Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2018 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 2

Good for Molly and Justin , even with bad feelings with their father, they need that closure.

Author's Response:

Molly did good, she wanted to be sure there was a balanced story of Craig.  I think she & Justin were happy they attended the funeral.  Thanks for the review!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2018 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 2

Good for molly having her say at the funeral..... wonder what Craig’s brother and the bimbo are up to?? Thanks for sharing another great chapter.

Author's Response:

Molly just couldn't hold it inside!  I think Brad is just an idiot, the bimbomay have an agenda, more to come.  Thanks for taking time to review, you know I love to hear from the readers!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2018 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

I always liked your stories, but you lost yourself a reader.

Just what exactly did you mean by this statement? "You are stuck in the eye for an eye oldb testament section of the Bible. It appears to me that you are more Jewish than anything else." As I am Jewish myself I find that last line highly offensive.

Good luck with the rest of your story.

Author's Response:

Sorry you feel that way and I apologize for offendng you.  I did not mean to offend anyone.  The old testament of the Bible, to me, has a much different tone, very much about rules & punishments, than the new testament which talks much more about forgiveness & inclusion.  I myself am offended by many "so called Christians" quoting from the old testament and never using passages from the new which are Christ's teachings.  It was thoughtless of me to imply Jewish people are violent or wrong minded in some way.  I just meant he seemed to stuck in quoting the Bible before Christ arrived and so, like Christ, he was Jewish.  Again I sincerely apologize for offending you and that was never my intent.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2018 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 2

So very happy to see another chapter on this.  You've really got the mystery going in this tale.  Did Craig commit suicide?  I'm sure that if he was unable to father children that there is something rotten in Taylorland.

Author's Response:

My friend, always good to hear from you.  Hope you are having great holidays.  I think Craig did himself in but why, is the question.  Thanks for the review and all your support!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2018 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very interesting start to this new story line.  So proud of Peter in wanting and put a voice to his need to call Justin Papa.  Can't say I am unhappy about Craig. I think Jennifer handled his brother brilliantly.

Dee Dee

Author's Response:

Hi Dee Dee, poor Craig, I don't think many people will miss him.  I think Peter will be happy with his decision.  I'm sure Brad hopes he never has to see Jennifer again.  Thanks for the review!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2018 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow what a surprise to see my banner after more than two years. 

Bye bye Craig, welcome babies. Think I'm gonna love this.

* hugs  *

 

Author's Response:

This took a little longer then I planned, my bad.  Your banner is still beautiful - it had inporved with age,like a fine wine!!  Hope you do love it!!!!  Thanks for the banner and the comments!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yay, I have been waiting for this.  So Craig finally took the cowards way out.  Evidently his brother doesn't know about the pregnant girl friend.  Perhaps Jennifer should talk to Janice & Ken before deciding not to attend the funeral.  It might be time for the truth to come out!

Author's Response:

Always really glad to see your comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  So, you are not convinced Jennifer, Molly & Justin drove him to this????  Huh, I think you could be right about that.  I bet Brand doesn't know much of anything.  Thanks for all your support!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi sweet Baboo, Holy Cow! when started the new story, you sure got everyones attention! Well Craigs dead, who knows where he will go--God doesn't want him he has broken every commandment more than once--and even the devil doesn't want him. His brother Brad sounds like he is a jerk. I wonder about Craig's parents, how do they feel about Jenn, Molly and Justin or is Brad voiceing his own view? Justin and Molly will be devastated when they learn he took his own life, it seems like he did this as the final fuck you, to make them feel guilty. When the babys are born they soon forget about Craig. I was surprised by Peter wanting to call Justin "papa" somehow I think it's about the newborns coming home and he feels that Justin won't love him anymore. Great chapter. love your Sally

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, it always makes me smile to see your review.  Always makes me happy to read your nice comments.  We will probably never know where Craig goes but we can be glad he went.  Craig's parents are a bit of a mystery, hmmmmmmmmmm  Suicide is a shock to everyone, I had a friend who took that way out.  That is what a thought about Peter, that he wanted to be sure of his place in Uncle Justin/Papa's heart.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!  Love, Your Sweet Baboo

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Bill, great start to the new story!!!   I certainly wasn't expecting that!!   Wow, Craig is dead, and it seems his brother shares his lovely views as well.   And that comment of his to Jennifer "you have always seen only your own viewpoint and refused to try and learn from others?"   Yeah, right.   And what about him?  Obviously, nothing Jen tries to tell him will penetrate through his thick skull as well.   He and Craig were obviously cut from the same cloth.  

But I thought Peter wanting to call Justin Papa was very sweet.   The two of them have always shared a very special bond, and he does see Justin as being a father to him, and he's never had that before.    I think Justin handled the situation very well.  

Author's Response:

I thought this would make an interesting way to start the new story.  One departure, 2 new arrivals!!  After all Brad is a man a simple woman like Jennifer could learn a lot from just observing  a man like Brad.  She could learn there are more a--holes in the world then asses.  Justin knew there would be hard to heal hurt feelings if he said no.  I don't think Peter will regret asking for this.  Glad to know this chapter meets with your approval, thanks for letting me know!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow not sure that Brad can refuse to allow Craig’s kids from attending their fathers funeral even if they were estranged. Brian is never going to sit back quietly if Justin’s wants to attend and enter a vipers den unprotected

Author's Response:

Brad seems to be a kind & caring man but I'm not sure he will welcome them with open arms.  Hope you enjoyed the latest chapter of my long saga.  Thanks for the review!!!!! Bill