Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2020 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 21

What a fantastic chapter.  Granny is a pip.  Kate is not going to get her way, I hope that Brian will help block anything she tries.  Love that John blocked Kate's number.  Mel doesn't seem to learn.  By getting Deb to help with JR, she's going to find that the times she's let her daughter get away with things are going to come back to bite her on her ass. 

Author's Response:

My friend, as you know I always look forward to your comments.  Always happy to know you are still reading and enjoying.  Granny knows what she wants and I don't think anyone will sucessfully stand in her way.  Older folks (me) don't always know everything about cell phones.  Someone showed "Blovl" to me a couple years ago.  I agree that Debbie's help is going to be a double edged sword for Mel.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1  Bill

Reviewer: MieMie (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2020 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 21

Granny is the granny of Brian's dreams. Love the subplot. 

Author's Response:

Brian might just start to have a grandmother experience at this late stage of his life.  Glad you are enjoying Granny.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2020 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 20

Great chapter!!   Do I dare think that Michael finally got something through his thick skull and actually listened to what Ted was telling him about Brian?    I sure hope so.    And I am loving Granny.   I don't think it's going to take her too long to melt some of Brian's cold exterior.   And those Armani stocks?   The perfect gift for him.   And poor Justin; Gus is such a sweet and innocent little boy.   He has no idea what he is really saying, but geez, out of the mouths of babes!!  LOL.  

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Mikey is pretty unchanging, I guess we will have to eait and see what effect Ted's candor had on him.  I think Granny will be fun.  I wonder when Gus will figure out there is more going on than "kissing".  He does a lot of "innocent" sharing and Granny seemed to enjoyt it.  Happy you are still enejoying the story.  Thanks for reviewing!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2020 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 20

Go granny she has Brian’s number lol

Author's Response:

Granny is going to be a good time.  Brian won't know what hit him.  Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2020 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

a final comment about ju's private schooling. with linds prolific spending on herself, jr was never destined to be able to attend private school. the only way she got there was due to b/j. when brian backs off from supporting the girls and jr, she will never fit into the private school lifestyle. the income level is not there for her to "keep up with" the other kids in any manner... clothes, activities, etc. she's already pretty spoiled and not being financially equal to her friends will cause bitterness and she will be a total bitch as she gets older. that's why i'd like to see her go to ted and blake. they would straighten her out, give her the love she needs and help her to become a decent person as she gets older. i honestly think brian, with all the best intentions, is doing more harm than good in the long run for her. 

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2020 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 20

My Sweet Baboo, what a lovely present your chapter was for my 73rd birthday. Granny was everything I hoped for, she was gracious to John and Peter and loves Gus's manners,and it won't be long to the word "granny" rolls off Brian's lips. It's only a matter of time for mikey to make an appearance, not doubt granny knows a jackass when she sees one. I say put her and dumbass in a room together and wait for granny to come out victorious. The gift granny gave Brian was so neat and who would else  would be so delighted Mr Shopaholic  ! Mikey still doesn't have a clue about anything.I agree with the letter Brian is sending his mother, Jack was all about physical abuse and intimadation, Joan's part was mentally cruel, his father,mother, and sister went to great pains to make sure he knew he wasn't loved or wanted and it shaped the first 30 years of his life I don't think he felt worthy until Justin, that is what mikey doesn't get it's not all about sex, its about love and respect. Love Sally, and thank you!

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, I hope your birthday was good.  I will be 66 in September so you have a few years on me.  I believe that Granny will triumph over Brian and "Granny" will indeed roll off his lips.  I'm sure everyone will be anxious to meet Granny.  Mikey is as dependable as the rock of Gilbraltor - he is unchanging.  Joan still doesn't get that a mother's love should be unconditional and that being gay is not a choice.  Justin is a worthy partner for Brian.  He loves him and supports him but is not intimidated by him.  Thanks for the nice comments.  I remain, as always, your Sweet Baboo

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2020 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 20

FYI I was bored Armani is not a publicly traded company

Author's Response:

Granny went to school with Giorgio or this is a work of fiction.  Choose which answer you prefer.  LOL

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2020 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 20

Great chapter. I have gone back and am rereading the whole series. The changes in Mel and Lindsay is amazing.

Author's Response:

Wow, I am always impressed when someone tell me they reread this long saga.  That is such an amazing compliment, Thank you!!!!!  Glad you enjoyed the latest update!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2020 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 20

Hmmm

So between the last chapter and this one I reread the entire story, except for some name slip ups and that one continuity issue I pointed out where you forgot Gus. I realized I was trying to figure out when everything fell apart for Mel because when they first show up sure they are broke and have no summer clothes for the kids but Mel is at least grateful to Justin for taking her shopping. It isn’t Lindsay breakdown that does it, it’s before that. Maybe it was xmas eve when she tried to not allow Gus to go Brian and Justin’s and was thwarted by Justin. Now I am hoping Brian and Justin stop all payment except for JR’s school and that is only really for Debbie since Joe is also going there.

Wow weird thought, how do we get Granny to run into Mel.

why do I love that everyone knows if Justin shows up anywhere well dressed Brian picked out the clothes even Granny is aware. 

I love that you write Gus like every child I know, and my youngest niece is very close to his age in that they will spout back everything they have ever heard or seen at the most inopertune times in front of anyone who can maximize the embarrassment. 

Granny knows the way into Brian’s heart she obviously listened to everything Justin said about him. Armani stock was clever.

i love how Gus explains his Lily, Liam and Justin’s nicknames 

I don’t see Gus asking to see his Mother’s I figure at some point he will run into them 

I would like Ben to explain to Michael why they can’t have JR in words he will understand but I am not sure those words exist. 

