Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2017 04:41 PM · On: Both Sides of the Coin
Was not expecting that from Brian. I thought he would stay distant. Apparently Justin has an intresting backstory. Can't wait to hear that. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Well, I would say he couldn't resist taking a peek, and now that he has, I think he won't be able to resist taking over Justin's recuperating responsibilities personally. ;) More of how Justin came to be out on the street will be disclosed coming up. So glad you're enjoying this one, Heidi! Thank you for reading, and for your comments. ~Kim
Reviewer: Bo61 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2017 02:25 PM · On: Both Sides of the Coin
Oh what a lovely chapter, I love every letter, dear Kim! You feel the tension between the two, it will be wonderful weeks of recovery for Justin, but also for Brian, who will never let him go! Happy weekend xo
Author's Response: Hello, dear friend! So glad that you are enjoying this. And yes, during his recovery, both men will learn more about each other. The big question will be whether or not Brian will let him leave once he has no more reason for Justin to remain. Thank you for reading, and for your comments! The next part will be up soon. XOXO ~Kim
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2017 12:34 PM · On: Both Sides of the Coin
Good meeting for Brian and Justin ! I think that Justin has a very painful past and that we will learn what happened; I hope that in this story he always draws and maybe Brian will find him an activity. But I do not want to encroach on your story Kim, but I love it so much and I look forward to every update !!
Author's Response: Hello, my friend! Yes, Justin has had some grief in his life, which has caused him to be in his current predicament. Coming up, he will confide part of what has happened to place him out on the streets, and Brian will find himself more drawn to him. And don't worry! I love the suggestions, and how interested you are in the story! I will have the next part up soon. Thank you for reading, and for always being so supportive. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2017 06:15 AM · On: Both Sides of the Coin
So Justin has a hidden past. Goody
Author's Response: Hi, Cheryll! Yes, Justin has been through an ordeal; one that put him at peril out on the street. Now the question is, will Brian become his savior, or let him go once he is fully recuperated? We already know he broke his rule to Vic about keeping him out of his sight. He just couldn't resist taking a peek, and NOW he's in trouble - ha!
More coming up soon, including some more glimpses into Justin's background. Thank you very much for reading, and especially for the feedback! I am very grateful. ~Kim
Reviewer: peacock (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2017 03:33 AM · On: Both Sides of the Coin
Let the games begin! Brian is already hooked by Justin's beauty, brains, wit, and independence. What are Justin's first impressions of Brian? Will Brian hire someone to investigate Justin Taylor's circumstances? Who will win the chess game?! I noticed how Brian and Justin never hinted to each other their sexual orientation, having to tread very carefully during that era I guess. Quite the reality check. The repartee was great between them! Vic's smile like the cat who ate the canary was a nice touch too!
Author's Response: Hello, there! Yes, I would say that Brian's curiosity got the better of him, despite his admonition to Vic to keep Justin out of his way. ;) And now I think he's hooked. We WILL find out more about Justin's background coming up, and how he wound up on the street. And as time goes on, the two will get to know each other better in a lot of ways (wink, wink).
Thank you very much for reading, and especially for the feedback! I greatly appreciate that. The next part will be up soon. ~Kim
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2017 02:24 AM · On: Both Sides of the Coin
I love this story and it is really getting intersting and has my attention. Good job.
Author's Response: Hello, Marilynne - I'm delighted that you are enjoying this story! It's my first foray into writing an historical story, so I'm finding the research interesting. Thank you for reading, and especially for commenting! Another part will be up soon, including a little more back story about how Justin wound up in his predicament of being homeless. Thanks again for the support. ~Kim
Reviewer: Lisajean (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2017 09:24 PM · On: Discovery
Hi Kim!
Sorry for taking so long to review, my Firewall would not let me on this site for a few days :)
I loved this chapter, of course, I missed Brian, but it was great reading about Justin and his reaction to things. Poor sweety he has been through hell. This situation he is in is really a blessing in disguise. I cannot wait to see the reaction when these two meet up lol
You could not have picked a better character than Vic to play this role. I love how he intuitively knows how to deal with Justin and handles him with care and gentleness.
