Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 25: Getting Back to 'Normal,' Part 1

I hope Justin shows Brian the painting so that they can talk how Justin feels.

Love that Brian is allowing Daphne to stay with him and Justin. 

The situation with PIFA should be interesting!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 25: Getting Back to 'Normal,' Part 1

Hurry Justin, you don't want to be late. Great chapters, I have missed this while I have been away.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 6 of 6)

Yes, Justin is indeed Brian's lucky charm!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 5 of 6)

I have spent most of my afternoon and night reading this fic and to say I am enjoying it would not come close to how I would describe it. The emotion, the twists ad turns, thanks.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 5 of 6)

Finally a witness! That a-hole is lucky Brian didn't beat him to a pulp. A rap fantasy! What a pig!

Author's Response: Indeed! Brian would have liked nothing better (well, of all that was possible at that moment).

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 4 of 6)

Wonderful, so sweet and love the gift and confession Brian gave to his Angel!

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2008 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 4 of 6)

I am crying while reading part 3 up to part 4, i really love it. Brian is sooo romantic and sooo in love with his Justin. Brian wanted to give anything, everything to Sunshine.... And Sunshine is so overwhelmed with love and happines........

Love this story..... thanks, thanks 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 3 of 6)

Simply amazing and romantic X 1000! This was just so swoon worthy, I can't even imagine what you have in store for the rest of the date!

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you are enjoying it so much :) :) :) It's definitely been fun to write, that is, when I've managed to sneak in some writing time (shakes fist at work)

I hope you enjoy the next part (I just posted it)

 

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2008 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 3 of 6)

so sweet and romantic. I look forward to reading what happens next on their date

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you are enjoying their date :) :) :)

I hope you enjoy the next part (I just posted it) 

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2008 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 3 of 6)

Wow ! Just... Wow !

Violette, those last chapters and this one just have me melt !

I swear this is really one of the nicest "swept me off my feet" I have ever read ! You have me dreaming here... *dreamy eyes*!

Keep going my dear (and I love the way you play with BDSM!)

See ya !!! Jersey :))



Author's Response:

That's so wonderful to hear :) :) :)

I'm so happy you are enjoying the BDSM element of this story, too (

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 2 of 6)

When Brian goes romantic, he goes all out!!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 1)

So sweet!!! I'm so glad they are progressing with their relationship.

Reviewer: kinneydu (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 1)

Ooh, can't wait for next chapter!

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2008 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 1)

thanks for the great update i am so looking forward to the next chapter ,you are doing a great job with this fic so keep it going please.

Many Hugs Buffytess



Author's Response:

That's so wonderful to hear :) :) :)

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2008 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 24: Possession (Part 1)

yay this is exciting

Author's Response:

I'm glad you are excited (I am, too)

:) :) :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 23: Entering subspace

WOW that was hot! It didn't take much for him to turn Brian on did it! Looks like he's getting a date tomorrow night. Yea!!

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this part :)

Yep...the date is on :D 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 23: Entering subspace

hot hot chapter. not ecpected after brian's queen out.

whoo hoo, justin gets a date out of it.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed this part :)

Actually...I think that's just what the doctor ordered (for both of them). Brian needed to feel desired...needed Justin to work at getting his attention (but in a non-demeaning way)...and Justin needed to show how much he wants/loves Brian.

Reviewer: kinneydu (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 23: Entering subspace

I  am really enjoying this story.  Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 22: What are best friends for? (take three)

doesn't michael ever know when to keep his mouth glued shut? my god what a way to try to make things better by only making them worse.  

brian was so close to walking away, his angel wouldn't let him. his angel seems to know just what brian needs as much as his master knows what angel needs. great relationship.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 22: What are best friends for? (take three)

Glad they worked that out. Brian can be such a hot head!

Author's Response: Indeed! Their D/s relationship is having a stabilizing effect on Brian, too (not just Justin). Without it, Brian would have most definitely left, but Justin calling him Master stopped him dead in his tracks, bringing to mind their new deeper level of intimacy and reminding him that he made a commitment to Justin (to always give Justin what he needs) in establishing a relationship that requires complete trust. It's a nice reciprocal relationship b/c Brian uses Justin's sub name to achieve a similar result.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2008 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 22: What are best friends for? (take three)

Beautiful chapter!!!! Love it!