I am so glad you were relatively quick with a new chapter, but now that you started this Granny thing I know I can’t wait for more...

 

Author's Response:

Someone else also said they reread the whole sage.  That is an amazing compliment, I really appreciate it!!!!  I get annoyed when I reread a chapter and find a "Brain" or a missing word or incorrect tense.  I have never used a beta so the mistakes are my own.  Predec2 offered me suggestion when I first posted the story and they were very helpful.  This is the first story I ever posted anywhere.  Justin makes no secret of his lack of fashion sense.  Gus is at that no censor age, he thinks it, he says it.  That is always fun as long as he is not telling something about you!  I think Gus feels let down by his mothers.  He may have some interest in seeing them sometime and they will certainly appear at family events at Debbie's house.  Mikey is very sure of himself and I'm not sure what it would take for him to chnage his mind.  I will try my best to post a new Granny filled chapter soon.  Thanks for all your support.  I love to erad your comments!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: MieMie (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2020 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 20

Oh my goodness, I need a Granny in my life. I love her. Michael is going to be trouble I can feel it. I love your story and it's cast. Every time I see that you've updated I am so happy. Please update soon can't wait for Granny to meet Debbie and the rest of the Pittsburgh family. 

Author's Response:

I think we would all like to have a "Granny".  I think she will be lots of fun.  Her campaign to have Brian call her Granny should be interesting.  I think she will win!!!  I'm sure everyone will be anxious to meet Granny.  Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2020 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 19

Mel and Lindz are such sefish bitches. 'Gus is so demanding of my time.' Really, well she shouldn't have had children in the first place should she!

Your stories do get me riled up and you know I love anti Mel, Lindz & Mikey!

Just a thought, the boys have been living there for a year now, as John's birthday is soon & he had a party just afte thay arrived.  But I don't recall mention of Gus or Peter's birthdays.  Did I just miss reading this?

Thanks for this chapter, can't wait to see what idiocies/demands Mad Mikey the Moron comes up with next.  Would love to see if he is actually stupid enough to demand Brian support JR and what everyone's reaction would be!!

Take care

Deb L.

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2020 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

these are such great reviews! i enjoy them almost as much as the story itself.

much as i dislike mel and lindsay, i think they are finally making some good decisions. linds is far too vulnerable and fragile right now to give gus the love and attention he needs and she made that clear to mel. that made mel change her outlook on the custody and that was a really good thing. i think mel is close to a complete breakdown and think JR needs to be taken in by someone in the family, not b/j tho. mel and linds have a lot to recover from and need a calm and quiet homelife to have any chance of mentally healing, in my opinion. JR does seem to respond well to consistent and firm authority... as in the fruit eating. i'd really like to see ted and blake take her, at least temporarity. and i'm not liking ben in this story or in so many other stories i've read. he sees things clearly but does nothing and continues to tolerate michael's horrible behavior. i can't understand how he can continue to "love" michael, who is nothing more than a petulant child moiuthing off to everyone and constantly whining about everything and everyone. there is nothing there to love.

brian never knew a mother's love and i think jennifer has wormed her way into his heart with her love and support for him. i think he really loves her and deeply appreciates her and likes getting some mothering he never had. and jen does seem to know when to back off as she did with brian's walking out on justin when he came home and found joan in the pool annex. 

this is my very favorite story and i am soooo glad i found it!!!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the long delay in asnwering this review.  I agree Mel & Linds have too many issues of their own to deal with Gus.  Mel let her jealousy and dislike of Brian to warp her feeling for Gus.  I always think something in Ben likes being the "parent/adult" in his relationship with Michael.  Jen and Brian had some moments early in their relationship but I think now they really appreciate each other.  Jennifer love the mother role and is happy to embrace Brian, she understand how his childhood damaged him.  I am really happy yu are enjpinmg my long saga.  Thanks for your nice comments.  Bill 

Reviewer: auggie (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2020 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 19

Thank you for the latest chapter.  Well I was going to read it but decided to start from the very beginning of this great series.  So It will be awhile before I give a review.  I love this so much.  Thank you.

Author's Response:

I am impressed that you plan to start reading from the beginning.  That is a real time committment!!  Thank you for you lovely comments!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2020 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 19

Another amazing chapter. Mel really is living in her own world but Lindsey is worse isn't she. I'm glad the right decision was made about Gus though. Michael, what can I say about his behavior and what he wants. There is no words strong Enough to say how nuts he is , is there. I love Jennifer she really knows how to be around Joan she handles that perfectly. Gus is such an amazing big brother I can't wait to see more interactions with him and the others. 

 

Fantastic work x

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the nice commenst. I think M&L kind of bring out the worst in each other.  I think we can be glad that Lindsay is honest enough to know she isn;t equipped to deal with Gus while she is having her emtional issues.  Mikey is dependably self-centered making everything about himself.  Gus is in a great position with older cousins to play with and younger siblings to take care of.  He is a happy little guy.  Hope you continue tp enjoy the story!!!  Hugs,  Bill

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2020 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 19

Lindsay's selfishness means that she does not feel capable of managing the children and Mélanie will surely finally realize the great support of Brian and Justin as much financial as emotional because they first think of Gus and not to them. But I am delighted that Gus lives in this wonderful family with his dads.

I may be mean, but I would like the arrogance of the so-called best friend to make him lose his job and find him managing JR who is not an easy child because Mélanie favored her.

Now I look forward to meeting Justin's grandmother, she must be a character.

