Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2019 09:18 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
great story
Author's Response: Great! I'm happy to hear that. Thanks so much.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2019 02:07 AM · On: My Neighbor
yikes Michael and Brian, I need brain bleach
Author's Response: LMFAO!!! I don't think I have ever heard that. But I totally get it!!
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2018 10:18 PM · On: Onto You
I feel sorry for michael but im sooooo happy that brian and justin together. Ibhope they can announce soon to their friends
Author's Response: I hope you like the rest. Thanks for posting. T
Reviewer: tonton (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2017 09:47 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
THIS WAS A FANTASTIC STORY!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know that. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: dchewey (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2016 05:06 AM · On: My Neighbor
Omg!
this is so bad it's so good!
Author's Response: He, he. Good to hear that. Glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: dchewey (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2016 05:06 AM · On: The Things I Can't Do
Omg. The angst!!
Brian is so screwed...ok this story is like my dirty little indulgence now. Hehe
thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Ha, ha, ha. Good to know that. I'm happy you liked it.
Reviewer: dchewey (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2016 03:08 AM · On: Burn In Hell A Thousand Times Over
Jesus!
poor fucking Mikey! Wouldn't it just be better and more mature to tell Michael is not working out and let him come to terms with moving on then lying and sneaking around behind his back. Unfortunately this is more close to the truth then just telling the truth and let the pieces fall where they may.
great story! So many mixed emotions!
Author's Response: Yeah, it would be. But like you say, things don't always work like that. And if it was that simple then it wouldn't be forbidden. *Wink, wink* I'm so happy that you read it anyways. Thanks for your thoughts, I always like to hear that from you guys.
Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2015 04:07 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
I loved it but you had me on the edge of my seat for a while think Brian was going to stay with Micheal.
Author's Response: I know, but you know me. I would never! My heart is set on Brian and Justin no matter what happens. They will always find each other at the end.
Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2014 08:03 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
That's the end???? Nooooo!!! I loved this story so much!
Author's Response: Thanks! I know it's so sad that there is no more, but it was a nice ride.
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2013 09:08 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
AWESOME that's all i can say
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I really love to hear what you guys think and feel.
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2013 05:09 PM · On: I Could Make Him The Happiest Man
This so intense loving it
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2013 01:21 PM · On: The Things I Can't Do
Loved it..............ending I was yelling lol
Author's Response: I bet. I'll try to give you guys the sequel soon.
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2013 08:49 AM · On: My Neighbor
I'm loving it so far
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know.
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2013 08:25 AM · On: Forbidden To The World
It was good! However, after around the 18th chapter I got bored with the storyline. I pretty much only read a few parts after that about Brian and Justin. I think there were too many storylines.
Author's Response: Well, so sorry that happened to you. That's around the time it started to get really good. Hopefully you were able to finish it. Thanks for being honest. Take care.
Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 25, 2012 08:47 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
Damn good.....thanks!
Author's Response: No, thank you for reading. If you guys weren't out there I wouldn't be writing.
Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 25, 2012 10:36 AM · On: One Good Day Overshadows The Rest
Why do you always have something bad/tramatic happen to my boys? Stop it! You are an awesome writer so stop pulling on my heartstrings in every story. I can't take it.
Author's Response: I don't know, but hey, don't I always give you guys a happy ending? Most of the times when it ends bad there is always a sequel. Brian and Justin forever!
Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 25, 2012 09:30 AM · On: Welcome Home, Honey
Thank you sooooo much for all the bottoming Brian scenes they are so freaking hot!
Author's Response: I know right, those are always so good. I hear ya!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 09:07 AM · On: Definitely An Affair
Awesome update hon :)
Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox
Author's Response: Thanks. Hope you enjoy the whole thing. Take care.
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 08:50 AM · On: My Neighbor
Oh yea,totally hot!!!
Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox
Author's Response: LOL. Yeah, it was. Thanks for reviewing. Later.
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2011 10:29 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
I loved it!!!!! I enjoyed and reread and reread it too!!!
Author's Response: I read it all the time too. Thanks for letting me know. Take care, T
Reviewer: Infatuated_BJreader (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2011 11:50 AM · On: Decisions To Make
I like the storyline and all..but there are heaps and heaps of spelling errors and grammar errors..:/ but im still going to read it anyway.. :)
Author's Response: Sorry about that that. English is not my first language. I'll try to do better.