Great update. Cannot wait to read more :)
Lisa
Author's Response: Hi, Lisa! I loved Vic's character on the show, and I'm glad you like him in this role as a sort of mentor to both men. Justin's story will slowly be told over the next few chapters. So happy you're enjoying this one! Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment! I greatly appreciate the support. ~Kim
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2017 02:45 AM · On: Discovery
I am so far behind in my reading but trying to catch up... I love this story. I could almost 'smell the scene'. I can imagine how Justin feels now, to be safe, clean and comfortable. Now isn't Mr Kinney going to be surprised...LOL Looking forward to that meeting.
Author's Response: Hi, Monica! I'm always delighted to see feedback from you! I'm glad you're enjoying this story, and that I described the scene well enough that you could see it in your mind's eye. :)
And yes, the meeting between the two men will be coming up in the next part. I'm ready to post it as soon as I look it over for any corrections, so hopefully it will be tonight. Thanks so much for reading, and especially for taking the time to review! As always, it is deeply appreciated. ~Kim
Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2017 01:34 PM · On: Discovery
Hi, Kim!
This is wonderful! Thank you for coming up with this storyline - there are not enough historical B/J stories!
I love the period and am eager to read wherever you are taking us - first, because I enjoy the language and the very cautious and restricted way of communication then ( you can guess I'm a big fen of Jane Austin :D) and second, I trust you to always get our boys together.
The writing is captivating as ever - now I want more :)
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! I'm always happy to hear from you. :) And I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story so far. This is the first time I've tried an historical story, so I hope I do it well. Thank you for reading, and especially for the comments! The next part is coming up soon. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2017 12:34 PM · On: Discovery
I could only imagine how disoriented Justin felt when he woke up in the lap of luxury. I'm glad Vic was there to get him sorted outand cared for. I can't wait to read about the effect he will have on Mr. Kinney.
Author's Response: Hi, Kim!! So good to hear your thoughts, and to know you're reading this and enjoying it! You and a lot of other readers are thinking the same thing. :) That is coming up shortly toward the end of the next part. Let's just say that Brian is in for a major shock! As is Justin, too, I think. I mean, who could resist Brian Kinney???
Thank you for reading, and especially for the feedback, Kim! It is greatly appreciated. ~Kim
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2017 01:53 PM · On: Discovery
A friendship developes.
How right Vic is. Brian will not want Justin to leave once he gets a look at him.
Author's Response: Hi, Sherry! Thank you for reading, and for your comments. You're right about Brian. Events will conspire eventually, though, to make his true feelings be revealed, but I won't give away any details. Don't want to spoil it for you or any of the others, and that is a ways coming yet. ;) Thanks again for the feedback. I really appreciate that. ~Kim
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2017 09:35 AM · On: Discovery
Kim, you surely have such a way with words. Your sentences flow liquid - rich in descriptions and visuals. It's easy to imagine in my mind the setting and events you write. I'm really enjoying this story.
Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely words, my friend. And thank you for always being at my back, especially right now! Will have the next part up soon. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2017 01:37 PM · On: Discovery
Can't wait to read about the first meeting. Seems like Justin has been on his own for quite some time. I hope Brian won't get one of his tantrums and throw him back on the streets. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hello, Heidi! Thank you for reading this one, and for your comments. :) The circumstances of Justin being on his own will be explained in more detail coming up. I suspect that my intention to make this a 'shorter' story will evolve into a longer one. No surprise there, right? Ha! And it won't be what you think. But on the other hand, I won't give it away, either. ;) I know, I'm mean - ha!
Thank you for reading, and especially for the comments, Heidi! And thank you for being one of our writers; we greatly appreciate that. Love your sweet, cute, and funny stories! ~Kim
Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2017 01:36 PM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Very interesting start. I admit I had reservations because historical stories/movies have never been my thing. I'm glad I gave this a shot. I look forward to seeing how our Sunshine will thaw Brian's icy heart. Although it seems he will have to work on it quite hard.
