Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 06:06 PM · On: Epilogue: Two Years Later
Omg happy tears lots of them. I loved hearing about the two years that passed since Chris was locked up. I am glad he is getting the treatment he deserves in prison.
Brian is so romantic, doing that for Justin I could feel how happy he was when Brian dropped to one knee and everything that went with it. I don’t want this story to end. They need to start a family now. Please write more of this incredible story xxx
Author's Response: I really enjoyed having Hobbs pay for what he did in a much more deserved way than on the show. That slap on the wrist he got on the series was just so galling.
I love the fact that you would want this story to continue, but I have so many stories on my plate right now that I can't add a sequel to this for now. Who knows what the future will hold though. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for all your support for my stories, and I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this one so much, Vicki. Warmest hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 05:42 PM · On: Justice Finally Served
That steak out had to have been nerve wracking for them, not knowing what was next and when it was going to happen. Both Hobbs were idiots that’s for sure. Chris even more so for running like he did. Did he think he could actually get away from Brian. I’m so glad Brian got to stick a bullet in him. That brought a smile to my face big time lol.
Exciting chapter x
Author's Response: It was time for Hobbs, and even his father, to face the music. Evil should never win out in the end. I do think that Brian had a moment of satisfaction stopping Chris the way he did once and for all. Now it's time for Brian to get back to Justin and let him know that he'll not need to watch his back any longer. Life is looking much brighter for the couple. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 05:27 PM · On: Target Found
Father and son should be in jail together they are both just as evil. I feel for mrs Hobbs she should be with a better person.
Justins send off for Brian was perfect, I could feel the pride Justin feels for him it makes me smile as that kind of pride is rare these days so seeing it shine like this is amazing.
Yup Chris you are drowning, you are drowning in your lies, your crime and your soul getting torn away by the devil himself.
Fantastic work x
Author's Response: It's unfortunate that Mrs. Hobbs is too weak to stand up to either her son or husband. But maybe she won't have to deal with either in the future. Time will tell. Justin is very proud of his man and loves to show it. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 04:48 PM · On: Making Deals
It’s so good Justin took Brian aside and spoke with him. Fingers crossed it helped because Brian doesn’t need to take that blame on like he did. The only to blame is Chis . Chris is getting even more shaky it’s great the little shit.
Terrific work x
Author's Response: The one thing that Brian doesn't need is to feel responsible for what happened to Justin. Justin's job is to make him see that. Hobbs is finding that being on the run is not an easy task. Too bad for him. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 04:39 PM · On: Stresses
I’m enjoying Chris scared that weezle is horrid he deserves the fear of devil against him. Justin’s conversation with Debbie was needed to help him with Brian. I’d be worried just like he is. It’s understandable why Brian is acting how he is to be honest I would be the very same way. I hope Justin can ease his fears so Brian can relax a little bit at least x
Fab work x
Author's Response: The thought of something worse happening to Justin is almost too much for Brian to bear. But together they will get through this scary time. I love adding Debbie's wisdom into my stories. As for Hobbs, he is feeling the heat of the law on his neck, that's for sure. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 04:25 PM · On: Declarations and Tightening Nooses
I’m glad Chis is scared and I can’t wait to see how scared he is if he goes to prison. He deserves the worst one there is.
Brjan is so cute letting Justin know how much he loves him and making sure it sinks in.
Carls phone call I’m sure helped letting them know they have a lead of sorts. Chris’s teams mates will crumble and fall like a deck of cards soon.
Excellent chapter x
Author's Response: Hobbs is just beginning to feel the fear in an overwhelming way. And it will only get worse as time goes on. I'm glad you enjoyed the way Brian showed how much he has come to love Justin. Thank you to Hobbs for opening Brian up like that, although I doubt he would appreciate what he did. LOL! Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 03:59 PM · On: A Name to Match the Face
Carl really is a fantastic partner to Brian and helping catch this creep is just as important to him as it is to Brian. I’ve no doubts that he will do everything he can to catch him. I’m so happy Brian was there to show Justin who they caught on cctv and the sketch done thanks to the witnesses. That fear and anger that Justin felt was so strong. You did a brilliant job of describing it.
Thrillibg Chapter x
Author's Response: I agree that Carl is exactly the kind of partner that any cop would want on their side. He is perfect for Brian. At least now they know who the enemy really is, Hobbs days are probably numbered now. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 03:33 PM · On: The Aftermath
Sweet kisses and lovely nurses giving advice was wonderful. I loved the conversation between Justin and Brian plus the playful banter that lightened the moment it was definitely needed to ease Brian’s fears. They need each other so much. Chris is so stupid, does he realize he would be spotted on camera not entering the airport at all and the taxi man might have cameras in the cabin of his car. I hope he is caught and thrown in jail.
Brilliant work x
Author's Response: It takes an almost tragedy like this to bring out all the love that Brian has for Justin. Together, they can get through anything. As for Hobbs, he obviously didn't plan on making so many mistakes, but now he is a man on the run. The future doesn't look so bright for him, does it? Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 11:39 AM · On: Rushing to Justin's Side
Gosh the pain and anguish that jumped off the page ran right through me. I could feel every moment of it. I wanted to hold Jennifer and Brian so tightly. I hope they catch Hobbs and give him the death penalty of sorts and his gang 🤬.
Gripping chapter x
Author's Response: It is such a great compliment for me if you could feel the pain that both Brian and Jennifer are experiencing, Vicki. Thank you for telling me. As for Hobbs, he knows he really screwed up badly and will now have to run from what he has done. He has not only messed up Justin's life, but his own too. But his punishment is still in the future. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 09:24 AM · On: A Wicked Plan Set in Motion
OMg noooooo poor Justin he better be alright or I will jump into the story and bust Chris and leave him to rot because I wouldn’t do it the rat to feed them at evil creep. My heart broke for Jennifer and Brian getting that phone call the worst kind in the world that’s for sure. Plus for that poor lady and her son walking in in that moment it’s something I’m sure they will never get over but I’m sure they have saved his life.
