I finally got to read this amazing chapter. I love Jennifer I swear she really did take Andrea down didn’t she. I hope her poor Son gets a break from school that’s way to much pressure on him. So proud of Peter and John they did so well with their awards. I’m so glad Brian took down Micheal as well he needed to hear some home truths. Brian is so happy with his life and his kids. I really cannot wait for more of this amazing story. 

Author's Response:

Grandmom Jem can be ruthless,that is why Brian does his best not to get on her wrong side.  Happy to know you enjoyed this latest chapter.  Thanks for taking time to review, I truly appreciate all your support!!!   Hugs,  Bill

My Sweet Baboo, Your last chapter was really great. Your introduction of Jay and his    parents were eye opening, I think the mother couldn't meet her parents expectations and has put such pressure on Jay I felt so sorry for him and she even has his summer planned for him and she was just bitchy to her ex. Must be hard on a child especially when his dad was pleased with him. Itt was nice Peter and John were also honored those boys have come so far since being with Brian and Justin. As usual when mikey visited the twins he was as clueless (his usual state) he still doesn't understand why the men lived in the country and are absolutly in a dazed state with the love they feel for the twins and each other. I think who ever coined the phrase "dumb as a rock" met mikey. I think Kevin,John and Gus are enjoying the babies and love them to pieces if Mel and Lindsay think Brian is too selfesh to be a good parent perhaps they should purchse a a mirror. Love ya, your Sally

Author's Response:

My Darling Sally, always happy to read your comments and know you are still following the story!!!!!   Jay has a tough Mom for sure.  Andrea seems like a deeply unhappy woman.  She doesn't get the message that Peter is doing well in school without undue pressure from hsi guardians.  Maybe she will think about Jennifer's comments and see the wisdom there, maybe not??  Mikey is dependable and unchangingly clueless, it is something we can count on.  Mel's view of life is highly influenced by her jealousy of Brian, I think it always was.  Thanks so much for all your support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Hearing from readers is what keeps this story moving forward.  As always I remain, your sweet Baboo

Still a beautiful day of life at the Taylor-Kinney. Jennifer always knows how to show claws nicely! Michael has still not understood anything or prefers to live in his past. I liked Brian putting things together again. He is too patient for me. He should take him out of his life, he is useless and always wants to break the mood because he is jealous of Brian's happiness. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Jennifer never seems to mind making her opinion known.  I think Mikey is like a brother to Brian.  They no longer have much in common but there is a long history between them.  You know what they say you can chose your friends but not your family.  Thanks for taking time to post your comments.  You know I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

I loved my gift. 

Thank you

 

Author's Response:

Happy Birthday!!!  Glad you liked your gift!!!   Bill

This story is a gift that keeps on giving.  I love how well the boys did on awards day.  I pity poor Jay.  Jennifer is turning very oppionated and less Country Club.  I wonder how Gus is doing.  Great chapter.

Author's Response:

You have been here since the beginning.  Thrilled that you are still reading and enjoying!!!!!!  Jennifer needs to find work as a child advocate.  I think Andrea really rubbed her the wrong way.  Maybe she is hanging around Brian & Debbie too much and her country club veneer is wearing off.  Thank you, as always, for your support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

So glad the grandmas interfeared with the move to Florida.  Loved how Justin handled Brad and Allison.  So much fun!  Thanks for sharing your talent, I just love this story!

Dee Dee

Author's Response:

Hi Dee Dee, glad you enjoyed this latest updates.  The Grandmoas took no prisoners andmade no apologies.  I think Brad & Allsion must have driven back to Pittsburgh in stunned silence.  Thanks for your super nice comments and for taking time topost your review!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Just FYI a mile would be asking for what I really want now that the babies are here which is a weekly ok daily update

Thanks again for more so fast.

now chop chop where is the next one

heee heee

Author's Response:

Glad you are keeping your request reasonable??????    

What a wonderful chapter.  Love how Justin told Brad and Allison to get lost.  It's nice how John and Peter love helping with Lily and Liam!

Author's Response:

I ws getting a little worried about seeing a review from you.  Whew!!!  As always I appreciate your support and am glad that you are stillreading & enjoying.  I think Justin must have really enjoyed letting those 2 idiots the actual facts.  I think John especially is fascinated By the new additions to the family.  Thanks for all your reviews!!!!!!   Bill

Nice update.  I really like this universe.  Justin showing up Craig's latest wife was a great scene.  Go Justin.

