Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2022 11:56 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Heey Kim,

Last week I read this wonderful story again. Loved it in the past and still do.

Do you know what you wrote me back then in 2016? There is still a lot more that could be told, true; so I will probably revisit it again down the road at some point.

Only one chapter please, about a little brother or sister for Gus and Alex?

* hugs *

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2019 11:38 AM · On: The Wedding Present

great story. Loved it

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2019 01:31 AM · On: The Wedding Present

I am soo happy for Brian. It is strange for Mel and Linsey being nice

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2018 07:02 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

I feel sad when I read Fin said to tony about christmas while brian still a small kid. I wish things were different...

i love fin and tony so much.. maybe one day you will feel inspire to write a 'what if' story about them again and their kid Brian.

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 06:34 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Its going to be fun road trip with two blond and two brunett.

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2018 11:06 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Craig really is hate his son. What kind a father do that.

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2018 10:35 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Im so excited brian going to be fin campaign manager. But worry at the same time. I couldnt imagine what the press will write after they find out that news.

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2018 06:19 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Politic is a dirty game. I cant imagine what the haters plan to make fin failed.

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2018 06:00 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Oh im afraid to hear what brian answer will be.... good luck fin

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2018 02:57 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Awww brian is so romantic prepared the best honeymoon for his husband. Their hotel sound so heavenly

Author's Response:
Thanks, Bella - BTW, I apologize if some photos are missing. I had lots of them in this story at the beginning, and then when Photo Bucket refused to do 3rd-party hosting without paying an outrageous fee, they all went away. But eventually I'll get them reinserted. I hope you continue to enjoy this story, and once again, thank you for reading it and especially for taking the time to comment. It means a lot to me. :) ~Kim

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2018 01:39 PM · On: The Wedding Present

Thank you for writing this. Couldnt wait to read the sequel

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2018 01:26 PM · On: The Wedding Present

This chapter make my heart warm. So much love

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2018 08:06 AM · On: The Wedding Present

I have tears in my eyes reading this chapter then the birds incident happen LOL... this chapter is so romantic and funny. Finally they are married and they have all people who love them witness it

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 12:38 AM · On: The Wedding Present

What a wonderful day for brian. Too bad the senator didnt want to be a part from it

Author's Response:
Hello, Bella! Well, it will be a slow process regarding Fin and Brian bonding, but they will be moving closer. I hope you continue to enjoy this story! Thank you for reading, and for all the feedback. I deeply appreciate that. :) ~Kim

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 12:07 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Phew im so relieved everything out in the open and brian didnt get angry at justin. He knew sunshine meant well

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2018 10:54 PM · On: The Wedding Present

I actually afraid brian going to be mad if he find out what justin keep a secret

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2018 09:57 PM · On: The Wedding Present

Wow this is unexpected twist. Its even better.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 03:05 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

While waiting for updates on current stories, I search thru completed stories for ones that I find interesting. I just finished reading both The Wedding Present and this one and I have to say they were wonderful. I always fall in love with the characters and while I want a happy ending, I miss the characters and their stories so much. I hope that you will consider visiting Brian, Justin and the family telling us about the newest addition to the family and how everyone is doing. It does not have to be really long. A short update would be wonderful. Your writing is amazing since while reading your stories, it is possible to see just what you are writing about. Living near Pgh. also always make me pay attention to stories in that area. Fantastic writing. Thank you for sharing your amazing ideas with the reader.

Author's Response:
Hi, Marilynne! Thank you for reading both stories, and for your kind words. You don't know how much I appreciate that, and how motivating it is to me as a writer. :)

I hope to eventually revisit this 'verse to at least let readers know what happens after the end of "My Heart's Desire," because I know there is more to the story than where I left it. Plus, I really came to love Tony and Fin's characters, along with Alex, so I would love to write another story with them in it. The biggest problem is RL and my time crunch! But hopefully one day. In the meantime, I'd like to offer my sincere thanks for reading and especially taking the time to comment on my stories. I am very honored you chose to read these, and I especially am grateful for the feedback. :) ~Kim

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2018 02:09 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

I just found these two stories a couple of days age. I could not stop reading them untill I finished both. Just wanted you to know I loved them I don't know if you plan on writing about them any more but would love to know if Brian and JUstin wind upp with a boy or girl or twins, but even if you don't will enjoy reading the stories that i have found that I have not read.