Incredible chapter x
Author's Response: This was a very hard chapter to write because I hate hurting either of our boys, but it had to be done. Hobbs almost got his way, but thankfully he (like so many evil doers) didn't count on his plans going awry. That poor mother and son were certainly traumatized, but in the end they'll know that they were responsible for saving someone's life. Hobbs would most definitely continue to beat Justin over and over again if she hadn't been there. My heart went out to Brian and Jennifer. They will both feel guilty for what happened to Justin, but the only one responsible is that monster, Hobbs. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 07:51 AM · On: Time Running Out
Justin you know you are not meant to go anywhere alone why are you doing this. What will Chis do now he has you where he can actually get to you. I’m on edge and shaking as to what might happen.
Thrilling chapter x
Author's Response: In this case, it is unfortunate that Justin is an independent thinking young man who really has no fear. That won't bode well for him very soon. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2019 07:13 AM · On: Happy Days and Evil Plans
Chris is pure evil and he will take down his team mates with him who are just as evil of course even if they just followed him afraid to go against him. I have a feeling he might use Micheals jealousy to lure Justin away to hurt him. I’m really nervous about this. I’m so happy that Brian asked him to move in permanently he is so in love and he deserves this love 💕
Brilliant work x
Author's Response: Unfortunately, Hobbs does have support with his vendetta against Justin, but then again there is no honor among the wicked. We'll have to see how this plays out. Don't worry about Michael. He plays no part in what will happen. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 08:06 PM · On: The Fire of Love, The Ice of Hate
Chris is one evil SOB isn’t he. I hope his gang see sense and dob him in before it’s to late and someone dies. Chris better not hurt our boys I swear I’ll jump into the story and mess him up.
I love that Brian has fallen in love he knows he had and the way they treat each other is how everyone in love should be treated.
Thank you for this beautiful moments between our boys x
Author's Response: Chris is certainly a danger to our boys, but the question is when and where will he strike and will he have any help. I'm so glad you enjoyed our lovers getting closer and closer, which was inevitable. They are much stronger together than apart. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 05:15 PM · On: Domestic Pleasures
Justin, Justin, Justin you were told not to leave the loft young man. However I’m sure Brian will love what you have made him. What will they do with the food Brian brought home I hope it can be reheated lol. I felt for Brian interviewing the boys if he only knew it was Chris and he was tight there.
Thrilling chapter x
Author's Response: I thought it was time for a little pleasure to go with all the pain I've dished out lately. Of course, there is still that lingering shadow of threat hiding in plain sight. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 04:36 PM · On: Passing on the News and Making Plans for Safety
I bet that Jennifer is very thankful that Brian is going to look after Justin while they try and get this case solved. The details Brian had to share with them must have been so scary for him to pass on. I feel so nervous not just for Justin but for Brian as well. I hope that Hobbs gets what’s coming to him. He is evil.
Brilliant work x
Author's Response: Sooner or later, all evil folks have to pay for their sins in my stories. But of course, that is yet to be seen how and when it will happen for Hobbs. In the meantime, Brian is showing Justin and his mom how very important the young man is to him. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 04:01 PM · On: A Disturbing Discovery
I can feel Brian’s nerves so strongly I can’t blame him I would be as well. He knows he will have to tell Carl that’s for sure. I feel for Billy’s family so much it must be so scary to hear your son was badly hurt.
Loving this story x
Author's Response: Brian is an honorable man, so he won't keep his secret from Carl... not when it matters. I hated hurting young Billy like that, but it was important to show how the threat to Justin is made clear to Brian, and also to make it clear just how far Hobbs will go with his hatred. Again, I am so grateful for all your comments, Vicki. Thank you very much. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 03:42 PM · On: Evil Deeds in the Park
Oh my Lordy I have cold chills running through me reading this chapter. Chris really gave Billy a very bad beating. I’m so scared for him, I pray he will be ok. I do hope that Brian knows that Justin wasn’t the one to send that message.
Fantastic wirk x
Author's Response: There is no way that Brian will believe that Justin had anything to do with setting Billy up for a beating. He knows his young lover better than that. But he does instinctively feel that there is some kind of connection between that message and what has happened to the unfortunate young Billy. What bothers Brian is that it hits too close to home. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 02:11 PM · On: Prom Night: Part Three
My phone nearly exploded with how hot this chapter was. I love the trust Brian have to Justin that was simply incredible. The gift he gave Justin touched me so much, that was like a wedding gift to the person you are marrying so beautiful. Omg nooooooo Poor Billy 🥺🥺🥺😱😱😱😱
im so scared now. Fantastic work x
Author's Response: It was a little mean of me to give my readers such exciting love between our beloved Brian and Justin, but then throw in such twisted hate that involves another innocent young man. Unfortunately, you have good reason to be worried about Billy. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 01:28 PM · On: Prom Night: Part Two:
Even more fun on his Prom night with the perfect person as well. Talk about hotness so hot even the devil would complain. I’m very worried about Hobbs what the heck is he going to do.
Im seriously on the edge of my seat biting my lip reading this incredible story.
Author's Response: I thought it was time to up the heat level between our boys. I'm glad to know that you felt the heat too. LOL! And yes, Hobbs is going to be an issue going forward. Some evil just can't be ignored. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 12:16 PM · On: Prom Night: Part One
Awe I could picture Justin all dressed up and smiling widely. I could feel her love shine out of my phone. I’m so happy he had an amazing prom and took the opportunity to dance with the boy at school. Then Brian and that kiss melted me so much. However now I’m terrified about Hobbs following them. What will he do 🥺🥺
wonderful wirk x
Author's Response: This prom night is going to be of the utmost importance for Justin in more ways than one. That's why it is extended over 3 chapters. The good thing is that Justin no longer cares what anyone else thinks of who he is. It might set him up for danger in the future, but he has the courage, in part thanks to Brian, to face whatever comes his way. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 11:35 AM · On: The Big Question
Justin was so brave wasn’t he asking Brian to his prom but I do agree with what Brian said I think I would have felt nervous as well in case it caused trouble. However I would love to see them go together and to see them smile as they dance just like the other couples are on the dance floor.