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 04:32 AM · On: Who Is Meant For You
Oh, wow. I was extremely pissed after the shoting, but I knew you would come through. :) And the reconvalescence is so hard for both of them but Brian didn't hesitate for one moment. Really hot sex scene as well. You can feel how much they love each other and how much they needed to express that physically.
Author's Response: I would't have the heart to kill JUstin just like that. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 01:10 AM · On: Welcome Home, Honey
That was HOT! Fewwww....I think I need a cold shower now. *chuckle* :D Great job
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Glad you enjoy it.
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 12:45 AM · On: Went All The Way
It just kind of happened :D Awesome. Can't help but feel some serious angst on the way, but I'm sure our boys will deal with it together. :)
Author's Response: hopefully it won't be too much angst. and everyone can handle what's to come.
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 12:27 AM · On: A Friend In Need
Ok. the image of Brian and Emmett together in bad is making me uncofortable. Especially since I know Brian and how confused he might be in the morning. If Justin gets back it's gonna be bad. Off I go to read another great chapter, hoping for the best and wishing the angst would just go away already. :/
Author's Response: it shouldn't make you uncomfortable. emmett is just being there to give the brunet his support. i think that the angst will be over soon, thanks to emmett's good advice.
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 11:02 PM · On: Burn In Hell A Thousand Times Over
Wow. Really interesting how you got B/M together after Gus was born. It is a really good twist of canon. I think it would even be possible. If Justin didn't appear that night, who knows? Really good idea, which makes me love canon even more because Justin DID appear. :D Now, get them together, make Brian stop tricking and get them married and all will be ok again. :) Great story as always. :* Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you so for reviewing. Hope you enjoy the rest.
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 10:12 PM · On: Let's Lie And Say It's For The Best
OMG! I just want to punch him in the face! Jesus, it's not like he's the first man in the world who is cheating, or who fell in love with someone. Michael should deserves to be happy as well and he should be with someone who appreciates him the same as he does him. I think that it hurts more to know that someone was with you when he was thinking about someone else, than that he fell for someone. The lie hurts much more than the act itself. To find out he was pretending.....argh....I'm mad and I don't know how to explain myself. Great work as usual though. *soft smile*
Author's Response: It's a xrazy chapter. I'm glad to see you so into it. Thanks.
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 09:46 PM · On: The Things I Can't Do
I hate Brian right now. Not sure way but there it is...he makes me nauseous!
Author's Response: Hey, I totally get that. I really hope that the feeling will go away. I can honestly say, that's the first time I hear someone tell me that, but nothing wrong with it. I love writing and seeing what kind of emotions I can evoke on people. Thanks for being honest and sharing.
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 08:49 PM · On: My Neighbor
I hate Brian/Michael. It's a first fic with this paring I read, because I read every other from you that felt safe to read, and I couldn't help myself from reading another story of yours, I skipped to the last chapter of course, just to be sure (sorry, couldn't help it *smile*) but I still hate it. That Brian wanted to get back together with him, that he was thinking how he fucked up, I hope it won't be long till he leaves him, it just feels wrong. I know Michael is a good guy but they don't belong together, I wanted to scream when Brian said he loves him. :( Despite the plot, good writing. As always. Thanks and sorry for the recent spamming with my comments, can't help it *develish smile*
Author's Response: It's okay, I like it when you guys review a lot. Sorry about the story line, he, he, he.
Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2011 07:55 AM · On: Forbidden To The World
I enjoyed this story. I love when you include the whole gang. The love between Brian/Justin is wonderful. Keep on wirting those great story lines. Those two are so so hot!!
Author's Response: i'm happy u did. i will try my best to come up with more. hopefully soon. thanks for the review.
Author's Response: i'm happy u did. i will try my best to come up with more. hopefully soon. thanks for the review.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
Very good story, not that I am surprized as I have read many of your stories and they are all so very good!
I wonder if you think I am totally spamming you. I am trying to comment on every story, every chapter, I read. I think you writers deserve to know how much your work is appreciated, and to know the parts that are liked the best. I hope you take it all as the complement it is ment to be. :o)
Oh, and I hope you get a blue ribbon to designate your stories as one of the best - because they are!
Author's Response: thank you so much. i lovw it when readers review ever story and ewvery chapter. don't ever stop.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Always There For You
Its been such a good story Im sorry the next chapter is the last. :o(
Author's Response: Yeah, it's always sad when things end. I hope you had a great time reading it though.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 02:33 PM · On: I Used To Be Him
Ah men.
Cant live with them, cant fuck without them.
