn't made at Emmett persay she was just hrut they didn't tell her. Plus her emotions were and are still crazy with the loss of her child and therpy is a good idea but she is healed with Milo being there and around her.
Reviewer: LadyHarold (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 24 & 25
Awwww I had tears in my eyes at Justins last words. He is soo right. It´s a shame that it´s over. It´s a really good FF.
Author's Response: Aww I am so glad you liked it. I cried when I wrote these final chapters as well.
I know but I didn't want to drag it on to long. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 23
Wow, it was like a freakin domino effect! All that drama!
Author's Response: I know.
It crazy to write.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 21
well, I hope you update tomorrow... because I can´t wait for the next part :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Next week of course will have a new chapter.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 20
Ahh! Now, we're getting somwhere, getting more details in the many mysteries surrounding everyone. GOOD!!
Author's Response: Oh, i know it was getting bad that's why I am slowly speeding it up.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 19
can't wait for Wednesday again!!!!!! to know the "story" of Brandon, Em, Kristen and Ben.............. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you so much hun. Much more details and fun
Reviewer: 7qt (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2009 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 18
So when's the next an' next an' next ....Chapters comin' out -....I'm lookin' forward to readin' it till the end -Its truly written well -Congrats !!-Very good read -I loved it -Don't make me wait too long -!!!!-take care -
Author's Response: Chapters come out ever Wednesday.
Thank you so much. I am having fun with this story and i always have.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 17
Oh ! my god !!- Now what -Don't tell me both the girls will be together -What happens to Bran -ana' I just wish Ben an; Emmet could also get back together an' Im pretty sure that maddie is Ben's kid !!-Right or wrongggg !!! -What a fu***kin' plot !!!- :o)))))) !!!
Reviewer: 7qt (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 16
God -I really laughed at the GOOD...GOOD..GOOD ...Bit -Good sence o' humour -Brian's real classy !!- I simply adore the life outta him !!!-By the way how do you sign in here to write some fic stuff-I'd like to do that m'self -Can you tell me -??
Reviewer: 7qt (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 10
OMFG -Justin Preggi- !! EGAD ! -This is the first I've read -!!-Sounds funny -I actually laughed !!- But in a good way -No offence -I'm just gettin' used to the idea -Not bad actually-I love the storyline like I said earliser -So wil continue reading till the end -Good job done -Its interesting -Thanx -Will talkto you again - :o)))) !!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am actually working on the finally chapters.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 18
oh dear, why did you stop?? you are killing me here?? what happend?? :-)) rose
Author's Response: Haha I had too, honestly I got stuck with it but It is coming very soon.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 18
I hope Em and Brandon do finally tell what happened! Its driving me crazy already.
Author's Response: It is coming very soon, there is a bit of a build up but it is coming
Reviewer: 7qt (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
Such a wonderful storyline -The timephases have bin captured so well-Love it an' am looking forward to finishing this whole story-Can't imagine Brian this way-But hope he'll do okay later !!!-Thanx for such a good read -
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have worked hard on this story and as the ending is drawing closer it has become very hard to write in some ways. There is still some story lines to clear up but they will be.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 18
can't wait for the story of Emmet, Brandon, Kristen, Ben and Michael............ thanks and more please!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah it's coming very soon.
Thank you.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 17
Oh my! What a way for Kristen to hear about Daphne! Love Brian and Justin going on their "first date" and LOL at Justin giving himself a pep talk! Hmm, so I see the beginning of the Michael/Ben thing. So much drama with this group! LOVE IT ;)
Author's Response: Yeah I thought it would be something like that because honestly I have found news out that way too it was shocking.
Thank you so much. =) Yeah he was nervous i think even though they are married nerves will be there.
I am so glad it will get shown more and more I promise. :)
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 17
oh no... why did you stop here... great update :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
I know it's horrible but I couldn't honestly think of something to keep going.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 17
I have fallen in love with this story!! But there are so many unanswered questions I have. Why did Ben and Emmet end? What did Michael have to do with it. How did Brandon end up with his and Emmets kid when he was with Kristin? Why was/is Brian in Physo, and why did Justin leave him? I see them slowly coming back together, but will they end up together? You could always email me the answers to these questions (snvoigt@gmail.com) I would give you TWO really BIG cookies, and throw in an extra for an update really soon!! Shauna
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful Comment and reading the story.