Fantastic work x
Author's Response: Brian's only goal with Justin is to keep him safe while he learns more and more about being a gay man in this world. And Brian loves nothing more than being the teacher. Don't worry, because they will have many chances to show the world what is happening between them as time goes on. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 08:57 AM · On: Friends With Benefits
Lol I love Brian keeping ahold of Justin’s hand and Mickey's reaction to it. I can hear his whine from here. I’m glad the others see how different Brian is treating him and how much they like it. Oh jeez Ethan, that bugger better stay away and not come back near Justin again I cannot stand him. I think that Brian is smitten with Justin he is well and truly gotten by him.
Cannot wait for more more of this amazing story x
Author's Response: Brian isn't even fully aware of just how important Justin has become to him, but he is starting to get the picture and doesn't mind showing others how he feels I am naughty to throw in Ethan again in this story. Nothing like a little threat to make Brian open his eyes to his true feelings. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2019 08:25 AM · On: Just Friends Going Out for Fun
Good on the coach I’m sure he was telling Justin more with the words he used and I felt really sad for him. Please help him find his happy he needs to be free to be who he is. I can feel Brian’s and Carl’s frustration at it getting any leads on who is doing the bashing’s it’s scary because who knows who is next. I have a bad feeling it could be someone we love. I understand Jennifer’s concerns about who Justin is seeing but I’m sure once she sees how well Brian is treating him she will change her mind and relax.
Love this xx
Author's Response: Justin was very lucky to have a man like the coach to step in and save him from making a big mistake that could affect his future in a negative way. As for Brian and Carl, they have good reason to be concerned about the unknown culprits who are out on the streets bashing the innocent. And give Jennifer a little more time, because she loves Justin and only wants what is best for her son. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:58 PM · On: The Catalyst to an Outing
Enough canon to be real but still your universe here. Very good story.
Author's Response: I can't tell you how pleased I am tht you are enjoying my story. I always tend to throw in a lot of canon to my characters even when they live in a completely different universe such as on the Moon. LOL! Why mess with such terrific characters...too much. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2009 06:47 PM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part Two:
Hi Grammy (this is what I call both my grandmothers as well. I've never seen anyone else use it) sorry got distracted. I was finally able to read this and I really like what you have so far. Brian and Justin are wonderful matches. I can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like this story Jackie. I just can't help it...no matter what the setting I just can't picture those two not becoming one in body, mind, and spirit. LOL! I hope you will continue to enjoy where the story leads. I love the name Grammy. My Mother was Nana to my Daughter and my Grandmothers were Grandma and Granny. I wanted something different so I started calling myself Grammy from the day Marika and Amy were born. Luckily they took to the name. Now even my Daughter calls me that. It is the one name I am most proud of. Thank you for letting me know that someone dear to you is also called Grammy. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 05:25 PM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part Two:
Yeahy lovely naughtyness! Brian and Justin are so lovely together. It so obvious that Justin is already a little bit in love with Brian, it can only grow. And Brian, well he's loving having Justin there. Hopefully he won't completely fight it when he realises how much he cares. Now after such a lovely chapter I'm guessing something bad's gonna happen! Oh no, I can't look :)
Author's Response: Don't panic yet Welcome-earthling. I can't deny that some drama is coming up but I don't think our boys should have their discovery of each other interrupted quite yet. There is so much more for them to learn about each other. Thank you so much for your comments and I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the naughtyness. More to come soon. Huge, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 01:13 AM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part Two:
I knew their first night would be great! I love Gentle/Loving Brian. Glad to hear that you are still healing, take care of yourself!
Author's Response: Isn't our man amazing? If you think about it, he was always careful with Justin, especially in the beginning. No wonder the young man fell in love so fast. Who wouldn't? LOL! Thanks for your good wishes for me too Kat. I very much appreciate them. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2009 11:56 PM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part Two:
why do I get the feeling that something will happen in the morning?? oh please, not mickey or another murder..... I just had to read the last 3 chapters. they are soooo great. How are you grammy??
Author's Response: Thank you so much for asking about me Rose. Unfortunately I heal very slowly thanks to my diabetes but my leg is half way to being completely healed now. What has made all the difference for me is that a dear friend sent me her old lap top (which works perfectly) when she bought a new one. Thanks to the lap top I can stay on the couch as my doctor ordered with my leg elevated easily and spend much longer periods of time online. I only got it this last weekend and I've already been able to accomplish more in 4 days than I did all month before this. You can imagine how grateful I am. I hope to get out much more work on my stories now. Don't worry about Brian and Justin. They are in the honeymoon stage of their relatiionship and I wouldn't dream of messing with that. LOL! I can't promise that nothing bad is on the horizon but not for awhile. Keep an eye out. More good times to come for the Detective and his Runaway. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:54 PM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part Two:
another hot chapter grammy. i love brian when he's loving and tender, justin benefits from it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words Sherrie. Both Brian and Justin benefit when Brian feels a connection to someone and he most definitley LIKES young Justin. Only time will tell how much deeper that connection will become. It will an interesting journey getting to that place where all is revealed to the Detective. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:29 PM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part Two:
another wonderful chapter. I am hopeing the story teller will be updated soon :)
Author's Response: Hi Sara. Thanks for your kind words. Do not hope too much longer for a Story Teller update. It is in the works right now. I took a break from my usual pattern of changing up my story writing and concentrated on this one story since my online time was so severly limited and I thought it would be ages before I could show the entire birthday night for Justin. I wanted to reward Lori for her kindness to me in giving me her old lap top so I could stay online for much longer periods of time by continuing with this special night. Now I'll go back to rotating the stories. The Story Teller update is next. Thank you so much for your patience and hopefully there will be no more long delays for a long time to come. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 11:46 PM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part One
Oh Grammy, another chapter so quickly!! You spoil us :) And the beginnings of some smut as well, you really do spoil us!