Author's Response: Hello, Heidi! Somehow I missed your review on this chapter. Sorry about that! I'm happy you decided to give this one a try; it's new territory for me, too. I do hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you for reading, and especially taking the time to comment, my friend. ~Kim
Reviewer: Bo61 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2017 01:05 PM · On: Discovery
What a sweet new chapter, I like the interaction between Vic and Justin, looking forward to Brian's meeting with Jus. Greeting xo
Author's Response: Hello, dear friend! I love to use Vic's character when I can, and this seemed like a good story in which to include him. :) And Brian is in for a big shock! Thank you so much for reading, and for your feedback. I am very grateful for that - and your friendship. XOXO ~Kim
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2017 08:32 PM · On: Discovery
What a lovely chapter. I was so happy to find Vic here. He did a great job in getting Justin to do what he needed. Wait till Mr Kinney gets a look at his cleaned up guest. Don't believe he will be able to keep his hands off of him. Nicely done!
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Hello, Dee Dee! So good to see you back. :) I, too, always loved Vic's character, and thought he would be a good sympathetic ear; both for Justin AND for his employer. Another familiar face will soon be appearing, but I won't give it away just yet. ;) I'll have the next part up soon, including Brian's first real look at the 'new and improved' vagabond he has staying in his home. Boy, will HE be surprised! Thank you for reading, for your support, and most of all, your friendship. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2017 06:54 PM · On: Discovery
I love the interactions between Vic and Justin, it's good for Justin to have someone nice and understanding like Vic to take care of him.
Now I can't wait for Brian to meet this cleaned up version of his guest. ;-)
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! So delighted that you are enjoying this story. I always adored Vic's no-nonsense approach to things. I loved his character on the show! And another familiar face will be popping up coming up. ;) I'm working on the next part now, and should have it up soon. Thank you again for reading, and especially for commenting! I greatly appreciate that. ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2017 12:05 PM · On: Discovery
I love the way you depict the encounter betwwen Justin and Vic. I'm imagining the room, the way they look like and The easy connection between the two men is also very well done. I'm always amazed by hos your love for Justin's character shows in your writing.
I don't need to say that I really look forward to read about Mr. Kinney's encounter with Justin. I promise to be very interesting.
Thank you Kim. Loving this story :)
Author's Response: Hello, dear friend - sorry for not responding sooner. I appreciate your feedback more than you know (well, perhaps, you DO know). But it is still deeply apprecited. I am glad that you can picture this in your mind. Vic will continue to serve as sort of a mentor to both Brian AND Justin in this story. And I guess you're right; although I see Justin as a very determned young man and NOT weak, I will always have a special place in my heart for what he has experienced; not that I don't love both of them. But I think because of what happened to him on the show - and how he grew from it, along with Brian - that is true. :)
Thank you so much for reading, and for your kind words. I hope to continue to read your own story, either here or on your writing site. Can't wait to read the rest of it! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2017 02:12 AM · On: Discovery
Great update! Sounds like poor Justin has had a pretty difficult life... hopefully, things will begin to look up when he & Master Kinney are properly introduced!
Author's Response: Hi, Trish! Well, both men's lives will be changed, I suspect.;) Both are missing things (whether material or emotional) that they need. I'm working on the next part right now, so should be up soon.:) Thanks for reading, and for the comments, my friend. See you soon!! ~Kim
Reviewer: peacock (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2017 11:01 PM · On: Discovery
Oooh I love the time period you've chosen and the juxtaposition of Brian's extreme wealth and Justin's extreme poverty. You have such a great descriptive style that you could almost feel Justin's pain every time he moved. What a relief when Vic decided to just pick him up! It's nice to see Vic's character so prominent in the story thus far. Definitely looking forward to the telling of this story!
Author's Response: Hi, there! I love your insightful comments about the story chapter. I think each man will learn something from the other that is presently lacking in them. Thank you for letting me know what you enjoyed in this part, and I'm delighted that you liked it! Their encounter will be coming up in the next part, which will be posted soon. Your support is very much appreciated. ~Kim
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2017 08:03 PM · On: Discovery
Another great chapter, Kim!
I love how you introduced Vic into the story. I had to laugh at his comment - "Don't worry, young Justin. I may window shop and admire beauty when it's there...but I won't touch." Haha. I can just imagine Vic saying that or something similar. I remember some of Vic's more quirky comments to Justin, especially in Season 1.
Along with everyone else, I am looking forward to seeing the master getting his first true look at his bedridden guest; although, I love how descriptive you always are with your stories. It really makes it feel real. I do try to do the same in my own stories, at least at the beginning, but I seem to lack to patience to continue it on. LOL.