I thought Brian will also leave Justin, but love prevailed!!!!!! Thanks and more please. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked this chapter :)

Yeah...their D/s relationship is definitely having a stablizing effect on Brian, too :) 

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2008 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 22: What are best friends for? (take three)

thanks for a great update i soo love this fic plesae update soon.

 

Hugs Buffytess 



Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 21: Brian freaks out; really, really freaks out

Good for Brian just letting everyone have it! It was exactly what they needed to hear. Michael should be glad he didn't get punched again. He's such an idiot!

And LOL! at Brian for outting Teddy! 



Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the freak out! I love poking fun of Ted and his porn fetish :D (and I love his 'Go for it!' I use that every chance I get, e.g., chapter 7.5)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 21: Brian freaks out; really, really freaks out

go get 'em tiger. whoo hoo. bravo brian. if he wasn't so fearful of justin's expression, he would have seen the look of love in his eyes, not pain, disappointment, and definitely not pity. i can't wait until everyone leaves already.

 



Author's Response: I'm glad you are looking forward to Justin's reaction (and you are quite right about it).

Reviewer: Buffyess (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2008 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 20: Nobody puts Baby in the corner

thanks for a great update i am looking forward to more in this fic, and Brian as a master is so good. keep it coming you are doing a great job.

 

Many Hugs Buffytess 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliment! I'm so glad you are enjoying the D/s component to the story :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 20: Nobody puts Baby in the corner

First, I love seeing Brian call Justin, Angel. Just makes my heart melt!!

Secondly, good for Justin standing up to Ethan and putting that bastard in his place! Ethan got exactly what he deserved! 



Author's Response:

That actually makes my heart melt, too (every time).

I'm so glad that you enjoyed Justin's confrontation with Ethan. He most definitely deserved it (and worse)!

 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 20: Nobody puts Baby in the corner

that was one of the best ways i've seen ethan get his comeuppance. that it should come from justin only made it better. fanfuckingtastic!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you approve :D

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2008 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 19: The blame game

So I have't reviewed the last few chapters but I really did LOVE them. And I am on pins and needles to see what happens. I love the Master/Angel aspect of this fic. It is sweet and very hot.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are still enjoying the story! I am especially glad you like the D/s component. I was a little nervous about taking the story in that direction, though, of course, I felt that that was the best way for Brian to help Justin.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 19: The blame game

Michael is it NOT about YOU IDIOT! I'm glad Debbie behaved herself this time. And what a slap in the face for Jen. Just knew this was all Brian's fault and said Justin was safer with Ethan. Wrong answer Mother Taylor!

I hope they throw Ethan under the jail, the bastard deserves it. I'm almost certain the Sap was involved, because when did Ian ever go to Babylon? Bastard went to the people who hurt Justin the most in his revenge plot.

Hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Jen still has that terrible habit of blaming Brian for everything, and Michael is, as usual, a little too self-involved to see what's important.

Deb behaved herself this time...but, unfortunately, the shock will wear off... 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 18: The shit hits the fan

F-ing HOBBS! Ethan is a sick rat bastard to not only hurt Justin, but to get the guy who already tried to kill him once, involved in this.

I don't blame Brian at all for wanting them both to suffer a long, slow, painfull death. Evil bastards, but they will get theirs. Even if Brian doesn't lay a hand on them, he'll make a way for them to regret hurting his Angel (so glad to see him come up with his own nickname for Justin).

Hooray for Zen Ben showing up when he did and I'm glad Brian trusted him enough to let Ben try to help him.

I hope Debbie doesn't give Brian too much shit about him not telling the family what happened. She'll bitch I'm sure, but I hope she comes to the conclusion that its not about her and that Brian's only and main concern was/is Justin.

 



Author's Response:

 

Ethan is a sick bastard alright. This version can't stand the thought of Justin being happy with Brian...the thought that Justin chose 'a person like Brian' over him...and wanted to cripple Justin emotionally. He tried to take away something he knew was special to B/J (the fact that Justin only bottomed for Brian) and bring back B/J's nightmare (Hobbs).

