Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 31

I am in love with this story. I love b/j stories when they work it out, but i must say my favorite person on qaf was emmett, he's just like my best friend so out, proud, brave and a little tacky with his fashion sense.  So i loved to read a story that showed how important he is to the family.  Thanks for the ride i really appreciated it

Reviewer: Riggershh6 (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 31

Well i spent the last three days off and on(mostly on) reading through this wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us/me. It was so great to read. I come onto this site wayyyyy to often and am happy to say that this was a treat. I am glad that I found it and was able to read it all at once.

Wish that it had made it to the screen as another season, I know that I have always felt cheated that we were left the way that we were. Our boys deserved so much more!!!

I loved your characters. The love/hate with the munchers was wonderful. I have to tell you that I feared that you were going to have one of the girls abusing Gus, but what you did was so much more realistic. Children react horribly to losing those they love, even if it just a temporary thing, and you expressed this very well. Congrats for not making them villians, but just parents.

Ok the sex was hot!!! Thanks for that, and B/J oh to be a fly in that room/house.

Loved the descriptions of the windows in the studio an the kitchen plans that I know were in the works! Oh to live like the rich.

 Thank you again for sharing this wonderful story. I hope that you know that your talent is appreciated.

 

Reviewer: swish (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 31

perfect!! thank you very much.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 31

Fantastic ending......  too bad the QAF writers didn't end the show as good ..... Thanks.... 

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 31

this was perfect, loved it...

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 27

I am thrilled that Emmett finally realizied that he and Nathan can be more than friends... and that Psycho Adam is dead.......

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 24

OMG... that Adam Stevens is one sick  S.O.B.... I wish Brian gets to have five minutes alone with him..before they lock him up... 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 16

Alright!!!!!  Melanie finally did the right thing...she realized what Lindsay was trying to do..and how much Brian has changed..... and gave him joint custody... Fantastic....  

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 15

I have always hated that phrase ... "It's Only Time".......  if you think about it... Time is the only thing that there NEVER... is enough of for any of us.... it's the "thing" that matters MOST....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 12

Lindsay is such a selfish  BITCH.... she wants to ruin Brian and Justin's relationship.. just so she can manipulate Brian into doing whatever she wants....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

OMG.... that homophobic... S.O.B... Craig is in the closet????  after all the grief he gave Justin about being gay!!! what a fucking hypocrite..... I wonder who the stupid bastard is that he's involved with... 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

I am so glad that Brian finally got mad at what Lindsay did.... she made sure Justin and Brian were apart and then took Gus to Canada!!! Lindsay got exactly what she wanted and left Brian alone and miserable.....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 4

it's absolutely true.... they are soul mates....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

OMG.... I can't believe that Justin and Brian let Lindsay talk them into leaving each other...especially since Justin realized he was living her dream..and that he would be happy anywhere as long as he was with Brian... I never understood why they let her get away with doing that.....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

I totally agree with Ted... why couldn't Justin paint in the Pitts instead of NY?? if you're good it doesn't matter where you paint.... but... leave it to Lindsay to "decide" NY was best for Justin.... her and Melanie were my least favorite characters on QAF.... 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

I waited till this was complete to read.... and I love it already!!!  Season 5 was sooo bad..I still get flashbacks from the "Finale"... lol.... on to the next chapter.......

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

I don't read WIPs, so was pleased to see this story was completed.  And, boy, was it worth the wait!  Definitely one of my favorite fixes for the disastrous CowLip version of Season 5.

Those episodes left such a bad taste in my mouth that I've never been able to watch the reruns; once was definitely more than enough.  So, I'm always excited to read a nice, long 'fix', and I've read many good ones.  With its elements of mystery, romance, and growth, this story is absolutely one of the best.  Thank you for writing and sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the awesome review. This story has certainly been a labor of love. It's good to know people are enjoying it. The characters deserved more than CowLip gave them. I hope I did them justice.

Liz

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 31

Whoo Hoo!!!

I love this story and I am so glad that it's been completed! It was fantastic even as a WIP and these last few chapters were really the icing on an already very tasty cake! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading this. And I'm so excited to have finally completed it. Thanks. =)

Liz

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 27

Just re-reading this - such a great story!  Hope your muses inspire you to pick this back up at some point :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 27

You have a very good story here. I'll be looking for your updates. It was  good to make a drama subplot with Emmitt and company. We still want to read about Brian and Justin and their re-union someday hopefully. Great read.



Author's Response:

Thank you! This story has definately been a labor of love. I hated the last episode and writing this was definately cathardic. Working on The Spy Who Loved Me right now but this one is alwys on my mind. Definately a subplot...because I hated the way they ended Emmett's story too. And I want him to have epic love like B/J. =) But this is definately all about Brian and Justin's reunion and future.

Thanks again, Hun. ((hugs))

Liz 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 26

Oh shit!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 25

Brave stupid Justin; good writing though.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 24

OH my God! Super plot here.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

Delicious

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 22

To busy reading this fine story to review; compliment you know.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 21

Another WOW chapter.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 20

Wow!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 19

I'm hooked; gotta read on.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 18

Another great chapter. I forgot to say it was good to make the joint custody thing and for Michael to come around.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 17

Suspense now is thick.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 16

Great chapter; I don't write much so I can read more.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 15

I'm always amazed how fanfiction writers insist on condoms for HIV protection and have the characters swallow which is the same exposure if not more so for catching HIV. Artistic liscense beyond medical facts I suppose.