The conversation between Jennifer and Joan was interesting and I think Joan is starting to understand everything she has lost. Brian can forgive her for him but certainly doesn't need to see her again.

Author's Response:

I agree Lindsay has always been selfish IMO.  She is also dealing with emotional issues and that is not a good combination.  I think Mel is starting to realize how difficult it will be to manage with B&J's support.  Mikey can't really manage his won life let alone a child's.  With their long history Brian looks on Mikey as a brother.  He is never surprised by Mikey's actions and usually not bothered by them either.  I think Granny will prove to be very interesting.  I think Joan is like Craig she wants forgiveness on her own terms.  Thanks for the comments, I enjoyed them!!!   Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2020 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 19

Ok brutal honesty I wanted to read that custody battle so bad, this was kind of let down. That being said I get why you fizzled it, so I will be sad for 24 hours and then I will get over it.  

I love Gus and the babies, and I love Gus reading to Justin and his talks with Justin are some of my favorite parts of this story.

ok granny has furniture, now we just need to meet her, I believe she will love Gus, John, and Peter as much as Lily and Liam. 

I have never been a forgive and forget person so Joan I don’t think Brian needs to forgive his life is PERFECT without her in it.

i do believe the custody of Gus will prove to be an issue for J. R. I am just not how that is going to play out my only hope is Michael DOES NOT end up with her because then she is Debbie’s headache.

Now I am going back to rereading In Sickness and In Health for the 50th time, maybe by the time I reread everything there will be another chapter...

 

Author's Response:

I was planning on a battle but I realized there really was no hope for Linds & Mel to retain custody, that was a lat minute substitution. Gus is a happy guy: he has big boy cousins to play with, baby brother and sister to take care of and full time access to Daddy & Papa.  I think Granny will be lots of fun!!  To me Joan is like Craig she wants forgiveness on her own terms.  Still thinks being gay is a choice.  She needs to work at true acceptance.  JR does knid of get shortchanged with Gus living with B&J but sometimes life isn't fair.  I am impressed if you have really read those 100 chapters 50 times.  I occasionally reread a chapter to refresh something in my mind but have never reread the whole story.  I will try to do better with updating.  Always look forward to your comments, Thanks!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2020 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hey Bill. I'm STILL reading this story, although I don't comment as much as I should. Usually, it's in passing on the way to someplace, or just as I'm sitting down to write myself. Yours is the only story I actually take a break for immediately when it's updated... the rest of this thought goes without saying since you know me.

Anyway, I'm glad to see that Lindsay- in a sense- talked some sense into Melanie. Although if I'm honest, I didn't expect any less from Lindsay. Her selfishness- no matter that it's medical in this iknstance- knows no bounds, and anything which takes the focus off of herself is just another nuisance. So yeah... No major suprises there. It's going to be interesting to see how Mel handles everything, especially in terms of her work schedule while Ms. Muffett keeps sitting on her Tuffett, especially in regards to picking up JR from some sort of daycare.

I think she'll find that she and Lindsay have very different meanings regarding the word partnership. But solely back to Melanie for a bit. Her wanting to battle for custody of Gus was NEVER about the little boy, but just her need to be right and to have something continually hanging over Brian's head like an anvil. Since it couldn't be his money, or need for her legal services she chose the ONE thing- the one PERSON- that would get him to take notice of her supposed importance...Gus!

I can't tell you what I really think of her selfish actions because this is a public site. But trust me when I tell you that the amount of profanity I would use to describe her would even make Jesus take a second look even with knowing me...LOL So suffice it to say that I really hate women like her, who are all about self absorption and don't hesitate to use a child to see to their own ends. But, that said I too, am wondering just how Melanie is going to make ends meet now.

Enter Mealymouth Michael Charles Novotny-Bruckner! He has absolutely NO EXCUSE not to support his little clone now. After all due to Deb's tears, he's working at Kinnetik... well for the interim, I hope <raised eyebrow, and some serious begging to commence in 5...4...3...2...>. It pissed me off to the highest point of pissitivity when he said that 'Brian always gave Mel and Linds cash so why shouldn't he help us out.  I am his best friend and he can certainly afford it.' How dare that little mot.. see what almost happened there?

As you already know, my feelings for Michael are NOT tamed in the slightest. But this right here...!!! And what pisses me off even more is that no matter who tries to tell him that he should be supporting his own daughter- the same child he nearly milked his testicle to death to eke out- he still comes up with saying that 'Brian can afford it.' Honestly, that's who should have been Melanie's target all along, and then perhaps she wouldn't be worried now about how she's going to make that claptrap of a household work without Gus in it. 

As for Joan... <insert deep sigh here> She is trying, and since I'm a firm believer that forgiveness is for YOU and not the other person, I really hope that Brian can and will forgive Joan. However, I've also learned that you can truly forgive someone and STILL not want anything to do with them. So if that's the tract Brian must take for his own sanity, then he's entitled to it without fear of rejection and reprisal and Joan will just have to accept that. But I was glad that she and Jennifer had an honest talk. I do believe that it gave Joan a lot to think about in terms of her views about Brian and Justin's relationship. At least she's FINALLY recognizing that what they have is strong and good for Brian; that should at least count for something.

I'm certainly looking forward to more of this story, especially being surprised by Granny's visit. If she's anything like my grandmother was, Brian is in for a real treat in terms of her honesty and a lot of laughs in terms of her bluntness. Perhaps he will have met his match in sarcasm? LOL, time will tell!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Author's Response:

So nice to hear from you!!!  Hope you are well and dealing with Covid, sure is a crazy time.  Lindsay seems to know just had f-up she is and know Gus would be better taken care of by Brian and Justin.  I have always felt Lindsay is a really selfish person who just looks for what she can get from people.

