Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2019 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 40: It's Personal (Final Chapter)
good one
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2019 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 31: Nothing Like The Dream
wow now I m confused
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2013 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 40: It's Personal (Final Chapter)
Love the ending!
Author's Response:
Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2012 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 31: Nothing Like The Dream
No, no, no.......you better give Brian some love or I'm gonna protest.
Author's Response: Brian, will get some love, LOL! hav Fun. Thanks again for commenting.
Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2012 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 30: Last Delivery Of The Day
Oh yeah, I like it!
Author's Response: Thanks you so much. Glad U R enjoying so much. REad on.! Sincerely, Deloers.
Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2012 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 29: Cherish The Moment
WTH???? I never saw that coming....damn your good!
Author's Response: Hi, Speedy. Haven't had anyone comment on this one in the long Time. However, I wrote this back when I was really ameuterish, so kick me if it get kinda of crazy at the time. LOL. But thank you so much for reading it and and taking the time to express you're enjoying.
Have fun sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2012 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 40: It's Personal (Final Chapter)
Very cruel cliffhanger ending there. Good thing for me I already know where to find the sequel. See you there! TAG
Author's Response: LOL! I'm so glad U enjoy this. However, part 3 people said is confusinig. I hope it doesn't make you too crazy. Just keep in mind that when Justin that the story is both dream and reality. It dream when Brian has memory loss, it realiity whenever Brian is at Justin bedside in the hospital coaxing him to wake up from the coma. And, then when he finally wakes on in the last near the end of the story, that is real.
I apologize for that but I was rather amatuerish when I wrote this story.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2012 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 32: Life's Many Surprises
Very, very twisty plot here - I love it! TAG
Author's Response: OMG! So many good memories... that boy friend announcement plot thickens LOL1
Thanks so much for that, Tagsit - sincerely. Delores
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2012 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 31: Nothing Like The Dream
Noooooo! Justin can't have a boyfriend! I can't take it. :(. TAG
Author's Response: Oh, wow! Tagsit, You've bringing back so great memories. I recall a lot of readers couldn't take it...neither could they guess who the boy friend was LOL! Surprise, huh?
Thanks again, Delores
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2012 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 30: Last Delivery Of The Day
Oh yay! It all worked out! TAG
Author's Response: Last delivery of the day... Justin was the only one delivering. LOL
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2012 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 29: Cherish The Moment
I think I must have gotten some of those wierd drugs fro Dr. Patel - I'm completely confused. Brian was the one in the coma? I'd better keep reading so I can figure this out. Great twist you threw in here! TAG
Author's Response: I apologize for that. I definitley GOOFED BIG here because a lot of readers complained of being confused. But just in case you didn't figure it out. Justin became comatosed when he had the truck accident and Brian returned from the earthquake to him that very night. So, Brian was never lost in earthquake and lost his memory, all that was Justin's coma.
The entire story Cherish 1 took place while Brian was comatose. Nothing that happened in one was real. Even Brian waking up from the coma from Brian in the coma. All about Brian losing his memory and being lost for a month inside the earthquake debris was all Justin's comatose dream. Howver, Justin thought it was all real, he didn't know until Ben told him.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2012 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 14: Disappear Off The Face Of The Earth
Justin has an evil twin? Didn't see that coming. TAG
Author's Response: Yah, ain't that something. Even Brian couldn't tell them apart. HMMM!
Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2012 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 11: Britin
Such tough living conditions. Do you think Brian will be able to meet the terms of their agreements? Hell yes! TAG
Author's Response: OMG! You got me cracking my sides out with laughter. It's been so long ago since I wrote and read this I was thinking at first 'what agreement' and then I quickly remember.... and I couldn't stop laughing. Yep! We all know that's an agrement Brian can hold up to (no need for Justin to even bind him to it). That is so automatic.
Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2012 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: Get Well Soon!
Okay, guess I'm hooked. On to the next story in the series! TAG
Author's Response: Oh, I remember writing this first chapter, it was so much fun to writing about Brian pampering Justin.
Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: lvsHP23 (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2012 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 33: Obsessing
Must say that I enjoy your writing. I loved the COBDWM series. I enjoyed the first of this series, but this one has just gotten weird for me. What seems inconsistent to me is what happens pre "Brian wakes up from his coma". Typically if part of a story takes place as a dream or coma hallucinations, the story is only told from the "dreamers" perspective. Since they are dreaming we should only know what they experience, see, hear, etc. Since the story is told from the omnipresent viewpoint, the waking up seems a bit awkward to me, a little bit forced. I hope this is helpful in future writing, for you. I really do like your writing otherwise.
Author's Response: Hi, LvsHP23. First of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH for taking the time to comment, and I always get so thrilled when someone is commenting on one of my stories for the first time. Welcome, and I hope you read more of my stories and continue to enjoy.
Secondly, I accept all your constructive criticism you wrote here, as RIGHT on the MARK. And I would like you to know , that this story is one of my first attempts at authoring, and I was EXTREMELY amateurish at the time. If you read some my the more recently publishings you will see a significant difference (and understand what I mean).
And, as a rule to me I am always opened to constructive criticism such as you left here. So, the answer is yes to your question: This does help my future writings. So, if you do decide to read anything else I wrote here (especially stores in prograss), I would love to read your HONEST input... value it!
