Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2019 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 5
I think its great that John is helping out with the twins. He and Peter both are very excited about their arrival. And I think its a great idea that they have Cassie helping out as well. She will be a big help to both Brian and Justin, especially when Brian goes back to work and Justin gets back to working in his studio. As for Mel and Jennifer, did she really think Jen was going to give in and not take Gus for the weekend? I'm thinking Brian and Justin may be going after more custody of Gus sooner rather than later. Mel just needs to give it up already!!! She is never going to win against Brian, Justin and Jen!!
Author's Response: John is a caretaker, I think he will be a huge help with his baby cousins. It make take Peter a while to feel comfortable with babies. You are correct, they will really appreciate Cassie when their lives start to get back to normal, or their "new" normal. Life will never be the same for B&J. I think Jennifer may miss her interactions with Melanie, she always come out on top. Happy you are still enjoying the story, thanks for the nice comment. I always look forward to reading your reviews!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2019 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 5
Loved it..... I nearly wet myself when Liam peed in Brian’s face.lol thanks for updating
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Brian learned a valuable lesson. Liam was generous to want to share with his Daddy. Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2019 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 5
My favorite part was Brian changing Liam’s diaper, of course. So funny and cute. And I love Jennifer’s way of handling the two trouble maker moms.
Author's Response: Brian quickly learned about those boy babies feeling freedom when diapers come off. I'm betting he won't let that happen again. Jennifer was the best person to pick up Gus!!! Thanks for taking time to review, I appreciate it!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2019 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 5
This was a lovely chapter. The whole Taylor-Kinney household in love with two little babies. Loved Brian getting it in the face. Been there done that! You have to love Jen standing up to Melanie and not backing down as usual. Good for her.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Hi Dee Dee, happy that you enjoyed this latest update. Everyone seems pretty pleased with Liam & Lily. I am proud to say I never got a faceful of pee, I was always quick to get a diaper over boy babies when I chnaged them. Mel is a fool to think she can ever best Jennifer!!! Thanks for the review, love to hear from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2019 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 5
Mel and Lindsay are just going to have to accept that with all the people Brian and Justin have around them, they can do a much better job of watching Gus. John and Peter wouldn't let Gus feel left out.
Author's Response: M & L are slow learners. Still wishing they had control of Brian's access to Gus. Thanks, as always, for your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2019 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 4
Hey my sweet Baboo, Don't make me hunt you down and kick your butt. Stop referring to your series Together Forever as a long saga. Every word of every chapter are truly beautiful. There are around seven authors that you have common thread you all write with such detail that the characters are real we really see them as family. I read about 12 hours a day so it's good I'm retired. You and your fellow authors bring us into the stories televison doesn't even try anymore they feel reality is the housewives of whatever. We appreciate the stories from everyone, spread that to your fellow authors.Your Sally
Author's Response: My Darling Sally, it is a LONG saga!! It has 108 chapters so far and close to 1 million reads. I never thought it would go on so long when I first started to write it in 2013. The readers comments are what has kept it going and I am unbelievably grateful for all the support the story has recieved. I truly love the characters that I have created, even the canon characters have been tweaked to what I want them to be. This is the first story I ever wrote for other people to read and I amazed at the interest it has recieved.. I mean no disrespect when I refer to it as my long saga. I am proud of this story and humbled by the response from you and my other loyal readers & reviewers. Anyone who enjoys this story owes a debt to Predec2, my friend Kim. My enjoyment of her stories inspired me to write my own story. She is the person who got me to post it here in Midnight Whispers and she has been a great support, even when at times I repectfully ignored her advice. MW has become a big part of my life and I enjoy the "friendships" I have with loyal fans like you. As always, your Sweet Baboo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Bo61 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2019 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 4
I love this story, thanks for writing it.
Finally the twins are born and what a beautiful names.
Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments, I really appreciate them!!!!! Glad to know you are enjoying this latest installment of this long saga. Hope yu continue to enjoyt it. Thanks for the review, I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2019 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow, what a wonderful chapter. The babies are here and doing fine. Your writing is amazing and I love this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments. Happy you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the review!!! Bill
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2019 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 4
Aww. So glad the twins have arrived. Now the adventures will begin!