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking time to let me know you are still enjoying this long saga.  Justin had no trouble dealing with those 2 losers.  I bet that was an uncomfortable drive back to Pittsburgh.  Thanks for the review, you know I LOVE to get them!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Wonderful chapter... So glad the girls have been stopped, what a pair of bitches !!!

Look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed this latest chapter.  M&L discovered what it is like to face an opposing team all on your own.  They knew they would never win.  If they did fly to Florida I see Debbie & Jennifer jumping on a plane to confront them there.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

I liked one and thank you, btw I would would not be hurt if you wrote more than I asked for...

i do wish you would have had Brian in the room for the Brad/Allison confrontation just Brian snorting at the lies would have been amusing. 

This will not be the last time Lindsay and Melanie do something stupid I almost can’t wait to see what the next dumb thing is.

it is sad that even with the twins born Peter and John feel they can’t trust Brian and Justin to be there for their big moments like the end of year awards ceremony.

Trying to decide if I care if the twins ever meet Craig’s parents as of now I want Brian to say hell no.

i need another weekend of all 5 kids at the house with Brian and Justin 

Thanks again for the new chapter.

Author's Response:

Give you an inch and you want to take a mile.  I wanted Justin to handle Brad and the slut on his own.  Brian would have too anxious to protect his Sunshine.  I agree L&M are not god planners or decision makers.  J&P have a lot of years of neglect to overcome.  I think they still feel like eventually the uncles are too good to be true.  Brian would not be anxious to have any fanily of Craig involved in his children's lives.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for all your support!!!!!!  Bill

Yay thank you. I've been waiting for an update  

hey Sweet Baboo, I just thought of something ironic. In the series on tv I was always on Mel's side I always thought Linz played Brian and Mel against each other trying to gain each others trust. Linz was always a entitled brat who could turn on the water works in a blink of an eye and gaining their trust meant more money from Brian and taking what ever she could from Mel, always thought the c word described Linz to a tee, and the word is not CUTE !  I personally don't believe a word that comes out of her mouth. Love again Sally

Author's Response:

Hello again Darling Sally, Yes on the series Lindsay always did play Mel & Brian gainst each otherfor her advantage.  She is a product of her enviornment and in my universe that was more unpleasant than on TV.  I agree with yoru assessment iof Lindsa.  She & Melwere always among my most unfavorite characters.  I remain your sweet Baboo

What a pair of bitches Mel and Lindsey are... let’s hope that she’s being honest with

them both now, great chapter thanks for sharing 

Author's Response:

Happy to know you enjoyed the latest update.  I am thinking Lindsay may be sincere but time will tell.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!  Bill

Hello my Sweet Baboo: so glad to see a new chapter I've missed you! Well nothing new with Mel and Linz, but I never met such bitches who are not grateful for all the help they have been given. Brian and Justin paid to bring them back to the Pitts by paying off all their  debts and paying for the move, they pay alot extra monthly so Jenny has the same as Gus, find them a house, pay for linz's medical problems, and not once did we heard a simple heartfelt thank you! they critisize Kevin, Jen, and even the decision for the men to have another child and even John and Pete. I'm so glad the staff at Britin and Jen, Deb,etc know what B & J have done and what loving dads and uncles they are. I don't think Linz is the only one in her house hold to have mental problems! I don't know if I believe Linz is sincere time only tell. Now the unknown problem, is Craig's piece of ass and Craig's brother what are they up to--if they are smart they won't try anything on Jen's and Brian's watch. love you, Sally 

Author's Response:

Darling Sally,  M&L are not the most grateful people in the world for sure.  I am thinking all Lindsay's counseling may have given her a clue about the bad behavior but we will have to wait and see what happens.  Brad & Allsion are due to make an appearence soon, there just wasn't enough room in this chapter.  Always delighted to hear from you and know you are still following this long saga.  As always, your Sweet Baboo

I thought it was so funny you had the girls moving to Melbourne Fl. I live there and we are getting ready for a hurricane here.

Author's Response:

I actually know a couple people who live in Melbourne which is why I chose that as the Florida location.  Hope Dorian heads out to sea!!!   Thanks fort aking time to review,  Bill

Those Grandmas were on the war path.  You go girls!!  Let's hope Justin is right!

Dee Dee

Lol I love Jennifer and Debbie they sure are strong feisty woman. They are all so right telling off the girls for even thinking of doing what they are doing is so wrong. Thank goodness Brian got the word and set things in motion to stop it. Gosh I hope everything will be ok. 