Thanks again for commenting.... Sincerely, Brianawriter ~ real name Delores
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2008 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 40: It's Personal (Final Chapter)
I sooo loved that story and though I´m sad that it ended for now the last line gave me hope that there will be a sequel. Now, enjoy your break. Hugs, Sunny
Author's Response: Thank U so much Sunny 4 taking the time to express that you like the story. And yes, you're right there will be another sequel. See you in November.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 40: It's Personal (Final Chapter)
Wow! I know there's gonna be a sequel to this. What an ending! Loved the last line from Brian and looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: I so glad people like those last lines, LOL.... but I need a break.... C U guys in November, I don't think I'm doing any more posting before then. It was so much FUN tho.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 39: Good News
OK, Justin should NOT turn the job down because Kip is an assholebrat! I hope that Brian will talk some sense into Justin. Kip just proved that he could care less about Justin and his well being!
Author's Response: Poor Justin is trying so hard to be a good boy friend he can't seem to make the distinction bet. how Brian regards his talent vs. how Kip regards it.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 40: It's Personal (Final Chapter)
Brian's last statements were amazing! Suprised me (happily)Can't wait to see TBoSVS! Hopefully now that Kip is gone, Justin rethink interviewing w/ Ryder unless Brian starts Kinnetic asap!
Author's Response: "Brian's last statements were amazing!...." Thank U so much Alys you made my evening with that comment. Thank you.
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 29: Cherish The Moment
nice one...too damn good...you bad woman!!!!
Author's Response: Hey there,woman... boy! do I miss U. Glad U like it. LOL...
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 40: It's Personal (Final Chapter)
Great ending. Looking forward for your next story.
Author's Response: ThX U so much Lynn (you've been an incredible audience) .... but I am truly taking a break now. See you in November.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 38: Compromising Position
Now THAT is gonna mess up Justin big time! He was already obessed with Brian and now he's just witnessed the man jerking off and calling his name. Wonder how long those two can hold off now.
Author's Response: Itsa MESS LOL! Hav Fun Kat, and TU sooo much 4 commenting regularly.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 37: His Cheating Heart
I knew Brian would catch Kip! In his freaking office. And he hit on Brian again. I hope Brian does watch Kip carefully because who knows what this guy is capable of. Also if Justin does get hurt, he'll feel guilty because he knew Kip had that violent streak.
Author's Response: Having fun.... read on my, Dear Kat. Adding a new update shortly.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 36: Boy Friend Problems
Kip is a jerk! He thinks he has this perfect plan, but he'll either get caught by Justin or Brian. I hope he doesn't try to hit on Brian again! Justin needs to figure out what he wants. He obviously is starting to change his mind on how he feels about Kip (thank goodness!).
Author's Response: Jus, is one confused kid LOL!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 35: Do I Love You?
I'm glad Brian let Justin take care of him. That was what Brian needed.
Author's Response: LOL! I should be updating again soon, hav fun!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 34: I Want To Show You Something
Brian and Justin running through the house was cute. They are really connected with each other, although Justin is hesitant to admit it. He's falling for Brian obviously.
Author's Response: 'Brian and Justin running through the house was cute"... yeah, don't mean to toot my own horn... but I couldn't stop reading that scenario myself. Especially when Justin felt describe them as five-year-olds.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 33: Obsessing
Nice to see that Justin can't get Brian off his mind either.
Author's Response: Amen lO!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 32: Life's Many Surprises
Oh no you didn't! KIP! Wow, ok didn't see that one coming. Well, this makes things very interesting.
Author's Response: Kat, dear, I amazed U didn't C it coming I tho if anyone did U'd be the one.... have fun dear. Will updat again soon.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2008 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 35: Do I Love You?
Michael is such a dick. *shakes head* Always barging in and interfering as usual. *sighs* Brian and Justin can't catch a break, can't they? I hope Brian and Justin run into each other soon. Great chapter.
Author's Response: TY, Lynn... continue 2 hav fun, dear.... should be update again very soon.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2008 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 34: I Want To Show You Something
Brian deserved to be loved and Justin is the perfect man for him. I hope Brian and Justin get together soon. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hi, Lynn, glad 2 hear from U dear, hav fun.... Let's keep our hearts crossed 4 these 2 lol;;; will update again very soon.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2008 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 32: Life's Many Surprises
Another twist in the story...hmmmm. Can't wait what will happen. Thanks and more please
Author's Response: Hi, Thess, I'm glad U enjoying the new twist LOL! More coming Up very soon!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 31: Nothing Like The Dream
Oh no! I hope Brian doesn't give up so soon. Its a challenge and since when has Brian Kinney ever backed away from a challenge and not gone after what he wanted. This is just a set back, he'll get his mojo back in gear =)
Author's Response: HI, Kat, It's a riot LOL! Wait until U meet da boy friend LOL!
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 30: Last Delivery Of The Day
Oh! So everything was a dream to Brian. He never did meet Justin until the very end. Great ending, looking forward for the next story. *g*
Author's Response: Thank U soooo much Lynn, sooo glad U liked the story. Happy 2 Entertain U; now I'm off 2 the next adventure!
Reviewer: Robotchick (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 30: Last Delivery Of The Day
I enjoyed this fiction so much. Thank you for taking the time to write it.
Author's Response: Thank U 4 taking the time to comment, U don't know how glad I am when I see a new person who never comment before on my story comment 4 the first time. Take U, and pls 4 given me if I mistaken about U not commenting before. I'm soooo glad U enjoy the story and it was my pleasure to entertain U.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 30: Last Delivery Of The Day
WOW! It was a dream! Now Brian can have the relationship he wants with Justin without all the tragedy and will actually cherish it. Loved it!