Author's Response: I think there may be a few adventure with twins. Wonder if B&J are truly prepared. Thanks for taking time to review. Bill
Reviewer: Mychad (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2019 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 4
So great to see a new update! The twins are here!!! It will make for great adventures. I love the names (and feels stupid because I didn’t get Victor right away, I just understood at the end with Debbie crying!).
Not sure why the school made a big deal about Peter calling Justin papa, a lot of kids choose to call an adoptive parent mom or dad. Granted Peter is a little old to choose to do this, but other than that I don’t find there is anything so weird about it.
Thanks for the update, I can’t wait to see what’s coming!
Author's Response: I think you are right there will be many twin adventures! Vic has been gone for a while so I think you can be forgiven for wondering where Victor came from. I think the reason the school called was that Ed Dennison is kind of a dope. Happy to know you are still enjoying this long saga, thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2019 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 4
Welcome to the world Lily and Liam.
I can’t wait for your big brother to meet you.
Author's Response: I think Gus will be amazed by the new babies. Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2019 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
Okay Sweet Baboo, finally baby day. I liked their names and was happy they had a good birthweight, but sense if fugley (mikey) has anything to do with the announcements he is going to fuck it up on purpose just make Justin unhappy hope Brian and Cynthia fire his fat butt and his two brain cells. Wonder how Gus will adjust to all the changes at Britin. This a great chapter! Love Ya Baboo, Your Sally
Author's Response: My Darling Sally, happy to know you like the names. I think Mikey has enough fear of Cynthia to do anything silly. I think Gus will have some adjusting to do but he knows that his Daddy & his Papa love him. Thanks for your aupport!!!!!
Love, Your Sweet Baboo
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2019 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 4
The babies arrived super !!! They have beautiful names. Brian and Justin are going to have their hands full with 5 kids. Lily has to have plenty of men to wrap around his finger. Can't wait for the next update. I love this family.
Author's Response: Glad you like the names. Big changes in store for B&J. I don't think they realize how big! I think you are correct Lily will have many willing slaves. Happy to know you are still enjoying this long saga!!!! Thanks for the review, Bill
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2019 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 4
Yah. The babies are here.
Author's Response: lots of good times ahead along with lots of crying & dirty diapers!!! Thanks for taking time to review, love to hear from the readers!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2019 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 4
Yippee the babies are here, I love the names thanks for the update I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: I cannot take full credit for the names, one of the readers suggested the first names. Hope to have the new chapter up quicker than I have been updating. Thanks for the review!!!! Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2019 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 4
The babies are here. Now Justin has 5 children. John, Peter, Gus and the two babies.
How lucky is that.
Author's Response: The chapter is complete now that you have reviewed it. Lucky but life will be busy at the Taylor-Kinney home. Thanks, as always, for all your support for me and lots of other writers!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2019 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 4
Aw, another great chapter, Bill!!! Yay, the twins have arrived, and Brian is already talking about spoiling them rotten - no surprise there!! And I think it was great that their names are honoring Jennifer and Vic. That was very sweet!!
Author's Response: Happy to know you enjoyed the latest update and that you approve of the names!! Thanks for the review!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Mychad (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2019 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hi! I just realized tonight that this new sequel of your story was uploaded, I must have missed it before Christmas, so I’m commenting just now. But on the upside, I was so excited to have three chapters to read right away!
I really liked the beginning, Craig’s death was a totally unexpected plot twist! I think it’s a good choice because after the failed reconciliation in the previous story, this part of the story really couldn’t go anywhere. And I find the apparition of the grandparents very interesting, I hope this could lead towards a more successful reconciliation storyline, especially with the grandmother who seems not to be as narrow-minded as the rest of Craig’s family (and possibly excited about being a great grandmother). That would be nice for Justin and his family to reconnect with her, at least if she is prepared to really accept all of them.
I was also very touched by Peter’s request to call Justin Papa. After all, that’s true that he never had a father and we know he is the kind of person who is craving affection and strong connections with the people around him, so I thought it made sense. But I also like that Justin told him that it’s ok for him to change his mind about it in the futur since he might feel differently about it when he advances in his teens... (although he could also opted for a more “grownup” term like Dad or Pops then)
And OMG, are the twins coming already?!? I don’t know how I feel about that, if I hope that they are going to be born now because well, we can’t wait that they do, or if I’m hoping that it’s a false alarm because a good month in advance seems like a lot, especially since twins are usually smaller than most babies even at term.