Author's Response:
Hello, Lori! Thank you for choosing to read both "The Wedding Present," and the sequel. I consider it a great compliment that you coudn't stop reading them. :) I would love to do at least a brief additional story about the child, as well as tie up some other loose ends. Plus, I adore Fin and Tony's characters. So I intend to write one at some point. Findng the time is the biggest problem! But perhaps once the new website platform is up and running smoothly, that will give me more time to concentrate on writing again (I'm still writing; I just can't juggle more than one at a time right now).

Thank you again for not only reading, but also for leaving feedback. That means a lot to me. :) ~Kim

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2018 02:02 AM · On: The Wedding Present

As I was searching for stories to read while waiting for updates on current stories, I came across this one and the sequel. Really enjoyed it so much. Good story and great writing. I will start reading the sequel next. I am sure I will enjoy it, also.

Author's Response:
Hello, Marilynne! Yes, the story volume does seem to ebb and flow at times, doesn't it? Well, I'm very happy that you chose this story to read in the meantime. :) I have really grown to love Fin and Tony's characters, both in this original and the sequel, so I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for letting me know, and also I'd like to thank you for taking the time to leave so much feedback for many of our writers on here. Please know that it is deeply appreciated. I do hope you enjoy "My Heart's Desire" as well. I will probably write a follow-up story to that one in the future sometime as well. :) Thanks again for all the support!! ~Kim

Reviewer: JerseyGirl (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 07:47 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

I so loved this story! The 90+ chapters you gave readers in “The Wedding Present” & the sequel “My Hearts Desire” were like curling up with a favorite novel and being in QAF heaven! I love how you took Brian from being alone the end of the QAF Series and brought to life the Brian we knew was hiding beneath the surface. And gave him the love of his life, Justin, and a well-deserved family! Can I just say how much I LOVE the new characters you introduced; Fin & Tony, who in one way mirrored Brian/Justin, but in another were so different, and loving Grandparents Sean & Kathy were delightful, and Alex, while young, I am sure she will show Brian many times over that he has met his match in his younger self! And the special room…oh how I hope someday the muse will strike and you will fill that room with Justins Hearts Desire in a follow-up sequel! He so deserves to see that Dream come true! Plus just think of the directions you could take the story…how do our boys cope with teenage PMS, their daughters first crush, the words drama queen could take on a whole new meaning! Your Gus is beyond sweet, his loving way of seeing life and others makes him one special little boy! Your eye for adding creative detail is one of many reasons why I enjoy your writing style, it adds so much to your stories, it brings them to life, and creates an actual visual for your reads. So thank you for the many hours of enjoyment, I’m off to read “Taming a Wild Stallion.” Candy

P.S. Would you possibly be interesting in posting some of your stories on Kinnetik Dreams facebook page, it is a closed group that has over 400 members and writers, it's a great place to share all things QAF! I know they would enjoy reading them as much as I do.

Author's Response:
Hi, Candy! I'm so glad you decided to read both stories, and I'm thrilled by how much you enjoyed them! Yes, there are several loose ends left that need to be explored yet, and I hope someday I can do that when things are not so crazy!

I'm delighted that you have decided to read "Tame the Wild Stallion" next! Just like Fin and Tony, I grew to love Sarah and Will's characters in that story, and it, too, is full of ups and downs. I do hope you enjoy it. I certainly had fun writing it!

As for posting on other sites, I have been with MW for a long time now, and it predates the other site by several years, so I'm sure most of their readers would have already read these stories on here before. It is my home (I'm an admin on the site, also), and I am happy where I am. I DO post on some other sites, but this is my primary one. Thank you for the suggestion, though. MW also has a FB page that you might be interested in joining. We would love to have you as a member there.:)

Thanks again for becoming a member here so you could leave feedback on my stories! I have enjoyed each word that you have written, and I hope you continue to enjoy my stories. We will be totally revamping this site soon, and it will make everyone's experience much more enjoyable and easier to navigate, so I hope you will bear with us until then. ~Kim

Reviewer: JerseyGirl (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2018 04:10 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

I love how you invited us to share in their honeymoon adventure; it was ridiculously romantic and so fitting! It more then makes up for the ending of season 5. As I was reading I was as so mesmerized by how your brought Ireland and the different settings to life I asked my husband if our passports were still valid! Yes, I really did! The honeymoon was delightful in more ways then one! Im so enjoying this story and can't wait to see whats next for our boys, although I have a feeling it might not be quite as peaceful and relaxing!! Candy

Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments, Candy! I'm happy that you're enjoying the story so far. And you're correct. There will definitely be some ups and downs in the sequel to the Wedding Present. But I think you'll like it by the time everything is done. There will be some surprises along the way as well. ;)

Thanks for choosing to read these two stories, and for all the feedback! It is greatly appreciated. a86;~Kim

Reviewer: JerseyGirl (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2018 04:38 PM · On: The Wedding Present

I have so enjoyed the journey you have taken us on, the more I read the more I realize the story really is a special "present" to the readers. I adore Fin/Tony and what their characters have added, also a big thank you for staying true to Brian & Justin and not straying from the characters we all fell in love with!! Your writing style is so creative, I have laughed and cried many times then I can count! I can't wait to start the sequel! Candy

P.S. Your story is what pushed me to register on MW so I could let you know how much I enjoyed your writing!

Author's Response:
Hi, Candy! First of all, welcome to Midnight Whispers! it sounds like you've been reading for some time, but the fact that you registered simply so you can leave me a review really made my day! I'm so happy that you enjoyed that story. I, too, really adore Fin and Tony's characters as well, and you will find in the sequel that they play a very dominant part, along with Brian and Justin. I came to love those characters so much that it seemed like they had been there the entire time. The sequel is even longer than the first story, and I do intend to write a third story at some point where this sequel left off. But just knowing how much you enjoyed the story really means a lot to me and is very motivating as a writer, so I thank you for not only registering, but taking the time to leave me a review. I'm honored that my story was the first one you chose to leave a comment for. Thanks again for your support! I hope you continue to enjoy some more of my stories. a86; ~Kim

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2017 07:15 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Another masterpiece. I loved the twist to the original plot, it's amazing how you made it so interesting, Kim. Looking forward to read the sequel, loved the universe you created here. Thanks for sharing:)

Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, and for your kind comments, Nadine! I hope you enjoy the sequel as well. It turned out even longer than the original! I did grow to love Tony and Fin's characters in this 'verse, and I may just revisit it again in the future. Thank you for the feedback! And thanks for being one of our writers! It is greatly appreciated. ~Kim

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2017 05:49 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Just want to add: After enjoying such veeeery long story it doesn't feel right to just say "thank you". You must have put so much time and effort into writing this story to give us readers many, many hours of fun reading ist. But I wanted to thank you nevertheless. :-)

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words, and for choosing to read both of these very long stories! And yes, it did take me a long time, but it is a labor of love, too. Your acknowledgement of the time it takes to write stories, and your feedback, though, is so motivating to me, so I thank you for that! I really came to love Fin and Tony's characters, especially, and there is the new baby on the way, so I may just revisit them some day. :)

I hope I continue to write stories that you will enjoy! ~Kim

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2017 05:39 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Hi Kim!

Will there be an other story in this universe? I would love to read some more about Alex and Gus, Fin and Tony and this very nice elderly couple (grandpa, the fisherman : -) and his sweet wife) and the others! I enjoyed spending time in this universe. Again: Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2017 02:33 PM · On: The Wedding Present

Dear Kim,

I found this story listed in someones favorites (it might have been Vic's) , a great way to find some great stories : -) And since a haven't read it before, I did just that - and really enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing!

And to think there is a sequal waiting ... :-)

Author's Response:
Hi, Steff! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for letting me know. I hope you enjoy the sequel, too. Thank you for reading, and for the comments! ~Kim

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2017 04:22 AM · On: The Wedding Present

I love this story...i have read it once and reading now again...thank u for u hard work.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for rereading, and for your kind words! I really enjoyed writing this one, and absolutely love Tony and Fin's characters. Maybe one day in the future I'll do a sequel to "My Heart's Desire." Sort of a look down the road at the new baby in the family. :) Thank you again for taking the time to let me know how much you like this story. I am very appreciative. ~Kim

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2016 04:02 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Hi, Kim!

Thank you for this amazing saga - beautifully written and deliciously long!

I loved your original characters - Sean and Kathy are like dream grandparents; Fin and Tony, so similar to Brian and Justin but at the same time so different. Alex is so much fun to read about :)

Of course my major interest are Brian and Justin and I'm happy with the life you made for them. Reading was interesting and exciting journey!