You gotta love Mikey, he is one thing we can really count on in this world.  He never chnages, never learns, never grows.  Even Debbie is getting tired of his behavior.  I don't think Mel has ever asked Mikey for support money, she didn't need his little contribution when Brian was supporting their whole household.  To me Joan is like Craig - they wnat forgiveness on their terms.  She told Jennifer she didn't approve of Brian's life style CHOICES.  I think if Joan really accepts Brian and Justin she could be forgiven.  But a half apology is only good for half forgiveness.  Time will tell where the Joan saga goes from here.

I think of Granny as being Jennifer on steroids so she should be an interesting house guest.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!  Hugs back to you!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2020 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter as always!!   I actually think I'm in shock - Melanie is going to give up Gus without a fight.   And she was truly taken back by what Lindsay had to say about Gus.     And that is the difference between Lindsay and Justin.   He loves having Gus hang out with him in his studio; it gives them time to spend together, plus Justin has given him his own easel and paints to work with.  It's not like he bothers him or hinders him from getting any work done.   And I kind of feel sorry for Joan.   She finally is getting the help she needs, and is changing her tune, and still Brian and Claire want nothing to do with her.   I do understand their feelings about it, though.   It's almost like its too little, too late to make much of a difference.    Hope you are doing well!!

Author's Response:

I think Mel realized she had not hope of winning a custody battle.  Lindsay still has a LOT of issues.  Brian has tried to help Joan and he does give her money each month but as she told Jennifer she doesn't approve of Brian's "choice" of life style.  As long as Joan stays clueless she will stay alone.  I am doing well and dealing with this crazy world we are living in right now.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2020 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

had a hard time registering for some reason but wanted to comment on this story. i totally love it!!! i've read and re-read it at least 15 times! it is so wonderful to find a b/j story that isn't buried in angst before they finally figure things out. this is so perfect, taking on michael, mel, and lindsay and i'm loving every minute of it. gus belongs with his daddies and jr belongs anywhere but with brian and justin! would like to see mel lose her current job, finally agree to get some help with her issues and for her and linds and jr to move to florida and leave the kinney family alone. i'd hate to see either of them get back into brian and justin's business. can't wait to meet justin's grandma. i'll be brian winds up loving her but probably not at first! i check several times a day to see if a new chapter is up. i almost can't wait to see how things go with everyone. ty ty ty so much for this series!!!

Author's Response:

Glad you got registered.  I love to hear from the readers so thanks for taking time to post your comments.  You are truly commited to have read the whole long saga so many times.  If you make the story a favorite you will get an email when I post a new chapter.  Sorry the updates are not more frequent.  I always have good intentions to update sooner but somehow that doesn't happen.  I just posted a nice long update.  Thanks again foe the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: loriblair (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2020 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 18

great chapter as usual! i check twice everyday just on the chance you would surpise us with a chapter! please whatever you do don't give michael or lindsay a way out of shit! please, um begging you, no last minute realizing how bad they've been, or sudden growing up. specially for michael. he needs to become and remain persona non grata in brian's life. that's the only thing i ask for. pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase!!!! can't wait for the next update. maybe you could surprise us sometime soon! keep it up! and stay safe. xoxo

Author's Response:

No plans for rescue of Mikey or Linds.  Mikey's beauty is his consistency.  Glad you are still enjoying the story, thanks for the review!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2020 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 18

Lol the last line of Jennifer getting back to business.
I think Justin and the family will protect Brian

Author's Response:

That little last minute Jennifer/Tucker thought of mine has generated some interest which makes me laugh.  I think you are right Brian has a lot of people supporting & protecting him.  Thanks for the review,  Bill

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2020 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 18

Mélanie dug her hole even deeper and John called the right person to help.

Michael has the nerve to think that Brian is going to help him with a lawyer. All Brian did for him was for Debbie not him and there he almost gave Debbie a heart attack luckily Joe and Carl cropped him up. I'm still a little sad for JR.

I don't know what to think of Joan. Does she deserve a second chance with Brian? I'll let you decide that.

Ending with a naughty little scene with Jen and Tucker made my day. I hope all is well for you and thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Mel does not seem to be making good choices.  Mikey has plenty of nerve but nt much common sense.  I agree it is a little sad for JR and I think she will miss Gus.  Hopefully this will be a wakeup call for her mothers to step up their parenting efforts.  We'll have to see what happens with Joan but at least she has raken the first positive step in her entire life.  I am really enjoying the reactions to Jennifer & Tucker romantic interlude.  Reviewers are divided on being horrified or happy.  It was truly a last minute addon for me; I wanted them to have a little conversation about Joan & Brian and i decided to throw a little teaser about their sex life.  Thanks for always taking time to review, as you know I love to hear from the readers!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: MieMie (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2020 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 18

I'm so glad your back. This is going to be awesome

Author's Response:

Glad you are still enjoying the story.  Thanks for letting me know!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2020 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 18

It's a shame nobody recorded Melanie's visit to Britin, as they coud have her charged with endangering a minor.  That would surely ensure custody to Brian and Justin.  Although, maybe their written statements will add weight.  Also Jen needs to get in contact with Mel's boss again and appraise her of the situation?  She doesn't need much more to fire Mel and then she would really be out on her arse in the cold!!!

Thanks for another update this soon.  I love this story and can't wait to for the next! 

Take care in these bad times and I hope you're well enough to keep writing the good stuff!!!

Deb L.

