Reviewer: Luvqaf (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2014 03:15 PM · On: Final Chapter
I don't like your Brian throughout the 3 series.
He's very ooc; unfaithful & cheap.
If i being Justin, i will divorce him, seriously.
Author's Response: I don't know what you mean.... plz give examples... : #occ... unfaithful... and cheap? Those adjectives are just too too vague. I mean One can easily argue that Brian Kinney in the original QAF series was occ, unfaithful, and cheap (depending on how you look at it). In fact, Randy Harrison the actor who plays Justin Taylor.... described Brian Kinney in a similar way.... he said in 'real life' he could never be in a relationship with someone like Brian Kinney becuz of his lying and infidelity.
Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2013 07:21 AM · On: Final Chapter
Awesome series
Author's Response: Thanks you so much, Tasha. So glad U enjoyed.
Delores
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2013 02:01 PM · On: Final Chapter
I know it is just a story! However, this last sequel was gut wrenching. I cried so hard! Thank you for having them back together and at least start to be happy before you finished the story. In addition, I love this series.
Author's Response: WOW! Looks like I got a new fan! Thank you so much, Al. Sincerely, Delores
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 07:49 PM · On: Final Chapter
Awesome..! Loved it the whole series :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and then letting me know how much you enjoyed the story. I haven't been writing much because of school obligations (college student), however, Winter's Break starts Dec. 23rd for me and I'm don't return to school for my senior year undler Jan. 17. So, I plan to do some more writing to hoping to wrap up some of those unfinished stories. I don't like have so many incomplete stories at the site.
Thanks again and I hope you try one of the other series and enjoy.
I also write Brian/Justin Fanfic at another site and there's a story that is a Favorite with most of my readers called "More Than He Bargained For". You might want to check that one out. It's not a series thought. The site is called Mightier Than The Sword and here's a link: http://sword.borderline-angel.com/
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Final Chapter
Thanks Darling that was great, I loved it even with all the ups and downs...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Thx, Kathleen, glad U enjoy. I guess U can just call me the Angst-Lady, lol!
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
This isn't going so good, and I suspect that it will only get more lonely... Poor Brian is see trouble coming...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I never answered this one ... I wonder how did it get away from me .....
Well, almost a year later (one up for the old cliche': better late than never). Now, if I could only remember what the story was about, LOL.
Yeah, now that the story is completed; I guess we can say it was trouble on levels that he never imagined. However, I guess all that trouble was worth it in the end, becasue he and Justin, and the kids were all still together, and quite happy.
Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2008 03:55 PM · On: Final Chapter
I was really glad to read when Ben pointed out to Brian that what he had been doing was cheating as well. Interesting to have the kids pick up on the unease going on and deciding it was time to go home. They were acting more adult than the adults. Let me just say you are a pro at creating angst and I look forward to your next piece of work. Oh, and just so you know, I made it through the whole story without a cigarette or a drink. LOL
Author's Response: Thank U so much Suse 4 staying w/me 2 the very end, and I'm glad U enjoyed the story, and I'm equally glad 2 hear that I did not make a chain smoker or an alcoholic out of U. U were a great audience... and thank U so much again 4 taking the time 2 comment regularly. Luv U Guys! Stay tuned, and HAV FUN!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2008 10:08 PM · On: Final Chapter
What a ride! I was so worried for them for awhile there, but in typical B/J fashion they worked it out. Great story!
Author's Response: Did U hav Fun, Kat or what? Some roller coaster ride, Huh, You know I can't be too easy on the boys or my readers. I don't want to BORE you guys.... I luv U too much.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2008 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 15: The End of Their World???
I don't even know what to say I'm so speechless. That was bigtime revenge sex! Can't believe Brian let James top him!
Author's Response: Yeah, that's one of READ AT THE RISK OF BEING UPSET WARNINGS lol.... Some people can't stand the thought of Brian being topped by anyone but Justin.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2008 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 13: Nylon Strips
Mmmmm-hmmmm! Tsk, tesk Justin! I wondered who'd be the first to break. Well, Justin has no choice but to own up to what he did. Wonder if Brian will tell him about the non-sex he had with Ben.
Author's Response: No. Until Ben talked some sense in Brian, Brian blamed Justin's neglect for everything.
Reviewer: sarahrei (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2008 07:24 PM · On: Final Chapter
WOW! I don't think those warnings were necessary at all! I have to tell you, I liked this ending better than #2. And I think that was simply because of the cliffhanger (and the fact that I couldn't figure out if B was bi). Anyway...I liked this story alot. I would have prefered B come clean about his "experiences" in Vermont, but it all worked out in the end. Can't wait for your next story!