Glad to see Linda got dumped. Gotta read more; staying up all night for your story.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 14

Calvin is interesting and perhaps not so honest. Very interesting story you have here.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 13

Linda is such a cunt; I enjoyed Justin's intervention of the situation.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 12

I love how the dykes are the bad guys in your story. They deserve it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 11

I enjoy your writing style very much.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 10

You really know how to drag out the drama. Gotta read more now.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wonderful chapter; I didn't like the attack on Justin but it turned out ok; I would have liked for Brian stomping Craig's ass into the ground. But that's me!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

You write very well.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 7

OH my God! Craig is a puffer! What a plot twist.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hehe....the angst of getting Justin home is overwhelming here. Bringing back Babylon is a plus too. Or will Brian expand Kinnetik to NY? Time to read on.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great chapter once more. I like how they both want to be together again.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 3

Very hot sexy chapter; you give good B/J.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 2

I was so sorry for Lindsay's involvement with Jusitn leaving. Ted is spot on with his analysis of the situation.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

I hated how they ended QAF. I read on hoping you reunite them quickly.

Reviewer: swish (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 27

loved it, loved it, loved it! Adam deserved all he got! B&J hot as usual****

Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 27

What a great story!  Looking forward to the rest of it.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 27

Thank goodness Adam is gone! What a terror he was! Now I'm hoping that something will eventually happen with Nathan and Em =)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 26

Crap! That pyscho escaped!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 27

beautiful. love how em and nathan go off to britin together

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 26

Eeep!!!

Reviewer: Blackwell (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 26

Hey! It's great to see this story updated again, I love it :)

It keeps getting better and better, by the way. Please, keep up!

Cheers,

- B.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on the next chapter now. =)

Liz

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 25

this story is so amazing

so true to the characters

god it is my fave fanfic ever

is it on hiatus?

i need some more!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Sara. This one is on a small hiatus while I try and finish The Spy Who Loved Me. But I will difinately be back with a new chapter soon. This one is so personal to me. And I'm so happy you enjoyed it so much. =)

Liz

Reviewer: swish (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 25

loved it, loved it, loved it! can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you Thank you Thank you!This one is on a small hiatus now because I'm trying to finish The Spy Who Loved Me. But it is very close to my heart and I will be continuing it. Thank you so much for reading it.

Liz

Reviewer: lougenessis (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 25

I've read your story, it took a couple of days, but I want to let you know how brilliant you are.  I've enjoyed your story from beginning to where it's ended and I want more.  lol  I laughed, I cried, I imagined, I hoped, I prayed.  I did it all!  You captured the whole gang to a tee and I appreciate that in an author.  The dialog was sexy,funny, heart felt, them. Thank you for letting us all go back and giving us your interpretation of one of the greatest love stories ever told.  I appreciate it and looking forward to reading  more of this story and any more you may've written.  Bravo!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. This story is really close to my heart. I couldn't agree more... best love story ever told. And I really wanted to make sure it continued....I wanted to keep telling it. =) I'm so happy you like it so much. Right now I'm working on the next chapter of The Spy Who Loved Me. But I will definately be back to this one again. Thank you for this encouragement. It means so much.

Liz

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 25

I'm all caught up on all the chapters and am loving this story.

So glad that caught that wack job Adam, sick fucker! I had a feeling when he went into Em's room it was a set up, couldn't stand it if something else happened to my Em.

Good for Em telling Calvin he didn't want to see him again. The guy won't even testify against Adam after all that.

Thankfully Justin is ok! That was such a dangerous thing for him to do, but very much like him. He can't keep doing that to Brian though, not sure how many more times the man can go through being scared for Justin's life.

I hope you update soon, this story is fantastic!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I will definately be updating. I'm just so glad you're enjoying.

 Liz

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 25

Another freaking amazing chapter. please, please, please update soon! I am recommending this fic to all my friends - I love it!



Author's Response:

I just wanted to thank you for reading and commenting. It means so muc that people are enjoying this. I will most definately be continuting this saga. =)

Thanks,

Liz

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 24

OMG I was on edge for like 3/4 of this.

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 21

You have a knack for covering a full spectrum of emotional scenes : fear and sorrow for Emmett, hot sex, and poignant sweetness. It is such a pleasure to read!

Reviewer: cattabella (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 19

Ok, I am delurking. I have been reading this almost nonstop - it has kept me up half the night when I need to be at work at 7am! I sincerely thank you for sharing your writing - its brilliant, seductive, hot, tender! 

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 18

I love this fic! LOVE IT!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 20

Oh no! That bastard hurt Brian's Emmett! (That's his Emmett, although he would never say it out loud!). As soon as he said he had a meeting, I knew it was that nutcase. I hope Em will be ok. I can totally see Nathan nursing him back to health.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 25

great chapter-  thanks for updating so soon-  can't wait for more-  Glad Carl was able to move so quickly and they caught Adam-  that slime ball.  If only it always happened like that.