However I can not send you a copy of the plot or any idea for the next few chapters simply because 1.) I don't know the plot, I write what comes to me which means most of the time what I think will happen doesn't, I will end up completely changing the whole chapter around. 2.) As we get closer to the end of the story I will be clearing everything up slowly but it will be cleared up by the final chapter.
I hope you understand my reasoning for saying no. Updates are every Wednesday.
-Keighley
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 17
So cute of Brian and Justin on their "date"..... Thanks and more please..........
Author's Response: Thank you so much Thess. Much more fun next week.
Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 17
Yea Yea Yea more more more pleawe
Author's Response: Thank you so much Kaylin.
Next week should be a lot more fun with everything going on.
Reviewer: bec (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 17
I'm not trying to mean, I'm not, but I just have to say I am confused about this story as I was reading the first few chapters. Is it me, do I just not get it? I mean we're on Chapter 17 and we haven't gotten one answer yet. I feel like I'm watching X-Files or Lost. And it's a very hard read, misspellings, missing words or just wrong words, it all adds up to just throwing you out of the chapter. Come on, give us something...at least one answer. Is Brandon the father, what happened between Kristen/Bran or Emmett/Ben. And what was so tramatic that Michael can't even talk about it? I'm just lost, please? bec
Author's Response: Thank you for reading or at least trying as you put but I can't say to much because it will give away the plan I have for the story. It is slowly building as for the confusion I have to say that yeah it can be but I haven't had a lot of people tell me they were confused with what is going on with everyone some people have figured out some of the 'secrets'. As for what happened there is a big chapter coming soon that will does explain everything as we get closer to the end I will be showing who did what and what happened between them all.
As for the mis-spelling, wrong words all I can say is I do proof read them as I write the chapters, I do use spell check within writing and actually before I send it to my beta as well as proof reading and spell checking when I get the chapter backs. We're human it is never going to be completely perfect. I do try to catch all the mistakes and like I said spell check doesn't always work I do also looking it up online to make sure i am spelling it write. I can't say this wont be last time for a simple mistake with the wrong wording it does sometimes get lost in how I have in my head to the computer but I will be more responsable with relooking at the chapters.
I hope these answers are helpful.
-Keighley
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 16
this is getting more and more interesing. you know, I neve want a chapter of this story to end. great job :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much Rose.
I know I always feel like that after I write a chapter trust me, I usually have to start the next one very quickly.
We will be exposing more and more secrets I promise.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 16
Ok, now everyone knows about Brandon and Em's daughter. Someone better sit on Kristin cause she might really try to kick their asses. Daph had feelings for Kristen! That's a new twist for Daph!! Such goodies in this chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah everyone knows but of course there is more to the story.
Yeah, which will also be explored more too just which way I am not sure yet so yeah.
Thank you so much, i am so glad you liked it.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 15
i want to know all about emmett and the baby and who the baby's daddy is. i hope brian and justin get back together soon. it's hard for both of them. they're lost without the other.
Author's Response: Brian and Justin will be working it out, I actually have some really cute and good ideas to fix them but they will be getting back toghter.
As for Emmett and the baby that will definatly be reviled in next weeks chapter.
Reviewer: lalixlili (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 2
Your story is great!!! i become more and more addicted to it. Thanks!!!!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 15
Can't wait til Thanksgiving dinner!!! More drama to come I'm sure.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing.
Yeah, Thanksgiving is very big for both 2003 and 2008 I promise.
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 15
I hope Brian calls Justin really soon, Justin waiting fo him to call is so cute. Milo is a cutie too. Its a big mess with Brandon, Kristen and Em and Ben and Mikey too.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
I must admit I loved writing that scene with Milo/Justin.
The miss is big and extremly complicated but will be explanned in the futher chapters.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 14
Wow! I'm still curious as to how Em and Brandon got together in the first place.
Author's Response: Em and Brandon will be explanned in the further chapters, trust me.
Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 14
I just love this thanks for updating now I want more please please please ....
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 14
Welcome Back!!!!! Really looking forward for your next chapter for 2009!!!!! Thanks and more to come........
Author's Response: Thank you somuch.
There is a lot to come, it's just getting more fun.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2008 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
Glad that Brian and Justin with Milo spent the day, hope they'll be back together.. More revealing stories with the "group"!! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and enjoy your vacation....
Author's Response: I hope you had a great Christmas and New Year as well.
Yeah they will spend more time together I have some more things planned and yes there will be more secrets.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2008 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 13
That's a long wait! (smiling) Probably, when you return, Brian and Justin with Milo will be together forever!!! Enjoy for vacation!!!! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you!!!