Author's Response: Thank you Welcome_earthling. My readers are the best in the world and deserve whatever I can give them. Keep an eye out cause this latest chapter was only Part One. Part Two is in the works and I hope to spoil you even more, just like Brian is doing for the birthday boy. Big hugs hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2009 11:31 PM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part One
My Dear Grammy, I´m sooo happy to see that your health is improving and that you´re able to post again. You know I´m a little behind in reading your stories so I didn´t read this chapter so far - but I will. As soon as I get the time. I just wanted to let you know that I´m here and happy to hear you´re doing better and that you have friends who help and support you. Big Hugs, Sunny
Author's Response: Well, my dear Sunny, I consider you one of those friends who helps and supports me the most. Your friendship has meant the world to me. I am truly grateful for it. I look forward to your comments once you've been able to get the time for reading. Btw, I love looking up at my cheerful clown every day. I have hung him on my front door so he can bring a smile to the faces of visitors and because I leave my front door open all day when it is light out and my couch is parallel to the door so I can stare right at my happy man while I sit on my couch. Thank you so much for him. He is wonderful and goes a long way to making me feel good. I will be sending you a long letter very soon so keep a watch for it. Much love always, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:49 AM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part One
garammy that was one hot shower and i don't mean waterwise. i like the relationship that justin has with jen, i hope it stays that way. glad to hear you're feeling better.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the waterworks Sherrie. It did get a little steamy in there, didn't it. LOL! You know how much I respect Jenn so you won't have to worry about our Mom. She will continue to be her usual supportive loving self. I can promise you that. Thank you for your comments and your good wishes for me. I truly appreciate them. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:27 AM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part One
Awesome!! Can't wait for the next chapter =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much Kat. This one is only the beginning of a long 'hard' night for our boys. The next chapter is coming soon. Hope you'll join me then. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2009 08:55 PM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part One
Wonderful chapter, it was beautifully written. I hope you feel better really soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments Sara. With the inspiration of an eager young Justin and a caring Brian, I had very little trouble picturing such a night. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The rest of the night is coming up next. And thanks for your well wishes. I'm feeling much better and my leg is about half healed now. Still has me slowed down a bit but hopefully not for much longer. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2009 09:59 AM · On: The Best Birthday Night Ever: Part One
Hi, Gramms. I didn't know that you were ill? What happened to your legs? I was just wondering why you have not updated and bcoz' i can hardly post i also lost track(?). Glad to read that you're feeling better so don't force yourself, rest more and when your totally alright, you can again start updating all your stories. I have to re-read Officer Kinney to refresh my mind. Take care.........
Author's Response: Hi Thess. Believe me, only poor health would keep me from updating my stories. I'm a diabetic and have had problems with my left leg for many years now. In mid December I developed an infection on the back of that leg and instead of healing up it got progressively worse until it covered the entire leg from calf to heel. I came very close to losing my leg this time. The pain was so bad that I could not sit at my computer for any length of time. The doctor ordered me to lie down most of the day and keep the leg elevated. It finally started to heal but I'm only about half way there. I can now sit at the computer for half hour periods during the day so I've finally gotten some writing done but I still have a ways to go before the healing is complete. I can't do any writing by long hand because of the arthritis in my hands. Typing is so much easier. Ahhh, the joys of getting older. LOL! I hope you enjoyed refreshing your mind with the story and the last couple of chapters in particular. More to come as quickly as I'm able. Thank you so much for your concern. I appreciate it so much. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Happy Birthday, Justin
Yeahy, you're back!!! <<runs around, does a happy dance then waves hands in the air>> Glad you're feeling a bit better Grammy :) It's good to see the story moving into the next section
Author's Response: I may not have the strength yet to do a happy dance but believe me I'm feeling it inside Welcome_earthling. I'm getting back to myself a little bit more each day and the most important thing is to keep writing, at least to me. I will have the next chapter of this story ready in a matter of days so keep an eye out. We all want to know just how Brian goes about making this a birthday Justin will never forget. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Happy Birthday, Justin
Grammy! God, have I missed you or what. I'm so sorry to hear that you have been ill, I hope that you are getting much better. And that you will be fully well soon. On the bright side though, this chapter was amazing, and I have been waiting for their reunion. This was fantastic and it is one of my fave fics at the moment, as you probably know already. :D Just take your time and try to get well, so you can give us more of your wonderful writing. Sending lots of positive energy, hugs and kisses. Love, Emma
Author's Response: My dear Emma, you have made this old girl smile from ear to ear. I missed all of you so much. I am getting better every day. The pain in my leg is slowly but surely subsiding enough for me to sit at the computer a little longer each day. This has enabled me to work on the next chapter of this story at a slow but constant pace. I have the next chapter within paragraphs of being complete and ready for beta. I hope you will enjoy it too. I couldn't make ya'll wait too long for Brian to give Justin his birthday gift. Thank you so much for the positive energy. I believe it works magic in healing the body and spirit. I welcome it gratefully. Keep an eye out for Chapter Nine. Much love and hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Happy Birthday, Justin
Hi Grammy I didn't know that you had health problem so now I hope you're going to be all right! :-) ♥ Now. Yes! Finally Justin got Brian! What a wonderful birthday gift! ;-P ciao
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words Kika. One of the prices we pay as we get older are health problems, especially when one is a diabetic. I have no intention of letting it stop me from writing completely even if sometimes it does slows me down. Thank you for your patience and for coming back to my story even after such a long wait. I'm working on the rest of Justin's birthday night right now. I think my readers deserve to know just what kind of gift Brian is going to give our handsome young man, don't you? I'll have it posted as soon as I'm able, I promise. Big huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Happy Birthday, Justin
Hi Grammy! Good to see you and glad to see you are feeling better. This was a great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Kat. Believe me, it is more than good to be back again. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter and I will do my very best to get the next one out as quickly as my poor old body will allow. LOL! Sucks big time to have a healthy young mind trapped inside a worn out old body. Ahhh, but at least I'm still kicking...just not so high anymore. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Happy Birthday, Justin
I'm glad that you managed to finish this chapter. Loved it. As I said to you the other night, please take care of yourself. Don't push yourself too hard, it's better to wait for the story than to not have you around to write it. Hugs Always, Lorie
Author's Response: Lorie, you are absolutely wonderful and I thank you so much for your words. I can promise you that I am doing my best to obey my doctor because nothing means more to me than getting back on my feet...or rather back into my chair at my keyboard so that I can write more stories. I admit I pushed it once but I learned my lesson. I have improved enough so that I can now spend about a half hour at a time several times a day at the computer so I'm hoping to get the next chapter of this story out in a reasonable time. I'm looking forward to Justin's special birthday gift too. LOL! Thank you again for your care and concern. I value it tremendously. Much love, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Happy Birthday, Justin
welcome back grammy, you were missed. this was just a great chapter. love how jennifer is so accepting of his lifestyle. she knows that it was either love him as he is or lose him. thankfully he met blake, it could have been worse. possesive!brian shows up. yay. i can't wait fot him "to get more than he ever dreamed of." he won't be missing much any longer.