Bunch of dummies. Seriously.
but Brian and Justin are happy and ok, so Im just happy and fine, too.
Author's Response: lol. what can you do? i'm glad you're happy.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 02:04 PM · On: This Is What Love Feels Like
Poor Mikey!!!! He is the "other" man, and I understand Griffin, I do, but frankly, Ben needs his ass whipped if anyone does!
Author's Response: ben has a lot of fault here. he wasn't thinking straight. now my question is, if you understand griffin did u understood michael? because they were that person at one point or another. just wondering.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 01:44 PM · On: When The Truth Is Out
Everything seems to be going very well for everyone, except Michael. I hope Ben fixes that ASAP. I liked what Michael said to him, that Brian and Justin didn't have a choice in being together - it sounds like he is starting to understand that they didn't plan to, but they did fall deeply in love. :o)
Author's Response: yup, he is starting to see what happen with brian and justin
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Finding These Little Things About Us
Loved it! Another great chapter, lots of plot development, I cant stop reading it. :o)
Author's Response: that's what i like to hear. hope you enjoyed the rest as much.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Ring, Ring, Who Is It?
Justin is getting so much better, its amazing. Im so very happy they weathered through all those months to get to this point. I cant imagine what could ever break the bond thye have now developed.
Oh Ben. You liar. You deserve Mikey in your life, lol. I hope all turns out alright so that Mikey can move on and have a bit or empathy for how Brian and Justin might have felt.
Author's Response: oh he will get there and then he'll totally get it.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Who Is Meant For You
Guh.
I know other things happened in this chapter, but right now I cant remember a thing.
Just...Guh.
yum.
Author's Response: ha, ha, ha. that happens to me sometimes too.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Put Your Mouth On My Fucking Dick
A chapter that begins with a seizure and ends with an orgasm. Nice!
I loved Justin flinging Spidy at Ben. I can sooo see that happening.
It was good to see Brian back at work, still at the top of his game. I wonder how sick Cyn really was? Im just glad he is reclaiming that part of himself. He was always so driven, and while he is amazing with his love and caring for Justin, he deserves a chance to be amazing at his profession, too.
Author's Response: yeah, he's been great. i thought it was a good time for him to go back to work.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Secrets And Lies
The fighting in the beginning was both sad and funny! Brian shows amazing patience, and Justin needs every drop of his stubborness to get better so it's hard to be mad at him for it. I was sad for both of them when Justin broke down crying - sad he didnt realize how mean he was getting. What an amazing turn around for them, they were just fine after crying on each others`shoulders.
Ben must of thought they were nuts when he saw Justin with his head stuck in his shirt and Brian blithly ignoring him, HA. Then Justin calmly admitting defeat and Brian just as calmly helping him out.
I can picture the scene: Justin tied into his chair and forced to do squats, sipping juice, and gleefully telling Ben to envy him his beautiful husband. lol. Loved this.
Im sorry Gus got hurt. Im glad Michael did. Brian should tell Michael that it turns out he is a bottom boy after all, and it just took the right top, Justin, to show him the light. And for once, Im glad Deb plans on staying out of it.
I hope.
Author's Response: i think mostly for this story, even when everyone has an opinion, brian has acted like the man he claims to be and doesn't give a fuck about what anyone might say. he's with justin and that's it.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 07:58 PM · On: The Stupid Idiot
another excellent chapter! I think your story telling skills, already rather good, are getting even better as the story goes on!
Fucking Ronny. Idiot. He's really lucky Brian didnt call the police before he called Molly. The panic he was in, his fear, anger, Im surprised mall security didnt approach him! Poor Brian!
Poor Justin. To be so easily manhandled and taken away against his will like that. Im really surprized he didn't have a seizure under all that stress!
I just knew there would be a Ben. Are you going to have him and Mikey hook up? I always thought Ben was way too good for Mikey. The childish pouting and whining and fawning after Brian would be more than most would put up with. The comics dont bug me. Not my thing, but then Im sure my passion for online gay fanfic isn't to everyone's taste either. LOL.
I could quote so many favorite parts, but I'll just mention a couple:
Brian pouted. “It’s not that. I don’t want him injuring himself or over doing it.”
Cynthia stared at him with a smile. “You have turn into such a softy.”
“I have not!” He hissed as he looked up at her to give her one of his best glares. “I’m still the same mean fuck. Don’t you forget that!”