I hope someday you'll find time to visit this 'verse again - we wouldn't want this beautiful nursery to stay empty, right :)

Hugs, Nadya

Author's Response:
Hi, Nadya! Thank you for all the feedback, and for reading this story! I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed it, including the other original characters. Yes, we need to revisit that 'verse one day. I would love to right at least a short sequel to look at their lives down the road with their little one. :) I do like the idea of that. And I particularly love Fin and Tony's relationship, as well as the friendship that developed between Tony and Justin. They both love very independent, strong alpha males, don't they?

Thanks again for all the support! That is so motivating to me as an author. :) ~Kim

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2016 06:18 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Alexandria - now that's what I call a surprise :)

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2016 10:43 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

I had a honest intention to review more often, but couldn't tear myself from reading.

This is entirely your fault for making the story so mesmerising :lol

You have the talent to describe them so vividly and real.

I love little gems like "I hate new shitrs" :)

Hopefully THIS elections will go right...

Can't wait for more interaction with Alex!

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2016 01:18 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Hi, Kim!

Finally found the time to read the sequel - an early Christmas present for me :)

Making Brian Fin's campaign manager - now that's a great idea!

Can't wait to see what father and son will do with it.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 08:25 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Noooo it can't be the end, please continue this perfect, beautiful amazing story. Oh Brian you really out did yourself and the love you have shown Justin and what you have done for him. Please write it happening and who, and how they get on. Please we need more more more more plz. Thank you for this incredible story 💕💕💕💕💕

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all the comments, Vicki! I will definitely think of revisiting them one day. :) *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 07:57 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

What a brilliant chapter,i wonder what Brian has planned. I'm getting upset I'm coming near the end of this story. I don't want it to end please don't let it end.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 01:17 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Whoop whoop, happy dancing and crying happy tears again. I pray Justin gets his other dream though and mine of this story going on forever 💕💕💕💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 12:08 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Way to go guys she will be so happy in your family, I pray that they let her the courts that is. Gus is making me smile more and so happy they are moving back.

Author's Response:
Hi, Vicki! Once more, I'm grateful for all your comments! Thank you! I loved writing Emmett in as the minister for Tony and Fin's wedding, BTW. I wish I had thought to do that when B and J had gotten married. Can you imagine that? LOL! I'm so happy that you're enjoying this very long story! Thank you for choosing mine to read. I am very honored by that, and grateful for all the feedback. XOXO ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 10:51 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Oh guys you are melting my heart so much, Alex is so wonderful with Gus and I think they would be perfect as brother and sister and create Lots of fun moments together. I fear for their safety with Adam good lord let them be ok. Let Alex stay forever and never end this story

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 10:00 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Gus and Alex are my favorite now in this story, she has to stay forever with them she is in all their hearts now. I never want this story to end, it is now my favorite 💕💕💕💕💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 09:27 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

OMG that was so incredibly beautiful, you seriously outdid yourself here wow 💕💕💕💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2016 09:02 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Lol Alex is so much like Brian I love it, wouldn't it be cool if they were actually related. This was so beautiful and again tears, I love Fin and Tony so much I never want this story to end. 💕💕💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2016 08:55 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Amazing chapter full of love and inspiration. I hope they adopt her, she is an amazing kid and I can see great things ahead for them all 💕🌷🌹

Author's Response:
Thank you, Vicki, for all the comments once more! I love reading all of them! I see you're almost done with this epic tale.;) Thank you for all the support. I appreciate that so much. XOXO ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2016 08:14 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Oh Alex they do love you, please open your heart and let them. I cried for them all here and please let them have many babies they are wonderful with kids

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2016 07:07 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Awe baby Hope sounds perfect for them but I agree with Brian sadly. OMG Alex why did you do that. Please find her 💔

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2016 05:31 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

OMG OMG OMG that was seriously hot, sweet, loving and Omg good. You made me cry happy tears again 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕🌷💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2016 04:24 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

That guy had no chance Tony is to devoted to Fin. Hehe OMG the look on Justin's face must have been priceless when Gus asked why was his shirt on wrong and the drawing Gus had Alex do Awwwwe

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2016 02:16 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Gus and Alex are amazing together I think Gus will be the one to get to her and open her heart more. I hope she gets to stay for good and shows them her heart more 💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2016 01:48 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Gus really made me chuckle a true little guy so brilliant and the dinner was just brilliant. Seriously amazing story

