Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2015 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good analysis, at least he knows what he has with Ethan can't last.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
The Ethan thing was such a nightmare for all of us - I was so afraid he would become a permanent cast member the way Ben had become.
Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2015 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
It's amazing. I don't usually read such short stories, but I couldn't miss one of yours (I adore your works - especially 'Buses & Trains'). I like your descriptions of Justin's feelings - that's just how I imagined this entire thing with Ethan. Of course, it was a difficult journey back there - full of uncertainty, pain and even desperation, however, I never thought that Justin might fall out of love with Brian. It just didn't seem possible. The connection between them wasn't actually endangered - even then. You managed to show it beautifully. Thank you for this.
Author's Response: Aaaw, such a sweet review! Thanks so much! :)
I can't imagine Justin not being in love with Brian at the time, and the way he rushed to Brian's rescue...I just wanted to have him think it through and reassure us that the love had not died, even though it was a hard time for everyone.
Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2015 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well written. Shows so well how Justin must have felt back then - would rush in a second to help Brian. At least we know that this sadness and unfulfilled yearning didn't last forever.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Love reading comments :)
I had written this years and years ago, but realised that I hadn't posted it onto MW. I like writing for Justin the most, because I think I identify with him the most.
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