Author's Response: Awwwww, Kat TY so much for the way you expressed that : "Now Brian can have the relationship he wants with Justin without all the tragedy and will cherish" I love the way you so get it all the time! Thank U, thank U, thank U, Thank U. I still way U r a writer just waiting for it to burst out of you.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 30: Last Delivery Of The Day
and we love your beautiful story, looking fwd to more
Author's Response: Awwwww! Thank U. I loved writing it. Like Ben told Brian.... "THAT KIND OF THING CHANGES YOU!"
Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 30: Last Delivery Of The Day
mmm.... ok, this is much better, it's my idea or you have a sequel for this story? I'm very happy they end up together and brian look like he change a lot. I love your story, both of them, were so passionate and romantic. was great read it. thank and kisses
Author's Response: Thank U Kayitt,U see in the end all the guilt and death was riped a way. Brian and Ben got Mikey back and eventually might end up getting Hunter. Justin got his family back. And Rebecca got her husband back.
Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 29: Cherish The Moment
I can't believe this, I'm crying, really this is debastating, just can't be, just when they gone be happy... =( please make them be together again... please, please. kisses
Author's Response: U have to read the last chapter my, Dear, TRUST ME, don't be of little faith.... Justin and Brian aren't and neither am I.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 28: Cuddled
thanks and more please..
Author's Response: You welcome but it's not over yet. Still have a few more chaps to go.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2008 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 27: Show Me Your Face
Aw. Such a sweet chapter. Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: More coming up soon. Thx Lynn 4 always taking the time 2 comment... it is so much FUN!
Reviewer: maddy_snape (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 27: Show Me Your Face
That last line was so sweet... I'm really glad that Brian and Justin are reunited - I just hope you haven't got any more trial and tribulations planned for them!
Author's Response: Hi, Maddy_Snape so glad 2 C U R still w/me..... thank U so much 4 taking time to comment... Hav Fun.
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 27: Show Me Your Face
sweet...thanx.
Author's Response: Ohhh, Yeahhh! And to think Brian was so scared
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 27: Show Me Your Face
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! That Brian/Justin connection is stronger than anything in the world! LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response: U said it LOL!
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2008 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 27: Show Me Your Face
Thank you, thank you!!
Author's Response: Welcome! Welcome!
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2008 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 26: Still Dreaming
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Here's more 4 U, darling ty so much 4 always taking the time to comment... I can't express my gratitude Enuff! Hav FUN!
Author's Response: Here's more 4 U, darling ty so much 4 always taking the time to comment... I can't express my gratitude Enuff! Hav FUN!
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 26: Still Dreaming
Aaaaarrggghhhh! How could you leave us hanging like this!...? This story is brilliant and just gets better...update soon please! later x
Author's Response: Hey! Girlfriend, I missed the HELL out of YOU! Here's your next chapter Enjoy... good to communicate w/U again. And TY so much 4 the beautiful comment.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 26: Still Dreaming
You're trying to kill me aren't you? LOL! I wondered if Justin would think he was dreaming. So did Justin say "What's your name?" he finally asked, "And why don't you show me your face?" out loud? OMGosh, if he did and Brian answers...OMG!
Author's Response: hey! It's has double quotation marks and it's not in italic? (words spoken out loud) LOL.... enjoy, Ty Kat.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 25: Serenity
whoo hoo!
Author's Response: Heyyyy! Sjmpets3, hav fun enjvy.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 25: Serenity
I can't wait to see how Justin reacts when he wakes up. I'm sure he'll recognize Brian's voice immediately. Nice to see another update so quickly...you're spoiling me =)
Author's Response: "Nice to see another update so quickly...' and here's another 4 U. Enjvy... ty, Kat.
Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 25: Serenity
Man...you sure can draw it out. You TEASE! :) Knowing you, I am somewhat fearing what happens when Jus wakes up. I have a feeling I shouldn't anticipate a happy reunion. BTW: I absolutely love that you post chapters so frequently! You are the best!
Author's Response: U R the BEST 2 (hugs/kisses)! TY so much, I look 4ward 2 Your reviews as much as U look 4wd to the updates. Stay w/me and above all HAV FUN, lol!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Love So Dear
I KNEW it! Ben was the connection! :) I'm so glad they now know where Justin is. Go get your Sunshine! Also thankful Rebecca did the right thing and called Brian. I do feel badly for her.
Author's Response: Hey, there Kat Girl! Thanks so much 4 commenting as always, and thank U 4 letting me know that I was successful in making readers feel 4 Rebecca. Here's the next update... Hav Fun! Read on....
Reviewer: Alice (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Love So Dear
Wow...I just have to know what is going to happen next. The suspence and the story :D are great! I can't wait to see how this is solved ^^ Instant Fav!
Author's Response: ty so much Alice 4 taking the time to comment. It's deeply appreciated. Enjvy the story LUV 2 entertain U. Here's your next update... HAV FUN!
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Love So Dear
thank you for updating soon. Brian can now see his Justin
Author's Response: Hi, Thess TY so much 4 taking the time to comment. And I'm so glad 2 C U R still w/me Have fun! Luv 2 entertain U
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 23: Where Is He?
Hope Ben can help Brian find Justin. Great chapter. Sad that wifey didn't look at the bag herself. She made the same assumptions as Lins and Mel.
Author's Response: Here's the next chapter w/your answer, my dear alys... enjvy. lOL
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 23: Where Is He?
YES, a photo!! I hope that gets things rolling.
Author's Response: LOL, U guessed it!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Voice
How was Justin able to hear Brian's voice? Did he pick up the cell phone? I'm glad he recognized it, goes to show that no matter what, they will always feel connected.