Loving the story, and looking forward to more! :) *Janet*
Author's Response: Hi, Janet! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this; especially knowing how insane your own schedule is! Thank you for pointing out what you liked, too; I always enjoy reading what others think. And yeah, I LOVED Vic and Justin's scenes together. I still remember that one where Vic offered him $20, and when he offered to go 'get the camera' when B and J were making out at the table. I hated when they killed him off! But I thought he fit in this plot, so I'm glad you agree. :)
I'll have the two guy's first real encounter coming up in the next part. Thanks again. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2017 05:56 PM · On: Discovery
Omg! Kim, I am loving this story. Another fantastic chapter. I can't wait until Master Kinney sees the beauty that is vagrant Justin. So happy you're writing this verse. Just beautiful. Thank you! Hugs!
Author's Response: Hi, Annie! I'm so glad you're enjoying this story; that means a lot to me. I'm enjoying writing in this different era, too. :) And you will get your wish in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and for the comments. See you soon to do the Time Warp!! ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi, Annie! I'm so glad you're enjoying this story; that means a lot to me. I'm enjoying writing in this different era, too. :) And you will get your wish in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and for the comments. See you soon to do the Time Warp!! ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2017 01:54 PM · On: Discovery
We learn a little more about Justin, but I need more, more, more! Love that Vic is there. This is good, good, good!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Phyllis! You're so encouraging to me, and so many other writers. :) And I thought Vic would fit in well in this story situation. I'll have Brian's first face-to-face meeting between B and J in the next part, which will be up soon. Thank you for all the support. ~Kim
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2017 12:55 PM · On: Discovery
What a great story. Can't wait until Brian sees the cleaned up version of Justin. I am new to reviewing, but have been reading so many of the stories for quite a while. A period piece adds something completely different to the usual Brian & Justin story & this one had my attention immediately. Thanks for your wonderful imagination.
Author's Response: Hi, Marilynne! First of all, welcome to MW! I'm glad you joined us. :) I'm happy that you chose to read this story, and that you like historical fiction. This will be the first of that type I have written, so I hope I continue to do it justice. Thank you for reading, and for your kind words. I will have the next part up soon...and Brian's in for a big shock! ~Kim
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2017 11:40 AM · On: Discovery
I like this meeting between Vic and Justin, now we must wait for the one with Brian! Thank you for this chapter Kim!
Author's Response: Hi, Marie-France! Thank YOU for reading and for the feedback. Yes, the two men will meet in the next chapter, and Brian will be in for a big surprise. ;) I will have the next part up soon. Thank you for all the support. ~Kim
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2017 11:21 AM · On: Discovery
Great chapter Kim, I look forward to Brian meeting his new guest and falling for those eyes 😍
Author's Response: Hi, Chris! Yes, I think our affluent bachelor is in for a shock soon. He will be making an appearance beginning in the next chapter. I'm very happy you're enjoying the story. Thank you for reading, and especially for always being so supportive. The next part will be up soon. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: bjnuke (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2017 03:35 AM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
I'm so glad to see a new story from you! I just love historical romances and I am very excited to read more of this story!
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend! I'm about ready to post Ch. 2. I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you for reading, and for the support. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2017 06:38 AM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
I love historical romances so this is right up my alley.
Brian is going to be quite pleased with his unexpected guest once he's awake and cleaned up.
Can't wait to find out Justin's circumstances as to whom he was running away from and how he got to be where he was that night.
Should be interesting.
Author's Response: Hi, Sherry! Yes, I think Brian will be surprised what a 'cleaned-up' Justin looks like; he certainly didn't make a good impression the first time. You will find out more about Justin's background coming up. Thank you for reading, and for commenting. ~Kim
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2017 09:18 AM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Ooh it little bit of a brooding Heathcliff character I look forward to reading the future chapters thank you
Author's Response: Hi, Chris! I hadn't thought of that, but I think it fits Brian here. :) I'm glad you read the first chapter, and enjoyed it. Thank you reading, and for the encouragement. I will have Part 2 up tomorrow or Monday. ~Kim
Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2017 05:48 PM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Oh wow...intriguing start! I'm so excited for more.