Anyway, I’m very happy to see that this story is happening now and excited for what to come. Congratulations on your work! :)
Author's Response: Glad you discovered the newest addition to my long saga. Happy you approve of what is happening. I agree that Craig's mother seems to be the most opened minded of that family. Ken was probably the same kind of Husband & father that his son was. He was in charge! Alice said in the begiining that Peter just wanted someone to pay attention to him and Justin did that from the beginning. It must have been a hug thrill for Peter to have someone pay attention to him. I really appreciate all your nice comments!!!! Thanks the the review!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2019 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
My Sweet Baboo, this goes back to chapter 2 (sorry) with all the drama I forgot about Peter, thought ILMAO when Brian was working his eyebrows and rolling his eyes when Peter was using as many papa's as he could when telling Brian if he keep making faces he might have to call him daddy, as smart and as loving as he is, peter is still a child, his grandmother wouldn't take him in,his mother cared more for drugs, and a loser father abandoned him until he thought he could get some money from Brian and Justin. I think Alice understands his uncles but Peter isn't sure about being kicked to the curb again the hardest thing is Gus is going to hurt by his daddies when the twins come, add that to Peters "papa" both are going to feel left out. Love ya Baboo, Sally
Author's Response: Darling Sally, never apoligize for leaving comments, it is always my pleasure to hear from you!!!! Peter let Brian know he needed to act better. Alice said from the beginning that Peter just wanted someone to ay attention to him. Justin did that and Peter loves him for caring. Gus really loves his cousins so we'll have to see how he feels about "Papa". He was worried about someone else being his Daddy's "Sonny Boy" but was assured he was the one & only "SB". Thanks for all your support my darling Sally. Love from your sweet Baboo
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2019 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 3
Love the silent communication and total in sync these two have. Loved how amused Larry was at Robs confusion at Brian’s straight talking and love for Justin
Author's Response: I like when B&J are totally in sync. Larry has plenty of experience with them. Thank you so much for taking time to review love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2019 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great Chapter, Bob. I really liked how Brian and Justin bought the tablets so they could make payroll and severance for Craig's employees. will be interesting to see if Molly and Justin are interested in getting to know Craig's parents.
Author's Response: Always a pleasure to hear from you!! Glad that you enjoyed this chapter. I'm not sure about the grandparents, they gave us some mixed signals. Sometimes the story goes in directions I wasn't planning. Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2019 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh the babies are coming...... can’t wait, fab chapter
Author's Response: Babies will arrive in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2019 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow, wonderful chapter. Love a happy Brian and Justin. Great writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking time to review. I am glad to know you are still reading and enjoying the story. I appreciate your very kind comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2019 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 3
So reality is cliffhangers suck when there is no schedule in place to know when you will get your fix. Loud major HINT!
Mikey is a nightmare, that is recurring.
i cant decide if I want the grandparents around or not.
I am also not always a fan of doing the right thing meaning their charity buying the computers just to make payroll...
I need babies, and I need them now, please don’t make us wait weeks for BABIES!
BABIES!!!!
Author's Response: Hello my always honest reviewer, I am always glad to see your comments, even the less than positive ones. Good to know you are still reading. Babies will arrive in the next chapter I promise. Thanks for the review, you know I love them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 3
Good update!! Yes, Brian and Justin have always been known to have silent conversations; they do a lot of their communicating that way. And Michael is back at it again. Will he ever realize that Justin is an owner of the company, who can come and go without anybody's permission? Will Michael ever see Justin as Brian's partner? NOT!!! Goodness!!! And good for Jennifer for telling Janet to contact Justin and Molly on her own, and leave her out of it. It should be based on their decisions anyway, and not hers, whether they want to have any type of relationship with her and Ken.
Author's Response: B&J understand each other very well and usually know what the other partner wants. I think Mikey is unimportant to Justin and that Justin is kind of amused by Mikey's cluelessness. Jennifer gave the same message to Janet that she gave to Craig in the past - she is not getting involved in solving other people's issues. Glad you liked the chapter and grateful you took th etime to post a review. Thanks you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 3
Brilliant work, I love Jennifer and how she spoke to Craig’s parents. She was right to stand up the way she did. As for Justin and Brian and their trip to the lawyers office that was amazing and how they showed their silent communication skills. It was needed there and it fit so well.