Author's Response: Oh Sherrie, believe me I have missed you guys even more. I love writing so very much and being restricted from it for so long was killing me. I am still restricted on how much time I'm allowed online since I have to keep my leg elevated most of the time but I am getting better. Soon I hope to be back in good health again. I'm glad you liked my adding Blake to the story. I needed someone decent to introduce Justin to Babylon and he seemed the perfect choice to me. Now it is time for Brian to introduce him to so much more. I hope to have another chapter out in at least a week. Please join me then. It is going to be a hotttt night in Pittsburgh. Thanks for your wonderfully kind words. Much love, Grammy
Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Happy Birthday, Justin
As always your way with words is skillful and you leave me wanting more. It seems to me you must have as much fun writing your stories as we all have in reading them. I was sorry to read of your health issues and hope you have continued success towards good health. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: I can't thank you enough for your kindness and good wishes Suse. My diabetes makes healing a little more difficult but I'm getting there. I obey my doctor's orders even when I hate them. LOL! You are absolutely right in what you say about my loving to write. It brings me more joy than I ever thought possible. The reaction of my readers, such as yourself, just makes it all the more rewarding. Knowing that I'm entertaining others with my thoughts is the icing on the cake of life. Thank you again for reading my work. Much love and hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Happy Birthday, Justin
this was great, Im glad Justin and Brian got together. I really hope you feel better soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words Sara. My health is improving slowly but surely. Ahhh, the joys of getting older. LOL! I will post the continuation of Justin's Birthday night as soon as I possibly can. Hope you will join me then. Thanks for your patience. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: maddy_snape (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Happy Birthday, Justin
*Loved* this chapter! I'm so pleased to see them finally hook up. I'm really looking forward to what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much Maddy_snape. It is always wonderful to hear from someone new. It will take a little time because of my health but I will be working on the next chapter to this story at every chance I get and I hope you will enjoy it too. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Happy Birthday, Justin
It's only for one of your works of art that I am willing to deal with the security code thing here. Yummy Yummy Yummy is all I can think of right now. This could not have come at a more perfect time. Tomorrow is my birthday, and am going to claim this as my gift from you. I am all a tingle just dreaming of what is going to explode in Justin's world now...what a way to spend your birthday. I hope time stops and they spend eternity in that lip lock...I don't think I can even imagine the beauty of the first shower they'll share. Oh to be a bar of soap. I am so glad you were feeling well enough to post this gem for us. Lots of Hugs, Lori
Author's Response: Oh my dear dear Lori, you have no idea how important you have been to me in making me feel better. My leg is about 1/3 healed now with only a bunch of scar tissue there to remind me never to let it get so bad again. It took almost two weeks of tiny amounts of time online to get this chapter done but it felt so good to finally finish. I'm so happy to know you enjoyed it. You know how I have the habit of rotating my stories with each new posting, but just in honor of your birthday I am going to go straight to the next chapter of this story so that you can enjoy their first shower together. It will probably take a week to get it done but I'll post as quickly as I can. I promise you, it will be worth the wait. Much love to you, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 04:22 AM · On: Changes
LOVED Jen laying down the law to Craig! He is such a weasel of a "man" and she called him out on everything. Good for her! Brian finally got that promotion he wanted and he misses Justin =)
Author's Response: I love writing scenes for Jenn that give her the chance to tell Craig off. I'm glad you enjoyed it too. I'm sorry for the delay in getting the next chapters of my stories out but the holidays kicked my....well you can imagine. LOL! More to come very shortly. Thanks so much for the comments Kat. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: qafcrazy (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 12:37 AM · On: Changes
i need more, more ,more
Author's Response: More coming up very soon Laura, and thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 10:48 PM · On: Changes
Go Jennifer! Glad she took charge finially and got rid of the bully Craig :) And yeahy Brian is a Det. now. It's what he wanted. Doing a little happy dance cause I can't wait for Justins birthday and for him to go clubbing again. I like this chapter. I sorta feels like the end of the first Act. It's set everything up and wrapped up the beginning of the story. It now ready to move on to Act II.
Author's Response: Ahhh, how very perceptive of you my dear. We are most definitely headed into a whole new chapter of both Brian and Justin's life...one that will bring major changes to both men. I'm so glad you enjoyed Jennifer's emergence as a strong woman with a backbone. Don't mess with a loving mother's kids and threaten their futures. LOL! Stay tuned, cause there are about to be some fireworks coming up. You won't want to miss the show. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments Welcome_earthling. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2008 12:16 AM · On: Changes
great update..... I like jennifer very much in this story. very brave. poor brian for being so frustrated/confused.... :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting Rose. I always tend to make my Jennifers strong women and I couldn't stop now. She may not have come to Justin's rescue at first but once it became painfully obvious that the time was right, she pounced. Poor Brian indeed. He is well and truly hooked but just hasn't recognized it yet. Trust me...he will soon. LOL! Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 06:19 AM · On: Changes
good for jenn. i can see craig isn't really too upset about their sleeping arrangements. brian got his promotion and justin got his plans. i wonder if one of them is meeting a man "as good looking and desirable as Brian Kinney." under a lamppost. happy update.