 

Incredible work cannot wait for more xx

Author's Response:

I love them too!!!!  Jennifer spread the word and Brian went into action.  Glad you are still enjoying this saga.  Thanks for the kind words!!!!!!!!  Bill

Does Melanie realize how selfish she is? My God, what an idiot. The gang of grandmothers hit it was funny even if the context is not. Everyone is against Melanie even lawyers, I hope she is aware. Florida seems to be moving away but I have doubts about Lindsay's behavior for now I'm like Brian and wait to see what's going on Thanks for the update it's always a pleasure to read this story.

I am doing a happy dance.  So gla to see you are back.  You know this series is one of my most favorites.  Thank you.

Author's Response:

Sorry it too so long to update but happy you are still enjoying the story.  Thanks for the review, they are what keeps this story going!!!!!!  Bill

Why was my first thought liar liar pants on fire... regarding Lindsay.

i was just saying the other day I thought you forgot about this story and this weekend I was going to re read at least this part, I may still do that along with the nice new chapter.

The Grandmas were probably the best part of the whole chapter though I did admit I am worried about Deb’s health.

Lily already has Brian wrapped around her finger. I am guessing Liam will be Papa’s boy...

i would not be against Brian and Justin having FULL custody of Gus even though J.R. would be left behind maybe with just one Lindsay and Mel can figure out how to be decent, not necessarily good parents.

So my birthday is in October can I put in a request for 2 more chapter by the end of that Month

 

 

Author's Response:

Always happy to read your comments.  Sorry for the long delay in updating, life has been complicated.  Thos Grandmas are tough, I think as long as her grandchildren stay in town Debbie will be OK.  Lily does hve that "Taylor" attraction to Brian.  Many readers seem to think Gus whould live with his fathers.  I think many little boys love their mommies & want to be with them and we know that Gus missed Lindsay when she left the household for a while.  Gus is annoyed by his little sister but also protective of her - also like lots of little boys.  John & Peter had no trouble siding against Claire but i think it would be so much harder for Gus.  My birthday is September 1st so too late for me to request anything but I do agree to posting 2 chapters before your birthday.  Thanks for thereview!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Just a quick line to say hi & hope you're okay, as we haven't had an update for a while.  I hope nothing is wrong and life is treating you well.

Take care,

Deb L

Author's Response:

I am well.  I apologize for long delay.  Busy RL & a bit of creative block.  Hope to have an update posted soon.  Thanks for checking in,  Bill

I love how they are all bonding with Lilly and Liam they have already grabbed the hearts of the family. I could picture Gus and Kevin’s faces as they fed the babies making sure everything was done right. 

 

Grrrr I hate Mel can you kill her off or something, what are those girls planning. If they take Gus without permission I hope Brian gets full custody. 

 

Brilliant work cant wait for more. 

Thanks for the update......wonderful chapter as always 

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the new chapter!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Nothing gets by Jennifer.  I can’t wait until Mel and Linds try to move to Florida.  They will have to face the wrath of Justin, Brian and Jen!  Mel never misses a chance to jab Brian, one way or another.  Love Jen’s label for Mel.  

I always enjoy your updates.

Author's Response:

I think Jennifer goes on high alert anytime she enounters M&L.  Something tells me that Florida will not be getting any new residents from PA.  Happy to know you are still enjoying the story.  Thanks for the review, I do love to read them!!!!!!  Bill

So sorry, my Sweet Baboo. I had a brain fart, on facebook I'm a member of Friends of Gale Morgan Harold III, we share pictures and info about him and QAF someone was asking about a character of MissMerlot's five story series--the housekeeper was Alice and her husband George. Your housekeeper for Britin was Alice and her husband was Charlie, my bad. Both Alices' are very protective and so alike in many ways. Our group are asking many things about stories on Midnight Whispers if it has to do with stories by my favorites, there are about five of you, I usually can help them out the characters are fleshed out I remember and more and more they want more than one story they want a series, I'll try to do better, your loving Sally

Author's Response:

Well my darling Sally I just want to go on record that my "Alice" was first.  She appeared in the first chapter of my first story way back in 2013!!  Hmmmmm  the Alices are alike - for some reason that makes me think of that saying "imitation is the highest form of flattery"  LOL.  When I read your comments I did a quick mental review of my stories and didn't remember ever using George as a character name - it was my father's name.  Of course I forgive your momentary lapse, how could I not and remain your Sweet Baboo!!!!  Bill