Yeah, Ben is the perfect person for Brian to lean on. He has this great fatherly quality that Brian really benefits from (especially given his past).

 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 16: Angel

That was intense, but exactly what Justin and Brian needed. Loved how he called him Angel!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you agree (that the new D/s component to their relationship is what Justin needed). I was a little nervous about taking the story in this direction, but I couldn't see another way for Brian to do what Justin asked. Yeah, I love the new pet name, too (plus it's all B/J, unlike Sunshine, which is great, but was thought up by Deb).

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 14: Uncontrollable innuendoes

On the show, I always wondered if Brian ever found out what almost happened at Sap's party.

Not surprised he blew a gasket finding out about that, but Daph did great bringing him back down and making him understand Justin's side of the situation.



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Brian and Daphne's conversation (or, rather, Daphne's chastising Brian). She always gives it to people straight.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 13.2: Did aliens invade?

LOL! That was cute! And Daph is right, only Brian and Justin can turn cooking dinner into sex. Good to see Justin laugh, Brian is working overtime to take care of his Sunshine.

Author's Response: I've tried to capitalize on every opportunity for humor (since so much of the story is necessarily sad). I'm glad that it didn't seem inappropriate and that you were able to enjoy it (even embedded as it was in a sad story).

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 12.1: Protecting Justin’s health

King Kinney is in full Protective Brian mode! That's so like him to be on the ball and completely proactive about something so important.

Author's Response: Yeah...Brian's best self (the side he tries to hide) emerges when the people he loves are suffering.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 11: The intrepid twink who could

Justin is gonna be ok. He's tough and he's a fighter. Ethan should be scared, very scared when Justin remembers what happened. Between him and Brian the only thing left of Ethan will be that rat hair on his chin!

Brian handled this very well.



Author's Response:

Justin is definitely a fighter :)

I hope you find my representation of Justin's struggle (with the rape and everything it churns to the surface) true to his essential nature. 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 7.5: The diner

Where does he put it all? That luscious bubble butt. LOL! Loved that!

My goodness Brian and Justin are hot and heavy now. Michael walking in on them in the bathroom was PRICELESS!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the peanut gallery :)

I couldn't help but have a little fun with Michael :D

Well...in addition to whatever ecstasy's left in their system and their natural sex drives...they were getting high, too, which often makes people extra lusty :)

Reviewer: sm0kr420 (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2008 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 19: The blame game

alright so now i am waiting desperate to read more...i loved how in the beginning justin and brian changed all there bad memories. 

i also loved that brian was such an amazing support system for when he needed it.

even more awesome is them getting into the master, angel world.  great slave name by the way.

especially awesome, i guess not awesome mre like creative, to throw the forgotten hobbs into the mix.  what a plot twist.

the idea of brian turning to ben for support is really wonderful, i always thought ben was underappreciatted inthe story.

i really cannot wait for you to update it will be hard waiting for however long it will take you to update....motivation hopefully.

i really enjoyed like i said and hope you do so many more chapters because they will be just as good as the first 31 and hopefully everyone will take the time to enjoy your story

 

 

BEK 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked their exorcising of demons! That was therapeutic for me, too :)

Yeah, Brian is at his best in a crisis. 

I'm happy you like Justin's sub name. I love it, too. Fits so well and it's all B/J (Deb named Justin Sunshine).

I agree that Ben is the perfect support for Brian right now. There is something fatherly about him that's really benefiting Brian (especially given his past).

You won't have to wait too long for more. I'm planning to update it Monday (the 29th).

I'm so glad that you still find the story exciting and are eagerly awaiting more :D When I started writing this, I expected it to be maybe six chapters. But everyone seemed to be interested in what would come next, so I expanded its scope. 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 7.2: The stage

THUD! LOL! If only we had a real clip of that. My goodness!


Author's Response: I'm particularly happy to hear that! I was very nervous about my 'choreography.'