Author's Response: Quote: 'I wonder if one of them is meeting a man "as good looking and desirable as Brian Kinney." under a lamppost.' Hmmmmm, could be!? LOL! Six and a half weeks our Justin will hit that magic 18th birthday. No telling what kind of mischief our young man will get into. Glad you enjoyed the chapter Sherrie. More to come very soon. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2008 09:44 PM · On: Three Days of Relief
Eeek! Their reactions to each other are so strong, I love how sweet Brian is in this, without being OOC. God, I only hope Craig isn't going to be a shit... or maybe he will be and Justin will run back to Brian's arms? :D Please? Haha Loved every word, this is one of my favourite fics at the moment. It's such an original storyline. Can't wait for more, Emma x
Author's Response: What a wonderful compliment you've given me Emma, and I truly appreciate it. I used to spend a lot of time picturing Brian as a police officer whenever I viewed that scene with him and the cop while Mikey was waiting for him to show up at the Comic Convention. I finally decided to make him one and of course he still needed a Justin of his own. LOL! I'm glad you like the concept. There will be more trouble to come for our young runaway, but take heart since Brian is on the job to protect and serve. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 04:51 AM · On: Three Days of Relief
Awwwwww, thats so cute :) Glad you've updated. Nice to see Brian is being a good boy and not making the moves but being there for Justin. I'm sure Justin will need him soon.
Author's Response: You are so right about Justin, Welcome_earthling, and the friendship that they've formed will be Justin's saving grace when the time comes. I'm so glad you enjoyed their interplay. More to come very soon. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 11:50 PM · On: Three Days of Relief
Great chapter! I love the foundation of friendship that has developed between Brian and Justin. It will only make their love stronger...when it happens =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments Kat. This time the story is most assuredly not about a randy young man looking for his first sexual experience. This Justin is in need of a friend more than a lover right now. The rest, as you can imagine, will come in its time. Soon their connection will change and sharpen, but not until the time is right. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: qafcrazy (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 10:19 PM · On: Three Days of Relief
more i need more
Author's Response: More is definitely on the way Qafcrazy (by the way, I love that name), so keep a watch for it. Thanks so much for commenting. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2008 09:43 PM · On: Three Days of Relief
I hope he does graduate okay. No prom problems, maybe he'll go to babylon instead of prom. How will our to men reunite? great chapter.
Author's Response: There are a lot of adventures during the next dozen weeks before graduation Alys, so keep an eye out for them. I can't say how they'll reunite but I can promise you that they will. Thank you so much for commenting. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Lena (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2008 09:33 PM · On: Three Days of Relief
This is a wonderful story! Looking forward to your next update
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting Lena. I'm very glad you are enjoying this story. I have the next chapter up and running right now. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 05:09 PM · On: Three Days of Relief
getting to know each other before sex? how novel. i don't think a bully can change that fast or for the good. how soon will justin be seeing officer kinney again? sooner than either thinks i'm guessing.
Author's Response: Police Officer Kinney is definitely a different kettle of fish than ad man Kinney. It isn't that he wouldn't like to give young Justin a tumble, it's that he has too much common sense to take the chance of ruining his future. In this case, they become friends first and then..... I suspect they will meet again before the school year is over. Stay tuned and thanks so much for commenting Sherrie. I very much appreciate it. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:10 PM · On: Going Out on a Limb
Om my dear Justin! Interesting wake up the next mornign for the two of them! I'm thinking about Craig now and I don't think that their 'relationship' has taken a good way. ciao
Author's Response: I think your thoughts are very perceptive Kika. There is definitely something unhealthy about the relationship Justin has with his father in this story. And the poor kid has had enough abuse from his dad too so things are about to change. Thanks so much for your comments. I appreciate them very much. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 06:33 AM · On: Going Out on a Limb
fantastic chapter. i liked justin's nerve when talking to craig. not stammering but getting his point across.
Author's Response: It is such a pleasure writing Justin as a young man with a strong backbone. He has had his fill of being pushed around and he has come out swinging. Even Brian will learn that he might have to duck. LOL! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story Sherrie. More to come very soon. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 06:31 AM · On: Going Out on a Limb
Ahhh, Brian is being a good boy! Great to see your Justin has the save guts he does in the series and stands up for himself
Author's Response: This is definitely not a wimpy Justin. He has no trouble challenging someone...even Brian. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments Welcome_Earthling. I appreciate it very much. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:30 PM · On: Going Out on a Limb
I am enjoying this story. It is starting to get very exciting. (Love Brian and Justin.) I follow your stories and enjoy all of them. You do am excellent job of writing wonderful stories.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Sunny. I am so happy to know that you are enjoying this story, which is definitely a change of pace from the usual Brian and Justin. I hope it will continue to entertain you in the future. There is much more for our intrepid lovers to go through in this one. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 03:14 AM · On: Going Out on a Limb
I love how these two are sizing each other up. Justin's a sharp little cookie and its great how he realized that Brian was on Liberty Avenue off duty.
Author's Response: The two men, one older and experienced...one young and a novice, are about to slowly learn a great deal about each other. I love your comments. Thank you so much Kat. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:28 AM · On: Going Out on a Limb
Eeek! This chapter was great and I was so excited to see an update. I love the instant attraction, the way Brian immediately made excuses as to why he could not have sex with Justin, as if it was the first thought in his head... he isn't going to get out of this one easily, is he?? :D And I'm assuming now that Justin will realise in the morning why Brian was on Lberty Ave. and will question him about that. THey won't be able to keep their hands off each other for long! Heehee. *evil laugh* Can't wait for more Grammy. Later, Emma xx
Author's Response: Hee hee! Brian isn't the only one smart enough to wonder why someone is hanging around on Liberty Avenue. But Brian does have to be careful. He already knows that this young runaway is unpredictable and he doesn't know how far he can trust him yet, so being a cop makes him very vulnerable. But at least it is slowly dawning on them that they may have more in common than one near arrest. Another chapter is in the works. Thanks so much for your comments Emma. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2008 09:08 AM · On: Surprise on Liberty Avenue
Hi Gramms, Thanks for the update. And the love story of Brian and Justin begins...............!!!