I love au stories and your historical fic, with a wealthy Brian and a maybe naughty Justin got me already hooked.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading this first part, and for your feedback! I will have the next part up probably tomorrow, and the story will soon be progressing to their first meeting. ;) So happy that you are enjoying it. Thanks again for the support. ~Kim
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2017 06:13 AM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Now this is an interesting change - thoroughly enjoyed it. Great visual - I could feel myself there looking across from a haughty Brian Kinney. And I don't want to think of the smells (when I watch historical based shows I'm always glad TV isn't smellavision...LOL) I can just imagine a fiesty, street hardened Justin turning Brian's world upside down - especially a clean-up and beautiful Justin - can't wait.
Author's Response: Hi, Monica! I'm so happy you liked the first chapter. :) And yes, both men will be in for some big changes coming up. A couple of familiar faces will be showing up, too. ;) This is my frist historical story, so I hope I do it justice. Thank you for reading this first part, and especially for the feedback. I really appreciate the support. I'll have Ch. 2 up soon. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 11:46 PM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Ooh! I love a good historical Fic... and this one's off to a great start. A little Ebeneezer Scrooge and Tiny Tim vibe going on? looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi, Trish! Ha! I hadn't thought of that, but it does kind of have that vibe, especially being around Christmas. ;) Thanks for reading, and for the feedback. Hope to see you weekend after next! ~Kim
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 09:10 PM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
I totally loved this! The opening chapter is a home run, girlfriend. Your historical descriptions were perfect and had me visualize being there. I'm going out on a limb and predicting this may be your best writing, ever. You opened with vivid visuals and a sympathetic character for the reader to get attached to with wonder how he will turn out - what happens to him. Add to that, we have a main character who is complex and interesting. The perfect beginning of a successful novel. Bravo!
Since you give excellent character development, all you have to do is have unique names to produce an original novel worthy of publishing. I'm not suggesting it now, just a compliment that the quality of your writing stands out worthy of reading without needing to have the force of B & J in this one.
I'm truly impressed/entertained, and looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi, Bob! Wow, you have me blushing now! Thank you for your kind words. You know, I remember the very first review you left for me on one of my stories when I first started posting "(Arms Wide Open)" and I remember how that encouraged me. You continue to do that now. I'm happy that you liked this first chapter. I'm enjoying trying to keep them in character based upon the time period, as well as researching details about the Victorian era. I hope you continue to enjoy this. Thank you again for all the kind words; I really appreciate that. And actually, I always wanted to publish a book. Maybe one day....:) ~Kim
Reviewer: Bo61 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 05:56 PM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Wow so excited, an historical story!
First chapter, I'm in, I can't wait when Justin is awake and their first meeting. xo
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! I'm so glad to see you here. Thank you for joining us, and for taking the time to review. I will have the next part up soon. ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 04:53 PM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Hey Kim!
You've managed to captivate me in just a few lines. I always marvelled at the way you describe a scene and allow the reader to imagine every detail, to plunge forward in the atmosphere and you sure didn't disappoint with this first chapter. I loved everything about this and am really eager to read more. I'm very interested in the boy's (I assume it's Justin) backstory, why he is living in the streets, what happened to him, etc... I'm usually not a fan of historical, although I've enjoyed some occasionnally and you have me hooked already. But again, your writing is such a pleasure for your readers.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you my friend :)
Author's Response: Hi, my friend - I am humbled by your words, because I consider you to be such a good writer yourself. :) I'm so glad that you liked the first chapter, and I'm really enjoying doing research for this story. Thank you so much for reading, and especially for all the feedback. I love hearing what readers particularly liked about my stories. Ch. 2 will be up soon. ~Kim
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 11:13 AM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
I like the start Kim ! I hope this boy is Justin and that he will melt the ice on Mister Kinney life!
I'm glad you post another story !
Author's Response: Hi, Marie-France! I appreciate you reading, and leaving me feedback. Yes, you will find out soon what they think of each other. ;) I'm happy that you are glad to see me posting another story. This is my first historical one, and I'm enjoying doing some research for it. I will have Ch. 2 up soon. Thank you for your comments! ~Kim
Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 02:27 AM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Hi Kim,
Great start to what I believe will be another beautiful love story d84;a039;d84;a039;. I don’t think there are many historical pieces out there but I do enjoy them and am very excited about this one.
I’m very curious what our beautiful, wealthy brunette will think of his young, blonde vagabond when he is all cleaned up. I suspect he’ll be unexpectedly pleased!