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 7.1: The backroom

Well damn! Not much else to be said =)

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the smut :D

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 6.2: Wanna go steady?

OMG! That was the sweetest thing ever! He re-enacted the prom for Justin. Oh and the letterman's jacket! Be still my heart!!

Author's Response: When Brian does something, he never does it halfway :) I bet the single rose and few chocolates are looking pretty stale to Justin now :D

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 6.1: My Justin

That was amazing! Its good to see Brian admit what was always obvious.

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked this chapter :D

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: The best laid plans

Get him Sunshine! Brian is such a knucklehead. He'll bend, he missed Justin so much.

I cracked up when I read the other review about Justin putting "make dinner and break up with Ethan" on a to do list! That IS funny! That is so Justin, its like wash socks, do my homework, wash my hair, leave Ian. LOL! 



Author's Response: Yes...Brian so often acts against his own self-interest...but eventually he gets it right.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 4: My Brian

I hope this is the restart of their life together. And Justin is right, that is His Brian always has been, always will be!

Author's Response: I couldn't agree more. It just took Brian a while to get with the program :)

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2008 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 19: The blame game

thanks for the great update i so love this fic and i am sooo looking forward to the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can.

 

Hugs Buffytess 



Author's Response:

That's so wonderful to hear :)

I'll try to update sooner, but otherwise, I'll update this one on Sunday (the 28th).

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2008 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: What are best friends for?

How I wish Cowlip had the balls to this! It did always irk me that no one, not even Jennifer, told Justin that Brian watched over him at night in the hospital. Or Justin finding out why Brian punched Michael.

I know Justin did things secretly to save Brian's life, but Brian knew Justin loved him. I like where this is going! 



Author's Response: Yeah, I hated 1) the many secrets Brian kept from Justin (all good things, of course) and 2) the fact that friends and family allowed Brian to keep these secrets (thereby allowing Justin to doubt Brian's feelings). I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one so far.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2008 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 19: The blame game

hip hip hooray!!!!! that little greaser is finally going to get his. hobbs too. and an added bonus is that justin is negative.

i liked how brian used his masterful side to bring justin down calmly, reenforced his love. letting him know that brian would always love him.

now that brian has ben for moral support, it is going to drive michael absolutely bonkers.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed the D/s part. That component has been so beneficial to Justin's emotional well-being in this fic (and to Brian's, allowing him to express feelings he's been too insecure to express until now). 

Yeah, Michael's gonna be jealous and confused (but I don't plan to torment Michael too much, just enough for comic relief). 

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2008 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 19: The blame game

Thanks for the update. Tears..... tears, so much love for Brian and Justin. Ethan and Hobbs should be in jail....

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked Brian and Justin's interaction in this one :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 18: The shit hits the fan

my heart is breaking for them both. anger is caught in my throat at the greaser and hobbs. please let justin be negative, i don't think any of us could handle it if he wasn't. let your muse shine down nicely on him.

Author's Response:

Try not to worry too much. Justin has the best possible chance. He's taking the post-exposure prophylaxis treatment for HIV, so, even if he was exposed, he may not be positive (even if his first test indicates that he is). He'd need to take a second test after treatment to be sure. I promise I won't leave everyone in suspense too long.

 

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2008 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 18: The shit hits the fan

Even if I'm crying right now, I want to let you know that I love your story ! So powerful...

The feelings and the love are so raw in itself... So much "real" human's emotions are on display... 

But you are so right ! Through all this... Love is the only answer !

Hugs, Jersey



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the compliment :)

This chapter was definitely hard to write. I cried as I was writing most of it.  

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2008 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 17: Raw

thank you so much for the wonderful update i so love this fic and i love Brian as a Master, Please update as soon as you can i can hardly wait.

 

Many Hugs Buffytess 



Author's Response: That's great to hear. I'll update soon, probably today or tomorrow.

Reviewer: Nite Storm (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 16: Angel

I just read 16 chapters of mixed concept but it kept me reading but The Rape/15/16 is totally getting out in left field for the stories beginning concept! Lost My Interests! Capture what you had in the beginning The Concept Of The Lies/Secrets/Truths and you’ll have a great story. Then write a story of the greatest couple tying each other up. One drama/concept at a time.