Author's Response: No he did not pick up the phone: When Rebecca found him, he was roaming and searching around aimlessly like he was desperately looking for something. "Are you looking for something specific?" Then he answered her back 'the voice; the man with the voice.' So, most likely when he first came into the room he probably came in on the tail end of Brian leaving a message to his cell, so Brian's voice is probably all he heard, and did not know the source of the voice. (if you recall the maid put his things on the shelf in the closet... so he heard the voice in the distance). Keep in mind he takes meds, and he's suffering from amnesia; he's not too stable, so when he heard the voice his mind probably couldn't process the source of the voice, so rather than looking for a phone he looked for the person instead... he was looking for the man in his dreams.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 23: Where Is He?
thanks for updating soon!! hope find brian finds his justin ASAP.
Author's Response: U R welcome stay w/me HAV FUN
Reviewer: sarahrei (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 23: Where Is He?
Ahh...Now we are getting somewhere! Well, at least we are closer to reuniting them. Heartache! You sure know how to write it!
Author's Response: 'Thank U so much Sarah Loll stay with me.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Voice
Poor Justin. He knows the voice is Brian's. *sighs* Brian and Justin are in so much pain. I really am hoping the boys reunite soon. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thx U Lynn, hav fun. Luv 2 entertain U guys.
Reviewer: sarahrei (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2008 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 1: Get Well Soon!
OH CRAP! When you say things like that I get scared! :) I have been out of town with no internet access - torture! So, as soon as I was back online, I caught up on my reading. I "cherish" this story! :) I don't necessarily want the story to end...only the suspense. You do it to me all the time! Err...
Author's Response: And i CHERISH U, U know that LOL! Hav Fun Sarah.... Luv entertaining and TORTURING U.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 20: Empty
omfg! i am angry and speechless.
Author's Response: Love U Dear, Let's all get angry for Ours boys! Maybe the combined emotions will bring them back together again! The more pain a couple who really loves each other endure the happier and the stronger the bond will be when they finally reunited.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 20: Empty
Brian listen to your instincts! Use the force Luke! (oops, wrong story!). I hope he follows up and it ends up this will bring him to Justin. I think Ben will be the link, he's the connection to the real Justin...although he doesn't know it yet. Mrs. Armstrong notices something is off about her "husband", but she'll ignore it because she wants him home. She's already gotten a few clues (A blood type, he can't play instruments but can draw). Something tells me this chick will want to live in the land of Denial.
Author's Response: "I think Ben will be the link, he's the connection to the real Justin..." Well, provided the Armstrongs that Ben worked for are indeed Terrence and Becky, had the body been there, most likely Ben wuld have looked at face and most thought it was Terrence right away.... he's never seen Justin. Ben wuld of then led Brian to Rebecca.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 19: Old and New Wounds
I thought that was our Ben with the Armstrongs! Wow, this is getting trippy. I'm glad Ben is there for Brian and that Brian is allowing him to be. Not surprised at all that Justin would leave everything to Brian.
Author's Response: Thax so much, Kat, seems like U the only one commenting that made the Ben connection with the Armstrongs. Good catch. Hav fun!
Reviewer: sarahrei (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2008 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 19: Old and New Wounds
Hmm... I am hoping this gets resolved soon. I am SUPER happy that Bri isn't going to find physical comfort with Ben. I'm hoping Jus figures out what is up soon before too much damage is done.
Author's Response: Dear, Sarah, boy do I miss you, where did you run off to? And dear we haven't parted ways so long that you haven't forget my WARP sense of humor with that said, "I am hoping this gets resolved soon..." Do you have a plane to catch LOL! Luv U girl, have Fun love entertaining U.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 19: Old and New Wounds
now before i read anymore, tell me this is a b/j love story where they do end up together and not a b/b story where they end up together. please.
Author's Response: If you look at the summaries for all the story I write here whenever it's other than a B/J union I write it in bold inside the summary who is being paired w/Jus or Bri. This summary pretty much reads sequel to cherished so all the information is in the original story pertains to this. However, it this sequal the category reads; Justin/Brian (not other). This is definitely a B/J story.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2008 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 19: Old and New Wounds
please update ASAP. Brian will know that the dead body is not his Justin....
Author's Response: 'Brian will know that dead body is not his Justin..." You have me rolling on the floor w/ that statment LOL. Remember though when Brian saw him at the mall he didn't know he wasn't Justin until Justin actually showed up.
Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 19: Old and New Wounds
GOD!!! how things go so wrong, poor brian this is killing him and justin with out memory is so frustrating. please make thing go right =( kisses
Author's Response: thank U so much Kayitt (and kisses 2 U 2).... HAV FUN luv entertaining U guys!
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2008 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 18: Wet Dreams
please,, please don't make it tooooo long for Justin and Brian to be together again. I can't take it!!!! thanks
Author's Response: OMG! Fate can be a real B... can't she LOL!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 18: Wet Dreams
will they ever be together again? this is so sad.
Author's Response: Well, they are both still alive.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 18: Wet Dreams
AWW! They are dreaming about each other. I wonder if Brian still feels that connection to Justin and will evenutally realize in his heart that Justin isn't gone.
Author's Response: We'll see LOL!
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2008 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 17: Aching Hearts
Poor Brian. He thinks he lost Justin forever. He needs his friends now more than ever. Please fix this. I don't know how Brian and Justin can reunite now. Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Have Fun Lynn. Next chapter coming up in a few moments.
Author's Response: Have Fun Lynn. Next chapter coming up in a few moments.