Omg the babies are coming I can wait to see I’m so excited for them yeppie
Author's Response: Hello my friend, so happy you enjoyed this latest chapter. I LOVE Jennifer, which is why she always gets the best lines. B&J are usually in sync and Brian always wants his Sunshine to be happy. Twins will arrive in the next chapter, I am getting the impatience message loud and clear from the revews!!! Thanks for the review, I do love to get them! Hugs, Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 3
Sorry my Baboo, How much longer are the bosses at Kinnick going to let mikey to act like a dick, and let him be so rude to Justin? He is quiet open with his rudeness to Justin in front of employees and clients alike--no one owes this ass a job, he has no skill and no manners-kick him to curb, he can be an aging bus boy. Love Sally
Author's Response: Hello again Sally, I think Justin is more amsued than annoyed by Mikey. He also knows all he would have to do is say he wants him fired and Mikey is history. That would hurt Debbie and put Bria in the middle, two things Justin would like to avoid. JMO. As always, your Sweet Baboo.
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
Hi Sweet Baboo, I always miss you, especially when I'm all wrapp Ced up in one of your stories. It's a shame Craig never got to know Brian, but it is own fault being a bigot and being ashamed of Justin he really deserved the life he had at the end. Brian and Justin showed the type of people they are in buying the merchandise and trying to take care of Craig's employees. When Brad and Craig's girl friend find out how and who he left to take care of his affairs they will self cobust. I don't think when they find out Jen, Justin, and Molly told Craig's parents they were ask to not attend the funreal but they made up their minds. Something is not right about Brad's actions. Anyway it seems to be BABYTIME!!!As you know I LOVED this chapter as always, your Sally
Author's Response: Darling Sally, sorry my updates are too long apart, I am trying to do better. Craig was his own worst enemy, he threw away happiness with both hands. Brad & Craig's latest conquest are not going to be happy about his will. I'm sure his parenst will have something to say about ordering Jennifer and Craig's children to stay away from his funeral. I loved hearing from you!!! The twins arrive in the nexy chapter I promise!!! Thanks for all your comments, it is always great to hear from you. I remain, your Sweet Baboo.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 3
I'm sure that most parents would like to believe what their children tell them. It would seem that women are less likely to rule out the fact. Can't wait to see how Craig's parents take meeting Justin and Molly and hearing their side along with reading the letter he sent. Personally I think Justin should tell Craig how he was greeted by Michael, it will be good for a laugh at least. Great chapter!!!
Author's Response: I think most parents always want to think the best of their children and believe what they tell them. It seems like some of Craig's homophobia might have been learned at home. Ken didn't seem to think Craig was all wrong. Justin may be too busy with new additions to reconnect with the past. You gave me a good laugh by the "Craig" when you menant Brian - wow that would have Craig rolling in his grave and Brian screaming in horror. Justin prefers to ignore Michael and not involve Brian. As always, I am aways happy to read yur reviews!!! I feel like we have been on this long adventure together, Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 2
Molly, so like her brother. I'm glad they decided to attend Craig's funeral. It was way past time to set some truths about Craig out there. Can't wait for Justin to get to the lawyer's office. Craig's fiancee is going to be in for a few shocking facts I think.
Brian knows his son well. Gus is NOT going to be happy with Peter calling Justin Papa. It may help when the twins come, but I don't think Gus is ready to share.
Maybe Michael finally found his niche. Really isn't a hard job. He gets to be up front and center when someone comes in and is close to Brian. What more could he want?
Author's Response: Really, really happy to see your review, THANK YOU! Molly knew she had the support of her brother & Brian and felt she had to tell her story. Gus did not want anyone else to he his Daddy;s "Sonny Boy". We will have to wait and see how he feels about "Papa' being used by others. Mikey must love seeing Brian every day, a dream come true but can't let his distrust of Justin go. Thanks for the comments, always good to hear from you!!! Bill
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 3
Craig seems to have realized many of his mistakes before he died. I also like the interplay between Brian and Justin that you describe so well and that surprises everyone. Let's see what Justin and Molly are going to do with their grandparents. I can not wait to meet the twins. Thank you for the update I hope the next will be closer !!