Author's Response: Now what makes you think they will fall in love Thess? Oh yeah, well duh!!!! As if anything else could happen with those two. LOL! Thanks for the comments. Greatly appreciated. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2008 07:40 PM · On: Surprise on Liberty Avenue
Oh Grammy, I loved this update. I can just imagine what will happen in the next chapter... I can't wait for an update, I always come searching for your newest chapters :D Later, Emma x
Author's Response: What a wonderful compliment Emma. Thank you sincerely. Poor Brian just wanted to do the right thing by a kid who reminded him of his own painful youth, but he may have taken on more than he ever counted on. Time will tell. The next chapter is in the works. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2008 02:10 PM · On: Surprise on Liberty Avenue
thank god they met each other...otherwise it could have ended bad for justin. now that he is in brians care he will be safe...:-)) rose
Author's Response: Ah, to be safe in Brian's care! But there is so much more than safety at stake for our young Justin and even more for the unsuspecting Cop. Stay tuned for further developments Rose, and thank you for your wonderful comments. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2008 07:10 PM · On: Surprise on Liberty Avenue
'What have I got myself into?' A lot of trouble! *smirks*
Author's Response: You've hit the nail on the head Kika. LOL! But then some trouble can be worth it in the end. Time will tell. Thanks for reviewing. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 05:49 PM · On: Surprise on Liberty Avenue
Yeahy they meet again :) Justin and Brian under the same roof, even just for a few days, should be interesting. And you even managed to fit in Brian rescuing Justin, goodie
Author's Response: Poor Brian. Now that he knows the kid he caught being so angry days before is gay and has problems with Dad, he just couldn't abandon him. But he has bit off a lot more than he bargained for when he came to the rescue this time. Keep an eye out for further developments, and thanks for the review. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2008 02:51 PM · On: Surprise on Liberty Avenue
yay a sleepover :)
Author's Response: Now Sara...there will be PJ's. LOL! Thanks for commenting my dear. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 01:42 PM · On: Surprise on Liberty Avenue
what did he get himself into is right. he just could of asked justin if he had any friends that he could stay with instead of himself. well there's one reason for michael to hate justin already. brian blew him off, for justin no less and he doesn't even really know him yet. hm, can't wait.
Author's Response: Hmmm, wonder why Brian didn't think of that possibility for Justin? Do you think he was blinded by bright blue eyes and soft blond hair? LOL! Of course it could be that he just wanted to keep an eye on the boy and make sure he didn't make a run for it, thus messing up his future. Poor Mikey is definitely not going to appreciate being forgotten for this kid. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments Sherrie. Another chapter is in the works. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 01:34 PM · On: Surprise on Liberty Avenue
Brian the hero, he really came through for Justin tonight in more ways than one. Glad he decided to let Justin go home with him, knowing that the outcome with Craig wouldn't be good.
Author's Response: Poor Brian is a reluctant hero but he just couldn't see a young gay boy being abused by his father. Too many painful memories attached to that. Time will tell if he did the right thing. Thanks for your comments Kat. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2008 01:35 AM · On: The Catalyst to an Outing
craig is such a prick.... god, how can people be so cruel.... don´t be so hart on justin...:-)) rose
Author's Response: There is no accounting for the bullies of this world Rose. It is just Justin's bad luck to have one for a father. But don't worry cause a true friend is waiting in the wings. Thanks so much for your comments. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 07:43 PM · On: Caught in the Act
FAO KAT! (and anyone else interested) The picture of Randy in the car is from 'Bang, Bang, you're dead' a 2002 film based on school shootings. Randy was great in it. Totally different role from Justin (and I couldn't get over the fact he had a bit of scruff on his chin :) ) A good film that I could only find in region 1 format.
Author's Response: Perfect timing Welcome_earthling, and thank you so much for your thoughtfulness. I had just asked Amy, my Granddaughter, this morning before she headed off for school if she could remember where the picture of Randy in the car came from. She jogged my memory by mentioning 'Bang Bang, You're Dead', which is a film that I loved. It is an upsetting story but, as I said in my review on Netflix, it should be seen by every middle school and high school student and their parents. It is far superior to the film 'Elephant' which they do show in schools and not just because Randy is in it (although that helps of course). His character is indeed different from Justin Taylor. That very last scene with him in the movie was so heartwrenching. Btw, I've tried to infuse a little of the rebelliousness he displayed in Bang Bang into this Justin for this story which is why the photo fit the banner so well. Thanks again for helping answer Kat's question. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:36 AM · On: The Catalyst to an Outing
Wow, Craig is that full of himself to think Justin admitted to being gay to irk him. Hmm, now is Justin gonna meet a certain someone on Liberty Avenue before he gets himself into more trouble?
Author's Response: Craig Taylor has more problems than one can count, and we haven't seen the end of them yet. As for Justin...well, who knows what he will find on his first visit to Liberty Avenue. Hopefully it will help him move in the right direction. Thanks once more for your wonderful comments Kat. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:14 AM · On: In Trouble Again
What a jerk Craig is! More worried about the car then his kid. I feel really bad for Justin.
Author's Response: You have more good reason to dilike Craig as the story progresses Kat, so keep an eye out for that man. Thanks again for commenting. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 03:53 AM · On: Caught in the Act
Oh, this is gonna be a good one! That banner is fab! Where is the pic of Randy in the car from?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments Kat. The banner was made by my Granddaughter. I'm not sure where she got the picture of Randy in the car but I know I've seen it before. I'll try to find out its source if I can and let you know. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:38 PM · On: The Catalyst to an Outing
Oh Boy! He's playing with the fire.
Author's Response: So true Kika, but this is one fire that I think our young Justin may welcome for all its warmth. We shall soon see. Thanks so much for your comments. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: laura (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:09 AM · On: The Catalyst to an Outing
hot need more asap.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting Laura. Another chapter is in the works and will be posted very soon. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:20 AM · On: The Catalyst to an Outing
he tells craig the truth and he doesn't believe him? he's only messing with craig's head. how much denial can a man have? i wonder if officer kinney is in his playground this night? i sure hope so for justin's sake.