Of course you are, Brian. :o*
Justin smiled at the brunet and swatted the brunet in the arm. The brunet leaned closer and started pushing the blond locks back. The blond caressed Brian’s face and gave him his sunshine smile.
Isaac rolled his eyes at the two man flirted with one another. He felt like he was back in high school with his two best friends after cupid had struck.
Yeah, and if you think there are any in doubt, that'll surly convice 'em! LOL LOL LOL
Author's Response: he, he, he. seems like you really enjoyed this, yay!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 06:57 PM · On: The Same Bullshit
I loved the jealousy between Brian and Ronny. It was great to see Brian so possessive of Justin. Hope Ronny doesn't try to become to much trouble for them.
Lindsay is a piece of work. If Justin was a drug addict who refused to get help, or a chronic gamer (even worse in my opinion, lol), I could understand her attitude. But, this is a temporary illness! Bitch.
I like Isaac. He is good for Justin. Someone who Justin can bitch at and is more than willing to sling it back. Now Brian needs someone to vent to. Im guessing even in your universe he'd balk at a therepist or a support group. I wonder if one of the gang will man up and be there for him. Or Molly. It sounds like she went through the exact same thing with Justin so she'd be ideal. She'd know it was only venting and understand.
Michael wanting to turn everyone against Brian? Well, they are not friends worth missing if they would turn against Brian now, while needing help the most and in his most vulnerable frame of mind.
Author's Response: the one person that he would go to he can't anymore, which sucks. i think he's grown closer to emmett and has showed him a part of him that not many people see.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 06:13 PM · On: One Good Day Overshadows The Rest
My God! What a hugely tramatic experience for our boys! I've had the joyous displeasure of being an invalid when I broke my back, so I know a tiny bit about the things Justin and Brian are going through. I understand why Justin would want someone paid to look after him. Its hard to imagine your caretaker thinking of you as a sexual partner after they have spent time wiping your ass. I mean, what: Mmmm Hot! Man Diapers!!!
Brian is being incredibly loving and even Justin, feeling mortified, isn't immune to his charms. I love Brian so much for taking this in stride. Im sure there are times (some days, many times, lol) that Brian feels frustrated, even trapped, but his love, humour, snarkyness lives on! Its easier to accept help from someone who isn't afraid of your moods, or doesn't alter their personality just because of how you are.
The tone you have set feels very hopeful. That's really great.
Author's Response: i'm so happy to hear all this. i just looked at my personal experience and concluded that someone that loves you would do anything for you.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Pretending Not To See
This chapter, regarding Brian and Michael, is a lot like canon. Michael having the audacity to actually say he wished Justin dead, well, Im surprized Brian only hit him the once! Then Michael upset for himself totally ignoring the fact that its not all about him. Brian's in pain. Justin is no longer himself. But hey, Michael's gotta face some facts that Brian has gently told him over and over again.
But you, ms author! WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY JUSTIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I so hope you put things right!
Oh, and I loved seeing Daphne.
Author's Response: i'm sorry about what happened to justin. it will get better.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Happily Ever After
What? What?!
Author's Response: so sorry, sooooooooooo sorry!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Onto You
I loved this chapter! Even was so damn adorable! I can just imagine this child of light wandering table to table talking to leather bears, muscle studs, twinks and fairies - totally confident and secure.
The wedding reception was hilarious! Surrounded by snobs, lol. Brian and Justin were both gracious for Molly's sake. And Emmett, to get all those business cards from people interested in having him plan their next party - Justin was so nice to mention Emmett was responsible for the decorations.
Im glad that Michael, as well as Ted, finally got their first view of Brian and Justin flirting. They needed to at least start to germinate a seed of a thought, lol.
And the sex!
Yay! Isn't it just great that it will ALWAYS be that good between those two?
Author's Response: i'm loving this story so much because you guys love it so much.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Welcome Home, Honey
Brian laid back and looked at himself. He still had his shirt and tie on and they were covered with his cum. On one of his legs his pants and underwear were hanging while he still had his socks and shoes on. “Jesus,” he said relaxing on the floor...
Justin looked at him with a big smile. “Welcome home, honey....”
Brian laughed and pulled the blond on top of him. “That…was fucking amazing....”
“I’m just happy, Bri,” Justin informed him as he wrapped his legs around the brunet....
Brian got up and helped Justin stand up. He picked the blond up and carried him to the bed. “I think I love this married life thing....”
Justin chuckled. “Yeah, me too.”
*swoons*
seriously.