Author's Response:

Thank you for being patient. =) I'm glad you're enjoying this.

Liz

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2008 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 25

Brian soooo love his Justin! Thanks and more please

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2008 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 24

Love this story... always great when I find an update for it posted!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2008 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 24

update soon-  you've got me on the edge of my seat-  at least you let us know that Justin was okay.

Reviewer: db1234 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

I really enjoyed this story so far. Hope you are going to finish it. I am anxious to see where it goes.

denise

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

ok, first I need a cold shower! Wow! Great chapter, very hot, and also, very touching.  "home is where you are Brian, only you..."

loved it!

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good chapter. Can't wait for the next one. I hope that sick fuck is cought before anybody else is hurt.

Reviewer: Tina2705 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 21

This story is so amazing...

Please update soon... Tina 

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2008 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Really loving this story, good job, thanx muchly.

Reviewer: dreaminhappy (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2008 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

poor emment! Loved the interaction between Brian and Emment and of course Brian and Justin!!

Great as always :)

Reviewer: Blackwell (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2008 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 21

What can I say?

Your story is beautiful is every single way :)

- B.

Reviewer: Mia (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2008 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 21

Wow! Your fucking talented.

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2008 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 20

WOW, I love this story and Your writing is just brilliant. Even if it was a long chapter I think I was holding my breath the whole time while I read it.

I`m looking forward to the next one.

Sunny 

Reviewer: Kaylee (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2008 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 19

First, that scene with brian and Justin in the claw foot bath, I can see it so clearly. and Second, I can't wait for an update. I love this story!

Author's Response: Thank you. More is on its way. =)

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2008 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 19

Wow! What an amazing chapter! First, that club!  Woo hoo!  LOVED the massage!  What did that hot italian guy say to the other in Italian?

Second, oh no!  What is the problem!?  Please update soon!

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Hun. I'm glad you liked.

The men said: "Such beautiful men and obviously so in love." =)

More soon.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2008 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 18

Well this has been almost too much fun. I have spent the last couple of days loving every word and addicted to every letter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much... =) There's more on its way.. but I'm so happy you've enjoyed it.

Liz

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2008 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 18

There is so much to say about this wonderful chapter!  Love how you keep the friendship between b/m. you wrote it beautifully. "always have, always wil." As friends.

Love the  developing relationship between B/J.

And Calvin! Oh I hope Brian helps him.  He will, for Emmett's sake.

And the reunion....HOT!  Can't wait to see what the  gift is, and I can't wait to see what the club Alex is taking them to is like.

Amazing chapter!  Thanks!

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2008 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 17

More, more, more. I absolutely love this story.



Author's Response: More coming soon. =) Thank You.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2008 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 17

oh my goodness!!! what a place to leave us.  now i won't be able to sleep i'll be so nervous about emmett

Author's Response:

Sorry to leave you hanging... =) But I;m glad you're enjoying it. Thank You.

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2008 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 14

I love this story. More soon. please.

Author's Response: Thank You. =) More very soon. I'm trying to get all of the chapters that went down  back up then post the new ones. So glad you're enjoying it though.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2008 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 14

Loved this chapter.  love the lyrics to that song!  I can't wait to see how Justin reacts when Brian tells him he hasn't been tricking.

Great scene at woodys, and afterwards at the loft.  :-)



Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your kind words. I'm working to get all of the chapters added here. God knows how you managed to add all your wonderous million chapters so soon...lol.. But there is new stuff posted on LJ. I'm so glad you're enjoying this though.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2008 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 7

I just reread this wonderful story and had to comment again how much  I LOVE your writing!  I can't wait till you update.

You bring each scene to life with your words. Thank you for sharing this story.

Reviewer: Sam (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2008 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this fic, I already read every chapter at the old MW and I can't wait to see here or at your LJ new updates.

Author's Response: Thank you Sam. I'm tryin gto gwt all of the chapters updated....but I do have a brand new one over on LJ. =)

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2008 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 4

liz, thanks for your reply. But i don't know how to go to your LJ (sorry for my ignorance!!!). i really wanted to read your story. thanks again!!!

Author's Response:

You can view my Live Journal Here: http://we-dreamerz.livejournal.com/

The Master Links to all the Stories on my LJ is: http://www.livejournal.com/tools/memories.bml?user=we_dreamerz

Hope You find it helpful.  =)

Liz

 

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2008 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

love the story!!! what takes you tooooooooo long to update? please update soooooonnn.... thanks a lot!!!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm actually a lot farther into this one...it was just wiped out on the original MW...So I'm reloading it here. You can see a lot more right now on my LJ if you want...otherwise it is just a matter of finding the time to re load. Thank you though for the little reminder. =) Gotta make time.

Reviewer: ridiculous_romantic (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2008 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love this story and can't wait for you to continue it! Brian and Justin are soul mates and you write that brilliantly and describe their loving feelings very well. Please update soon! :) 

Author's Response: Thank you so much..I do have some more to share... I just need to get the time to update. There's more to see at my LJ in the meantime if you're interested.

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