Author's Response: I agree that Craig finally realized how wrong he was about many things. I am trying to update faster but RL present some issues with that. Glad you like how I present B&J. The grandparents are like Craig, realising they have made some bad choices but we'll see what happens. Babies coming soon!!! Thanks for the review, I appreciate all your support for my long saga!! Bill
Reviewer: mrs_koki (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 3
Craig knowing his own friend/divorce attourney didn't share his own hateful views must've stung something fierce lol
Oh it's called Braxton Hicks contractions. Not Brackman hicks contractions. XD
Author's Response:
Craig seemed pretty set in his ways and didn't pay much attention to anyone else's opinions. I looked on the net to find the correct spelling , saw Brackman and didn't look any close, ma bad!!! Thanks for letting me know. Thans for taking time to review!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2019 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
Lol I wish I had been a fly on the wall at the funeral, that was just brilliant. I love how close they all are. It makes me tear up at how it is. It’s a family everyone should have. Supportive and loving. That Brad needs taking down a leg or two and I hope it epic. I can’t wait to find out what the lawyer wants to talk about.
Author's Response: I'm sure that Molly's speech will generate a lot of discussions about the funeral. They are a strong, devoted family and that is what we all wish for. Craog was a fool to throw that away. Brad is in for some surprises. Thanks for the nice reviews, always a pleasure to hear from you!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2019 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow I didn’t expect that, I would be dancing on that mans grave singing he is gone. As for Peter and his request that made me cry happy tears he is such a sweet boy and I’m sure he will have some fun times calling Justin that and maybe some giggles doing it in public.
Loved this chapter so much x
Author's Response: Hello my friend, thanks so much for your nice comments. Brian would probably like to join you on that dance. Really happy too know you enjoyed this chapter!!!! Bill
Reviewer: MieMie (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2018 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
Has this been abandoned? I truly hope not I need to read about babies and intrigue
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2018 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
Happy Holidays my Sweet Baboo, Your second chapter was a lovely surprise and a excellent Chistmas present. Sounds like Brad and Craig were twin fuck ups. I smell a rat or maybe two. Could be Brad and the ho are trying to take over Craigs business not knowing Craig had run it into the ground and owing Brian and Justin quiet a bit of money and just maybe Brad bedded Craig's ho, wonder if that's why he took his own life. Do I sound like Columbo? or Jessica Fletcher, yes waiting on you I watched too much TV. I must addmit I liked Brian's attire for the shit's funreal! thanks for a great chapter and write a new one soon so I don't turn into a private eye. your potty mouth but loveing Sally
Author's Response: My Darling Sally, always happy to hear from you!!! I think Brad is just an idiot. There is not much of Craig's business to take over. Glad that enjoyed the latest chapter. Best wishes for the new your. as always, your sweet Baboo
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2018 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Justin, it will take some getting use to having Peter call him Papa. How special for Peter and Justin. So proud of Molly, you go girl, loved the speech. Can't wait to see what Craig's attorney wants.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: It does show how much Peter cares for Justin. Justin is the first adult that Peter feels really cares about him and is there for him when he needs him. Molly is her mother's daughter for sure! Thanks for the review!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2018 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Love a happy Brian & Justin.
Author's Response: Me too. Happy to know you enjoyed the latest chapter. Thanks for the review, I love to hear from the readers!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2018 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 2
Good on Molly standing her ground! Ok cliff hanger ending grr
Author's Response: Seems like a few of my readers are not fans of cliff hangers. Molly did the right thing telling her story. Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2018 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 2
It's good that Molly Justin and Brian went to Craig's funeral and Molly said what she had to do with craig. What's going on with the bimbo? Michael who goes to work is surprising I was pretty sure he was going to fuck! I love Brian who loves Molly as a little sister. Thank you for this update, too bad that it is so long between each. Happy Holidays!
Author's Response: It is god that Molly got her say, she had lots of support from Justin & Brian. More about the Bimbo in the next chapter. Never fear Mikey is not perfect. Sorry it took so long to update!!!! Happy Holidays to you. Thanks for taking time to review. Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2018 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
Seriously you kill off Craig, make whiny not be an issue on the job at Kinnetik and then leave us hanging on what Craig’s will left Justin besides a pain in the ass in a not good way...
Author's Response: Cliffhangers are good things. Will you miss Craig? Mikey on a back burner for right now. He will show up soon being as clueless as every Always good to hear from you!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2018 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 2
Good for Molly and Justin , even with bad feelings with their father, they need that closure.
