Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2022 01:19 AM · On: Anniversario

You are killing me in a good way

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2022 07:02 PM · On: Family Bonding

Hahahah great dialogue!

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2022 06:37 PM · On: Something New

You keep twking it up a notch!!! How do you do it?

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2022 10:50 AM · On: Absolution

Good decision Justin. Good decision

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2022 03:54 AM · On: No Apologies

You have created such an interedting dynamic

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2022 03:27 AM · On: Dear Justin

So so beautuflly written...wow

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2022 12:11 AM · On: If They Can Do It

❀️

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2022 08:03 PM · On: The First Five Years

Intense

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2022 08:16 AM · On: All Together

👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2022 05:06 AM · On: A Slight Inconvenience

I wish Brian was my boss

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2022 04:32 AM · On: Respite

❀️

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2022 10:36 PM · On: A Matter of Timing

You sure have a gift for story telling

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2022 11:22 PM · On: Modern Love

I honestly think you could make lots of money selling these chapters for a new season...I am totally addicted to your prose

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2022 11:54 AM · On: Easy

Justin hasn t lost anything, the world has 💞💞

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2022 07:36 AM · On: Negotiations

Lololo

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2022 11:29 PM · On: Second City

Another brilliant chapter ❀️ Humour angst and reality. I am so in the moment with this story thank you

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2022 03:05 AM · On: Long Night's Journey Into Day

Amen

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2022 10:33 PM · On: On The Table

How do yoi do it?

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2022 06:57 PM · On: Emergency Contact

💞💞💞💞

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2022 06:31 PM · On: The One Where Justin Finishes His Work

👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

 

Brava/o!!!

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2022 06:30 PM · On: The One Where Justin Finishes His Work

👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

 

Brava/o!!!

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2022 10:41 AM · On: The One Where Everybody's Scared, Part 4

I am sad its almost over....you wrote their story so well that I could actually see it unfold in front of my eyes....

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2022 04:18 AM · On: The One Where Everybody's Scared, Part 3

👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2022 01:39 AM · On: The One Where Everybody's Scared, Part 2

I love your prose....I love everything about this story...well done!!!

 

 

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2022 12:51 AM · On: The One Where Everybody's Scared, Part 1

Why do I love angst!! Poor Justin and poor Brian!

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2022 08:49 AM · On: The One Where Brian Freaks Out

Too much ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2022 03:28 AM · On: The One Where Justin Gets a Present

Genius

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2022 12:48 AM · On: The One Where Brian Doesn't Worry

You have a brilliant sense of humor...I laughed so hard

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 09:14 PM · On: The One Where Brian Isn't There

🀧🀧🀧🀧🀧🀧🀧 These two 💞💞💞💞💞

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 06:49 PM · On: The One Where Justin Gets Better

I got emotional...this story is killing me in a good way

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 03:01 PM · On: The One Where Brian Does Some Shopping

You "write" them so well...I can actually hear them..

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 11:06 AM · On: The One Where Brian and Justin Take Manhattan

❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 10:32 AM · On: The One Where Brian Talks About Relationships

Wow. That was intense

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 04:51 AM · On: The One Where Justin Cries All Winter

YYou write so well about all these heartbreaking emotions Justin is feeling

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 03:00 AM · On: The One Where Brian Meets Justin's Brother

👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 12:59 AM · On: The One Where Justin Does Good Work

Hahahaha your writing is so compelling and entertaining...👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 12:17 AM · On: The One Where Justin Forgets He's Married

Brilliant! Just brilliant!

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2022 11:23 PM · On: The One Where Cynthia Tags Along

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Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2022 10:33 PM · On: The One Where Emmett Doesn't Babysit

Another beautiful chapter

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2022 09:19 PM · On: The One Where Daphne Comes to Visit

👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2022 08:30 PM · On: The One Where Justin Gets Sick

Omg this was one if the brst fics I have ever read...

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2022 10:30 AM · On: Second City

Thanks again for writing an amazing chapter. Love it.

* hugs *

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2022 05:05 AM · On: The One Where Brian Learns Sign Language

I am enjoying your writing so dam much....such an original plot

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2022 04:02 AM · On: The One Where Justin Loses His Hearing

Omg I absolutely loved this story!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2022 10:12 PM · On: Second City

Great chapter as always!!   I gotta hand it to Justin; as much as he was hurting and having issues, he stuck it out for as long as he could, and did a great job doing it!!    And Brian was there supporting him all the way, not that I expected anything less from him.   

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2021 04:18 PM · On: Miracle

I'm glad that Brian came to the realization that he's not going to find some magic pill or treatmemt that will is going to fix Justin; that he just needs to be there for him and support him.    I think Justin needs that more than anything.  