Author's Response: Craig Taylor is not a man who gives up his fantasy of the perfect little family that worships at his feet very easily, but he is beginning to reap what he has sown all these years, and rightfully so. I loved how you put it with Officer Kinney. LOL! Come back next time to see if your wish comes true for our young Justin. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments Sherrie. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 05:42 AM · On: The Catalyst to an Outing
Ooooooooo <<jumping up and down>> Is this where Justin and Brian meet again. Do they meet in the club or does Brian save Justin from some sleezy man. Can't wait - might die - you must post another chapter - it's for my health - i'm fading - need more :)
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I cannot have you fading away. I would feel too guilty. I guess I will just have to hurry up and get another chapter out as soon as humanly possible. Hold on, help is coming. Btw, it will be interesting to see just who Justin will meet up with on this momentous night. LOL! Thanks so much for your comments. They are appreciated very much. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 07:17 AM · On: In Trouble Again
Ok number 1 - this chapter is too short! number 2 - the chapter is too short number 3 - see 1 and 2 :) Oh I can't wait for more!! It good to get the back story of the 2 characters before we go jumping straight into the full thing and it's hotting up now! Car theft, naughty boy. And also I learnt a new word today!! - lackadaisical - never seen that word before
Author's Response: What wonderful comments Welcome_earthling. Don't you just love that word. My old teacher, back in the 50's, used to accuse us kids of being too lackadaisical about our work in her classroom if we didn't really buckle down and work hard. I thought she made up the word till I checked the dictionary. LOL! I'm glad you are enjoying the slow way that things are moving between Brian and Justin. This time Brian finds the young man interesting, but only because he reminds Brian of himself...but that will not hold true forever, especially when he finds out why young Justin is having so much trouble at school. More to come very soon. Thanks for your review. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2008 09:49 PM · On: In Trouble Again
I like a little back-up-life in a story. I'm soooooo curious!!! Great second chapter! ciao
Author's Response: Thank you so much Kika. I always like to give a full rounded portrait of where my characters are coming from and why they do the things they do, so I'm thrilled when a reader enjoys the back story I include in a chapter. Hope you continue to enjoy this story. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 10:55 PM · On: In Trouble Again
Oh Grammy, I just found this fic today and I'm so happy I did. I can't wait for the sparks to fly between our two boys. This is a great storyline and I'm really excited to see what happens next. I wonder what happened to Justin, I hope it wasn't too bad! Can't wait for more, Emma x
Author's Response: I'm so glad you found this story Emma. It has been waiting in the wings for a long time now for me to tell. Just as Brian had his breaking point, so now has Justin. Brian will have to step in and see what he can do to help this kindred spirit. I've got the next chapter set up and ready to work so it won't be long. Thank you so much for commenting for me. Big big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 10:02 PM · On: In Trouble Again
great update...poor justin... :-)) rose
Author's Response: This is a Justin that definitely has 'issues' Rose, but we all know who can help to deal with 'issues', so don't despair because help is on its way. Thanks so much for commenting. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 10:30 AM · On: In Trouble Again
this is great grammy. brian's determination to get away from his father, and justin's to get away from his isn't really all that different. just justin is going about it the wrong way. i can't wait for brian to catch up with him. hope brian gets the promotion.
Author's Response: I definitely made Justin a much angrier young man this time than ever before. I had watched 'Rebel Without A Cause' with James Dean just before deciding to write this story and I'm afraid it influenced me. I just hope everyone will enjoy where I take our defiant young man. I can promise that the promotion figures importantly in the next chapter so please come back when I have it posted. Thank you so much for your comments Sherrie. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2008 09:25 AM · On: In Trouble Again
Craig is so awful, I cant wait until Justin and Brian meet again, update soon
Author's Response: I do have the tendency to make Craig a villain every time, don't I? LOL! Can't help it...I really detest the character. The next chapter will have more than one surprise including a guest appearance by a familiar character. Hope you will enjoy it. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sarah (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2008 11:25 PM · On: Caught in the Act
luved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for u to continue!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much, Sarah. I am very excited about this story and I have the next chapter all but ready for my beta friend. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Big big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 05:05 AM · On: Caught in the Act
Ooooooo!! So can't wait for Justin to runaway and find out how he and Brian meet up again :) I hope Brian is feeling gulity about leaving Justin there. And yes I keep picturing Brian with those bloody Avatar glass on from when he was tricking with that cop.
Author's Response: Brian hasn't quite reached the stage of being that concerned about Justin yet, but believe me...he will! I know what you mean about those glasses......HOT HOT HOT!!!! Can you imagine being frisked by a cop that looks like him? Mmmmm! LOL! Thanks so much for your comments Welcome_earthling. I really appreciate them. Hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 04:09 AM · On: Caught in the Act
Mhhhhhhhh a cop! I's sooooooo interest with this fics!!!! I do not have to imagine Brian in uniform...the trick/cop ep! LOLciaooo
Author's Response: You've caught my inspiration for this story Kika. I loved the sensual scene with Brian wearing the cop's cap and holding that nightstick and just knew I had to write a story with him as a real cop someday. That day has finally arrived. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story as it progresses. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Lionstar16 (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 02:45 AM · On: Caught in the Act
Your stories are never boring, you are always giving new situations in which Brian and Justin meet. Brian as a cop, I can see him wearing nothing but a police hat and his dark sunglasses *sigh*. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Lionstar. I do like variety in my B & J. LOL! I can promise you that there will be plenty of out of uniform moments for our couple sooner or later. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2008 05:17 PM · On: Caught in the Act
I like the banner, Justin looks hot. I feel bad for justin, hopefully Brian can help him, update soon
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comment on the banner Sara. I asked my Granddaughter to make the banner edgy and I simply love what she did with my suggestion. She truly captured the feel of where this story is going. I passed on your words to her this morning and she appreciates your comments too. There will be quite a bit of interaction for this couple very soon so stay tuned. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2008 04:39 PM · On: Caught in the Act
I like you story so far.... i can´t wait for their next meeting...:-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much for checking out the new story Rose. There are going to be several interesting meetings coming up so stay tuned. Big hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 12:29 PM · On: Caught in the Act
i like this. definitely different. i hope he doesn't get a disturbance call from the taylor home the next night he's working.
Author's Response: Thank you Sherrie. Yes, this one is going to be very different, and yet I promise you that you will recognize our dear Brian and Justin anyway. You know me. LOL! Btw, there will be more than a little disturbance but not all from that house, unfortunately. Keep an eye out for some dramatic happenings. Big hugs, Grammy
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