Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 4: Where Do You Think You're Going!

Just found this story and see that you wrote it last year.  Any chance you'll write more?  Interesting premise.

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Author's Response:

Thanks for the response but I don't read or write B/J fanfic any more.  I just drop by once in a while to see if anyone left a response.   Well, thanks for the review.  I'm preoccupied with other things at the moment, however, I hope to write again, if for no other reason but to finish all that I've left incomplete.   Thanks again.... HAV FUN!

Reviewer: Jayne (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 4: Where Do You Think You're Going!

Pretty wild AU so far, but entertaining!  You really ought to finish it!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the response but I don't read or write B/J fanfic any more.  I just drop by once in a while to see if anyone left a response.   Well, thanks for the review  (as well as the encouragement).  However,  I'm preoccupied with other things at the moment, but I hope to write again, if for no other reason but to finish all that I've left incomplete.   Thanks again.... HAV FUN!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 4: Where Do You Think You're Going!

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Ty, more to come LOL... keep enjoying.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: Where Do You Think You're Going!

Great chapter. Any snippets soon of why Brian is a homophobe? Parents that way... why is Brian and Justin's last name different,.....

Author's Response:

Brian is just your average homophobic straight male, as well as probably some influences from Jack Kinney (I don't think Brian particularly hate gays... I think he's just uncomfortble with them).   And then again he may have also been influenced by Joan's religious teachings as well.  Also in this universe Brian was not an abused kid, which means he felt less pain growing up so therefore, may not be as sensitive to the plight and pain of others like the abused child Brian was in the QAF Verson (that Brian's abuse made him more sensitive to the atrocities of others... that might not be the case with this Brian).

QAF Brian is 'gay' so in a sense he was part of a minority that made him more sensitive to others minorities and injustices.  However, Brian in this Universe is a highly successful, heterosexual, white male and the world is his oyster, he may not be as sensitive to others as the gay Brian.  And he thinks homosexuality is choice... that U can easily go the other way just making up your mind to do so, and if you have problems U have an illness.  However, recall that Justin told Ben that his brother does have a good heart... so he does have at least that much in common with his QAF/gay counterpart.

You'd learn how Justin and Brian are biologically related in a later conversation between Justin and Ben.

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 4: Where Do You Think You're Going!

I like how Justin keeps getting out of the house. I'm still afraid of Brian's reaction to ben being gay. I wonder how he'll find out. I hope Ben and Justin get together soon!

Author's Response: Hi, Ashley ty 4 taking so much interest in the story... U should have your answers soon lol.... stay w/me and above all HAV FUN Always!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Yearning

OHHH DIS KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER EACH TIME GREAT CHAP UR DOING A GREAT THAT NEGATIVE SOME1 GAVE U IS BULLSHIT

I LOVEEE IT

UPDATE SOON PLZ LOL

HUGS AND KISSES



Author's Response:

And hugs/kisse 2 U 2.  I know I don't have to tell U how much your kind words mean to me after the review that came just before yours.  However, don't worry about me, I've gotten very rude readers leave me some not so nice reviews before.  I have to say though that's is the nastiest/meanest/rudest to date and my response to that reader was the most frank I've ever been. 

Regardless of how mean/rude/insensitive of an review I usually try to dignify the readers response by defending my work while being sensitive to the readers difference in taste (or opinion) but I didn't see any way of dignifying that reader's response that was no doubt straight out nasty of that individual. 

Ty again 4 liking my story and taking the time to cheer me up... It was so kind.  Enjoy the story, have Fun, love 2 entertain U. 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2008 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 4: Where Do You Think You're Going!

I DONT LIKE THIS

ITS A FUKING PIECE OF CRAP



Author's Response:

To take the time to be that RUDE... U have a serious mental problem... go get yourself so therapy. 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 4: Where Do You Think You're Going!

Poor Justin couldn't even go to his show! What a prick Brian is!  Everyone is so connected in this story and they have no idea. Gonna make for some very interesting drama once those revelations come out.

Author's Response:    LOL< it's going to be one big mess!  Hav fun stay/me luv 2 entert. U.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2008 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 3: Guys And Dolls (Pulsating Hearts)

I am interested in this new story. I am looking forward as to how you get Ben and Justin together. *g* Looking forward for more.

Author's Response:   Can U imagine the mess?  Brian's a homophobe his brother and best friend are gay and about to end up a couple and he's in love with a lesbian stripper.  

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2008 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 3: Guys And Dolls (Pulsating Hearts)

omg that disturbing the whole brian lindsay pussy thing ewwwwwwwg

nice update soon



Author's Response:

But U still w/me... great!  thx 4 commenting... luv it!  Have fun.

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 3: Guys And Dolls (Pulsating Hearts)

I am just a bit obssessed with Gale/Brian(bet you did not know that! heh heh!)...my best friend was getting sick of me...i trailed her all over the gay village following the lookalikes!...they were all tall,brunette and slim, one had the scruffy look, the other two were very similar to the clean cut Gale,one was more like Ashton K, but their smiles were different and of course they were not as fit as he is-who is?

Anyway, this story is a good one, you know I love Ben too...brilliant idea...and strangely I am enjoying a straight homophobic Brian---hmmm! 



Author's Response: Thx U so much w/that.   Strait, ho-phobic Brian... it's is just some many things U can do with the boys.  I'm trying to do a little something 4 all varieties or tastes... SHOT ME IF I EVER WRITE 2 STORIES EXACTLY ALIKE!

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 3: Guys And Dolls (Pulsating Hearts)

Hey girl!  I am loving this and as for your comment about Gale...I am so with you!  Great job! I just got back from Manchester Pride-spent the whole weekend there and am totally exhausted but not too exhausted to read:)...spotted 2 or 3 Gale lookalikes heh heh...a gal can dream can't she?!