Hi my Sweet Baboo, Can you make Mel and Linz visit Florida get sun poisoning and have Brian to rescue the two dumb bitches,make them have to stay at Britin maybe then they can see for themselves what great parents the boys are to All the children they love. They are so afraid that Gus is going to love Brian and Justin  more than them , the fools still don't get it it is not a contest...Brian and Justin have enough love for Gus, Jenny, Kevin, John, Peter, Jen, Tucker, Alice, George,etc. the babies just made more love, not less . These women can barely love each other much less act as a family I really hope Gus lives with baby brother and sister and has visitaton with his mothers the child has learned about unconditional love and that is something the girls will never be able to teach or even show to their son, sometimes I think Linz and Mel are the children of Joan, she too never learnt the most important lesson and is much poorer for it.Love ya Sweet baboo.....your Sally

Author's Response:

My Darling Sally, you have been busy today - first on Facebook and now here on MW.  M&L refuse to understand the Mother Taylor law of love - the more people you have to love they more love there is to share.  I think they will regret not understanding that law.  I do have a question - who the heck is "George"?  Always makes me smile to read your comments thank you so much for all your support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Always, your Sweet Baboo

I so love Jennifer Taylor!!!    If Melanie and Lindsay think they can pull a fast one, they are sorely mistaken.   Brian and Justin will never allow Gus to be taken out of state.   Good for Brian for getting in touch with the detective and his attorney right away.    They are going to shut this move down before it even gets anywhere.    I'm thinking it may be time for Brian and Justin to start filing for full custody of Gus here pretty soon.   The threat was made previously, but it might be time to follow through on it!!! 

Author's Response:

No surprise, since i shaped her behavior in this long saga, but I do really love Jennifer.  Never have to wonder how she feels about any topic.  Gradmom Jen sounded the alarm and Daddy responded quickly!!  Brian knew better than to question anything Mother Taylor told him.  Many reviewers seem to agree that it may be time for Gus to spend more time with his Daddy & Papa.  Thanks for always taking time to review, I really appreciate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Wonderful chapter.  Love this side of Brian as a loving dad and partner.  Terrific writing.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the latest update.  Thanks for the really nice comments, I truly appreciate them!!!!!   Bill

My womb skipped a beat I swear. I love how they are all taking to the twins and helping looking after them. I wonder is Mel jealous the way she is acting is just terrible. They wouldn’t leave Gus out they love him just the same. Good on Jennifer for not backing down. 

Author's Response:

You review made me smile.  Everyone is happy to see Lily & Liam at last!  I can't see Jennifer ver backing donw to Melanie.  I think Jennifer delights in pushing Mel's buttons!!!  Thanks for the review, you know I love to hear from the readers!!!!  Bill

Sweet Baboo, your right I a teeny evil streak ILMAO when Liam peed in his daddy's face, so much for Prada, Gucci, etc love, Sally

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, evil can be fun, pee in the face not su much fun!!!!!!  Love, your Sweet Baboo

John is such a grown up and caring boy.  Loves his little made up family so much.  So glad Kevin got to meet the twins.  Everyone is so in love with them.  What a happy family.

Dee Dee

Author's Response:

Hi Dee Dee, John has his Uncle Brian's protective gene.  He is enjoying the babies along with everyone else.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!  Bill

 Hi my sweet Baboo, For the life of me I don't understand Lindsay saying about Brian and Justin not having time for Gus because of the new babies. Clearly Gus was eager to spend time with babies and his daddy and papa. She and Mel just look for problems that are not there. I surprised that John was so eager to hold and feed them even the diaper changes but Peter not so much, he's good boy it will just take time. Boy I love Jen more and more she can bring down the WASP and still have enough to finish off Mel and still be classy eager to see Brian and his little princess and Justin and his son, it's going to be a trip!Love ya, your Sally  

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, always great to hear from you.  Mel & linds are just bitches, something we have to accept like Mikey is an idiot.  Gus is always happy to be with his Daddy & Papa.  They made sure that Gus did not feel neglected.  John is a caretaker, he always looked out for his little brother.  Peter is more used to being taken care of and I think he is a little concerned about spending time with his Papa/Uncle Justin.  I'm sure he will come around to baby care.  My Jennifer is the terminator and I LOVE her.  Once Lily learns to talk Brian is a goner - she will wrap him around her little finger.  Love as always, your sweet Baboo

What a sweet chapter!!   I think it's great that John is helping out so much with the babies.    He has definitely matured since coming to live with Brian and Justin.   

Author's Response:

Everyone seems pretty enamored of Liam & Lily.  John is a caretaker for sure.  Glad you are still enjoying the story.  Thanks for taking time to post a review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bll

So sweet.

