Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2016 01:39 AM · On: Anger, Betrayal and Forgiveness…

Excellent rendition of Justin and Brian's likely thoughts during the Ian debacle. That whole story arc was so difficult to watch.



Author's Response: It really was, it broke my heart watching it... I felt for both of them, and I was angry at both of them. Because the love they shared was so obvious... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2016 02:07 AM · On: Anger, Betrayal and Forgiveness…

Do I really have to tell you how perfect this is...😉

Author's Response: Thanks Darling! Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2016 02:02 AM · On: Anger, Betrayal and Forgiveness…

This is an arc that I have trouble with, so though I read it, I don't have anything to say. I appreciate how often you post, and your use of the photos from the show. Please know, it's not you, but the subject. I have to steel myself to read .

Author's Response: I understand it was very emotional for everyone... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 01:48 AM · On: Anger, Betrayal and Forgiveness…

Love this, it's spot on! It's fun to read Brian and Justin POV's during this story arc (one of my favorites). I knew during that scene when Justin returned Brian's stolen bracelet that it was only a matter of time that they would be back together. I hope you continue writing for a long time. Hugs to you! xo



Author's Response: The love between them during that scene was so thick, I longed for Brian to pull Justin into his arms and kiss him... But I love the reunion scene so much, that was my first QAF episode ever... No wonder I was hooked so fast! Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 01:29 AM · On: Anger, Betrayal and Forgiveness…

I think you did a great job distinguishing the voices of Brian and Justin. I think even without the character pov titles I would've been able to guess their internal dialogue. You summed up their feelings so well in such a short little story. I really felt for Brian in this story but also in the series- it was such an impossible situation. He literally couldn't do any more than what he was doing because Justin needed to learn a hard lesson. In the end, I still don't believe he truly got it..... I'll end here before I go on a rant. I'll stop here. :)

Olivia



Author's Response: It was a very emotional time for both of them, I've written several fics around this arc. There were so many ways to view the situation, and non of the pleasant... So I understand the ranting part... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

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