Author's Response: Have Fun Lynn. Next chapter coming up in a few moments.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 17: Aching Hearts
I knew this was going to kill Brian! And now Justin has amnesia too. Another test for our beloved couple. I wonder if, when Brian sees the body, he'll check for the bracelet?! So heartbreaking!
Author's Response: LOL, thx so much Kat, enjvy. Hav Fun
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 16: Rebecca Armstrong
Its because HE'S JUSTIN! Allergic to every med on EARTH! I knew it was him and not Terrence. On to the next chapter... =)
Author's Response: Read on my dear lOL
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 17: Aching Hearts
no no no no!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I HEAR U LOUD AND CLEAR! Let's hope Fate does.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2008 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 17: Aching Hearts
What a twist. Hopefully Rebecca will check her 'husband's' things soon. How very remise of the hospital not to check for ID.
Author's Response: I guess because he came in the hospital with such a demanding woman, they took her word for almost every but the 'blood type' . Thank God the doctors knew better than that. "Hopefully Rebecca will check her 'husband's' things soon." Umm, keep in mind that Rebecca and Terrence was also madly in love.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2008 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 17: Aching Hearts
Iam crying and crying. So sad but i hope it will not take long for Justin and Brian back to each other, please. Thanks and more update please.
Author's Response: I'm crying with you.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 15: On The Same Train
Oh no! Brian is not going to handle this well. I have a feeling I know what happened, but I'll wait to see how this goes.
Author's Response: LOL. Hav Fun.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 14: Disappear Off The Face Of The Earth
Uh-oh! Justin's got a twin. Hmm, wonder what's up with that?
Author's Response: LOL... read on dear. Hav Fun!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Natural (If You Loved Me You Would)
First of all, welcome back...good to see you! Secondly...OMGosh, you're continuing the story!! YEAH! I saw this last night and was so happy to see you add more chapters.
Author's Response: Hi, there Kat... thx 4 the wc. Have fun! I enjoy this one so much I just had to add on to it.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2008 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 15: On The Same Train
Poor Brian. Now that Deb is going to break the news to Brian that Justin is supposedly dead. I have a feeling that that Justin is still alive and mistaking being Rebecca's husband. Looking forward in what happens next. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hi, Lynn, miss U (hugs/kisses). Glad U R aboard... enjoy.... another update very soon.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 15: On The Same Train
how could you do that to brian. ok so hopefully it's terrance in the morgue and not justin. but brian was so happy. couldn't you continue to let him be? i'm disappointed. the other three chapters were a celebration and now this. not fair.
Author's Response: Oh, Sjmp... I luv U, I luv U LOL! Next update coming soon LOL!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 11: Britin
That was HOT! They were finally able to make amor! So sorry to see this story end, but what a great ending! Loved it!!!
Author's Response: The story continues.... I just enjoy this one so much I couldn't stop writing it. However, it gets a bit eerie beyond this point. HAV FUN
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 10: Miniature Brian
Good for Brian sticking to his word about Gus!
Author's Response: Yeah, Brian's has finally grown up and is very well behaved.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 9: Inkwell
WOW! I loved it! Brian finally admiting to Justin how he feels and telling him about the house was so perfect. Too cute about putting the pillow in between them. How funny that Brian was going to fire Justin over the inkwell! As long as he has Justin in his life that man will be just fine.
Author's Response: Hi, how did I over look responding to this one. LOL>
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2008 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 11: Britin
Very hot chapter.
Author's Response: Tu... glad U had fun. Off to the next adventure now. C U around.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2008 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 11: Britin
loved the Gus visit. How the boys even flew to Canada with him. Justin is a sneaky lil devil, 'that the condition of you living here' scene & dialog. Excellant.
Author's Response: Thank U so much for that ... Justin is a sneaky... devil... condition for Bri liv... U MADE ME LAUGH BIG TIME WITH THIS ONE. But Brian don't seem to mind any. He definitely won't have the energy to hang out in Babylon any more if he has to bang Justin every night, all night.
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2008 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 11: Britin
I sure am glad you had fun writing this and I surely enjoyed reading it. All I can say is thanks for writing this and sharing with us. Nice ending. I am just a little sorry that Hunter wasn’t around to see it. Then again, that was the story line. Thanks again! DavidR
Author's Response: Thank U so much DavidR for letting me know U liked the story. Wow I am too sorry Hunter wasn't around but he told Justin that his positive attitude would lift him way-y-y up one day, so in a sense I think Hunter knows that Justin made it okay.
Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 11: Britin
love it, after all they have to live this is the perfect ending, brian was soooooo sweet with him and pacient. was so fany that justin come two time before have brian inside jijiji, but completly understandable =) thank for this story it was beatiful. send you kisses from my land (chile) I hope you can understand that I wrote. bye
Author's Response: Can I understand what you wrote? You write better english than I do. Thank U so much for saying my story was beautiful.... I love entertaining you. Thank you for taking the time to comment. And thanks for all the (chile) kisses, here's (U.S.A) kisses to you too. Thank you.
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 1: Get Well Soon!
I just feel your story could have been even better if you had gotten a good beta. I know that my stories did. I really love the idea and the story itself, though.
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much edom for getting back to me I appreciate it. I sort of suspect you'd say that (readers are always suggesting that 2 me) however, I worked with more than 1 beta and I did not find it a pleasant experience for several reasons (I found it stressful, time consuming and there was a few other problems to the point it took all the fun out of posting here). So I just decided I'm not trying to win a putlizer here, not being paid.... so why stress myself out.... and then I remembered my objective for reading/writing here in the first place and that is JUST HAVE FUN! Thx again 4 for getting back to me and I'm very glad that (that) was all it was.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 11: Britin
that was a great ending. the chapter before with gus was charming.