Author's Response: I know it's long but it will be worth it. who knows but as for them being together it's not happening yet.
I hope you have a good one too.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 13
have agreat trip keighley. we'll be here waiting. this was a great chapter. justin going home to brian and milo, even for the day, was a big step for him. and brian's kiss rekindled the flame. i'm dying to know about emmett and brandon and kristin and brandon. i wnat to know what happened. see you when you get back. have wonderful holidays.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
I agree Justin going there is good for them but it also gives Brian a chance to prove himself esp. on his promise. Of course.
That will be explained in much more detailed in later chapters. I have them all worked out and I am absoutly sure you are going to love what happens because I know I do.
You too hun. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 13
Loved seeing Brian, Justin and Milo happy like that! And the other Justin, poor thing so hormonal! Great chapter, enjoy your vacation (mine starts Friday night!!) and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Yeah, Justin is going to give Brian's paitents a test. Aww I hope you are enjoying yourself. Merry Christmas to you too and Have a great new year.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2008 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 12
I smile everytime i see that you posted a new chapter, coz i really like the story! Love it when either of them got jealous!!! Brian and Justin loves each other much.. More to come and thanks
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
That means the world to me. Yeah Jealous Brian is awesome and so beyond cocky which was fun to write.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2008 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 12
great update. Justin should spend more time with Brian....so emmett and ben broke up because emmett got pregnant from brandon...than ben got together with micheal... what´s with ted... where is he now... a little bit confusing... am I missing something? :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Nice thoughts honestly but there is so much more to the story. It will slowly show what happens I promise. =)
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 12
So, Brandon and Em have a baby together and the baby is three? How old is Milo, I thought he was a little older? Wow, Dawson's Creek had nothing on these guys when they were teens! Glad to see an update.
Author's Response: Yeah they do.
MIlo is 4 almost 5. LOL I know the drama is getting there but honestly it was planned all along.
More next week.
Reviewer: Carlina (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2008 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
This story is getting really good. First I can't wait to see Brian and Justin get back together and secondly, to see what really happened with the whole Ben/Em/Michael senerio. I thought maybe Ben got Em pregnat, but you said in a review comment that Em didn't have a baby by Ben. So I can't wait to see what actually happened. Keep up the great work. Hugs, Carlina
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Brian and Justin will be slowly working things out together and as for the whole Ben/Michael/Emmett triangle well there is lots of secrets with that. You will find out more next weeks chater.
I am really glad you like it.
Hugs,
Keighley
Reviewer: trenice (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2008 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 11
I am so confused. What is going on?
Author's Response: It will become much clearier as the weeks progress.
Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 11
Hi I just started to read this and I love it can't wait for more .... Em and Ben had a baby right but Ben never knew ..I like Michael but I would rather have Ben & Em .. I hope Brian can it together and be a family again. Later
Author's Response: Hey Kaylin,
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. Actually, no Ben/Em difinatly did not have a baby. It will be revlievd next week for sure on what is going on but there are still a ton of secrets.
Thank you again.
Later.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2008 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 11
great update... but how could you stop there???? you are killing me here :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I promise next week you will know about what Ted saw.
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2008 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 11
Loved it. Brian going to see Justin and telling him he will win him back and Justin blushing was so sweet :) you can feel the love between them.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2008 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 11
Thanks for the update... Its really getting interesting and unvailing more "problems" of the "family".... More to come, please...
Author's Response: More next week.
Yeah, it going to be a lot of fun. :)
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 11
Ok, so this answered one question, but now I have a million more! What in the world happened with Em, Michael, Ben and Brandon!?
Author's Response: I know the questions are building but I do promise more answers as the weeks progress.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2008 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 11
please u r killing me please i want to knoooooooooo update ASAP
Author's Response: haha much more answers next week.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 10
So, Justin became pregnant with Milo during senior year of high school! And what in the world is up with Ben and Michael and Em and Brandon!! I'm glad Brian and Justin admitted they still loved each other, which I didn't doubt. I just hope that they will be able to work things out.
Author's Response: Tonights chapter will have more answers for you.
But yeah, that's when Justin became pregnant. But like I said much more for tonight.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 9
I'm glad Brian and Justin confronted Ben on being a hypocrit! So Ben eventually cheated on Em with Michael and then there's more to that whole story. Wow!
Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2008 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 10
I love the story so far and can't wait for the next update! **As a side note I think there are a few times at the end of the chapter when instead of Brandon, Brian's name found his way into the sentences. Just thought I'd give you a heads up.**
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
I did go back and reread it and I didn't see the issues but I'll double check, I reread these chapters so many times I can miss simple mistakes.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2008 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ben and Michael should fix whatever they cause to the family.... Brian and justin are still so much in love with each other but justin feels that he has to "teach" Brian. Thanks and more to come, please. Can't get enough of this story.,,,,,,
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Everyone has the issuses and secrets which will be shown very soon.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2008 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 9
great update :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much. =)
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2008 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 9
Thanks for the update and more please...
Author's Response: More next week. Thank you so much for reading.
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2008 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 8
Tears, tears,,,, My heart goes to Milo, he'll help his parents to get back together!! Thanks and more please
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Milo will be okay his parents will make sure of it. As for them getting back together not for a while.
more next wednesday.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 8
Ben and Emmett! Wow, when did that happen? Wasn't Em pissed at him for making Brian break up with Justin? Hmm... Brian, Justin and Milo are so heartbroken, I hope this family will be able to get back together.
Author's Response: Hey Kat,
Yeah Ben and Emmett, he was pissed but it changed as you can see. You will defintatly see more of them in the future trust me. They aren't just something to pass by they are very much a part of the big issuses.
Yeah, I know they are all broken but there are some happy times soon for Milo with both his dad's.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 7
So sad! They obviously love each other very much. Glad Brian is gonna get a chance to spend time with Milo.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
They do love each other very much but forces are keeping them apart when they are younger and when they are older its about discovering yourself and if love can fix everything. No matter the outcome they will always love each other. Milo/Brian will be shown next week.
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 7
if justin realises who brian is referring to ben is about to get his butt kicked lol I am so glad brian will be spending the day with milo, it will help him become strong to fight for justin to come back
Author's Response: Justin does find out about Ben's request.
Yeah the Milo and Brian part is really amazing and sweet. I cried when I wrote. Yeah it does put some faith in the back of him.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 7
thank you for the update and please more... Love this beautiful story, everytime i read this, i feel the pain, longing of Brian and justin for each other...
Author's Response: More next week.
Thank you so much. I know Brian and Justin are in pain but it will get better at least in one of the parts soon.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
this is saddening keighley, please fix it.
Author's Response: I know it is but there are some brighter parts next week.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 6
So, I'm guessing that Brian played a sport before his accident. Wonder what happened to put him in such a foul mood that he would throw a bottle at Justin. I'm glad Em confronted Ben about the ultimatium he gave Brian. I know he's afraid his brother will hurt Justin, but its not right to force them to break up. Seeing Milo will do Justin a world of good now. And I can just see Em and their other friends doing whatever it takes to get Brian, Justin and Milo back together.
Author's Response: Yeah, Brian was a soccar player he is was in one of the greats. I do explan it more in future chapters. Yeah, Em is pretty bad ass right now in 2003 and Ben was protecting him but don't worry things will work out. Milo is the ray in their lives right now and the friends willl do what they can but it really depends on Justin and Brian. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2008 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 6
Crying.....tears..... Sad but love it!! Hope Justin will give another chance to Brian!!! Again, hoping that Em will help Brian understands that he has to get through with his self-pity and bring back his Sunshine and milo... Thanks and more update please.
Author's Response: Aww I am so sorry I made you cry, I cried I wrote this. It's a process of growth for them right now. Em is definatly going to help along with some other friends. You are very welcome thank you so much for reading and commenting. :)
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 5
Glad Justin finally went to see Milo. Can't believe Ben wants Brian to break up with Justin. Why is he so hell bent on them not being together?
Author's Response: Yeah, Emotional reunion will take place next week. He honestly thinks Brian is using Justin but in the aspect he thinks he is protecting Justin in some strange way. So it will be the vote of his choice next week. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2008 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 5
Thanks and more update please. That's right, life is full of problems, BUT i hope in the end Justin and Brian will be together again coz they love each other so much.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Definatly more drama next week. I do have the ending being worked slowly when it will happen or how that I do not know as of right now. I do believe they belong together.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 4
I hope Em talks some sense into Brian, he can't continue like this. Its obviously hurting him to be away from his family. And Justin is just shattered, not to mention how Milo is dealing with this. Please let Brian come out of this and get his family back! Very nice dedication to our Gale! I've been thinking of him all day! Get well soon Gale!