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2016 08:38 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

That was brilliant, I'm so proud of Fin and he will do brilliant things in there. I bet he and Tony can have fun there and when Gus comes to visit playing hide and seek would be fun or riding mini bikes down the long halls lol I still hope they get to do the pony ride,

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2016 07:28 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

That was so beautiful, you made me cry with happiness 💕💕💕💕💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2016 07:06 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Awe poor Tony, I wish Fin would realize this is something his own heart wants as well. He is so much like Brian. Debbie's house on Christmas is sooo like my Nanas house on Christmas night, all the family go there to be together fantastic chapter

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2016 07:03 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

I love how Gus is with Alex it really warms my heart

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2016 07:02 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Way to go Gus, you have a huge heart like your dad and I can see Alex is gonna bond with you and do better because of you. Long may it continue

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2016 07:51 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Way to go Gus, you have a huge heart like your dad and I can see Alex is gonna bond with you and do better because of you. Long may it continue

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2016 11:51 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

So great to see Alex laugh, I wish there guys could make her perminant with them. I like the teacher I think she will be really good for her.

Author's Response:
Hi, Vicki! I see you're almost done. ;) That's a lot of reading, isn't it? Longest story by far that I have written. I never thought it would be so much longer than the first part (Wedding Present). But it kind of took on a life by itself - ha! It also has the highest read count of any of my stories, too, probably due in large part to how many chapters it is. I DO adore Tony and Fin's characters, so I will definitely try to find a way to incorporate them into another story or another sequel to this one at some point.

Thank you again for all the comments and feedback! I so appreciate that. And I hope you do check out "Tender Loving Care." If you like a protective/tender Brian with his son, I think you will really enjoy that one. BTW, if you have not read any of the "Tricky series," Gus is in a LOT of those, too, as well as "Stirring Up Trouble." Oh, and "Paper Hearts Killer," also. Sorry for all the self- promotion - ha! Thanks again for all your support, Vicki. Very glad to have you reading - and posting - on MW. ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2016 11:48 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Alex is a very lucky girl to have these guys care about her and I'm so proud of Brian for how he is melting towards her. I can't wait to see how she develops with them.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2016 10:56 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Alex is a very lucky girl to have these guys care about her and I'm so proud of Brian for how he is melting towards her. I can't wait to see how she develops with them.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2016 09:01 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

This is Brian through and through and I love how you have written him here and I truly believe he and Justin can do incredible things to help her.

Thank you for the rec for the story, I will check it out.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2016 09:45 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

I love how Brian is with Gus, I would love lots of stories with those two just like that. Lol I can't believe they did that in the Government mansion... Well I guess I can lol. I so cannot wait for more. Everyone needs to read this story. It needs to be in print books with pictures for all to treasure 💕🌹💕🌹

Author's Response:
Hi, Vicki! I'm loving all the comments! Thank you! I do love to write stories that show Brian's tender side toward Gus. If I may suggest one in case you haven't read it, you might like "Tender Loving Care," because it focuses a lot on that. :) Thanks for all the feedback! I deeply appreciate that, my friend. ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2016 08:08 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Whoop whoop go Fin go, gosh I'm so proud of them all. I'm loving Sean and Kathy more and more everyday and I hope Fin still takes Gus on the pony ride, they are all in my heart forever and ever 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕🌹

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2016 03:19 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Awe I love Fin and Tony's love story, that has warmed my heart so much thank you for this. Oh I so love how you are writing Justin and Tony's friendship they are a great double act and I think they can have lots of fun messing with their partners 💕💕💕💕💕💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2016 09:10 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Lol Alex is so like Debbie I love it and I love that Justin opened up to her, I think she would do really great with the guys if she let's herself open up as well.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2016 07:50 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Alex is so very like Hunter and if she stays I think she will turn out to be a wonderful young lady. I'm so proud of Justin as well and Brian they have come a long way. May it continue x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2016 06:47 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Brian's heart is bigger then he even knows and he is proving it here with wanting to help Alex and I'm proud of him for that. Debbie Is just great always wanting to do something, I can see were he got some of his wanting to help others from. And OMG what a revelation about Alex.