Author's Response:

Babies tend to be that way.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  Bill

It was a very sweet chapter! it's good that Justin thought about his old sketchbook. Sometimes reading I have the impression that Peter is left a little aside but no he looks happy too. So we have to wait for the next storm, right? Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

Some found it too sweet but I think it is hard not to make everyone turning into goo over newborn babies sweeet.  Justin helped Gus realize he was as special to him & Brian as Lily & Liam.  I think Peter is happy if he is around his Papa/Uncle Justin.  Peter thinks he is the greatest person he ever met.  I will try and conjure some storm clouds.  Thanks for the review, I love to get them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Ok you wanted more from me after my last review so here goes...

Lily and Liam are amazing but I really liked how Justin found that sketchbook of Gus to show him how much he loved drawing him as a baby. That showed Gus in a physical way how much Justin loved him. 

But here is what you have been missing my complaint sure you had a little drama with Mel and Jen last chapter but this chapter was so sweet my teeth hurt...

i need some more drama and no I don’t mean do something horrific, just a good fight or something

ok that said: next chapter, drama of some sort and you know my dream is it appears tomorrow.

 

Author's Response:

Hey, your last review said nothing about angst.  It was all about everyone being happy about Liam & Lily.  Okay stock up on kleenix, there will be drama in the next chapter.  I mean even if something happens to one baby there is a spare.  Glad you liked Gus's sketchbook being found.  I don't think the next chapter will be posted tomorrow but I'll do my best not to make you wait too long.  Thanks for the comments, I do truly value your honesty and your reviews often make me laugh.  You know I love reviews so I appreciate you being so faithful about posting them.  Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Lively can't wait for Mel and Lindsay to lose custody they are really a5arting to cheese me off. Update soon please. I love this version of our favorite boys  

Author's Response:

Not sure what the future will bring.  Glad you are enjoying the story, thanks for letting me know!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

No one takes on Jennifer and wins lol

Author's Response:

That is true, she has that deadly combination of country club manners & a killer instinct.  I LOVE her!!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!  Bill

Hi! Thanks for that quick update, I was so excited to see it! I really liked that chapter. The twins are adorable and I really like the interactions with all the family, especially John. It was interesting and surprising to see how much he was interested about the babies and wanted to help taking care of them, I was not expecting that!

 

I’m happy they hired someone to help out after all because, seriously, two babies! I totally understand Justin not wanting a live-in nanny, but I think he should not underestimated how much work it will be and I’m not sure how much time off Brian will really be able to take... And they have their other kids to consider. Despite the best intentions of parents, it can be difficult to balance a new baby (not minding two!) with giving time and attention to the other kids so they don’t feel neglected. Fortunately, they are well surrounded.

 

I feel that at this point Peter is the most apprehensive one regarding the situation while Gus might not be that conscious about the change. I think it will be interesting to see how it plays in the futur, how the presence of the new babies will impact the family dynamic. 

Author's Response:

I think John has a protective gene like his Uncle Brian.  John has always looked out for his younger brother and now that Peter needs him less he can concentrate on his new cousins.  They need help with two babies especially since they both have careers that are important to them.  You are right, unbelievably they have 3 other kids to consider.  I'm sure Brian never thought in his younger years that this would be his life but he seems pretty happy with it.  I think you are correct Peter is a little nervous about all these changes.  Thanks for all the nice comments, glad you enjoyed this latest update!!!!!   Bill

Wow! Grandmom Jen is a spit fire. It is wonderful how secure Gussy is in his fathers that he doesn't even think anything could be wrong.

Author's Response:

Jennifer is a protective Mama Bear.  Gus know that his fathers love him and will always be there for him.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Great chapter.  The picture of the twins is so cute.  Wonderful writing.

Author's Response:

Really happy you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for taking time to review, always good to hear from you!!!!!  Bill

Hey Bill,

Loved everything about this chapter. I have sons so I completely laughed loud and long at Brian having what is truly considered to be a rite of passage when changing boys' diapers.

As for Dumbette and Dumber's continued attempts to assert their collective authority: Lindsay (Dumbette) really thought that her passive-aggressively given suggestion, in the form of Gus no less, would just be accepted? Really, Chicken-head? Really?! Apparently, she is certainly coming back to her 'old' self. I'm so happy that it was Justin, who put her in her proper place.