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2021 06:29 AM · On: Miracle

nice to see the update even if it was a bit strong

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2021 04:45 PM · On: In From the Rain

I hope your able to update this story soon, I so love it!!

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2021 09:20 AM · On: In From the Rain

I am in absolute awe at how you manage to write such amazing chapters, time after time. I am so emotionally captivated by this story and it never ceases to deliver something truly beautiful with each new posting. A WIP that should never end!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2021 09:22 PM · On: In From the Rain

Thank goodness for Martha, barking and alerting Brian that Justin was out in the freezing rain by himself.   She is such a godsend.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2021 09:04 PM · On: A Consult

I loved that Justin was back in the office and helping out with a campaign.   With him being so sick lately, he hasn't really had the energy to do very much.   

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2021 08:43 PM · On: Awaited

I think its a very cool thing April is doing in donating her kidney for Evan.   I'm so glad that she is a match..

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2021 08:15 PM · On: In From the Rain

In spite of everything Brian still loves his Justin.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2021 07:32 AM · On: In From the Rain

Love this caring Brian. He will do everything for Justin.

 

* hugs *

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2021 07:29 AM · On: A Consult

I so love this chapter. Don't you ever stop writing this story, love this so much. But I really wish there was something for Justin, so that he can having a break in his sickniss. I'm glad seeing Justin in the office and helping other with a campaign.

 

* hugs * 

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2021 12:33 AM · On: In From the Rain

I failed to not laugh

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2021 11:03 AM · On: A Consult

Interesting look through someone else's eyes.

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2021 05:09 AM · On: A Consult

This was fun to read

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2021 07:54 PM · On: Sleeping With Ghosts

Loved seeing the update and love this chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2021 05:32 PM · On: Sleeping With Ghosts

Wow.  That Evan got to see Adam again was amazing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2021 04:03 PM · On: Awaited

Justin needs Evan and Brian and they need him.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2021 07:25 AM · On: Awaited

Oh I love how you dig into how Justin is feeling and the divergent ways his illness impacts him. The dam baggage that goes with the illness making him feel guilty and worried omg heartbreaking

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2021 03:35 PM · On: April Showers

Here's hoping she can help Evan.  That would be so great.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2021 03:01 PM · On: Love, Justin, Part 2

I worry about Evan.  What if something happened to Brian.  He's the one holding things together it seems.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2021 10:00 PM · On: April Showers

I don't think April's friends understand why she is such good friends with Justin, Brian, Evan and the gang and I don't think they will.   Justin. Brian, Evan and April are a little family now, and its due to the seizures yes, but its also because they care about each other and are supporing each other.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2021 09:47 PM · On: Love, Justin, Part 2

This was a great chapter!!   I loved the back and forth correspondence between Justin and Ben.   But I felt so bad for Justin - its bad enough he was in the hospital for a while, but to be bad enough where he was allergic to Martha and Brian had to take her home.   But at least he has been getting better and finally got to go home.    And then he was talking about April; I have been wondering about her and how she's been doing.   I'm sorry that has been having more seizures, but I think it's great that she and Justin are getting to be really good friends and she spent some time with him in the hospital.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2021 12:33 PM · On: Three Acts

Things are getting worse for Justin.  How much more can he take?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2021 05:27 PM · On: Dirty Magic

What a way to meet Ethan once again.  Having to expain Evan to Ethan should be a trip.

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2021 08:59 PM · On: April Showers

I had a feeling

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2021 12:00 PM · On: April Showers

Oh I should have seen that coming! πŸ™πŸ»β€οΈ

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2021 02:12 AM · On: Three Acts

What a chapter!!   I definitely needed the kleenex for this one.    As sad as it is that Justin needs an interpreter for his hospital and doctor visits, I think its great that they found one that they really like and are on friendly terms with, and who really cares about him.     

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2021 02:10 AM · On: Three Acts

GUH! This one got to me so much. Beautifully written as usual. 

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2021 03:49 PM · On: Three Acts

Every chapter puts tears in my eyes , take that as the compliment it is meant to be only an excellent writer makes you feel ...

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2021 06:53 PM · On: Dirty Magic

That was a very good thing that Brian did, taking Ethan back to the house after what happened to him.   And I think Justin was very impressed with it as well.    But what it did do was give Evan some guidance as to what was going on between Brian and Justin all those years ago.   He doesn't have all the facts, but he knows that whatever did happen helped to make Brian and Justin what they are now.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2021 12:51 PM · On: Pain Management

Everything about this chapter screams pain.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2021 08:36 PM · On: Pain Management

I'm glad that Brian stayed home from work to be with Justin.   Eventhough Justin felt he didn't need any help, just the point that Brian was there was a big help for both of them.

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2021 06:02 PM · On: Pain Management

terrible the pain Justin was in, good to see an update.  I hope they soon find a kidney for Evan.