Author's Response: Thx U some much for commenting Sarah U know its always appreciate Lol. And I'm so glad U like the story . Two things about the Vermont, actually Ben pretty told Justin the night that returned that Brian was terribly horny and he had to keep him out of trouble. Yes, mind you he didn't go into specific detail. And then on the other hand, I agree with Ben and Brian why open a can of necessary worms (and again its debatable whether or not he cheated). Last of all the warnings, I know from experience they were necessary. Speaking from experience I would have lost a lot of my readers in the early chapters. They would have immediately thought this was a Brian/Ben story and would have given me so nasty remarks and abandoned the story. It happened to me before with the Penetrate story, but then I wrote sequel and some people came back to the Penetration story and embrace it only after that. There are readers here who think that certain behavior between Brian and Justin would cause the world to come to an end, and become very angry if they are reading the story enjoying it and then that happens. So I didn't want all those harsh reviews.... so I put those Warnings out there to discourage people with hang ups from even bothering. I didn't want anyone saying I promised them something and didn't deliver. THIS STORY IS A READ AT THE RISK OF BEING UPSET LOL. TY U so much Sarah, U've been the perfect audience.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2008 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 16: No Apologies / No Regrets
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thx U LOL.
Reviewer: sarahrei (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2008 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 11: Temptations
O.K. You had me on the edge of my seat. I just knew something was going to happen. I absolutely love that Mark is a gold digger and has alternative motives...watch out B! I also get the feeling that Ben is a tad jealous of Mark and not just being a good friend helping keep Brian under control for the remainder of the vacation. Now here comes the sick part...Earlier I was thinking that Justin should walk in on Brian having an affair...but now I think it would be great if Justin was hospitalized for exhaustion (or maybe he has some type of serious/life threatening medical emergency) and everyone (kids/Ben) is frantic trying to locate Brian, but he is MIA and cheating. I'd like to see Brian have some guilt. I don't like the idea of Justin allowing this James to stay with him. I think it would be totally unrealistic. Obviously this is fiction, but if Jus is a Tony winner...I can't really see him doing all of this for this director. I know Jus admires the director because he has accomplished so much at an early age and wants to help, but I really don't think this is something that someone (even an angry/hurt/horny person) would seriously consider. But, that is just my opinion. Also, I would like to see Brianna and Gus catch on to Brian and his current "issues" with Ben and Mark. I think Brianna freaking out was CLASSIC and I think it would be great if she could throw some more guilt on Brian. I know these are wierd ideas and not at all common with the majority of B/J fic, but you put those warnings on and my brain is mulling all possibilities! Well done! POST MORE CHAPTERS NOW!
Author's Response: Hi, Sarah, thx a million 4 commenting as always...AND THOSE R SOME EXCELLENT SUGGESTIONS/IDEAS... and I may use a few of them in another story LOL. But for this one I think I have a surprise up my sleeve that might make a couple of readers' HEAD SPIN.. In fact, I'm going to finish up this story tomorrow. I have to run out for the evening now. Won't be back home until maybe late morning so I won't have access to my computer but I'll definitely complete the story then. See ya LUV U guys and HAV FUN.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2008 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 11: Temptations
Boy oh Boy if Brian falls for Mark's bad intentions it just proves men think with their other heads. "Brian go home, go home!"
Author's Response: Hi, Anon...tys 4 taking the time to comment... it's very much appreciated. I'm glad U like the story and I plan to finish it tomorrow. LOL Continue to enjoy.... and most of all HAV FUN!
Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2008 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 10: Behind the Scenes
Ok, Hamlin deserves a slap, he is one selfish bastard. I can see the handwriting on the wall, so all I can say is "Justin, NO Don't Do It". Gee maybe I am taking this just a little too seriously. LOL
Author's Response: Suse, U R making my day.... the more emotion U become the HAPPIER I become LOL. I hope to finish the story tomorrow LOL!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 11: Temptations
Man, that Ben is a bull dog isn't he! I'm glad he's there to keep Brian out of trouble...where Mark is concerned. Now all he has to do is keep those hugs with Brian platonic and they're golden. So, now Brian and Ben have one more week to keep themselves from messing up their marriages. I hope they keep an eye out for Mark, that boy is on the hunt for a sugar-daddy and who knows how far he'll go (Kinnetic Inc.???) to get one now that his sights are set on one Mr. Brian Taylor-Kinney.
Author's Response: Ben is definitely a 'godsend' to more people than one LOL. Finishing up this tomorrow, and U continue to have Fun LOL.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 10: Behind the Scenes
Hamlin wants Justin to let James move in? *Big eye roll* Fight the power Justin! That would be a really dangerous set up, but at least Justin knows that James is attracted to him. I'm just so glad he is completely aware of the situation and knows that them being roomies is a bad idea. If Justin does say no to Hamlin's idea, I hope he respects Justin's wishes.