And on another note you are most welcome Kim, Yu are a fantastic writer and I am loving all you do, I still need sequels to those other stories lol big hugs x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 09:08 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Hope Alex will be OK and get to know Brian and why he is helping him. Oh boy that Craig is so evil grr

Author's Response:
Hi, Vicki! Thank you once more for reading this very long story, and especially for taking the time to comment! It is greatly appreciated. :) I have a few surprise coming up regarding Alex, but don't want to give it away. :) I'm so glad you enjoying this sequel! Thanks again for all the feedback! I am very grateful. ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 02:26 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Oh Alex why did I you do that, let Brian helping you please. OMG what on earth did Turner do that for

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 11:44 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

I'm so glad Justin told Brian of his dreams to have a baby, I hope he agrees to it. Lordy how on earth did he get bail grrrr

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 10:40 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Gus is such a wonderful young boy and just what Justin needed was his hug and love. Craig is an ass and I'm glad Justin confronted him, he is evil. Thank god for Brian as well,i love their love

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 09:57 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Oh Justin talk to Brian, he may surprise you and this is something he might want as well. Gosh I can't imagine the pain of what Justin is feeling over what his dad did that's all kinds of wrong he did.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 09:07 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Such an emotional chapter, this is seriously the best story, you are an awesome writer.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 07:59 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Such an emotional chapter, this is seriously the best story, you are an awesome writer.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 07:33 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Oh Fin you are so brave, you did your son proud. Let's Adam is sent down. Good on the new guy helping even though I want him to loose

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 07:30 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Hugs 💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 04:45 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

OMG what on earth, Adam better get taken down for this 😤

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 03:10 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

So proud of the guys with their come back, that took guts

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 12:00 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Wow another really intense chapter, I so can't wait for Adam to be found out, i hope he is given a lesson

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 10:25 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Wow that was some intense stuff there. I hope Turner realises this is not right or good and grows a backbone and stand up to the evil twit. I'm so happy the guys are strong together and not letting the bozos get to them. Go get them guys

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 07:58 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

OMG this is getting hairy and scary, I'm worried for the guys now

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2016 09:20 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

OMG this is getting hairy and scary, I'm worried for the guys now

Author's Response:
Hi, my friend! Thank you for all the feedback! I am enjoying reliving this story through you. :) And yes, Adam is a snake, and he isn't done yet. But don't worry; you know I won't let anything really bad happen to our boys. Thank you again for choosing to read this story, and for the support. I really appreciate that, Vicki. :) ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2016 06:46 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Fin handled that perfectly and I am so glad he had the guyd behind him. That Adam OMG I want to grab him and fling him off the bus. Oooh sexy time in The RV go boys 😜

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2016 02:25 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

That Adam is an evil twit isn't he, I hope he fails badly and I wanna see Brian bring him down. Go Fin you can do this

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2016 02:23 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Wow that is some RV, I wanna go into it so bad. I want that snake gone, I hope he is caught fast, and dealt with. That Stockwell as well how dare he I'm ready for jump in and shake him Grr. This story is awesome

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2016 07:46 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Wow that is some RV, I wanna go into it so bad. I want that snake gone, I hope he is caught fast, and dealt with. That Stockwell as well how dare he I'm ready for jump in and shake him Grr. This story is awesome

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2016 08:54 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

I feel so sorry for Justin all he wants his dad to be proud of him and love him. I'm worried about the snake in the grass, really hope Brian finds him fast and boots him. Cannot wait to see the trip in the RV, I think funny moments maybe ahead,

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2016 08:17 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

I am very VERY nervous now, what are those evil men gonna do to our guys 😨

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2016 12:03 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

OK now I'm worried, who is this snake, I hope Brian fishes him out fast and boot him out. And Craig 😬

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2016 10:06 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Good stuff, I knew he would do it, can't wait to see his dads reaction. I just pray Stockwell doesn't hurt any of them

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2016 06:53 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

Oh boy that is a hard decision for Brian, I do however think it would be good for getting to know his dad, but for their safety I don't know. Lol I wonder what kind of punishment Justin will get it, he'll love it I'm sure

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2016 07:09 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Stockwell 😤 and I think there two blondscan convince him lol

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2016 03:01 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Awe Kathy and Sean with Gus, I love that and oh dear.... Claire, I'm worried

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2016 01:54 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Wow now that's a trip to remember, so much love 💞💞💞💞

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2016 01:27 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Ooooh the romance, I'm loving this so much 💞

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2016 08:26 AM · On: My Heart's Desire