Author's Response: Tu soooo much sjmpets3, I soo glad U enjuy I loved writing it 4 U guys.... and now I'm off 2 the next adventure. Ty again 4 always taking the time 2 comment.
Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 11: Britin
That was a great ending!
Author's Response: Thank U, Sarah, glad U hung in there 2 the vry N w/me.
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 11: Britin
Good ending ;-)
Author's Response: Thank U.... but why just 3 stars.... Let me know (I wanna know).... any constructive criticism can only make a better writer out of me and entertain U better. Thx.... get back to me Thx.
Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 10: Miniature Brian
Wow...I am continually amazed. I don't know how you are able to write such great stories in such a short amount of time. I certainly appreciate the pace in which you post. Most authors take forever, but I can always count on you to brighten my day with a new chapter! I really liked that Jus and Gus met. Will there be more interaction between the two in the future? I would love to see that relationship build.
Author's Response: " ... I can always count on you to brighten my day with a new chapter!" that is so sweet and brights my day as well. I'm not knocking betas... but that's one reason I don't use one (although I've been told countless times I need one) I can't stand waiting forever get my updates out there. I hate making U guys wait. I mean U are such an incredible audience.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2008 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 9: Inkwell
Brian definitely has it bad for Justin. *g* Well I am glad that Brian told Justin that he loves him. Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Here's more for you,hon... stay w/me... Enjuy.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2008 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 9: Inkwell
Brian talks, albeit in a round about fashion, very Brianlike.
Author's Response: I'll telling U... giving the boy a house, firing him from his job and telling him he LOVES him all in the same breath (and while they both are in bed together).
Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 9: Inkwell
Hi, I love your fic, brian it's so damne perfect, it's so sweet. poor guys it's so long the wait.
Author's Response: U know the old saying about the longer U wait for it LOL. Thx U sooooo much 4 taking the time to comment.... I luv entertaining U guys! Hav Fun!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 9: Inkwell
aah, love the pure innocense of their talk. i can't wait for justin to be all healed. neither can they.
Author's Response: Niether can I LOL. Enjuy stay/w me... sooo glad 2 C U R. Thx.
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 1: Get Well Soon!
I am glad it not finished yet---I loves me some guiltridden Brian so I hope there is some more!
Author's Response: Somehow I accidently clicked the 'yes' for complete... I don't know how that happened... however, once in awhile if I find an error and need to fix it... I will click 'yes' to prevent the story from moving to the top of the list as the latest revised story.
Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 9: Inkwell
Wow. B definitely has it bad! I really like that he opened up to J and told him how he felt. That is refreshing! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.
Author's Response: Thank U, Sarah... and very glad 2 C U R still w/us. HAv Fun... luv 2 entertain U.
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 9: Inkwell
Very nice story...i enjoyed it. Thanks.
Author's Response: OH, It's not finished yet.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 8: I Give It To You
now all he has to do is tell that all to justin agian, when he's awake.
Author's Response: OHhhhhh, Yeahhhh!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 7: I Beg of You...
it became obvious to him at that moment how much he loves him (DUH! Of course you do!), however, does the young man love him (YEEEEEEEEES he does!) Good to see him admit this to himself and I hope that he will do things differently if Justin comes out of this ok. I imagine this will be the last time Brian goes out tricking! I'm glad he realized that what he did put Justin in danger.
Author's Response: 'I imagine this will be the last time Brian goes out tricking!' One might think so when U consider how indecisive he was trying to choz a trrick... and who did he choz in the end... I'm sure I don't have to spell it out LOL! That particular substitute might hold him over for a while.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 8: I Give It To You
WOW! Brian grew the hell up! Now I hope he repeats what he just admitted, once Justin wakes up. That was really really sweet and loving of him to say that! I hope Justin will be ok once he wakes up!
Author's Response: Hi, Kat... I'm so glad U r enjying hav fun. Luv 2 entertain U. 'That was really really sweet and loing of him to say that!' warms the heart /... doesn't it!
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2008 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 8: I Give It To You
Well I hope Justin wakes up soon. Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Hey! still w/me Hav Fun dear.
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: Get Well Soon!
To BM correction to your response, I meant to say: Justin only with seconds WITHOUT oxygen each time, not with oxygen.
Author's Response: !@#$$%%^&
Reviewer: BM (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2008 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 8: I Give It To You
Hey, I really enjoy reading this story. This last chapter did have a few areas that were a little confusing to me though. I wondered how long that Justin had been without oxygen? Is he going to suffer effects from that (ie. anoxic brain injury), where did they "cut" the infection out of? esp. if the stab wound is healing?
Author's Response: Thx U so Much BM for taking the time to ask, if U're confused others might be, here's your answers: One... Justin only went seconds with oxygen each time, for instance, Brian said to the EMS he revived Justin several times but it was only over a six minute period so that's an indication he each time it was just seconds and remember Brian stayed with him the entire time and monitored him so the second he stopped breathing Brian immediately go him breathing again... it's like swimming underwater you can go for a few minutes and then come up for air without causing yourself any damage, same goes for in the O.R. the moment he stopped breathing they revived him... no differently from a person swimiming or an angry child holding his/her breath to get his/her way... I've see children do alll the time (I used to do it when I was a child... as far as I know of I have no brain damage... however, in my case that might be debatable... LOL). Re infection/knife wound.... the doctor explained to Brian that the knife wound and infection are virtually independent of each other. He said they don't know for sure what caused the infection... it may have been the painkillers... it may not have been. Based on the doctor telling Brian the wound is close to healing we are to naturally assume that the doctor's did not make an incision in the exact place of the wound.... but somewhere near it (maybe)... could have been several inches away from the wound above, beneeath, or to the side of it. Thx again 4 giving me the opportunity to clear that up! Hav Fun Luv 2 entertain U.