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2021 12:51 PM · On: Pain Management

So beautiful!

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2021 03:21 PM · On: Date Night

I hope your able to update this story. I wonder if there's a way for Justin to produce in bed, I mean art.

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2021 12:27 AM · On: Saltwater

Now I just finished chapter 111, but I wonder have you thought of looking for Evan's lost friend? 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2021 01:54 PM · On: Date Night

This story amazes me how deep the love is between these three men. The depth of commitment and care so beautifully written

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2021 10:45 PM · On: Date Night

It was nice that Brian and Justin (and Martha) went out and had a nice evening.    But I think Brian was right when he said that Justin should just paint for himself and not based on whatever current trend is going on.   I think he'd be happier with that anyway.   

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2021 07:10 PM · On: Date Night

I thought he painted because he had to, didn't know he did it to be famous.  Love this chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2021 06:22 PM · On: No Apologies

Love your look at Michael and how thoughtless he can be.  Maybe thoughtless is not the right word.  He has a limited outlook on anything that isn't about him.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2021 12:07 PM · On: Talking About It

I was thinking Justin was referring to the bashing as well, but when Brian said he was thinking about when he was sick, woah!!   It's not really a surprise that that is now considered a tragic event in his life.   

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2021 01:02 PM · On: Talking About It

Oh that last line β€˜dies’ brilliant

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2021 01:02 PM · On: Talking About It

Oh that last line β€˜dies’ brilliant

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2021 04:11 AM · On: Talking About It

Does that mean they keep getting sick but never die?  What happens if Brian gets sick?

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2021 12:51 PM · On: Love, Justin, Part 1

I loved Justin's correspondence with Ben, starting from right before it all went bad to how things are starting to look up.   And Justin's obvious bout with depression was front and center as well, but at least Ben was able to see that he's turned a corner and his mental health is improving as well.   I think after everything Justin's been through, its a given that at some point, he's just going to give up for awhile.  I'm just glad he has so many people in his corner fighting for him.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2021 11:37 AM · On: Love, Justin, Part 1

Omg the chapters from Brian’s POV are going to be harrowing

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2021 06:43 AM · On: Love, Justin, Part 1

Wow.  All that and he's going to Disney World?  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2021 09:50 PM · On: A Bigger Boat

I remember the chapter where Brian and Justin bought the furniture for the apartment, and totally enjoyed their back and forth banter in front of Charlie, who unbeknownst to them until they were all set to leave, she knew everything they were saying.   I think it's great that they went back to her store to shop for the new mattress.   

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2021 08:22 PM · On: No Apologies

I think the way Brian treated Justin was kind of shitty, there was no way for Michael to know.  I mean, ok, I don't like the writing of Michael now in the story.  I also think Michael acts like an ass to Justin and especially Emily and Derrick.  The family entirely was crappy at the funeral, I think most of them should have gone home it was Brian's dead beat crappy Mom, not their business.  Still, there was no way for Michael to know that Brian had been up all night with an ill Justin.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2021 02:33 PM · On: A Bigger Boat

Who knew shopping for a new bed could be so much fun.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2021 12:04 PM · On: A Bigger Boat

Oh that was a nice breather chapter lol. Good job they have a huge bedroom for such a big bed. Omg that would cost a future plus a new mattres and linens

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2021 12:04 PM · On: A Bigger Boat

Oh that was a nice breather chapter lol. Good job they have a huge bedroom for such a big bed. Omg that would cost a future plus a new mattres and linens

Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2021 04:20 AM · On: A Bigger Boat

yeah evan is out of the basement.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2021 05:59 PM · On: Duty of Care

I hope nothing ever happens to Brian.  Good idea to move Evan upstairs.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2021 03:37 AM · On: Duty of Care

Omg this story just takes me to extremes πŸ’• the constant care Brian does with his boys feeds him as well. Just when Brian thinks he has seen the best of Justin he produces another masterpiece. Likewise Justin and Evan totally understand Brian

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2021 03:36 AM · On: Duty of Care

Omg this story just takes me to extremes πŸ’• the constant care Brian does with his boys feeds him as well. Just when Brian thinks he has seen the best of Justin he produces another masterpiece. Likewise Justin and Evan totally understand Brian

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2021 11:38 PM · On: Duty of Care

Until you look at things from his point of view, you really don't see what Brian all does for both Justin and Evan on a daily basis, and especially now, wiith Evan not feeling well, waiting for the kidney.  Brian is really doing all he can for both of them.   Here's hoping Evan gets that call very soon... 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2021 11:17 PM · On: The Week It Didn't Stop Raining

Justin really is depressed, but Brian is making him see that in the grand scheme of things, life is so much better because of him; that all of the things in their lives, Evan included, are better because of him.   