I want to hug Fin and Tony so bad. OMG you are capturing Ireland so beautifully,i love it up there, it's hard to get around on a wheelchair but we did it. I'm seriously in love with this story 💞

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2016 08:35 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Oh my you sent them to my fav place to visit in Ireland, Galway it's only just over an hour from me. The hotel is beautiful in real life as well and you seriously did yourself proud here x🍀

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2016 08:32 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Poor Fin and Tony they didn't need that photo turning up and Justin running for art stuff to take with him lol loved it

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2016 12:35 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Oh man I hope Fin asks him to be his campaign manager it would help them. Ireland my home, welcome boys

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2016 11:57 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Aw no it can't be finished, this story can't be over but hearts desire is there. I can't wait to see the pony ride with Fin, Brian and Gus I hope you wrote it. This is one of my all time favorite stories

Author's Response:
Hi, Vicki! I want to thank you for all the reviews you left on this story! I appreciate that so much. I wish I could have responded individually to each one, but lack of time precludes me from doing that. But I want you to know how much I am grateful for your feedback. I'm so delighted that you enjoyed it, and now you are reading the much longer sequel. Thank you for all the encouragement and support! ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2016 10:56 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Lol I laughed out loud with Emmett catching them, I couldn't picture it. I'm so happy the ice us broken let's hope it continues. Love this story so much

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2016 10:19 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Way to go Emmett, you did the grooms proud, everyone should have a venue created by you. OMG he said dad, now just say it to his face please

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2016 09:54 AM · On: The Wedding Present

I hope they bond soon father and son, I really believe they could be close. Everything about this chapter was amazing and I love how the boys were greeting people

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2016 06:50 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Oh my God that was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. You had me crying again with happiness. I am lost for words it was so beautiful 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2016 05:24 PM · On: The Wedding Present

You so melted my heart here, I'm so in love with this story

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2016 05:22 PM · On: The Wedding Present

This was amazing you did a brilliant job x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2016 01:28 PM · On: The Wedding Present

Oh how I wish I had been a fly on the wall when that happened lol, I seriously hope they end up close, Brian needs this so bad

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2016 11:41 AM · On: The Wedding Present

I'm getting excited for the wedding now and all this build up is great. I am loving Sean and Kathy and Fin and Tony so much

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2016 09:38 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Lol oh boy father and son are so alike, I just love this so much. I can't wait to see their relationship develop more. You are seriously doing an incredible job with this, I hope it never ends

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2016 08:19 AM · On: The Wedding Present

That was some heart to heart, so moving you moved me to tears again. I pray they become closer I think they would be really a duo and mess with everyones head in a fun way.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2016 06:59 PM · On: The Wedding Present

Wow that is emotional as well and tense,how on earth did Debbie not see him she sees everything

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2016 03:49 PM · On: The Wedding Present

I can feel this building and building, so emotional and brilliant. I hope they meet soon and it goes well.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2016 03:00 PM · On: The Wedding Present

So proud of Fin standing up there with Tony all you gotta do now is get your son to listen. Good luck you'll to be like Thor lifting his hammer

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2016 11:23 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Oh Brian why are you so stubborn, please, please go talk to your dad

Author's Response:
Hi, Vicki! I am so thankful as well as touched by all your review comments. Thank you! You are allowing me to relive parts of the story myself, and I am enjoying it immensely. I really love Fin and Tony's characters, and I hope by the time you read this story, you will feel that way, too.:) One day, I will definitely come back and revisit this 'verse.

BTW, I'm sorry to hear that you're struggling with your own stories. I know how it can be to develop writer's block! I hope you find the inspiration you are looking for soon. Perhaps go back and rewatch some of the eps if you can? I'm assuming you already belong to a DS FB group? If so, perhaps they could help as well. But I'm here for you, and broadcasting positive thoughts that you will soon find the inspiration you need. :) Thank you again for all the comments! And don't worry; stubbornness runs in the O'Connor/Kinney genes. He (both) will come around eventually. :) *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2016 09:16 AM · On: The Wedding Present

I'm falling more and more in love with the grandparents and that trick comment from Gus had me bursting out laughing. OMG I hope this meeting with Tony and hissed go well, please let it be OK

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2016 08:40 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Thank god Fin you are doing the right thing. I pray the reunion with his son goes well