Reviewer: Suze (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2008 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 8: I Give It To You
I really like this story and I hope that Justin is going to be alright soon. One little thing though. English is not my first language so I don't know if I'm wrong but I noticed a little mistake two or three times in the story. One example: Justin lied sleeping soundly in his bed in I.C.U. I think lied is the past of lie in the meaning of not telling the truth. In your sentence it should be lay. If I'm wrong just tell me, I'm always trying to improve my English.
Author's Response: Yes you're right just an outsight on my part... I'll fix it thx.
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 8: I Give It To You
I love a guilt ridden Brian...Good job!
Author's Response: Thx I have fun writing it.
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2008 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 7: I Beg of You...
Actually I certainly don’t blame Brian. What did he do? He is a single man, young, and horny. Why not go to Babylon and get his needs met? At this time he is not committed to anyone. Just what does a horny, young, single gay man do? We do what Brian did. The only fault I see here is that Brian, and Justin could have suggested it too, should have made some sort of arrangement to enable Justin to contact someone if he got ill and Brian was not around. So let’s give Brian a break. Just about the same thing could have happened had Brian gone to church instead. Would that have been any better? No need for Brian to feel guilty about going to Babylon. Leaving Justin alone with no way of getting help is the only problem. But I said that already. Anyway, as you can see I am involved with this story. Thanks for writing it, I am really enjoying it. DavidR
Author's Response: Tu, so much DavidR... by the way Brian, Steve and David are my best male names ( I would love a boy friend with either of those names Lol). I see what you mean... but I think most readers here are really angry at Brian because he just told Justin something always happening to him and don't want to leave him alone, and then he runs off because he kissed Justin too passionately and got horny. I guess most of us feel he could have finish the j/o and went to Babylon another day when he could have had Deb or one of the medical staff stay the night with Justin while he did, but he left him HOME ALONE to fend for himself... and something happened to him. THIS IS SO MUCH FUN.... I LOVE THIS JOB... TOO BAD I'M NOT BEING PAID FOR IT (then I would have to get a beta LOL~) Love 2 entertain U. STay w/me.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2008 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 7: I Beg of You...
OM OM OM!! At least Brian knew CPR (very in charater), and that he is realizing how much Justin means to him and wants to keep him is huge! Can't wait for more. You've really put Justin thru the wringer though.
Author's Response: TU so much.... 'You've really put Justin thru the wringer though.' That was mainly to keep Brian in character, he'd have to go thru alot to confess his love after knowing Justin for only about three months vs. being in a relationship with him for five years in Cowlips version. So watching the love of his life die eight times... I tho would probably do the trick LOL.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 7: I Beg of You...
i'm glad brian realized how selfish he was for going and leaving him just for his own satisfaction. i hope his prayers are answered. maybe it's time for brian to change some of his ways.
Author's Response: LOL! Ty sjmpets3... HAV FUn!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 6: Love Should Have Kept You Home Last Night
Well, well, well...Brian decides that he can't possibly go any longer without sex and look at what happens. Wait until he wakes up and finds Justin passed out in the hallway. He needs to butt kicked for this one! He knows Justin is hurt and needs him, why would he leave him alone like that. I hope poor Justin will be ok. Something is obviously wrong with him. Now Brian will blame himself and probably become "self destructive" Brian and that won't help anyone!
Author's Response: We'll dealing with the thirty-five year old Brian here... let's hope he'd get a better grip LOL then the twenty-nine/thirty year old version of himself.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 5: Too Still
BRIAN! Your subconcious was trying to tell you to keep Justin in mind you twat! LOL! See what happens when he thinks with his other brain. Poor Justin in pain and screaming for Brian.
Author's Response: Awww, screaming for Brian... see how attached he's become... he's not crying out anyone else's name or any other vocabulary.... Brian is the only word coming out of his mouth.
Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2008 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 1: Get Well Soon!
Oh that's just crazy what happened to you - I suggested a beta for you for stuff like spelling, punctuation, etc. - definitely not content or storyline, just to "fine tune" what you already had. For whoever wanted to change or take over your stories there's no need. And the person who said your stuff was fanfic death? Sounds like somebody who was jealous of your talent. People often lash out when they are insecure. I hope you keep having fun writing because I want you to keep those stories coming!
Author's Response: Thank U so much.... Now Let's have some fun LOL
Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2008 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 1: Get Well Soon!
I am the one who left the comment about having a beta and I'm so glad you didn't take it the wrong way!!!! I looked at it after I wrote it and I thought "oh no I hope that doesn't sound nasty." I am sorry that you had a bad experience in the past with a beta. That sucks and not in a positive life affirming way. LOL.