Author's Response: Em does in a way but there are more people there that will slap him upside the head in a away. It is killing them both but it will be better for them in the long run. Very true but Justin will show some strenght in the next chapter if not for him but only for Milo. Thank you so much. Trust Me I will have been thinking and wishing all day.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
poor justin. please fix them.... they are both hurting :-)) rose
Author's Response: Hey Rose, I know they a both hurting and it actually brought me to tears with the chapter when I wrote it. It will take time and they have to both go through some stuff. :)
Reviewer: Laura (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2008 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 3
Please please please tell me they will be back together next chapter, or chapter 5 at the latest, Brian is acting like a jerk but if Justin isnt there to help him through who will, I mean thats what husbands are for to be there through everything and support you. Im sure Brian would have stuck by Justin if it had been him that was hurt. If you cant rely on your husband then what sort of marriage do you have
Author's Response: Yeah umm..no but there is a purpose to why they aren't but honestly they will have interaction together in a few chapters. Brian is living in his own isolation and there is no way for Justin to get he has to be strong for their son and the fact of the matter Brian is showing him that he doesn't want him around. Brian would have but he also like Justin's has a point where it gets to be to much and that is where they are both at. There are some major characters coming back and yes they wont be together but they do love each other and that hasn't changed. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Naomi (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2008 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 3
Its hard for Jus and he does have Milo to look after but hes married to Brian in sickness in health, in good times and bad so he needs to get back inside even if its to get all the alcohol out of the house and kick Brians butt everyday, hes his husband and its not like Brian is cheating on him or has done something unforgivaeable, hes just going through a really hard time right now and maybe he needs a therapist but he also needs his husband. He needs help and Ben seems like a good person to help them both and he could help out with Milo too. This is based on oth right so im wondering how closely it will be like will Ben be gay and who will be in the love triangle, like theres lucas brooke and peyton so Ben being based on Lucas will the love triangle be Emmett and Mikey, I love this. I loved the chapter with Brian giving Justin the bracelet, I loved that on oth too.
Author's Response: It is and you are right he does have Milo to look after him but there is a point when you feel there is nothing else you can do and Justin was there for Brian but the point he has given him many chances it's been months of living in darkness. At some point Justin has to look at it is this a real healthly enviroment for their son and does he want to expose Milo to that side of Brian. Because at this age of Milo he idealizes both his fathers so he has to think about all this. Love and Marriage go through rough patches it's how you deal and handle so in away maybe this time a part might be good for them. ITs not followeed to the t of OTH the only thing that I am basing it is the four year Jump but I am doing it will you see but Yeah I get where that is shown. As for the triangle I can't say much but there is two different ones. Yeah, I had to put that in...it was to cute not too.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
I hope Brian comes to his senses before he loses Justin for good. I know he's upset and feeling sorry for himself, but continuing to take it out on his soul mate is not the answer.
Author's Response: Brian does have someone coming to kick his ass and wake him up but its all how he takes. I know he shouldn't Justin has to think about himself and Milo and yeah that may seem selfish but it's important. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm glad Brian finally talked to his family. Neither his son nor Justin should feel that he doesn't love them. I hope he does finally stop drinking so that they can begin to heal.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2008 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 3
thanks and more update please. I thought during chapter 2, they are ok, but this chapter is so heartbreaking... sob, sob, sob. I hope Brian will get back to his senses and Justin will give Brian another chance.... still sobbing,,,,,,,,
Author's Response: You are welcome and Thank you for reviewing and reading. Yeah, I know I'm sorry I am honestly trying to show the real relationship and love it's hard and there complications. Honestly in this effect you can't take for granted and at some point someone will reach their breaking point and I am going to show how each deal with it. Please don't cry. More next week.
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2008 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 3
yay another update, but it was so sad :( I hope you dont mean major players in their lives as in new lovers that would just be too awful, they are so cute together even when they are fighting. Like in oth I think counselling might be a good idea for them
Author's Response: As major players I meant friends no old lovers but Brian and Justin have their own issuses to deal with and the people around them will effect their relationship and if it does work or falls apart. Couselling might happen it depends on some things that do happen in the future chapters. I know it's sad but it's purposefull. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing I agree they are cute when they fight.
Reviewer: Tess (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2008 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 3
please tell me there wont be a justin/other or brian/other now? *cries*
Author's Response: I can safely say as of right now there is no one and honestly there probably wont be So, I hope that helps. Thank you for reading and commenting. Please don't cry.