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2016 08:21 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Once again I was sobbing, but happy tears, I am so happy Brian gets on with them and I have a feeling they will get even closer. You are seriously an amazing writer. 💞💞💞💞

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2016 07:33 PM · On: The Wedding Present

OMG I wept reading this, my heart soured and broke and soured. I hope things go better soon and I can't wait to see him with the grandparents, I hope it's good for them all.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2016 03:40 PM · On: The Wedding Present

I feel sooo sorry for Tony, I wanna hug him so bad. I pray this works out soon I'm nervous it will blow up in Justin's face.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2016 01:02 PM · On: The Wedding Present

Oh Fin please wake up, you are losing everyone. I love the grandparents they are great, I hope Brian like them. I Gosh I hope he takes the news well as well. Fin getcit your son now....

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2016 07:14 PM · On: The Wedding Present

Fin, Fin, Fin you better run after him before you loose not just your son but your lover. This was so emotional 😢

Author's Response:
Hi, Vicki! I know; this one has a lot of ups and downs. ;) Don't worry, though; Fin may be confused, but he's definitely a smart man, and he will pull himself together eventually. I'm happy that you are still reading this story. Thank you for the comments, and for reading, my friend.:) ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 10:47 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Oh I love Fin and Tony already, I hope Brian does as well and I pray Fin comes out its only fair for Tony. Excited to read more now x

Author's Response:
Hi, Vicki!! Thank you for choosing to read this story, and for all the comments! I really grew to love Fin and Tony in this story, as well as in the sequel, and I'm glad you like them, too.;) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, and then you'll have an even longer sequel to read if you choose.;)

Thanks so much for reading, and especially for all the feedback! I truly appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 10:46 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Dr Kinney lol love it and I am again nervous for Justin, please go well

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 10:45 AM · On: The Wedding Present

OMG this had me emotional and I love them already. I hope Brian loves them

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 10:44 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Wow I'm nervous for him.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 10:42 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Justins love for Brian is so wonderful and I love Emmett here you write him so well

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 10:41 AM · On: The Wedding Present

I love their banter it's so cute and loving. This story is getting so exciting

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 10:39 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Gosh I really hope Justin knows what he is doing and it doesn't blow up in his face

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 10:38 AM · On: The Wedding Present

Wow this is gripping already, loving this so much.

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2016 03:25 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Just finished this awesome story. I apologize for not commenting after each chapter. You must devote so much time and effort to giving all of us such pleasure. I do love to read each and every one of your stories but always wait until they are completed. I hope that somewhere down the road you will revisit this story arc. What fun to see how many children Brian and Justin end up with, or what escapades Alex gets into, or Fin and Tony. Your character development and descriptive tone just really makes the story come alive. Thank You for sharing.

Author's Response:
Hi, Suse! That was a lot of reading, wasn't it? And don't apologize; I'm just grateful that you chose to read this story, and for taking the time to comment afterward. I'm very happy that you enjoyed the story. And I appreciate your lovely comments. It does take quite a bit of time to write these; I think this was my longest story yet. But to shorten it, I feel, wouldn't be fair to readers who have come to expect the detail I normally place in my stories, and I would never want them to think I finished one hastily just to get it done. I do feel good that I was finally able to finish this one, but I dearly love Fin and Tony's characters. So I will definitely think about revisiting them in the future.

Thank you again for your support of my stories, Suse! I truly appreciate that. BTW, I hope maybe you'll think about registering as an official member. You will always be able to read and review anonymously, but with the new design of the website coming out (hopefully in mid-November), those who are members will have access to some incredible features on their profile pages. Maybe something to think about. :) Thanks again! ~Kim

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2016 04:56 PM · On: My Heart's Desire

Just a question. How is it Gus is able to visit with Kathy and Sean so often if he still lives in Toronto? Maybe I am taking things too literally, lol. Reference made in this chapter about where he lives.

On other hand love the scene with Brian and Alex where they agree to be honest with each other.

Author's Response:
Hi, Suse! First of all, thank you for tackling this very long story, and for taking the time to comment; I truly appreciate that. As for the issue with Gus, I think I was just assuming that with an hour nonstop flight between Pittsburgh and Toronto, that Brian could afford to fly his Sonny Boy down fairly regularly. But in either case, I hope you'll grant me just a bit of poetic license here, and continue to enjoy the story. ;)

Thanks again for taking the time to leave me your thoughts! ~Kim

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