Author's Response: Oh, No! You were so polite... I mean first of all you compliment me as a writer and told me my stories were great... in fact, I felt like a heel when I didn't acknowledge your compliment in the first response. Afterwards you told me i could 'benefit' you didn't say anything like 'I needed one' or 'better' get one. You were very respectful and I appreciate that much, and most of all you're right my stories would be better if they were edited by someone other than myself. However, when I used a betaa for several reasons it took the fun out of posting here. I ran into problems such as timliness (which is unavoidable... people have lives). For instance a story that I can write here in fifteen to thirty days would takes almost 6 months to a year (I didn't have the patience for that... often I would end up abandoning the story). And then I had one experience with a beta he wanted to co-author/or take over it got to the point I didn't recognize my story any more. And then there was someone who didn't like my stories and told me they were 'fanfic' death, and ironically the one she told me wouldn't work was the one called Penetrate (I don't know if you read it when it used to be here.. but when it was posted it here it was the most read story to date that I've posted here... It had somewhere between 25000 and 26000 reads in less than a month) and that was without being beta. So I remembered what my original objective was and that was JUST TO HAVE FUN... and believe me the moment it is no longer fun... I'M OUT OF HERE.... right now tho I'm having the time of my life. Thx U so much... and thanks for getting back to me because like U I had hoped that I had not offended U in anyway especially after that beautiful comment... saying I was a great writer and write great stories. That was so encouraging. Thank U.
Reviewer: Magda (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2008 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 6: Love Should Have Kept You Home Last Night
Brian deserves another 3 weeks without geting laid for thinking with his other head... again poor Sunshine ;( plz update soon
Author's Response: Oh, yeah... Brian deserves a spanking (and not of the fun kind).
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: Get Well Soon!
you are right about him...but still,3 weeks is far too long for him to go without,but he should have checked in on Justin when he got back...and yeah you spelt it correctly!:)
Author's Response: Brian should of stuck with the original 'jerk-off' plan or got out the black book and made a housecall (at least he wuld have been there when Justin called out to him, and to have gotten too high to budge... now that's all out irresponsible of Brian.) Hopefully he's learned something.
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 6: Love Should Have Kept You Home Last Night
Oh no...more guilt laden Brian coming up! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Yeah, maybe Brian deserves to feel guilty re this incident. He told Justin earlier that he can't leave him alone because something's always happening to him, he shouldn't have left him alone for one and two he shouldn't put himself in such a catatonic (I'm sure I didn't spell that right) state.
Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: Too Still
Poor Brian will never forgive himself for not being there for Jus. I loved the part where Bri was trying to choose a trick.
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Brian had it bad choosing a trick LOL... I wonder why he was having such a hard time choosing... I can't figure LOL!
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2008 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: Too Still
Well I hope Brian gets back to the house in time. Even though he should of stayed home with Justin incase something happened. *sighs* Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Can U imagine how Brian wuld feel if he can home and discovred Justin died while he was screwing around at Babylon?
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2008 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 5: Too Still
Ouch, hope Brian checks on Justin. Hope Justin is okay.... the kid just can't get a break.
Author's Response: Poor kid!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 4: Are You Trying To Kill Yourself?
Aww! Brian-Dough is putty in Justin's hands and Brian gives him sweet dreams! He totally bought that house for Justin, I just wish he would admit it. I understand why he doesn't, he's scared to at this point. Its soooooo obvious they love, need and are emotionally connected to each other. Its good to see Brian open up to Justin albeit slowly. I hope they continue to progress in their relationship. I think Justin telling Brian that the Kip situation was not his fault is just what Brian needed to hear.
Author's Response: OH, so true, Kat... oh so true lOL cont. to enjuy.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 4: Are You Trying To Kill Yourself?
as much as brian doesn't talk, justin is finding out more and more each time they do, and i thik brian is getting scared of what he's feeling because of it. jusitn walking around, in pain, yet as soon as brian picks him up the pain is gone? how sweet. "If Justin didn't know any better, he'd think Brian actually designed the house around his sketches." he did. brian is in love. he bought the house, decorated it, all for justin. that would give me pleasant dreams too.
Author's Response: Thx Sjm... I glad U like the story... the story gives me a very warm feeling and I was hoping that the same feeling was being passed on to you guys.... thank U for letting me know at least one person is feeling the same as I. Thx soooo much... enjoy.
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 1: Get Well Soon!
Note to the person who made the beta comment: Please forgive me but I meant to say also... thank you so much for saying I'm a great writet and my stories are great. Thank U so much for that, and again please forgive me for not thanking you properly in the first response.
Author's Response: writer... not writet... one for the beta huh?
Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2008 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 1: Get Well Soon!
You're a great writer, great stories, but you could really benefit from having a beta.
Author's Response: Thank U so much for being concerned and taking the time to comment (it's very appreciated) but I've used a beta before and had a very bad experience (several bad experiences)... so I don't bother any more. I do this simply for fun and I don't even worry about it any more. I figure I write stories here for people like myself (very down to earth) who come here to read the stories not edit them. And not only that I don't get paid to do this... and the readers don't pay to read here. SO I JUST GO AHEAD AND HAVE FUN.... no pressure... no stress.... just good old fashion fun. Thanks for taking the time to comment and thanks for your concern... but I'm okay. If I just entertained 1 person... I'm HAPPY AND HAVING FUN... and I think when it comes right down to it that is all that it is really all about anyway... That we all have Fun!
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2008 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 4: Are You Trying To Kill Yourself?
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Ty Lynn, hav fun as always. Luv 2 entertain U.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2008 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 4: Are You Trying To Kill Yourself?
Sweet chapter. Justin needs to pull the nightmare, snuggle me card.... ;-) Love how caring Brian is.
Author's Response: Yeah, he's a SWEETIE in this story LOL! He's older... tired of the night life... and whether he knows it or not he just probably want to settle down but Brian seem to have a few insecurities there considering Justin's so young, and he doesn't have Michael there to remind him that he'd always be YOUNG AND BEAUTIFUL.
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