Reviewer: Rach (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 3
I really like how we get to see them younger when they started their relationship and then we get to see them currently, I cant beliieve Justin said he wants a divorce, nooooooooooooooooooooooo I think if anything will make Brian wake up though that will do it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am enjoying writing it this way too. As for Justin saying he wants a divorce it is something he has to find out if he really wants and also it is something Brian has to deal with but the fact it is breaking them up is going to be bring up some major issuses and major players in their lives.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2008 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 2
Love how the characters talk to one another. Milo feels like a little Brian clone with a Justin personality. How about some history on Brian in the wheelchair.... obviously a drinking accident, hopefully Justin and Milo weren't with him. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Milo is very much like both his fathers and the shows more in the chapters. The history with Brian in the wheelchair isn't really explanned for a bit in the chapters I have. The accident was something that will also be dealt with futher along. Thank you again. -Keighley
Reviewer: sam (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm loving this story, I'm soo addicted already, update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. More on Wednesday
Reviewer: trenice (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2008 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
good story
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2008 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 2
great great story :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2008 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 2
I love highschool/college fics where the boys are younger and this is like the perfect fic for me, it flashes to when they were young and then in the present they are married with an adorable little boy, its perfect, cant wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting. More next wednesday
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2008 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter and iam crying..... Thanks and please update soon
Author's Response: aww i didn't mean to make you cry. Thank you so much. more next week
Reviewer: Carlina (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2008 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 2
I really loved this chapter. Haley and Nathan are one of my all time favorite couples next to Brian and Justin of course. I can't say how much I really love this story so far and it's only in the second chapter. Keep up the great work, update soon. Hugs, Carlina
Author's Response: Carlina, Thank you so much for your kind words. I agree about Nathan and Haley completely love them and the only real reason I am watching OTH still can't help it. I can honestly say this has to one of my favorite stories I have ever written so far. I hope you like what I have in story for everyone. More next wednesday. hugs, Keighley
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is really good so far. Curious to know what happened to Brian, why he's in a wheelchair. Like that you made him and Ben brothers.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Brian's story will be explanned futhur in chapters. I am so glad you love them as Brothers it will be an exciting relationship.
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2008 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
ooooh!! very interesting! i can't wait to see where this goes, and how brian got into a wheelchair. good writing, original plot, i love it all! update soon pretty please! ps it took me at least 6 tries to get the security code so you better appreciate it! lol
Author's Response: LOL OH, I do tons believe me. Thank you so much I am glad you like the whole concept i can't take credit it all goes to Mark the creator of OTH for last years season. :) I hope you like next weeks part. :)
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2008 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great, intriguing chapter!!! Please update more. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I will have more next Wednesday.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow.... great story... great start.... :-)) rose
Author's Response: Hey Rose, Thank you so much. There will be more drama ahead for everyone. :)
Reviewer: Cass (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like this, I wonder what happened to Brian, I hope he will be ok, I think now that he knows Justin feels like he doesnt love him and Milo it will be a wake up call for Brian, Justin and Brian were so cute talking and going on their first date
Author's Response: Thank you so much. What happened to Brian will slowly be shown later on in the story. It is a wake call in some senses but not so much in others. I am so glad you liked the first date more soon.
Reviewer: Carlina (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really love this story so far. I'm a huge OTH fan and seing your QAF take on it is great. Keep up the great work, hope you update soon. Hugs, Carlina
Author's Response: Hey Carlina, I am so glad you liked it and considering you are an OTH fan helps also as well. I just got the idea with a mix from the seasons and the jump just inspired me more. Tahnk you so much. More next week. Hugs, Keighley
Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Love it. Can't wait for update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. More next wednesday
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
keighley this is so intriging. i like the back and forth in their relationship. brian and ben are brothers? well that's different.
Author's Response: I am so glad you like the back and forth in the relationship I wanted to show how much they had to over come and even now nothing is perfect and true love requires work. I know the Ben and Brian is sorta of different but I thought it would be fun. :)
Reviewer: Trenice (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like it! I like it a lot I'll be waiting for the second chapter. (what's oth or whatever this is supposed to be based on)
Author's Response: OTH=One Tree Hill last season they jumped ahead four years instead of trying to do the college years. Thank you so much this story took a lot of hard work. :)
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
This chapter is very well written and the intrigue promising. I hope to read more soon. Lili
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I will have more next Wednesday. :)
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hello First, sorry for my bad english. I'm a french woman and a writer too. I began to read stories about B and J because a friend told me reading is good to learn vocabulary and my searches brought me to this website. I hope I'll be able to explain my feelings about your story. This chapter is very
Author's Response: Hey, Thank you so much for reading and Reviewing. I appricate it immensely. Keighley
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