 

Author's Response:

I think everyone was just too shocked by Mel's behavior to think about recording it.  I don't think they will need much more to ensure they get custody.  I am well thanks, hope you are staying safe, such s carzy worl right now!!  Thanks for the review Deb!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: auggie (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2020 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 17

I have loved this story from the very beginning.  Looking forward to the next update.  Isn't is time for Michael and Ben to contribute something to JR's life and not to expect Brian to do everything?  I think it is time for Brian and Justin to look after their family because nobody seems to appreciate anything that they do for them, just expect it.  Time for change.  Mel has really lost it.  So evil.  Thank you for this so loved story.

Author's Response:

Really happy to know you have enjoyed this long saga!!!  Mikey starts to consider his daughter abd her custody in the nect chapter.  Mel is out of control.  Thanks for your nice comments, hope you continue to enjoy the story!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2020 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 17

Great chapter as always!!   I can't tell you how great it is that Debbie's eyes are finally opened about Brian and she is really seeing him for the man he has become.    And Bernice was right; Mel truly has an uphill battle and is definitly not prepared in the slighted in fighting Brian and Justin in court.    The deck is not stacked in her favor.         Hope you are doing well and staying safe!!

Author's Response:

Debbie's eyes get a little more open in the next chapter.  Mel is clueless and still thinking she has some control of the situation.  In reality her life is out of control.  I am safe and coping as best I can with this crazy world.  Thanks for the review and take care of yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2020 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 17

thanks for update

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2020 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 17

Debbie reacts well finally and sees how much Brian has changed and is well in his new life.!

Why Michael still thinks Brian and Justin must do something for JR he is the father I could hear him moaning!

I don't know if Mélanie will accept that Brian and Justin have custody of Gus I would like her to fight and lose everything but I think you are nicer than me but I have trouble with the arrogance of Mélanie who doesn't want to see everything that Brian and Justin did for her and her family and she should pay for it.
Thank you for the quick update. Stay safe!

Author's Response:

A little light is making it's way into Debbie's thinking, we'll have to see how that goes.  Mikey always wants Brian to solve his problems  but those days are over.  Mel is despearately unhappy with her life and can't figure out what she has done wrong.  She has decided Brian is the reason she isn't happy and see it as her mission to not let Gus be iike Brian.  Sadly for her that ship has sailed.  She is repsonsible for her own life and has to recognize only she can fix it.  You be safe as well, crazy times!!!  Bill 

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2020 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 17

Fantastic, I love Gus going into his dads bedroom in the morning. It's so homely and cuddly. They are such great dads to all their kids. Justin did the right thing telling Gus that the poor child is going through a lot with this and it must be confusing in his head why his mum's are the way they are right now. As for Mel, she is so infuriating isn't she. Her and Lindsey better not win the kids and poor JR needs to go live with the boys as well. Michael is far to immature to have her. It shows in the way he reacted when Cynthia told him what was going on. I can't wait for more. Brilliant work as always xx

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, hope all is still good with you.  Gus loves those morning visits too!  I think Brian us happy but he doesn't want to examine why too closely.  I don't Justin has too uch to worry about.  Meldeosn't have a lot of arrosin in her quiver.  She is going into the battle unarmed.  Hopefully losing full custody of Gus will open Lindsay and Melanie's eyes and they can work on their parenting skills.  Thanks for your kinds words and taking time to review!!!!!  Hugs,  Bill

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2020 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 17

Great update.  Brian and Justin are so much better for Gus than Mel and Linds.  Wonderful writing.  Hope you are doing well.  Doing ok here.

Author's Response:

Glad you are doing OK during these crazy times.  I am good.  I agree that Gus will be better off with his Daday & Papa and the exciting household they have assembled.  Thanks, as always, for your nice comment.  I appreciate you taking time to review.  Take care of yourself and be safe!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2020 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 17

I am so enjoying this story.  Brian and Justin are not alone.  John and Peter are a great help.  Alice and Charles act as grandparents.  They even have help with the twins.  Add Gus to the mix is not a problem.  Why does Michael think that Brian should try to help with JR?  It's not as if Mel and Linz are mistreating her.

Author's Response:

I'm happy to know you are still enjoying the story.  B&J do have lots of support both inside the house and out.  I believe John & Peter lile everything about living with the uncles (papa) including their new baby cousins.  I think you are right Gus will fit right in to the household, another willing slave for Princess Lily.  The problem with Mel & Gus is he reminds her too much of hos Daddy.  Thank for your loyalty & reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2020 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 16

Hey there and hope you are doing well!!

Great chapter!!  Mel waited too long, not that that would have stopped anything from happening.   I'm glad that Brian got the ball rolling and is already a few steps ahead of Mel.  The psychologist who saw Gus definitely heard what he had to say, that he isn't happy at Mel's, she's starting to see him as Brian, he has to help out with JR and Lindsay doesn't really have time for him either.   Mel and Lindsay are practically handing Gus over to Brian and Justin with their behavior and they don't even realize it!!

Author's Response:

I am doing well in this crazy time.  Happy to k now you enjoyed this chapter.  Mel didn't stand a chnace working by herself.  Brian & Justin were paying for a whole staff to help Anabel.  I don't think the muchers are doing much to retain custody.  Thanks for reviewing, stay safe!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2020 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 16

Thanks for update.  It definitely makes things better while we're all on 'lockdown'!!

Take care,

Deb L. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!  Stay safe!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2020 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 16

I love Bernice!  She really let Mel have it!  I'm also glad it seems that Deb has finally seen the light.

