Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviews For Don't Ask Me and I Won't Tell

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2015 12:49 AM · On: Don't tell'em, Don't tell'em

You are so evil, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2015 12:36 AM · On: Don't ask me and I won't tell.

Ooooooooooh please please please continue :)

Reviewer: Marcia Malone lives here (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2015 09:42 AM · On: Don't tell'em, Don't tell'em

For something that's being written as you go along. Wow! I wondered if B&J met up again whether they would be able to keep away from each other for long. Brian was certainly right about not putting their livelihoods in jeopardy. But it would have been a terrible shock when that sniper was attacked and him not knowing who it was. Brian naturally had a wake up call after that. You don't know what you've got, till it's gone.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2015 04:52 AM · On: Don't tell'em, Don't tell'em

No tomatoes my friend, but I will say you have a good working visual of what deployed troops go through. Keep it coming...and please let me know if there is anything I can do to help. *adjusts my Sgt stripes and salutes* ;)

Author's Response:
This was so lovely of you! I'll definitely get in touch with you tomorrow about the next chapter!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2015 03:57 AM · On: Don't tell'em, Don't tell'em

Wow, I'm hoping both make it home safely.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2015 01:48 AM · On: Don't tell'em, Don't tell'em

I am so glad you decided to continue!!! I read it last night and thought this is too good of a plot to leave as a oneshot. I fully support your future endevors with this story, good luck <3

Reviewer: Marcia Malone lives here (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2015 12:53 PM · On: Don't ask me and I won't tell.

Extremely promising and I felt I was in each scene with your characters. The code capitals were a little confusing as to their meaning not being from a military background. So some explanation would help. I would definitel like to see where this story is heading.

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2015 12:26 PM · On: Don't ask me and I won't tell.

thank you for sharing

I like to read more

Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2015 08:23 AM · On: Don't ask me and I won't tell.

You should continue with this. I like this version of them. They both need each other so I think you could take this some really interesting places.

Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2015 04:57 AM · On: Don't ask me and I won't tell.

More chapters please. I like the story so far.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2015 04:48 AM · On: Don't ask me and I won't tell.

If I didn't know any better, I'd say you'd lived some of this. Really intriguing storyline.

Author's Response:
Well, maybe I lived it through my friends. I've known 2 snipers (One Air Force and one Army) and one of my friends from high school went to West Point. I was almost a military wife a few years ago so it's pretty real. My best friend since I was 19 is now a staff sergeant in the Army. It's a storyline that I'm very familiar with. I guess it's best to write what you know? Thank you for your very kind review!

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2015 04:33 AM · On: Don't ask me and I won't tell.

Good start and interesting AU. More would be good, so do please consider a series:-)

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2015 04:23 AM · On: Don't ask me and I won't tell.

Yes!! you definately need to proceed with this story--damn good beginning.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2015 03:20 AM · On: Don't ask me and I won't tell.

Please continue this....this story is completely up my alley in every way. Btw...after 5 years Justin should be at least a Sgt by the time he sees Brian again and they have to be even more careful because of rank ;)

Author's Response:
Oh! Thanks! I really enjoyed writing it.

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