Author's Response: U're KILLING ME!  U mean there R people on the planet that look like him?  Hav fun... glad U like this one.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Guys And Dolls (Pulsating Hearts)

Wow, you made Waspy Lindsey a stripper! LOL!! Talk about OOC! Well, you went to the edge of the shock value cliff on this one. I ain't mad at you =) So, I feel a Lindsey (wow, I like men) and Brian set up in the works.

Author's Response: The Lindsay/Brian thing should be a lot of FUN remember Lindsay is still w/Mel in this universe, and Mel is Brian and Justin's  cousin in this A.U., and Brian's a homophobe too...  you can imagine the fireworks tha will explode there.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 2: At The Hop!

How sweet! But man, wait until they find out they are talking about the same guy.

Hope Justin makes it home before Brian or he's gonna have some 'splanin to do! =) I'm really liking this Ben/Justin pairing, sounds promising. 



Author's Response: Thx Kat, Hav fun.  yeah, isn't that something they talking about the same man and have no idea.  Most likely Brian never told Ben his little brothers last name and he's probably assuming it's Kinney like Brian.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2008 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 3: Guys And Dolls (Pulsating Hearts)

Ditto the GH setiments.

I'm okay w/ the storyline. Really liking the Ben/Justin meeting, that was great. Wondering what is up w/ Brian that he is a homophob... still think 'me thinks he doth protest too much'



Author's Response: Hi, alys....I'm glad U like the J/Ben meeting.  Hav Fun, ty 4 commenting regularly.

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2008 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 3: Guys And Dolls (Pulsating Hearts)

Okay so Gale Harold showing up in my bed...yeah, not gonna kick him out! But seeing Brian Kinney dreaming about pussy is almost enough to make me sick. I really like ben and justin though I really hope ben comes to see justins show!

Author's Response: LOL, Ashley.... Just glad 2 here U didn't run for the hills LOL.  Ty.  Have Fun.

Reviewer: ms. azland (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2008 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Yearning

any chance of incest here??? JK, love the brother plot- it is(hopefully) just a different bond between the guys. nice to see something new, i'll be look'n for more!

Author's Response:

  OMG!  I LOVE U!!!!  U GUYS NEVER SEISE TO AMAZE ME!  "any chance of incest here???".... I'd take that one to the grave with me LOL!  I'll being adding at least 2 more chaps before the day is out.

Hav FUN... I hope U enjoy... YOU DEFINITELY JUST MADE MY DAY!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2008 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Yearning

This is great. I'm not a fan of stright!Brian simply cause I think it makes him too OOC, but I love your stories too much to care anymore :P I can't wait for an update!



Author's Response: Even straight I'll try my best to make him the 'ass-hole' we all know and love LOL.  Have fun, and your comment is so flattering.  Thank U so much.

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2008 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Yearning

I really like the idea for this story! I can't wait for Ben and Justin to meet. Ben/Justin is actually my favorite pairing...shhh don't tell!

Author's Response: Ahhh, another J/Ben okay.... enjoy.  Hav Fun.  Welcome aboard, Ashley.

Reviewer: Kay (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2008 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Yearning

AAAHHH Someone dedicated a story to me that is so cool and a really good story at that Yay.

I could so see Brian as a homophobe since he was sorta a heterophobe on the show.

I also love Brian and Ben friendships (that stay only friendships not to knock the b/b lover out their plus bonus no whiny mikey with the but your my best friend line around)

 



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm so glad U like it Kay.  "I could so see Brian as a homophobe.... heterophobe on show... "  nice observation there.  I hope U enjoy thru out the story.  I really didn't think I had the story in me, but I couldn't stop thinking about it since U suggested and I think I've come up with a pretty interesting one.  It won't be long before the next update. LOL> glad I could accomodate  U.  Hav Fun.

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2008 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Yearning

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh my goddddddd okay this chap is grate it really is wow plz update soon its funny our brian straight lol good one i hope not for long but i guess even if he does come out later in the story u wont pair him up wit jus how come there bothers what the hell happened there

Author's Response:

I've got quite few things planned 4 this story.  Hang in there w/me and hav fun.  Thx 4 commenting.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2008 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Yearning

Lovein the story. Amazing how close Ben and Brian are that 1) Ben has kept his sexuality a secret 2) that in 3yrs he's not met Justin. Hmmm what makes Brian a homophobe?. scared of his real sexuality?

Can't wait to see what happens....



Author's Response: Hi, alys glad 2 c u w/me on this 1... wouldn't B as much fun w/out U.  Hav Fun.  But I would think any 'straight' son of Jack Kinney would be a homophobe LOL.

Reviewer: sheka73 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2008 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Yearning

You know I must be a gluten for punishment because I just cannot stop reading your fics. I dislike fics without a Brian and Justin ending but for some reason I cannot pass yours by. So that says a lot about how great I think your stories are. Keep up the good work; however, please write another B/J fic soon. :)

Author's Response:

OMG!  Your comment is FLATTERY spelled in all caps.  I'm loving U so much at the moment.  Thank U 4 taking the time to write that beautiful comment.  

 There are still chapters I'm working on adding to the B/J cherished II story.  And I have others in my archives that I will load sometime in the future that was once posted here but not finished yet such as Bodyguard and No Pardon, Sleeping Beauty (I wanna hard Your Hand)... I have every intention of finishing and reloading them.

Ty, again .... and Hav fun!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2008 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Yearning

WOW, that explains why Brian and Justin can't be together! I'm liking this so far! How many of your stories am I reading now? =)

I'm guessing Ben and Justin might meet in the next chapter??



Author's Response:     U guessed it!  And I'm so glad U aboard Kat!  Hav Fun!

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