And just when Lindsay's shenanigans didn't work, in comes Big Bad Mel. Bitch please!! Jennifer handed her ass in such a classic fashion- all poise and precision- and in front of countless witnesses, too. The fact that everyone now knows that Melanie is an attorney, and is trying to flout a court order should definitely be remarked upon, and loudly enough for her boss to hear. But that's just my wishful thinking, I suppose. I suppose now that Mel will try to find a way to have the order reversed? Could be fun since she doesn't have a pot to piss in or a window to throw it out of. It's really all she can handle to financially take care of Jenny and her other GROWN child, that Gambling Godiva herself, Miss Lottery-tickets Lindsay. She should probably quit while she's ahead... but somehow, I don't see that happening. I'm waiting to find out  the next move of Dumb the First (Michael), who will most assuredly NOT be happy that the twins have arrived.

Looking forward to MORE!

HAPPY Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Author's Response:

Hi Nichelle, always nice to hear from you!!!  Those boys, whe their penis is free they want to share.  I was the youngest of three boys so my mother told me about that protective diaper and I avoided that rite of passage - and honestly didn't miss it.  My worst diaper experience was the result of soy based formula.  WOW, I said at the time if this country were ever in danger of being invaded we would just need to line up a row of soy formula diapers on the shore and the invaders would have to retreat.  Mel really should know better she has never emerged as victor from an encounter with Jennifer.  I do have to get back to Michael one of these days, I'll have to think about something diabolical.  Thanks for the nice comments!!  Hugs back to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Loved it..... I nearly wet myself when Liam peed in Brian’s face.lol thanks for updating 

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Brian learned a valuable lesson.  Liam was generous to want to share with his Daddy.  Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!!!  Bill

This was a lovely chapter.  The whole Taylor-Kinney household in love with two little babies.  Loved Brian getting it in the face.  Been there done that!  You have to love Jen standing up to Melanie and not backing down as usual.  Good for her.

Dee Dee

Author's Response:

Hi Dee Dee, happy that you enjoyed this latest update.  Everyone seems pretty pleased with Liam & Lily.  I am proud to say I never got a faceful of pee, I was always quick to get a diaper over boy babies when I chnaged them.  Mel is a fool to think she can ever best Jennifer!!!  Thanks for the review, love to hear from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Hey my sweet Baboo, Don't make me hunt you down and kick your butt. Stop referring to your series Together Forever as a long saga. Every word of every chapter are truly beautiful. There are around seven authors that you have common thread you all write with such detail that the characters are real we really see them as family. I read about 12 hours a day so it's good I'm retired. You and your fellow authors bring us into the stories televison doesn't even try anymore they feel reality is the housewives of whatever. We appreciate the stories from everyone, spread that to your fellow authors.Your Sally

Author's Response:

My Darling Sally, it is a LONG saga!!  It has 108 chapters so far and close to 1 million reads.  I never thought it would go on so long when I first started to write it in 2013.  The readers comments are what has kept it going and I am unbelievably grateful for all the support the story has recieved.  I truly love the characters that I have created, even the canon characters have been tweaked to what I want them to be.  This is the first story I ever wrote for other people to read and I amazed at the interest it has recieved..  I mean no disrespect when I refer to it as my long saga.  I am proud of this story and humbled by the response from you and my other loyal readers & reviewers.  Anyone who enjoys this story owes a debt to Predec2, my friend Kim.  My enjoyment of her stories inspired me to write my own story.  She is the person who got me to post it here in Midnight Whispers and she has been a great support, even when at times I repectfully ignored her advice.  MW has become a big part of my life and I enjoy the "friendships" I have with loyal fans like you.  As always, your Sweet Baboo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, what a wonderful chapter.  The babies are here and doing fine.  Your writing is amazing and I love this story.  

Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comments.  Happy you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

So great to see a new update! The twins are here!!! It will make for great adventures. I love the names (and feels stupid because I didn’t get Victor right away, I just understood at the end with Debbie crying!).

Not sure why the school made a big deal about Peter calling Justin papa, a lot of kids choose to call an adoptive parent mom or dad. Granted Peter is a little old to choose to do this, but other than that I don’t find there is anything so weird about it.

Thanks for the update, I can’t wait to see what’s coming!

Author's Response:

I think you are right there will be many twin adventures!  Vic has been gone for a while so I think you can be forgiven for wondering where Victor came from.  I think the reason the school called was that Ed Dennison is kind of a dope.  Happy to know you are still enjoying this long saga, thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Okay Sweet Baboo, finally baby day. I liked their names and was happy they had a good birthweight, but sense if fugley (mikey) has anything to do with the announcements he is going to fuck it up on purpose just make Justin unhappy hope Brian and Cynthia fire his fat butt and his two brain cells. Wonder how Gus will adjust to all the changes at Britin. This a great chapter! Love Ya Baboo, Your Sally

Author's Response:

My Darling Sally, happy to know you like the names.  I think Mikey has enough fear of Cynthia to do anything silly.  I think Gus will have some adjusting to do but he knows that his Daddy & his Papa love him.  Thanks for your aupport!!!!! 

