Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Justin Girl
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow please write more

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

I would have loved to read more of this story =(

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2008 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

YOu've made me curious.... sooooo I hope you'll update soon ;) Great start 

Later, Tina  

Reviewer: fanatic (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2008 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

continu you great work it s a  intrusting plot cant wait to read the next chapter update soon

thanks

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2008 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

What an intense first chapter!  I can't wait to read more.

 

 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2008 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

i like the way the story is going, but please have it betaed, or just check the spelling. will be looking for the next chapter.

Author's Response: cheers, but my beta sorta sick right now so im without her expertise! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: virder (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2008 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

 i like this



Author's Response:

I know I know i have some grammer problem and some of the spelling is wrong but the other half is actually how we spell it here in my country i tired putting spell check on buuuuuuuuuuuuuuttttttt it wont work

But thanks for the review!  

Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2008 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey, this fic has great potential but there are some grammatical errors so I think you might benefit from having a beta reader! I'm always available until you find a permanent one or I can be your beta! Sure let me know.

I'm not trying to be a bitch or anything but I think it'll make your story flow a lot better and just to correct some spelling. Besides that though I think that this is great, good idea!

Later babe, Emma xx

Reviewer: Trenice (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2008 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

it sounds good

 



Author's Response: *blush*

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2008 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

well, I definitely want to read more... please update soon. :-)) rose

Reviewer: milka (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2008 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh poor justin :-(

btw....great story:-) i can't wait for more

Author's Response: well thank you for reviewing!

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