Author's Response:

She and Grandmom Jen would probably be great friends.  Deb has seen a glimmer not yet a spotlight.  Thanks fo taking time to post a review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2020 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 16

Thanks for update, stay save

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, glad you are still reading and enjoying.  Hope we all stay safe in this crazy time.  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2020 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 16

Ted is seriously an amazing friend to Brian and Justin for him to do that for them by talking to Debbie. I hope something can be done for JR as well as she deserve a safe and loving home as well. Gus knows he is loved and cared for by all his family so that talk he had to do with the lady went the right way. 

 

Fantastic work as always xx

Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comment.  Happy you are still enjoying this story.  You are rught about Gus he just told the truth about his feeling.  He knows he has a lot of support.  Thanks for the review!!!  Hugs,  Bill

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2020 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 16

Well it seems that Mélanie will lose her job and this time no one will be there to help her. Ted is really a true friend for Brian and Justin and I'm not sure I want to know Michael's reaction although we will definitely hear it! Gus is really an adorable little boy who does not deserve Melanie to throw her hatred for Brian on him .. he will be very happy with his dads and cousins and his idol Granmom Jen. Thank you for the update and take care of you..

Author's Response:

Mel seems to have cut off all avenues of support.  Mikey's shouts of protest may be heard around the world.  He will not be happy and looks like his Ma is not going to provide much support.  Gus is a happy guy and deserves to be in a loving enviorment.  I am well, hope you stay safe during this crazy time!  Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2020 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 16

Can we just throw Mel in Brian and Justin’s pond so she can become frog food, oh wait she might poison the frogs...

i love how everyone calls dibs on baby feeding that is fun.

i admit that more than anything I want Mel to lose her job although I do think Mel being home for to long will either end in a spousal or child abuse arrest.

Gus finding out he can pee outside is mostly amusing because John and Peter forgot Gus is still at an age where he tells all the things that were supposed to be a secret. My 7 yr old niece ratted out her big sister for messing up something she was cooking on kid messenger with her sister yelling in the background to stop...

I liked that Ted stepped up and that he and Blake told Deb. Nina has Ted so wrapped around her finger that Viola and Blake have both realized it and need it to stop.

So now we come to the point where I beg for more even this was a really good long chapter where some interesting things happened I need to turn the page and read another chapter soon, pretty please!!!

Author's Response:

Just think of the smell coming off that pond as Mel rotted, not a good plan at all.  Babies are pretty adorable, it's just those diaper changes YUCK!  Mel is on a fast decline but to be honest haven't decided what comes next, still kicking around a few scenerios.  Peeing outside seemed a big thrill and when my dog peed on the same tree it demostrated marking territory in a easy to understand way.  Hope to update soon, got a lot of thoughts running thru my brain.  As always, enejoyed your comments.  Thanks for the review.  Bill

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2020 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 15

That was such a wonderful chapter, I loved Kevin's visit with them all. He is such an adorable little boy. His reading is really getting so good with Gus's help and I think that is amazing I bet it makes it parents happy. I love the older boys as well as the younger ones helping with the babies it shows the love the family has for each other. 

 

Mel needs a kick in the butt how dare she talk to Ted like that. I hope and Pray Gus gets to live with his dads forever. 

 

I can't wait to see the Grandmother I wonder how much she is like Jennifer. Poor Brian if she is and more importantly good luck Mel because she will tear her a new one lol.

 

brilliant work x

Author's Response:

Hello my friend.  Kevin has become such a popular figure in this long sage and I really enjoy writing sbout him. Everybody is loving Lily & Liam and is enjoying taking care of them.  Brian and Justin are lucky to have the help both paid & even more unpaid.  I think Mel is about to experience a serious kick!  I envision Granny as Grandmom Jen on steroids.  Anyone who gets on her bad side needs to worry.  Hope you are well and thanks for your support!!!   Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2020 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter as always, Bill!!   Melanie may think she is getting the jump on Brian, but she will soon figure out that that is definitely not the case.   And she doesn't realize it, but her and Lindsay's past are going to be brought out for everyone to see.   I'm so waiting for her to be brought down a few pegs.   It is very long overdue.   

I hope that you continue to stay safe as well, and thanks for the update!! 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words.  Mel is in for some rude truths about her behavior and the ramifications.  I hope you are staying safe as well.  These are crazy times that seem to get crazier every day.  Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2020 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 15

I love this story.  So proud of Ted, he really put Melanie in her place.  Justin, Brian and Gus have so much support and people on their side.  Can't wait to meet Justin's grandmother.  

Dee Dee

Author's Response:

Hi Dee Dee.  Thanks for the really kind comments.  I am always proud and humbled when a reader says they appreciate my story.  Ted can only be pushed so far.  Brian and Justin provide lots of support so it is a good thing that they get support.  Lots of interest about Granny, I hope I can do her justice, I am getting a little worried.  Thanks for always providing support with your reviews!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2020 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter as usual..... I am really looking forward to Justin's grans visit

i have a feeling she's going to be a force to be reckoned with.....LOL

Bran will be spending a lot of time in his home office I think.... 

Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed the latest update.  Not sure Granny will allow Brian to hide??  I think she will be fun.  Thanks for the review,  Bill

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2020 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 15

thanks for update.  Darn Munchers

Author's Response:

You are welcome.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2020 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 15

I am looking forward to Granny's meeting with Brian especially if it is a replica of Jennifer. he will not understand what is happening to him haha. I think the battle between Annabel and Mélanie is going to be fierce. Annabel has so many cartridges in her bag while Mel gets everyone on her back even Ted. Spending time with Kevin and Gus is nice they are 2 little cheerful and kind boys ready to do anything to help. I hope that Gus will be comfortable with the therapist to tell everything, he is a smart little boy who can see what's going on even if he doesn't understand everything

Thanks for the update. Here in France we are confined so I start reading the whole series again. I hope you are well and take care of yourself.

