Reviewer: ClaraD (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2016 05:14 PM · On: Two Weeks
Poor Jusin is getting it from all sides. To bad Brian is too mind controlled to help him more.
Michael can control minds but still takes self help courses. Why does he bother?
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2016 08:13 PM · On: First Day at Work
OMG!! Justin is a kazillionaire and Michael has control of Brian's mind...what kind of alternate universe is this! Lovin' it...
Author's Response: Just a wonderful and warped AU! Just my cuppa tea! Bwaaa ha ha ha haaaaa!!!
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2016 01:00 PM · On: Uncle Duke
Poor Justin was so overwhelmed that it has'nt occurred to him to beware of uncles bearing gifts.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2016 12:56 PM · On: Poverty and Power
Loving the tongue in cheek humor of this story! Will the hood rat be meeting up with the rich brat soon? I like young Justin and Brian, Michael and his whining...not so much.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2016 01:57 AM · On: Two Weeks
Love the new chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2016 05:41 AM · On: The Liquidation Dept.
Love the liquidation dept! And Jackie 'No'! More please. TAG
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2016 04:11 PM · On: The Liquidation Dept.
If it were only that esy to pay off a mortgage. Carpet to the rescue again. He should be happy that Justin refused to sell him.
Author's Response: yup...thx for re reviewing. Carpet's very happy and I hope so will the readers ;)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2016 12:53 AM · On: The Genie of the Lamp
Oops - looks like I caught up with you. More, please! TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2016 12:50 AM · On: The Genie of the Lamp
LOVE the Real Estate genie! Why didn't I have one of those when I was house hunting? But what if Justin had wanted to build a new house? Would there be a separate genie for that service? Hehehe. TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 11:25 PM · On: The Genie of the Ring
Justin gets TWO genies? Way to go Sunshine - one from the ring and another from the lamp! Double the fun! TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 10:15 PM · On: The Cave of Wonders
Oh no! Is Justin going to be trapped in the Cave of Wonders for eons? If so, how will he ever meet Brian? This is terrible. Good thing I've got another chapter ready to read! ;) TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 09:08 PM · On: Uncle Duke
At least you got to kill off Craig right at the start! Hooray for that! But I sense things still won't be too easy for our diamond in the rough, Sunshine. Dig, Justin! Dig! TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 06:42 PM · On: Poverty and Power
Hello to my favorite fairy tale teller! Sorry I'm only now starting to read this. So far, so good! Definitely not the traditional Alladdin - but if it were it wouldn't be you! Off to chapter 2! TAG
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2015 02:26 AM · On: The Genie of the Lamp
I love all your chapters. Your imagination is unparalled. Justin trying to explain himself to a Genie, one of many Genies in the lamp was hysterical. Just how many Genies are there?
Author's Response: Stay tuned to find out. What did you think of the skag angle? (skag is slang for drag when the guy still looks painfully like a man)
Author's Response: Stay tuned to find out. What did you think of the skag angle? (skag is slang for drag when the guy still looks painfully like a man)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2015 07:36 PM · On: The Genie of the Ring
I hope she doesn't remember this when she wakes up! So we have a genie of the ring and a genie of the lamp? I wish I had one. How does Brian and Michael figure in? Great chapter.
Author's Response: Don't worry, Jennifer will be fine and recover a bit of her sanity as well. I already did the "crazy Jen" thing with the Beauty & Beast stories and it didn't really fit there either since that s not canon, just my crazy brain.
I have NO ideA where Brian and Michael fit into this story. But until we get the whole genie issues squared away, they'll be happy and safe simmering away on the back burner where I've put them for now.
Like anything about the actual chapter?
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2015 11:19 AM · On: The Genie of the Ring
Okay, about had a heart attack when I clicked on the most recent page, and saw your banner that was more befitting the 40-foot man than Aladdin, but I think I have it under control for now - ha!
FYI - I moved most of your story notes to the inside, since readers will see them as soon as they open up the story, and they are more appropriate to the story note page than on the summary page, which should be more of a brief synopsis of what the story is about.
Good luck with the rest of the story, Jon, and Merry Christmas! ~Kim
Author's Response: Sorry! Wasn't meant as a serious rule break or anything. I can make these simple banners out of pics and a bit of text but painting or drawing on them or adding justin's head from another pic...well, that's all up to you great artists out there. And also re sizing. Don t know how to make Paint do that properly either. I actually tried and nearly lost half the banner.
So, I left it up to you. Sorry you were about as scared as Jennifer at seeing my genie. Merry Christmas.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2015 09:15 PM · On: The Cave of Wonders
ooh....I see some of Mr. Novotny's potential evil already! This is a fabulous story in the making. Can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2015 05:58 PM · On: The Cave of Wonders
Now I know you are not going to leave this like that. How does Justin get out? Is the Magician truely gone?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2015 04:51 PM · On: Uncle Duke
Interesting tale of the Taylor family. What happens once Justin enters the cave?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2015 04:13 PM · On: Poverty and Power
What an interesting and profound look at the middle east. So what happens when Justin and Brian meet?
Author's Response: Well, remember, this is the Mojave and America. I'm trying to keep along the Arabian Nights/Aladdin storyline as much as possible without getting too off course but I am going to stay away from actual Islam as much as possible as I know nothing and writing? drawing Mohammad would likely get me killed.
As to Brian and Justin meeting, I'm not sure right now. I'm concentrating on getting Justin out of the hole I dropped him into. But it will be very special.
Thanx for reading!
Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2015 01:32 PM · On: Poverty and Power
Hi there- entertaining story so far.
Just a note- the original story of Aladdin is not Muslim. It is a traditional Middle-Eastern tale, so you might want to correct your summary. :)
Author's Response: Actually Aladdin is a part of the collection called Arabian Nights. There are many references in them involving (you are right) Middle Eastern/Muslim things including: Muslim prayers, Imams, Sultans, and genies which are Arabic (Middle East) myths. My point is I know nothing about Islam and rather than stepping on any toes by trying to write about that religion and botching it, I moved everything over to the Mojave. Hope that clears it up.
Thanx for reading and hope you stay tuned!
Reviewer: Somme (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2015 04:12 AM · On: Poverty and Power
Am anti Mikey tag?! Tsk, tsk, I thought you were above that. Well, I guess this will be one of your fics I won't be continuing.
Author's Response: That is of course up to you. However, I did place a warning that the boys would not be getting together right away and I will let slip that Mikey's true nature has not yet been revealed. Although there was a clue in the chapter. I urge you to seek patience, remember my nic and enjoy the ride. Altho....if you do want to exit the car just as it gets to the top of the roller coaster...you are most welcome.
Thanx for reading!
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 09:09 PM · On: Poverty and Power
Loved what you wrote about leading the horse to water and it exploding in its face. You're a brilliant wordsmith.
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment and for your comments. Ch 2 will come soon and am working on Ch 3
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 08:21 PM · On: Poverty and Power
Yes, it would be ironic doing watercolours in a desert. Ha ha! The spirit of Joan moves with him.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 08:06 PM · On: Poverty and Power
Absolutely brilliant! Love it.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 08:03 PM · On: Poverty and Power
That's so funny! I can just imagine Linsay's outraged indignation. The rejected banquet.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 07:55 PM · On: Poverty and Power
No wonder the priest's 'supply' is always running dry. Drinkin' it faster than he can make it up!
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