Love, Your Sweet Baboo

Yah. The babies are here.

Author's Response:

lots of good times ahead along with lots of crying & dirty diapers!!!  Thanks for taking time to review, love to hear from the readers!!!!!!  Bill

The babies are here.  Now Justin has 5 children.  John, Peter, Gus and the two babies.

How lucky is that.

Author's Response:

The chapter is complete now that you have reviewed it.  Lucky but life will be busy at the Taylor-Kinney home.  Thanks, as always, for all your support for me and lots of other writers!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Hi! I just realized tonight that this new sequel of your story was uploaded, I must have missed it before Christmas, so I’m commenting just now. But on the upside, I was so excited to have three chapters to read right away!

I really liked the beginning, Craig’s death was a totally unexpected plot twist! I think it’s a good choice because after the failed reconciliation in the previous story, this part of the story really couldn’t go anywhere. And I find the apparition of the grandparents very interesting, I hope this could lead towards a more successful reconciliation storyline, especially with the grandmother who seems not to be as narrow-minded as the rest of Craig’s family (and possibly excited about being a great grandmother). That would be nice for Justin and his family to reconnect with her, at least if she is prepared to really accept all of them.

I was also very touched by Peter’s request to call Justin Papa. After all, that’s true that he never had a father and we know he is the kind of person who is craving affection and strong connections with the people around him, so I thought it made sense. But I also like that Justin told him that it’s ok for him to change his mind about it in the futur since he might feel differently about it when he advances in his teens... (although he could also opted for a more “grownup” term like Dad or Pops then)

And OMG, are the twins coming already?!? I don’t know how I feel about that, if I hope that they are going to be born now because well, we can’t wait that they do, or if I’m hoping that it’s a false alarm because a good month in advance seems like a lot, especially since twins are usually smaller than most babies even at term. 

Anyway, I’m very happy to see that this story is happening now and excited for what to come. Congratulations on your work! :)

 

Author's Response:

Glad you discovered the newest addition to my long saga.  Happy you approve of what is happening.  I agree that Craig's mother seems to be the most opened minded of that family.  Ken was probably the same kind of Husband & father that his son was.  He was in charge!  Alice said in the begiining that Peter just wanted someone to pay attention to him and Justin did that from the beginning.  It must have been a hug thrill for Peter to have someone pay attention to him.  I really appreciate all your nice comments!!!!  Thanks the the review!!!!!!   Bill

Love the silent communication and total in sync these two have. Loved how amused Larry was at Robs confusion at Brian’s straight talking and love for Justin

Author's Response:

I like when B&J are totally in sync.  Larry has plenty of experience with them.  Thank you so much for taking time to review love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Oh the babies are coming...... can’t wait, fab chapter 

Author's Response:

Babies will arrive in the next chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!  Bill

So reality is cliffhangers suck when there is no schedule in place to know when you will get your fix. Loud major HINT!  

Mikey is a nightmare, that is recurring.

i cant decide if I want the grandparents around or not.

I am also not always a fan of doing the right thing meaning their charity buying the computers just to make payroll...

I need babies, and I need them now, please don’t make us wait weeks for BABIES!

BABIES!!!!

 

Author's Response:

Hello my always honest reviewer,  I am always glad to see your comments, even the less than positive ones. Good to know you are still reading.  Babies will arrive in the next chapter I promise.  Thanks for the review, you know I love them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Brilliant work, I love Jennifer and how she spoke to Craig’s parents. She was right to stand up the way she did. As for Justin and Brian and their trip to the lawyers office that was amazing and how they showed their silent communication skills. It was needed there and it fit so well. 