Author's Response:

I think Granny's visit will shake up the household.  I envision her as Grandmom Jen on steroids.  Anabel also has a lot of support staff to help her.  Melanie has only herself and Bernice will NOT be happy about this custody battle.  She warned Mel to negoiate with Brian.  Kevin is one of the most popular characters that I have added.  He and Gus are good buddies.  Gus is a boy who loves to help.  I think Kevin is happy to provide assistance since he is more used to needing assistance.  Brian & Justin's household is a happy pacae for him.  Happy that my stories can provide you with distraction duing this crazy time.  We all need to do our best to stay safe.  Great to hear from you, thanks for the review!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2020 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 15

Is Joan in the hospital? Is Michael still working for Brain? There is so much going on at Briton sometimes I forget there is a whole world out there. Special kudos to Teddy man, he is great.

Author's Response:

I know there are so many plot lines we haven't heard about in a while.  Bad author!!!!  As far as I know Joan is still in detox/rehab and Michael still mans the Kinnetik reception desk.  I did get Teddy Man in this chapter.  I will work on Joan, Michael, Debbie, Joe, Emmett & Rusty updates soon.  Thanks for the review, I truly appreciate your support!!  Bill

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2020 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter.  Can just see the fireworks when Mel finds out about the custody.  Wonderful writing.  Hope all is well with you.  This is a scary time for all of us.  Take care.

Author's Response:

Not sure what my issue was last night but I can respond today.  Hope you got my message.  You are always so kind in your comments.  Happy you are still enjoying the story,.  It is a strange time for eveyone, hope things settle down soon.  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2020 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 14

Sweet Baboo, Forgot to tell you how glad I was to see Kevin in Chapter 14. Always makes me feel good when Kevin is so accepted by the Kinney-Taylor clan. The child can find good in just about eveyone. My second eye surgery went great, check up in three months after that once a year on my glaucoma. Thanks for asking and I appreciate your thoughts and prayers. Love ya, your Sally

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, really happy to hear all the good news about your eye treatment!!!!!!!  Kevin is one of my favorite "created" characters and he seems to be popular with the readers.  Growing up I had neighbors who often mended a boy with Downs so that his mother had a break.  There were not so many social services back then.  Glad you enjoy Kevin's visits.  As always, your Sweet Baboo

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2020 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 14

Did I detect a little blackmail & from a priest too!

Can't wait for Mel & Lindz to find out B & J are going for full custody.  I'm sure Michael will have something to say about that too.  There may have to a pitts wide warning for screeching, screaming and whining!!!

Thanks.  Looking forward to next chapter.

Deb L

Author's Response:

Fr Bolton knew the right words to get Joan to agree. Blackmail for a good cause????  I don't think M&L will have a positive response but they have pretty much sunk their own ship.  Michael will not be pleased!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2020 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 14

Father Bolton is just as stubborn as Joan, so he may be able to help her. I hope so, she's sick and lonely and the saddest part is she brought it on herself she chance to change her life but didn't when Jack died. Hope we soon find out if Gus gets to live with his daddy and papa. I loved "grandpop Tucker. Sweet Baboo, you did good,love Sally

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, I always look forward to your comments.   Fr Bolton knew what words to use with Joan - suicide is a "serious sin".  Joan likes to think of herself as religious, certainly not a sinner.  Plus he called her on all her bullshit, he had nothing to lose.  We'll have to see how things work out for her.  Next chapter will dealwith custody.  Glad you liked "Grandpop' Tucker.  I think he feels it means Justin accepts him as part of the family.  Hope all is good with you!!!!!  I remain, as always, your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2020 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 14

Great chapter as always!!   I like Father Bolton.  He sure knows how to handle Joan.  He actually got her to go the hospital for treatment!!    And as far as Jennifer goes, I think it was very cool of the agent to tell her that the tenants below Melanie and Lindsey will be witnesses against them in regards to the case.    Just more people on Brian and Justin's side.    And poor Gus!!   Melanie really needs a muzzle to keep her mouth shut about Brian.   But I'm glad that Justin told him the truth; that eventhough Lily and Liam are babies and need his and Brian's attention 24/7, that doesn't mean they don't want Gus around.   He is a huge help and loves to be around the babies. 

Author's Response:

I think Joan was ready for atough message, she knew what her issues were.  I think being reminded that suicide is a sin (in the Catholic Church) convinced her to try treatment.  I think the tenant information is a very good thing for Justin & Brian's case.  Gus has to realize life changes but love continues.  Gus does love those babies!!  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2020 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 14

Fab chapter loved it.... thanks for sharing 

Author's Response:

Glad you enioyed it!!  Thanks for the review!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2020 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 13

My Sweet Baboo,  Been up all night and so glad I found your latest chapter { having early surgery on my second eye for catract surgery and stents for glaucoma and was afraid I'd sleep and miss my appointment} I hope Gus doesn't spill the beans about living at daddy's ! Gus is being abused and turned against Brian. He needs a stable home life  an unconditional love he sure doesn't get at home. I loved this chapter, Jen  letting Brian know what Mel doing and saying to Gus, getting in a pop corn fight, and seeing Brian "cook", I like the bonding of Jen and Brian. Love ya, your Sally 

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, hope alll goes well with your nedical treatments.  Please let meknow how things go, you are in my thoughts and prayers.  I am like you, always have toruble sleeping when I know I have an early appointment the next day.  I think B&J's lawyers will be spiling the beans and Mel will NOT be happy.  For soem reason she thinks she is in control of the situation.  Mother Taylor is going to annihilate her.  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter, I can imagine Mother Taylor's expression when she emptied the bowl of popcorn onto Brian.  Always love to ready your comments.  Sending all positive thoughts your way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   As always, your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2020 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 13

Melanie has sure messed with poor Gus' head.  They need to get custody of Gus before she does permanent damage.