I’m also curious about Justin’s back story and why he is on the streets. Of course I can hazard a guess but I’ll hang in and wait for that revelation 😊.
I’m intrigued. You’ve succeeded in sucking me in with one chapter! Looking forward to more.
Thank you!
Laura
Author's Response: Hi, Laura! I'm delighted to see you reading this one, and trusting in me to finish it. I know not everyone will read WIPs, but as you probably know I have never left one unfinished, so rest assured I will get this one done. :) And you will soon find out about their first encounter. I think you may be right about your suspicions. ;)
Thank you for reading, and for leaving me feedback. That really encourages me. I will have Ch. 2 up very soon. ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 01:34 AM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Oh this looks to be good. That's one way to run into each other.
Author's Response: Thanks, Phyllis! I'm glad you like it so far. And ha! Yes, they literally ran into each other. :) I'll have the second chapter up soon. As always, I'm grateful for your feedback. ~Kim
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 01:10 AM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Hi Kim this is a Great first chapter! I enjoy reading historical fiction and I hope you will update for us soon...
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Kim! This is my first attempt at historial fiction, so I hope I do it justice. Thank you for reading this first chapter. I will have the second chapter posted soon. And I hope we'll be able to look forward to another one from you soon as well. ;) ~Kim
Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 01:04 AM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Hi Kim!
So excited about this new story from you.
Love period pieces. Can't wait to read more. Very interesting! Excellent first chapter. Thank you, My friend!
Author's Response: Hi, Annie, my play-going friend! I'm always delighted to see you on here, and especially reading one of my stories. I'm glad that you are enjoying this one so far. :) Thank you for your kind words. Have fun this week! Looking forward to seeing you next week. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2017 10:22 PM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Very excited to see a new story from you. So far you pulled me in and I can't wait to see what happens in the morning when Justin is awake. Hope you are doing well.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Hi, Dee Dee! It's so good to hear from you. I'm sorry to hear what you've been going through, but thrilled to see a review from you. I'm glad that you are intrigued. I will have the next chapter up soon, my friend. Thank you for the support. :) Kim
Reviewer: Lisajean (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2017 10:15 PM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Hi Kim,
Ooh, this definitely has my attention! I love period pieces, I cannot wait to read about Brians reaction once the Justin, I mean vagabond is cleaned up lol The picture of Brian on your banner is one of my favorite looks of his, so sexy and intense!
Thank you for the entertainment. I cannot wait till next week <3
Lisa
Author's Response: Hi, Lisa! Thank you so much for reading, and especially for the feedback. I really do appreciate that. And yes, Brian will soon discover that the tattered lump found in the snow, and the body lying in his guest bed, will look a LOT different soon. ;) And I like that style on Brian, too; I thought it would fit him in this story. The next chapter will be up soon. Thank you again for the support. ~Kim
Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2017 08:47 PM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
So intriguing....can't wait for more! 😁
Author's Response: Hi, Erin! I'm so happy that you're intrigued. I'm enjoying doing some research into this era, too. :) Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment; I am very appreciative. Next chapter will be up soon. ~Kim
Reviewer: Hazananat (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2017 08:31 PM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Kim, thank you. A very interesting beginning and the style of English language you use. I can hardly wait for the other chapters. Hugs.
Author's Response: Hi, Anita! Thank you for reading and commenting, my friend. Yes, I'm trying to use a little different language here, hopefully in the correct timeframe. I figured that they would all speak a little differently in that era. I'm glad you're enjoying this one. Hugs back to you, too. :) ~Kim
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2017 08:13 PM · On: An Unexpected Bump in the Night
Intriguing start, Kim! With my schedule I can hardly find time to write, let alone read... but I do love historicals. Sadly, there are so few of them. I am wondering what our cold and wealthy brunet will think when he sees a cleaned up blond? *Grins* And, I'm sure there is quite the story, if not angst, regarding why our blond is in such a state. Looking forward to finding out. Great start! *Janet*
Author's Response: Thank you, Janet! I know how busy you are, so I'm grateful that you chose to read this first chapter. This is my first adventure into a historical story, so hopefully I will do it justice. Thank you for reading, and especially for the feedback; it is greatly appreciated. ~Kim
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