Author's Response: i'm so happy that you liked that. yay!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Went All The Way
YAY! A happy, giddy, glad to be in love Brian is the sweetest damn thing ever! Justin is soooooo over the moon happy, and if I didnt love him with Brian so much I'd be jealous!
But, of course, they are the happiest they have ever been in their lives, so? Betcha life is going to bring them one hell of a downer next. Right?
Yes, Im a pessamist. But Im smart enough to only read authors who love the boys as much as I do and just know that no matter what happens, you will have the boys happily in each other's arms by the end of the story. Right?
Right?
Author's Response: right, lol. i'm so happy that you're so happy.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 01:12 PM · On: A Friend In Need
I dont believe Justin would just walk out like that. Something is fishy. He knows Brian is in love with him, and while Brian loves Mikey, its not a romantic love. There is no way Mikey and Brian could make it as a couple. Justin wouldn't add further stress to Brian's life by walking out on him now.
The brunet pulled his head up and stared at Justin. He could feel all that love that Justin claimed. It made his heartbeat go faster than normal and his stomach fill with butterflies. He laughed a bit because he felt so happy. He couldn’t believe it sometimes. He didn’t know what love felt like until Justin. He never wanted to let go of the feeling or the blond.
Now that is real Brian-loves-Justin LOVE!
Author's Response: i'm happy that you're enjoying their love. the thing with justin is that in his head he thinks he's competing because of the years that brian and michael had known each other and what not, plus he's definitely not thinking straight.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 11:04 AM · On: It's Heaven
Im happy they are so happy together. I love how Emmett has chosen to keep their secret without anyone having to pressure him. I think Emmett is the only one with clear eyes in this story.
It seems odd not to have Debbie rooting on the Brian/Justin love. I think your story is rather rare in all the fansites for that. :o)
I haven't mentioned it before, but I just adore Evan. Im just fine with how you re-organized Justin's family, I just miss Jen and there is no Daphne for Justin to turn to. The way Gus and Evan are together is so fun.
Author's Response: i'm happy that you are enjoying everything about it.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 10:03 AM · On: What Had To Be Done
Wow. I didn't think Brian would do it. At least not for several more chapters. ;o)
Im glad its done. But now what? Everyone is going to have an opinion.
Author's Response: everyone always has an opinion and their goin to drive the brunet crazy.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 08:51 AM · On: I Could Make Him The Happiest Man
Complications, complications, complication.
Reading loads of fanfic is easier, eh?
Author's Response: yes, i know. is a lot easier.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Burn In Hell A Thousand Times Over
“Justin,” Michael said grabbing the blond by the arm. “Come and talk some sense into Brian.”
Ok, so it seems so weird to have Justin being the Mikey in the threesome. I think Michael would be way too jealous to allow Brian a friend closer than him. But, should it happen, I guess it would be just like Mikey to go along with it so long as Brian was happy, and happy with him.
He knew better than to cause pain to someone and on top of it someone like Michael. The man adored Brian with all his heart. He lived day to day doing things for the brunet. Michael was good to everyone and always tried to help everyone around...
And right then Justin got the sensation that he was going to hell.
Now, I dont believe for a second that Justin (or Brian) are going to go to hell. We can't help what we feel. We can only help our actions. Mikey had an open relationship with Brian, and perhaps it was only time before Brian hooked up with someone whose chemistry mixed with his caused such a "kaboom!" that nothing could be the same anymore.
I still think Brian should admit he has fallen in love with Justin, but I dont think they should make it worse by telling everyone they'd already been together.
And, besides, Michael is an enabler - he will allow Brian to become a full fledged alcoholic/druggie. Justin would physically restrain Brian before he would risk Brian hurting himself - even if that means having Brian hate him.
Author's Response: people can go to hell...those who betray get the worst place...that's why justin is thinking that. but i think that its all forgiven even if it took a while for everyone to be at peace.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Hollow
Justin pushed Brian away. “You want me then you know what you have to do. I’m serious, Brian. Go home to Michael. That’s what you wanted, now live with it.”
Good boy! Its also about Justin demanding respect. Respect for himself as well as for his friend Michael. I could see this as canon. Brian needs to get off the fence.
Author's Response: And it's so hard for him to push Brian away when all he wants is the brunet is close to him.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Let's Lie And Say It's For The Best
Im very proud of Justin.
Im glad Brian is finally getting it and hopefully will stop trying to tempt Justin, driving them both mad. Its painful, but they cannot be together unless it is out in the open.