 



Author's Response: I'm sorry that you lost interest. This is a complex story, but I didn't include any part lightly. Everything relates back to the original premise.

Reviewer: cattabella (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 17: Raw

I am so hooked on this story and that was the best part yet. It was bittersweet in a way and steamy too. I really can't wait for more!



Author's Response: That's wonderful to hear :) I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 17: Raw

That was so amazing. Hot and sweet and just perfect.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 7.6: The loft (aka truth or dare)

three cheers for well-written smut!



Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment :D

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 5: The best laid plans

LOL He made a to-do list with cook dinner and "leave ethan" both on it. Like leaving ethan was so unimportant and expected - I love that!

Author's Response: I didn't even realize the implication of placing them both on the same list, but, after what Justin learned at the intervention, it's true...Ethan was no longer important and leaving him was expected :)

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 4: My Brian

*fans self* that was really hawt.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed ch. 4 :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: What are best friends for?

This is such a good idea. It has always irked me that noone really tried to intervene so to speak. Can't wait to see where this will lead...

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the premise I started with :)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2008 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 17: Raw

Finally Brian can say it to him. Love the bdsm visuals, very hot.

Author's Response:

B/J's separation and reunion and the rape have forced Brian to re-evaluate his part in their relationship and his feelings. But what finally pushed Brian to express his feelings was Justin's begging Brian to hurt him, so Justin could feel closer to Brian. That shook Brian (to the very core) and sent him into an emotional free fall.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter :)

Reviewer: Magda (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2008 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 16: Angel

Intense chapter :)

Looking forward for more



Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed ch 16. I hope you enjoy the new chapter :)

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 16: Angel

I have no words...excellent! you have a real talent, thanks for sharing it.

There will be more chapters won't there?...and soon please!

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much (blushing now)! Yes, this story is far from over. I need to update Taylor before this one, but I should have another chapter finished this week.

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: What are best friends for?

Hah...me again...have not read chapter 7 yet...just wanted to say...BRING ON THE SMUT!...Hah!

Author's Response: I hope you enjoyed ch. 7. It definitely contains a ton of smut :D

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 1: What are best friends for?

Damn!...I said I would read the rest without commenting then do it at the end...but sod it!

This chapter was so lovely and romantic...I don't do romance...it makes me sick!...who am I kidding?...if someone would do something like that for me...I would be in heaven, of course!... this was riduculously romantic and beautiful, and so Brian(when he lets himself!) 



Author's Response: Yeah. Brian can really do romance. It's a shame that he fought this part of himself so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 6.1: My Justin

Brilliant!...I agree with your take on Brian's feelings and the complex way that is just Brian Kinney!  You done so good!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Getting into Brian's head was difficult. I'm so glad you think I did so successfully.

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 05:03 PM · On: Pre-Chapter 6 Interlude

Excellent!  You capture the thoughts of Justin perfectly(well what could have been going through his mind). I love the way you write.I am really enjoying this so much. Thanx again. 



Author's Response: I'm so glad you think I successfully captured Justin's thoughts. I was a bit nervous about chs. 4-6.

Reviewer: Magda (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2008 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 12.1: Protecting Justin’s health

I sooo love ths story - all ups and downs - it's brlliant. The plot is very intersting and has a very moving parts.

But now I have to take a break b/c it's after 3am in my country lol but I'll be back to finish my reading today.  How could I miss it.. :)



Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying so! I'm glad you have been enjoying the story.

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 4: My Brian

Well you really could have ended this story there...but I am so glad you didn't!  Looking forward to reading it all.



Author's Response: I'm glad you continue to find the story interesting. I can't wait to see your reaction to the next 2-3 chapters :D

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 1: What are best friends for?

hmmm.I am liking how this is going...good job!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked the initial impetus for the story :)

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2008 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 16: Angel

oooooohhhhh i just love this fic, Brian as a master yummy i really hope there is going to be more of that in this fic.

Please please update soon.

Many Hugs Byffytess 



Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying the story! Have no worries; there will definitely be more D/s.

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