Author's Response: Molly did good, she wanted to be sure there was a balanced story of Craig. I think she & Justin were happy they attended the funeral. Thanks for the review!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2018 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 2
Bob:
Always so happy to see a new chapter. I absolutely loved Molly's declaration at the funeral. The interaction between Molly, Justin and Brian is amazing. Brian really cares for her and wants the best for her. Sort of like a favorite sister. I love that you leave us ( the readers) wanting more, but hate that it takes so long to write. I cannot complain as it takes forever to write sometimes . ( note- I have three new stories coming soon)
Author's Response: Glad that you liked this latest chapter. I wish I had more time to write & update but sadly real life keeps me busy. Brian has that strong protective instinct and I think Molly is the little sister he never had so he wants to be sure she is taken care of. Of course being the sister of the man he loves helps! I am excited for some new storeis from you, I always enjoy them!!!!!! Thanks for the review you know us authors love to get them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2018 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 2
Good for molly having her say at the funeral..... wonder what Craig’s brother and the bimbo are up to?? Thanks for sharing another great chapter.
Author's Response: Molly just couldn't hold it inside! I think Brad is just an idiot, the bimbomay have an agenda, more to come. Thanks for taking time to review, you know I love to hear from the readers!!!! Bill
Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2018 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Can’t say I’m sad about Craig...... brilliant chapter can’t wait for the babies to make an appearance
Author's Response: Thanks, babies will arrive in a couple more chapters. You know babies don't always attive when you expect. Glad you enjoyed the start of the latest part of this long saga. Bill
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2018 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
I always liked your stories, but you lost yourself a reader.
Just what exactly did you mean by this statement? "You are stuck in the eye for an eye oldb testament section of the Bible. It appears to me that you are more Jewish than anything else." As I am Jewish myself I find that last line highly offensive.
Good luck with the rest of your story.
Author's Response: Sorry you feel that way and I apologize for offendng you. I did not mean to offend anyone. The old testament of the Bible, to me, has a much different tone, very much about rules & punishments, than the new testament which talks much more about forgiveness & inclusion. I myself am offended by many "so called Christians" quoting from the old testament and never using passages from the new which are Christ's teachings. It was thoughtless of me to imply Jewish people are violent or wrong minded in some way. I just meant he seemed to stuck in quoting the Bible before Christ arrived and so, like Christ, he was Jewish. Again I sincerely apologize for offending you and that was never my intent. Bill
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2018 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 2
Good chapter, with lots happening!! I'm a bit curious myself about the girlfriend being pregnant if, in fact Craig had the vasectomy a few years back. But good for Molly for getting up and speaking at the funeral. She needed to inject some truth after Brad and Allison got through spewing their lies.
On another note, Happy Holidays Bill!!
Author's Response: Hope you are having great holidays! Much will be revealed in the next chapter. Molly felt there had to be some truths told, she was the perfect person to tell them. Thanks for your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2018 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 2
So very happy to see another chapter on this. You've really got the mystery going in this tale. Did Craig commit suicide? I'm sure that if he was unable to father children that there is something rotten in Taylorland.
Author's Response: My friend, always good to hear from you. Hope you are having great holidays. I think Craig did himself in but why, is the question. Thanks for the review and all your support!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Sweetcheeks76 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2018 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great story. Real shame you didn't finish it 😢
Author's Response: Sorry I don't update often enough for you but I try my best.
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2018 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very interesting start to this new story line. So proud of Peter in wanting and put a voice to his need to call Justin Papa. Can't say I am unhappy about Craig. I think Jennifer handled his brother brilliantly.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Hi Dee Dee, poor Craig, I don't think many people will miss him. I think Peter will be happy with his decision. I'm sure Brad hopes he never has to see Jennifer again. Thanks for the review!!!! Bill
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2018 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
;read the chapter- oh my- great start to the new story Craig is dead- yeah- and Jennifer, Justin and Molly are so torn about the whole thing- Craig's brother is an ass.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the latest update!!! I think we can all agree Brad is a huge butthead!! Thanks for the review, always glad to hear from you!!! Bill
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2018 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow what a surprise to see my banner after more than two years.
Bye bye Craig, welcome babies. Think I'm gonna love this.