 

Omg the babies are coming I can wait to see I’m so excited for them yeppie 

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, so happy you enjoyed this latest chapter.  I LOVE Jennifer, which is why she always gets the best lines.  B&J are usually in sync and Brian always wants his Sunshine to be happy.  Twins will arrive in the next chapter, I am getting the impatience message loud and clear from the revews!!!   Thanks for the review, I do love to get them!   Hugs,  Bill

 Hi Sweet Baboo, I always miss you, especially when I'm all wrapp Ced up in one of your stories. It's a shame Craig never got to know Brian, but it is own fault being a bigot and being ashamed of Justin he really deserved the life he had at the end. Brian and Justin showed the type of people they are in buying the merchandise and trying to take care of Craig's employees. When Brad and Craig's girl friend find out how and who he left to take care of his affairs they  will self cobust. I don't think when they find out Jen, Justin, and Molly told Craig's parents they were ask to not attend the funreal but they made up their minds. Something is not right about Brad's actions. Anyway it seems to be BABYTIME!!!As you know I LOVED this chapter as always, your Sally

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, sorry my updates are too long apart, I am trying to do better.  Craig was his own worst enemy, he threw away happiness with both hands.  Brad & Craig's latest conquest are not going to be happy about his will.  I'm sure his parenst will have something to say about ordering Jennifer and Craig's children to stay away from his funeral.  I loved hearing from you!!!  The twins arrive in the nexy chapter I promise!!!  Thanks for all your comments, it is always great to hear from you.  I remain, your Sweet Baboo.

Molly, so like her brother. I'm glad they decided to attend Craig's funeral. It was way past time to set some truths about Craig out there. Can't wait for Justin to get to the lawyer's office. Craig's fiancee is going to be in for a few shocking facts I think.

Brian knows his son well. Gus is NOT going to be happy with Peter calling Justin Papa. It may help when the twins come, but I don't think Gus is ready to share.

Maybe Michael finally found his niche. Really isn't a hard job. He gets to be up front and center when someone comes in and is close to Brian. What more could he want?

Author's Response:

Really, really happy to see your review, THANK YOU!  Molly knew she had the support of her brother & Brian and felt she had to tell her story.  Gus did not want anyone else to he his Daddy;s "Sonny Boy".  We will have to wait and see how he feels about "Papa' being used by others.  Mikey must love seeing Brian every day, a dream come true but can't let his distrust of Justin go.  Thanks for the comments, always good to hear from you!!!  Bill

Craig knowing his own friend/divorce attourney didn't share his own hateful views must've stung something fierce lol

 

Oh it's called Braxton Hicks contractions. Not Brackman hicks contractions.  XD

Author's Response:

Craig seemed pretty set in his ways and didn't pay much attention to anyone else's opinions.  I looked on the net to find the correct spelling , saw Brackman and didn't look any close, ma bad!!!  Thanks for letting me know.  Thans for taking time to review!!!!!   Bill

Wow I didn’t expect that, I would be dancing on that mans grave singing he is gone. As for Peter and his request that made me cry happy tears he is such a sweet boy and I’m sure he will have some fun times calling Justin that and maybe some giggles doing it in public. 

 

Loved this  chapter so much x

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, thanks so much for your nice comments.  Brian would probably like to join you on that dance.  Really happy too know you enjoyed this chapter!!!!  Bill

Happy Holidays my Sweet Baboo, Your second chapter  was a lovely surprise and a excellent Chistmas present. Sounds like Brad and Craig were twin fuck ups. I smell a rat or maybe two. Could be Brad and the ho are trying  to take over Craigs business not knowing  Craig had run it into the ground and owing Brian and Justin quiet a bit of money and just maybe Brad bedded Craig's ho, wonder if that's why he took his own life. Do I sound like Columbo? or Jessica Fletcher, yes waiting on you I watched too much TV. I must addmit I liked Brian's attire for the shit's funreal! thanks for a great chapter and write a new one soon so I don't turn into a private eye. your potty mouth but loveing Sally

Author's Response:

My Darling Sally, always happy to hear from you!!!  I think Brad is just an idiot.  There is not much of Craig's business to take over.  Glad that enjoyed the latest chapter.  Best  wishes for the new your.  as always, your sweet Baboo

Great chapter.  Love a happy Brian & Justin.

Author's Response:

Me  too.  Happy to know you enjoyed the latest chapter.  Thanks for the review, I love to hear from the readers!!!!!   Bill

It's good that Molly Justin and Brian went to Craig's funeral and Molly said what she had to do with craig. What's going on with the bimbo? Michael who goes to work is surprising I was pretty sure he was going to fuck! I love Brian who loves Molly as a little sister. Thank you for this update, too bad that it is so long between each. Happy Holidays!

Author's Response:

It is god that Molly got her say, she had lots of support from Justin & Brian.  More about the Bimbo in the next chapter.  Never fear Mikey is not perfect.  Sorry it took so long to update!!!!  Happy Holidays to you.  Thanks for taking time to review.  Bill