Dee Dee

Author's Response:

i think Gus is confused by Melanie's actions & comments.  Gus has always been a happy guy and really loves his Daddy & Papa and doesn't understand why Mama is critical of them.  Thanks Dee Dee for the review!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: LucretiaSeeks (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2020 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 13

I am the world's worst about reviewing - usually because I don't know my password! But I retrieved a new one tonight so I could say that I love your story and I appreciate all of the effort you put into it for our enjoyment. Thanks for a great update!

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review, I REALLY appreciate it!!!!   Happy to know you are still enjoying this long saga.  Bill

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2020 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 13

Really enjoyed this new chapter.  Mel needs a slapdown, the self righteous bitch!  I think she will be suprised about Joan testifying on her behalf.  Joan is a total bitch but only she herself can mess with her family not some outsider like Mel, who is a lesbian as well!

Thanks

Deb L

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 13

Trying to decide if I want Mel to fight which be a better read or just to be forced to give Gus up which would be better for Gus but kind of boring to read.

Mother Taylor is a tigress and don’t even think about trying to take a swipe at her pack she will draw blood...

i think that house will be chaotic and fun for all and Ms Lily will have 3 big boys and her Fathers to wrap around her little finger.

Fingers crossed you have the next chapter written and ready to go...

Author's Response:

I suspect it will fall more into the better read category.  Mother Taylor is not to be trifled with,  Brian warned  M&L not to get on her bad side!!!  They should have listened.  I agree with your chaos prediction and Lily will indeed rule the roost as the Queen.  Looking so much likeJustin, Brian especially will never be able to resist her.  Nice thought about the already written  chapter.  Always enjoy your comments, THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 13

Loved the update!!   Poor Gus.  Melanie and Lindsay have no idea what they are doing to him with the constant remarks about Brian and how he and Justin don't have time for him.   I say Brian and Justin go at them with everything they have and then some.   And I'm sure they will have all of their family and friends on their side as well!!!  

Author's Response:

Really glad you enjoyed this chapter.  M&L are clueless.  Several people have pointed out to Mel that she shouldn't made rude comments about Brian in front of Gus.  Jennifer pointed out that tryingto make Gus love his Daddy less would NOT make Gus love his Mama more.  Thanks for the nice comments, you have been a great supporter of the story!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 13

Great update.  Want Gus to be hppy and Melanie is ruining that.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh wow poor little guy being torn between parents it happens so much in real life. I worry a little that they asked Gus if he wanted to live with them because Mel and Lindsay will not give up primary custody

Author's Response:

Wow fast read & review.  I think a Taylor-Kinney hammer is about to descend on Mel & Linds and they will have no idea what hit them.  If Mel pisses off Grandmom Jen any more she will be lucky to escape with her life.  Thanks for all your support, I appreciate all your reviews!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: loriblair (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 12

I fucking love this story of yours! Between us, I would love it even more if you updated more frequently! Quite frankly, I check for an update every single day! 

I have a little request: please, whatever happens, whatever you do, don't let Lindsay and Michael off the hook. Yeah Mel is a raving bitch who definitely deserves whatever mother Taylor is about to send her way, but please please please, let Michael and Lindsay pick the wrong side and have to pay for their duplicity and selfishness at the end. Oh and, little Jenny shouldn't be spared. Gus deserves better than this little half Michael half Mel creature ending up as part of the Taylor Kinney household!

Sorry for the rant and kisses!

Author's Response:

I hate that RL limits my updates.  If you make the sotry a favorite you will get an email when I update.  Hope ypu approve of the next chapter.  I'll keep Linds & Mikey in mind for future troubles.  Thanks for the review, great to hear from you!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2020 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 12

Wow Mel is seriously on a new level of horrible isn't he or should I say evil. Has she not learned by now you can't mess with Brian or Justin or most of all Mother Taylor. Gus needs to be in a house of love not anger or spitefulness. I hope and pray he can go live with his dads and poor JR gets to go with him or to her dads. 

 

Fantastic and gripping read xx

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2020 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 12

Wow!  Melanie gets bitchier every day!  She actually thinks she stands a chance against the Taylor Kinney family?  Jennifer alone will annihilate her!  Hehe!

Author's Response:

She has been warned but ignored the warnings.  Now she is in serious trouble.  Glad you are enjoying her misery.  Thanks for the review!!!   Bill

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2020 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 12

Mélanie is in the process of her own grave and yet she is a lawyer and must realize that everything she says is not reality but her aversion to Brian. If she goes to court all the corpses will come out. So yes Brian's old life but time has passed and he has changed but the French guy, all the money loaned to bail them out, Lindsay's disease !! Please make them lose everything and give Gus to his dads he would love to be with them. Thank you for this chapter and I wish you a Happy New Year.

Author's Response:

She is digging it deep for sure.  I think as Gus becomes more like Brian she is having more and more difficulty controlling her jealousy.  Her biggest mistake has been to get on the bad side of both Grandmom Jen & Justin.  They will push her into that grave she has dug!  Hope your 2020 is great!!!!  Thanks for taking tiem to review!!!  Bill