* hugs *
Author's Response: This took a little longer then I planned, my bad. Your banner is still beautiful - it had inporved with age,like a fine wine!! Hope you do love it!!!! Thanks for the banner and the comments!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
so happy to see a new story- will give a more in-depth review later this weekend- but just wanted to say - welcome back
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!! Glad to be back, Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yay, I have been waiting for this. So Craig finally took the cowards way out. Evidently his brother doesn't know about the pregnant girl friend. Perhaps Jennifer should talk to Janice & Ken before deciding not to attend the funeral. It might be time for the truth to come out!
Author's Response: Always really glad to see your comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So, you are not convinced Jennifer, Molly & Justin drove him to this???? Huh, I think you could be right about that. I bet Brand doesn't know much of anything. Thanks for all your support!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great chapter. Glad you decided to continue this storyline. Can't wait for the arrival of the twins. Fanatastic writing.
Author's Response: Really happy to know you enjoyed this first chapter in this long saga. Twins coming soon. Thanks for taking time to review!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi sweet Baboo, Holy Cow! when started the new story, you sure got everyones attention! Well Craigs dead, who knows where he will go--God doesn't want him he has broken every commandment more than once--and even the devil doesn't want him. His brother Brad sounds like he is a jerk. I wonder about Craig's parents, how do they feel about Jenn, Molly and Justin or is Brad voiceing his own view? Justin and Molly will be devastated when they learn he took his own life, it seems like he did this as the final fuck you, to make them feel guilty. When the babys are born they soon forget about Craig. I was surprised by Peter wanting to call Justin "papa" somehow I think it's about the newborns coming home and he feels that Justin won't love him anymore. Great chapter. love your Sally
Author's Response: Darling Sally, it always makes me smile to see your review. Always makes me happy to read your nice comments. We will probably never know where Craig goes but we can be glad he went. Craig's parents are a bit of a mystery, hmmmmmmmmmm Suicide is a shock to everyone, I had a friend who took that way out. That is what a thought about Peter, that he wanted to be sure of his place in Uncle Justin/Papa's heart. Thanks for the review!!!!!!! Love, Your Sweet Baboo
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ok not how I expected this to start. I will admit I hope this is last time you ever mention Craig.
happier things I kind of like Peter calling Justin Papa. I wonder if Kevin will start mixing that up...
BABIES, bring on the babies...
Author's Response: Happy to know that I can still surprise you. I think Peter kind of likes is also, we'll wait to see how Justin copes. Babbies sometimes seem to take a long time to appear! Happy to see your review!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hi Bill, great start to the new story!!! I certainly wasn't expecting that!! Wow, Craig is dead, and it seems his brother shares his lovely views as well. And that comment of his to Jennifer "you have always seen only your own viewpoint and refused to try and learn from others?" Yeah, right. And what about him? Obviously, nothing Jen tries to tell him will penetrate through his thick skull as well. He and Craig were obviously cut from the same cloth.
But I thought Peter wanting to call Justin Papa was very sweet. The two of them have always shared a very special bond, and he does see Justin as being a father to him, and he's never had that before. I think Justin handled the situation very well.
Author's Response: I thought this would make an interesting way to start the new story. One departure, 2 new arrivals!! After all Brad is a man a simple woman like Jennifer could learn a lot from just observing a man like Brad. She could learn there are more a--holes in the world then asses. Justin knew there would be hard to heal hurt feelings if he said no. I don't think Peter will regret asking for this. Glad to know this chapter meets with your approval, thanks for letting me know!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
I am delighted to see the rest of the story. I see that Craig's brother is the same size as him. Let's see how the family will react to the news that Jennifer has learned. I hope the twins arrive soon.
Author's Response:
Happy to know you are happy to see a new chapter!! Craig & Brad do seem to have some similarities. I'm pretty sure we haven't heard everything qute yet. Twins will arrive soonish. Thanks for taking time to review!!! Bill
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow not sure that Brad can refuse to allow Craig’s kids from attending their fathers funeral even if they were estranged. Brian is never going to sit back quietly if Justin’s wants to attend and enter a vipers den unprotected
Author's Response: Brad seems to be a kind & caring man but I'm not sure he will welcome them with open arms. Hope you enjoyed the latest chapter of my long saga. Thanks for the review!!!!! Bill
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