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2021 10:54 PM · On: Guardian of the Sick

I'm really liking Martha.   She's a great service dog, and perfect for Justin.   And she's even picking up that something is off with Evan and is watching out for him as well.   I think Justin is right, though, that they need to get Evan in to see the doctor for an appointment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 05:23 PM · On: The Week It Didn't Stop Raining

Justin is finally looking at things in a better light.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2021 07:58 AM · On: Guardian of the Sick

Oh I love Martha and I wondered if she would pick up on Evan

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2021 02:20 AM · On: Guardian of the Sick

I like Martha, she's helping Justin which keeps Brian happy and it looks like she's going to help Evan.  Could you please note at the beginning whose POV we're reading?  Please.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 06:42 PM · On: The Ballad of the Ugliest Lamp on the Face of the Earth

This started with a lamp and ended with a lamp.  If there was only some way to make Hobbs pay.  Justin would still have ended up deaf, but without seizures.  Maybe?  What happened to the trip?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 06:06 PM · On: Ballet

A very good description of the Brian, Justin and Evan dynamic.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 01:49 PM · On: The Ballad of the Ugliest Lamp on the Face of the Earth

Yes, this one was definitley angsty.   And aside from Justin having the seizure to begin with, the fact that it happened in a public place, at his art show, just make it so much harder for him to deal with.   And I can even see him maybe pulling back from going to the shows for awhile, which would be totally understandable.  

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 01:26 PM · On: Ballet

Yes, Justin is the glue that holds them all together.   I"m glad they are planning a little trip away.  I think it'll do them good to get away from the cold and into a nice, warm setting and relax for awhile.

Reviewer: Frosty70 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 01:24 PM · On: The Ballad of the Ugliest Lamp on the Face of the Earth

Great writing.>Cat

Reviewer: Frosty70 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 01:24 PM · On: The Ballad of the Ugliest Lamp on the Face of the Earth

Great writing.>Cat

Reviewer: Frosty70 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 01:24 PM · On: The Ballad of the Ugliest Lamp on the Face of the Earth

Great writing.>Cat

Reviewer: Frosty70 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 01:24 PM · On: The Ballad of the Ugliest Lamp on the Face of the Earth

Great writing.>Cat

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 08:43 AM · On: Ballet

I'm so in love with this story. Don't you ever stop writing.

* hugs *

Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2021 09:31 PM · On: Ballet

i am so in love with this series. thank you so much 

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2021 10:36 PM · On: Hey Jealousy

Loved this side of Brian, and showing his feelings for Evan. 

 

 

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2021 10:35 PM · On: Hey Jealousy

Loved this side of Brian, and showing his feelings for Evan. 

 

 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2021 10:10 PM · On: Hey Jealousy

I am loving all all the new chapters!!  I like the addition of AJ.  He and Evan seem to be hitting it off, though I'm thinking that they are just enjoying getting to know each other.    

On another note, I do have an idea for a chapter.   I know that Brian lives to take care of everybody is his own way, but what if things were reversed and Justin (and Evan) had to take care of him?   

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2021 07:27 AM · On: Hey Jealousy

I love this POV.  It's nice to see Jane again.  So Brian was worried that Evan would be hurt?  Not jealous?

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2021 08:28 PM · On: Split Level

Omg I was worn out just reading that. All three characters worrying about each other, and Brian almost happy in his role

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2021 05:16 PM · On: Split Level

The sick ones are still sick, but better.  Brian wouldn't know what to do with himself if his significant others weren't doing well.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2021 04:55 PM · On: Coming of Age

I'm glad to see Evan is doing better.  Justin's okay, but Brian's a mess.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2021 01:28 PM · On: Split Level

Brian is the man!!    Just like he said, he was born to do this!!   

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2021 12:17 AM · On: Coming of Age

Good chapter!!!   While I was really sad for Evan, I was glad that Brian and Justin made the trip home for Gus' big day!!   As I'm Jewish, it was nice to see Gus partake of all the Bar Mitzvah festivities!!    I thought it was very Brian to acknowledge that Justin was still here after the 13 years.  He may have his health issues, but he is doing well and hanging in there.    

Just wanted to let you know this is one of my all-time favorite stories and am always thrilled for new chapters!!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2021 11:52 PM · On: Coming of Age

This story is so amazing and I love when one character is falling apart you have the other two trying to take the emotional weight

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2021 11:40 PM · On: Befriend

This is a great chapter!!!    I loved that Justin, Brian, Evan and the gang made a new friend that they all really like and hang out with.   But I felt really sad for Justin that he now realizes what Brian goes through when he has a seizure and he was just torn up over it.   Hopefully, the doctors can get April on anti-seizure medication to help with these, but even though I'm still sorry she had the seizure, at least Brian and Justin were there to help. 

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