Author's Response: Hi, Kat, indeed 1 of my favorite people, thx 4 commenting as usual... I'm see U having Fun... I hope U have fun throughout the story. However my warning READ AT THE RISK OF BEING UPSET still stands. LOL.... I plan to finish the story tomorrow but I'm not responsible for reactions to the next couple of chapters LOL.
Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2008 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 9: Sharing A Cab
Just read all nine chapters in one sitting, and I haven't had one cigarette or drink yet. LOL I'm hoping Justin can show the restraint that Brian finally was able to. Justin doesn't have a Ben around to remind him though, and that is making me nervous. LOL You can see why entertainers have such a hard time staying in a relationship. Not enough time together and so many temptations make for a bad outcome.
Author's Response: "Justin doesn't have a Ben around...." GOOD INSIGHT LOL! LUV U, Suse!
Reviewer: Kay (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2008 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
Went to the site and checked out penetrate and you are right I probably won't like it so I am not going to read no sense in pissing myself off right. I am not one of those people who after they read the description and can tell that they may just hate a story reads it and just leaves hateful reviews because it didn't go their way. I'm likely to say what I would have rathered happen but I also have to note that it doesn't take away from the fact that the author is a good one (which you are) when the story doesn't go my way. In other words I suck it up (no pun intended) and to those who do leave disrespectful reviews to you you should tell to stick it pun intended and all.
Author's Response: Thx so much Kay, LOL. I understand that taste varies so I don't mind one bit if someone doesn't like my story and I don't even mind them telling me so just as long as tell me with class like the way you just did. I prefer that my readers are always honest with me, and I even don't mind constructive criticism, I learn so much from my readers. Rudeness is the thing I can't tolerate. There's a way of being honest and brutally honest without being rude so readers here don't know the art. A person can tell me they hate every story I write just as long as they aren't rude, and are honest. It's usually the people who point out what they don't like about my stories that I usually learn the most from. Thx again for always commenting and being so respectful and honest. It appreciated.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 9: Sharing A Cab
Now that's a twist, working with Chris Hobbs' gay brother! Sounds like trouble in the making for Brian and Justin. They are both horny and missing each other while meeting people who would more than gladly "help" their little situation. Sounds like we're being set up for something...
Author's Response: LOL, now U see why Hamlin was no threat????
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 7: Shame On You
Briana is Brian's clone! She has a mouth just like him. I hope that episode with her will stay fresh in Brian's mind and keep him from doing something stupid.
Author's Response: Justin's always telling Brian to stop cursing in front of the kids LOL.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 6: Broadway
So now Justin has his own unforbidden fruit to deal with in Hamlin! No big deal...think again Justin. How is Brian going to react to Justin's play being extended? They already have no life now.
Author's Response: Hamlin????
Reviewer: Kay (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2008 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
What type of story is penetrate? Maybe you should download it.
Author's Response: I'll load it after I finish its sequel.... it used to be here and at the time it was my most read story received almost 25000 reads in less than a month's time so a lot of people here have already read it, so I wasn't thinking about posting it again until I post it with its sequel like I done this one. however if you really would like to read it post at a site called sword.borderline-angel.com However, warning you have to be a big Ben fan to like the story... so unless U like Ben or I'm able to change your mind you might like be too crazy about it.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 5: The White Party
They are going to freak out when they wake up in the morning! I can just see them not remembering if they slept together or not. Brian horny and drunk...not a good mix as we saw here.
Author's Response: LOL
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 4: Shoot Yourself
Poor Brian he seems like he is going to explode. I can just imagine that little forbidden fruit named Mark popping up all over the place will lead to anything good.
Author's Response: Mark LOL.... think Justin Hartley the whole time and you can easily get through it LOL.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Attraction
Justin Hartley?! You chose such a great specimen for Brian to have a TV crush on. Now...White Party, asking for trouble! It will be interesting to see how Brian does in temptation island.
Author's Response: Oh, Yeah.... I'm a JUSTIN HARTLEY fan out of this world.... I love in in Passions and as the Green Arrow on Smallville... in fact I used to like Clark but when he came on the show it made Clark invisible to me. Now I can only watch the show if he's on it.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
Uh-oh! That's not good, no sex for Brian and Justin...did hell freeze over? I can understand why Brian is frustrated and that's never a good thing with him.
Author's Response: 'did hell freeze' you're cracking my sides with that one... keep those comments coming... I'm starting to look forward to comments lately esp. like this one LOL Thx.
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hey there...I read penetrate and enjoyed it lots...ted and justin?...nah they don't gel...poor poor ted...i love him really:)...maybe a little action from Brian would have sorted him out...hmmmm! maybe i will have a go at that...that might put the cat amongst the pidgeons...heh heh!
Author's Response: I'm cracking my sides here... LOL.... such things could probably be conjured up in somebody's imagination but I don't think mine can stretch that far LOL.
Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
Damn! not a Brian and Ben story-crap-that would be so hot! (Ever since I saw them in the White Party ep in the series I have had many lovely nights imagining them together!)LOL... Seriously...I am enjoying this and it would not matter to me if you decided to let B and B get together and also J and Mr Hobbs-as long as it all works out in the end! I personally don't really need any warnings(apart from Mpregs-I rarely read them!) and take what people write as it comes-anyway good job!
Author's Response: Heyl Carbon69 glad to C U taking the ride! Looks like I might have to download "Penetrate" for U LOL. Thx 4 comment Luv U Gus! Hav Fun
Reviewer: sarahrei (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2008 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 9: Sharing A Cab
Oh man! Trouble is coming! I was so sure there was going to be more of an issue with Briana/Brian. I can't believe she just let this issue of the clothes just drop like that. There is no way that I would have. I was half expecting either her to call Justin or maybe Gus when Briana went missing. Darn! I feel trouble brewing...I can't wait. That is kind of sick isn't it!
Author's Response: Hey, Sarah, the thing with that is that Brian is so freakin' honest (charming and all those other devilish qualities).... whatever he says his loves one believe. So if he says they didn't have sex.... they didn't have sex. LOL
Reviewer: Kay (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2008 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just have to say in a way your story is very real because brian is turning into one of those people I hate. I have known people (ex-coworkers) who actually have done what brian is about to do because their spouse has let work or things in life in general intefere with the relationship and than when the spouse leaves them for cheating they are totally woo is me my life is ruined about it and I just feel like shaking them and going woo is you my ass hello you didn't say anything and maybe the spouse didn't even realize it was happening if you were so hurt and upset open your big woo is me mouth and say something i am not upset about this story I am just saying in a way I can relate to ben watching brian possibly make the dumbest mistake of his life and going what the hell are you thinking and don't boo hoo on my shoulder when it is over i told you so. I get what you meant in your last response to be honest I didn't really pay attention to the warning just categories but just so you know if you ever get the want to write a ben and justin or ted and justin story I got your back.
Author's Response: Oh, Kay, U R my new best friend of what! U got me dieing here.... do you write here... U should. Ted and Justin (now that one will drive me nuts... someone have to be one helluva writer to sell me on that one LOL!)
Reviewer: sarahrei (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2008 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 3: You're Gay
I'm liking this... I know you said this wasn't for the faint of heart, but I secretly hope Justin unexpectantly pops in. I know this sounds horrible, but I'd love for him to catch Brian in the act. OUCH! How can you ignore a man like Brian? Sex once a week? And none before a 2 week vacation...you are just asking for trouble! :)
Author's Response: Sarah, U got me laffing so hard.... TEARS are running down my face ENJOY LOL!
Reviewer: Kay (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2008 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hate to hog up your review section but I meant I would NOT write a harsh review because someone wrote something I did not like.
Author's Response: Thx very much kay, don't think I ever received a harsh review from you ... but a lot of people here would and have, so that's why I put that harsh warning out there so no one will tell me that they weren't WARNED.... I don't think there is any bigger warning that I could give. I understand what you mean but I put all the site warnings too. The reason I did not put a Brian/other warning is because it doesn't apply here. What I put here was Brian/Justin, Alternative Universe/Hurt-Comfort/Romance/Ben/Other Canon Characters....those are the only specific categories that apply here. Now if Brian and Ben hug or kiss or rub noses or look at each other too hard and someone feels for that warrants a Brian/other warning that's just a matter of opinion that I do not share.... the bottom line here is 'READ AT THE RISK OF BEING UPSET' There if someone reads something that upsets too bad! Because I WARNED the reader ahead of time READ AT THE RISK OF BEING UPSET.
Reviewer: Kay (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2008 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
Just so no one can say anything if brian and ben are going to be getting it on in this story you should write a warning of brian and other. Though i would leave a harsh review because someone wrote something I didn't like i will be honest and say I do not like brian and others but I do like justin and ben or ted or emett just not ethan but bigger shocker I don't hate justin and michael either as you can tell i am very bias but just a heads up so no one can say you didn't warn them
Author's Response: Kay, sweetie thx for commenting but you are confusing me.... did you read the summary it specificly read in captial bold letters THIS IS NOT A BRIAN/BEN STORY. Also it warned "Read at the risk of being upset.... that covers EVERYTHING that would upset a person, I practically asked people who take this stuff too seriously not to even bother to read it. Please go back and read my summary. I gave a Super Warning.... practically telling people if you can't handle any scenario.... move it along.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2008 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved the warnings, made me smile. I like the story, I have faith in Brian and Justin, them may stumble, but they'll yell and make up eventually. ;-)
Author's Response: Awwwwww! U R sooooo sweet...... LOL Thx U so much Alys.... this might be (I say might be) a painful one for all U die-hard B/J fans (That includes myself).... but remember... it's only a story LOL.
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