Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2023 03:12 PM · On: Echoes of Rediscovery: Embracing Brian
Loved this story and your writing style! Looking forward very much to the sequel. ~Kim
Author's Response: first 2 chapters already posted
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2023 11:31 PM · On: Echoes of the Unknown
Hmm I'm confused. Why are there suddenly paramedics in the loft? Did I miss something? Or is a chapter missing?
Author's Response: Oh i think something got lost in me posting i think i might have posted a draft of the chapter and not the actual chapter? Cause he's having a panic attack i thought it's mentioned soemone is calling an ambulance
Author's Response: Oh i think something got lost in me posting i think i might have posted a draft of the chapter and not the actual chapter? Cause he's having a panic attack i thought it's mentioned soemone is calling an ambulance
Author's Response: Oh i think something got lost in me posting i think i might have posted a draft of the chapter and not the actual chapter? Cause he's having a panic attack i thought it's mentioned soemone is calling an ambulance
Author's Response: Oh i think something got lost in me posting i think i might have posted a draft of the chapter and not the actual chapter? Cause he's having a panic attack i thought it's mentioned soemone is calling an ambulance
Author's Response: Oh i think something got lost in me posting i think i might have posted a draft of the chapter and not the actual chapter? Cause he's having a panic attack i thought it's mentioned soemone is calling an ambulance
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2023 02:16 PM · On: A Night in Transition
I want more!! This is so good. I am so happy that Justin was there to help Brian. That doctor needs to be fired. Immediately!! Please give us more soon. Love it!
Author's Response: more today going to try and make it longer. I have a nother story but not going to post it until these are done. But update today so be on the look out.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2023 01:37 AM · On: A Night in Transition
Hi, Perry - just wanted to say I love this story! Kind of has a "Beauty and the Beast" flair to it. I wonder what Carl will discover when he does the background check on 'Jeremiah.' You write very well. Looking forward to reading the rest of this.
~Kim
Author's Response: Exactly! Just you wait becaues let me tell you, the Jermiah that expect and the Jeremiah they get are of course two different people. Update coming today.
Author's Response: Exactly! Just you wait becaues let me tell you, the Jermiah that expect and the Jeremiah they get are of course two different people. Update coming today.
Author's Response: Exactly! Just you wait becaues let me tell you, the Jermiah that expect and the Jeremiah they get are of course two different people. Update coming today.
Author's Response: Exactly! Just you wait becaues let me tell you, the Jermiah that expect and the Jeremiah they get are of course two different people. Update coming today.
Author's Response: Exactly! Just you wait becaues let me tell you, the Jermiah that expect and the Jeremiah they get are of course two different people. Update coming today.
Author's Response: Exactly! Just you wait becaues let me tell you, the Jermiah that expect and the Jeremiah they get are of course two different people. Update coming today.
Author's Response: Exactly! Just you wait becaues let me tell you, the Jermiah that expect and the Jeremiah they get are of course two different people. Update coming today.
Author's Response: Exactly! Just you wait becaues let me tell you, the Jermiah that expect and the Jeremiah they get are of course two different people. Update coming today.
Author's Response: Exactly! Just you wait becaues let me tell you, the Jermiah that expect and the Jeremiah they get are of course two different people. Update coming today.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2023 03:23 AM · On: Revelations in the Night
Doc deserved a beat down by Justin!!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2023 06:27 PM · On: From Shadows to Radiance
Hi, Perry - I finally have a moment to leave some thoughts on your story. First of all, I do NOT feel you are using too many "big words." In fact, if I don't know what a word means - for instance, when I read the newspaper - I will stop and look it up. I was looking up pernicious the other day - lol. Anyway, I really like your writing style and the emotions it evokes. So keep it up! I'm guessing Brian was so disfigured in the accident that Justin cannot recognize him yet, and perhaps his vocal cords were affected that he has a different sounding voice (?). I'm enjoying the story very much, though, and am looking foward to reading the rest as you get time to work on it. I will wait patiently until you can. Thanks for posting your story on MW! It is greatly appreciated. ~Kim
Author's Response: Yes his vocal chords were a mess, and he has a burn across one side of his face. He keeps it covered by wearing his hair long. He also had a name so he thinks he's the guy. All of that will be explained soon
Author's Response: Yes his vocal chords were a mess, and he has a burn across one side of his face. He keeps it covered by wearing his hair long. He also had a name so he thinks he's the guy. All of that will be explained soon
Author's Response: Yes his vocal chords were a mess, and he has a burn across one side of his face. He keeps it covered by wearing his hair long. He also had a name so he thinks he's the guy. All of that will be explained soon
Reviewer: Slugger07 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2023 11:20 PM · On: Silent Connections
Very interesting, can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2023 02:56 AM · On: New Beginnings
Glad to see another update to this intriguing story. I would have been interested in learning some more of the back story regarding Jeremiah. Justin met him before? If so, I don't see how it could be an amnesiac Brian, since Justin would know him. Can't wait to see how this story progresses! Great writing. ~Kim
Reviewer: Oh_Viv (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2023 09:29 AM · On: Silent Connections
Interesting story, don't tell me Jeremiah is Brian who lost the memory...
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2023 09:39 PM · On: Unforseen Turnmoil
Congrats on getting this posted! This is such a good story and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it :) - Janet
Reviewer: Taylor-Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2023 01:52 PM · On: Unexpected Encounters
Wow, I didn't expect that and I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Taylor-Kinney (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2023 01:46 PM · On: A Night of Anticipation
Great start but the ending broke my heart a bit knowing that Justin was waiting for him at home... but I guess Brian will always be Brian :)
Author's Response: Yea but you know they are togehter so u know how it is. I love that your name is Taylor Kinney. All I think about is Severide on Chicago Fire
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2023 12:47 PM · On: Unexpected Encounters
Hi, Perry - oh, I am definitely invested in this story now! Very unique how you handled Brian's encounter. And that last part! I confess I'm glad you sent me the third chapter to help you post, b/c now I can take a peek at it. I see you've figured out how to post this chapter, though. That's great! Thank you for posting this on MW. I am really enjoying it. ~Kim
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2023 12:44 PM · On: A Night of Anticipation
Hello, Perry! Great writing! I can picture this well in my head, and you are very eloquent in your writing. Looking forward to Ch. 2. Keep up the great work! ~Kim
Author's Response: aww thanks
Author's Response: aww thanks
Author's Response: aww thanks
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