Author's Response: It is hard but they have to stop it. Decisions got to be made.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 06:24 AM · On: The Things I Can't Do
well, accepting Michael's request to move into together shurely brought them all to the next lower circle of hell! Brian must be feeling sick with dread. Imagine how Justn will feel.
Author's Response: Oh you have no idea, but don't worry. Brian will wake up after he gets over the sick feeling for making the biggest mistake of his life.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Decisions To Make
Its already too late.
Unless he and Justin break it off now, and then Brian slowly breaks it off with Michael, perhaps saving their best friend status. Later, much later, he can be with Justin. But, even then I think Mikey would know.....
Author's Response: I know what you mean. They just have made a mess and it won't be easy fixing it.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 04:00 AM · On: Definitely An Affair
Justin cant stay isolated. Babylon is a mecca for gays, and it is reasonable to think that as the hottest bottom around he would meet up with the group that contained the hottest top. It is all leading to trouble, no matter what. The only real question is, how long until it all comes tumbling down?
I actually feel bad for Mikey. The longer they wait the worse I feel. Mikey deserves better. He's not my fave person but I think he deserves the truth.
Author's Response: I think anyone deserves to be told the truth. I guess Brian never saw it coming and when he realize he didn't want to let go of Justin he didn't know what to say to Michael.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 03:30 AM · On: My Neighbor
I can't imagine Brian with Michael. I mean, of course its possible, but I dont WANT to imagine them having sex. Eww. I daydream about Brian and Justin, but Michael naked? Ick.
Author's Response: Hopefully you can stand everything that happens.
Reviewer: brian t. (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Forbidden To The World
i am new reader of mw. this is one of the best stories i have read about the boys. i know you wrote it sometime ago. are you writing more stories? i hope so as i will read all of the ones that are here plus anything else you will write lol.
Author's Response: at one point when i get caught up with answering all my reviews and unlock the muse from that cell in my head, yes i'm going to write more.
Reviewer: rzn Rose (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
WOW I just finished the whole story and I kept asking myself when will they do it raw and then you gave me the perfect ending. thank you
Author's Response: I'm happy that you enjoyed this story. I had tons of fun writing it. Thanks for reviewig. I love that. Hugs, Tay
Reviewer: Michelle (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:04 PM · On: One Good Day Overshadows The Rest
I'm in love with this chapter because in so many fan fics there is always some sort of tragedy where someone becomes seriously hurt and their partner has to take care of them but the writer always manages to keep the more embarrassing or awkward moments, such as bathroom breaks, at bay.
You successfully incorporated that aspect without being crass and I truly admire you for it. It adds a true sense of reality to your story.
Great writing! I'm totally hooked. =]
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your words. I never thought about it when I did it. I guess I just wanted to show everyone what love was about and that they were willing to do it no matter what. I'm happy about it. It's good that you like dit. I'm truly thankfull for the words that you have put here. Thanks again. Take care honey, Tay
Reviewer: sarahrei (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2008 05:40 AM · On: Forbidden To The World
I love this story. You should begin the sequel. I'd like to see how it would unfold. You mentioned B/J having kids. That would be interesting.
Author's Response: Mmm, if a sequel does happen it would have to be later on. I have to many things that I have to finish right now before you all get together and decide to hunt me down. Lol. Thanks, I will keep it in mind and do it one day. Later, Tay
Reviewer: maritess (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2008 03:03 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
nice and cute story. thanks
Author's Response: I'm happy that you liked it. Thanks for reading. Hugs, Tay
Reviewer: berrynutz (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2008 08:43 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
This was a very enjoyable story. Nicely written, the story moved a good pace and flowed very well.
Author's Response: Great to hear that. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. There will be other things and I hope you like them as much if not more. Later, Tay
Reviewer: berrynutz (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2008 06:09 AM · On: Happily Ever After
I think chapters 15 & 16 are in the wrong order.
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know. I fixed it. I'm happy that you guys are watching out for me. Hugs, Tay
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2008 06:05 AM · On: My Neighbor
Hi...I was re-reading the story because it's one of my favorites and I was wondering if the chapters 'Pretending Not To See' and 'Happily Ever After' were out of order. I wasn't sure and thought I should ask.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know. I went and fixed it. Thanks for watching out for me. Later, Tay
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2008 08:00 PM · On: Forbidden To The World
This was one of my favorite stories. I"m glad I got a chance to reread it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know. I'm glad too. I think I am happy that I finally posted all of them back. Yes, it feels good. Yay!!!
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