Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2017 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 31- Gus' New Home
Fantastic update! Hope all goes as Brian and Justin think and wish, Gus needs to be with his Dads, who give and will always give him unconditional love and be treated with respect and know they will always have time for him.
Fabulous fic, thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Author's Response: Thanks for writing and I'm so glad you are enjoying the fic. Gus should be with parents who want and love him.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2017 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 31- Gus' New Home
Gus is lucky he has two dads who want him to feel safe and loved. Justin is so in tune with both Gus and Brian
Author's Response: Justin is a natural parent and to think he questioned his readiness to be a father.
Reviewer: NW1 (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2017 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 31- Gus' New Home
So sad to see that Gus is so insecure about his place in Brian and Justin's lives. Lindsay and Mel ought to be ashamed of themselves for doing that. I'm glad that Justin called Brian to discuss the situation without Gus listening in. All the talk of legal action would have probably scared him. It will definitely be interesting to see how Mel is going to react even knowing that she has no legal rights.
Congrats on keeping this wonderful story going!
HUGS!
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know that you are still enjoying the story way past its initial offering. So sad when parents tend to forget that babies aren't babies and cute and cuddly forever.
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2017 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 31- Gus' New Home
Your readers are very happy this story has been going on so long. This is one of my favorites. Poor Justin worrying so much. I hope the girls don't give them too much trouble, but I can't believe Mel won't be a problem.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Dee Dee:
Thank you for the kind words. I never imagined this story to still be going on almost 2 years after I started it and to have so many people reading it and commenting. Justin wants everyone to be happy and that means Brian as well as Gus. We shall see what happens when the girls figure out Gus is actually living with Brian and Justin.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2017 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 30- A Talk With Lindsay
Hope Mel doesn't become a problem for the little family. Love how Brian talked Lindsey over. Really calm on the outside. Still loving this story.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Marny:
My muse hasn't decided what will happen next. I think Mel causing a stink may happen but then again.... well , we'll have to see. Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying hte story
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2017 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 30- A Talk With Lindsay
My dislike for Lindsay is right there with you. Good job Brian getting Lindsay to let Gus stay all night. Now we will have to see how this pans out. Can't believe Mel will agree even though she does want him under foot.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Brian is slick- and LIndsay is vain. Interesting combination
Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2017 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 30- A Talk With Lindsay
I have missed this story. Brian and Justin seem to have taken charge and became great parents and role models.
Author's Response: so glad that you are enjoying the story. Brian and Justin understand what it is like to be good parents. Brian knows what bad parenting is and Justin had good role modesl until he was a teen.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2017 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 30- A Talk With Lindsay
Lindsay is clueless. I wonder if Mel will just be as relieved as Lindsay to not have to take care of Gus. Great chapter. All this intrigue will be hard for a 10 year old Gus to cope with. Hope everything works out for the best. Was really happy to see an update!!!! Bill
Author's Response: Bill:
Lindsay is more concerned about her job than her son. I always wondered if they would have had children if Brian wasn't in the picture. if there was no Brian, would LIndsay have insisted on having a child? I'm not so sure it would have happened.
Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2017 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 29- The Talk
I like this chapter waitiing on the next to see what happen with the talk.
Author's Response: Thank you for writing and telling me you are enjoying the story. It means a lot to me. The talk should be interesting.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2017 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 29- The Talk
Another great chapter. Poor Gus, he needs some security in his life. Can't wait for Brian's conversation with the munchers. Somehow I don't think they are going to very reasonable. Bill
Author's Response: Gus needs security and Brian and Justin can offer this- We will have to see what Linds and Mel do.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2017 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 29- The Talk
Hi, I went back to the beginning and re read the entire story so far. It never gets old! sometimes I pick up on some little thing I forgot, anyway You have me hooked on this story and eagerly waiting for the next chapter
Author's Response: Wow- I haven't done that so I hope it was a good read. Glad that you are enjoying this universe.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 29- The Talk
Yay, it looks like Gus will soon be living full time with his dads.
Author's Response: If Brian has anything to say about it, he will.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2017 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 29- The Talk
Gus shouldn't have to feel so unwanted by his mothers. If the ladies are smart, they won't fight Brian on what he wants. I mean face it, if the girls want to take this to court, their only witness against Brian would have to be Michael. Where would that get them.
Bring on the talk.
Author's Response: Poor Gus- he is in a bad situation and Brian wants it to get better. Who better to fight for a great childhood than someone who didn't have one
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2017 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 29- The Talk
I'm so enjoying your story, but boy what a cliff hanger! I can't believe that the girls are so unfeeling to talk about what to do with Gus, like he was a pet. I never heard of anything so mean and cruel.
Author's Response: My dislike of Mel and Linds really comes out in this fic. So glad you are enjoying it and I so appreciate your comments.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 29- The Talk
Hi, Sandy! This is not a review per se, but I just wanted to say thanks for posting your very enjoyable stories on here. My life for some time now has been so ungodly hectic that as much as I would love to go back and start at the beginning of your story, it will be some time before I can do that. But I DID want you to know how much your support of MW is appreciated. And some day I WILL get to read this! Thank you. :) ~Kim
Author's Response: Kim:
I wish your life was less hectic and could slow down- I know what its like to be so exhausted you don't even have the energy to read. Thanks for the words of encouragement.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 29- The Talk
Oh I do hope Brian can get the birls to agree
Author's Response: Brian is an ad exec- he can make buying hemmoroid cream exciting
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 29- The Talk
Agggrr too short, want an update asap. Want to know if the moms will fight for Gus or give them easy to Brian and Justin.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Marny:
Well the next chapter is in the works- jsut have to have a weekend when I actually don't travel somewhere or have out of town guests- this weekend I have guests again, but hope to maybe do some writing Friday- too tired to do it during the week- but the house is clean and shouldn't have to do much in anticipation of the guests
Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 29- The Talk
yay update :) I really see a BIG FIGHT BREWING. Mel not going to be Happy
Author's Response: Big Fight- hmm-- maybe my muse can see to write that one.
Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2017 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
Good chapter
Author's Response: thanks- so glad you enjoyed it- more to come soon
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2017 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
MIchael will never understand that life changes as you mature and develop new relationships, and that your priorities and commitments change accordingly -I mean he hasn't changed his life for Ben, Hunter or JR. He is so immature and honestly a bit of a moron, I could just imagine him acting just like you have written. Loved this chapter but damn I'm now totally grossed out by the final image of Ben and Michael having a quickie -I don't he know how Ben can bring himself to do it with someone who craves attention from another man. Thinking of "Michael" sex it just plain yucky lol. Looking forward to next chapter, couldn't be happier that you keep finding ways to continue this storya86;
Author's Response: Sex with Michael is just plain squicky. I appreciate your long and thoughtful comment. It means a lot to a writer when readers take the time to comment and I appreciate that you feel that I am keeping the characters in canon character.
Thank you for writing.
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
Yes, I am still reading and enjoying this story. Great Chapter. I loved the way Brian handled Micheal and then Ben handled him. Brian and Justin would be happy to have Michael leaving them alone for 18 years. LOL!
Dee Dee
Author's Response: DeeDee
So glad you are still reading and enjoying the story. In my opinion Mikey can definite!y wait 18 year
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Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
so Happy ro see a new chapter. Mikey really doesn't have a clue. Glad that Brian has his priorities in order. Hope Mikey doesn't cause an issue with Mel & Linds. Looking forward to more. Bill
Author's Response: Bill:
Thank you, as always for reading and commenting. Brian and Justin both have their priorities in order and I agree where they are. Brian never expected to love Gus or be in his life, but Lindsay kept thrusting him in to Brian's sphere. Now he doesn't want to leave and Lindsay is in for a shock.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2017 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
mikey has to be the dumbest person I've ever heard off! He is as vapid as Linz and it makes them truly unattractive. Why Ben would want to be with him and Mel would want his sperm to have JR is lost on me. Just because he doesn't want to be a loving father doesn't mean that Brian feels the same way! Brian got a second chance at life-he beat his cancer -he found love for the first time in his life-and his a father to tiny loving boys. If mikey was truly his best friend he would be happy for him, he knows how bad a child hood he had, but like Linz he has other plans for himand Brian. I so love your story, each chapter is a gift. Thank you for sharing
Author's Response: bktush:
Thank you for your comments. I appreciate your passion and your willingness to comment on the content of the story. I don't know how Ben puts up with Mikey- maybe he just likes non conflicted relationships- Mikey can be such a petulant child "Brian is my best friend- ie I know what is best" He lives his life around Brian rather than his own family. Very sad indeed.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2017 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 27- When Worlds Collide
Colin and Gus are very lucky to have each other and two very loving daddies. The daddies are just as busy as Gus's moms. One is a ceo of his own company and the other is a talented artist, as for the mom's one is a very smart lawyer who is as much as a workcoholic as she is, so is Brian, the other mom other than thinking she's important and worrying about her wardrobe and getting her roots touched up actually spends more time on her self than her children or her marriage. Don't think Gus cares about her hair he would just wish she would spend time with him. One day when it is probably to late she will realize the whole world and all the inhabits do not revolved around her.
Author's Response: Lindsay and Melanie obviously have different priorities than Brian and Gus. I think they liked the idea of children- ie the cute little baby but then didn't know what to do when the baby grows up.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2017 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 26- A Family of Four
I never understood how the girls could never work together to the benefit of both of their children, it was so evident that Gus was always coming in last. Thank goodness his dadies knew just because he wasn't a baby anymore he still needed the love and attention. The girls used him , not to benefit JR, but so they could have their private time--they should have thought of that before having the second child--plus we all know how Linz always puts herself first. nice story
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. I always found the girls very contradictory. On the one hand they say they want to raise Gus and then the other they wanted Brian to take out a life insurance policy if something were to happen to him- why would his life be important if he were not a part of raising Gus. I really believe that Lindsay always thought Gus was a way to get the WASP family she always dreamed of with Brian/ Linday and baby but she forgot that Brian is gay and she wanted to raise ( well maybe) the child.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2017 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
Michael is such a shit. I'm surprised that Ben puts up with him, I mean, he is in his 30's and supposed to be an adult.... Like how things are working out so well for Brian, Justin and the boys. I really wish I had more free time - I have a hankering to re-read this from the very beginning.
Author's Response: Tiger:
I admire your desire to reread from the beginning- I haven't even done that, but there are other stories that I have written that I have posted to other sites and reread each chapter before reposting. I still find that I like most of them. I don't know how Ben puts up with Mikey- unless he just likes always feeling superior in teh relationship.
Reviewer: Acadian Proud (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2017 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
I wonder if you will have Michael "FINALLY" growing up or will you have him remain childish....
Author's Response: My muses haven't decided if Mikey will grow up, but for now it doesn't appear so
Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2017 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
I'm still reading it and I like it a lot
Michael is always wining about something but luckily, Brian is not into him anymore.
Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2017 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
Mickey is a twerp.I'm glad Brian blew him off. I hope he won't be starting trouble by instigating himself with the girls. Love this story.
Author's Response: Mikey has not won me over- never will- I don't think the girls would listen to him- I think they chose him for JR's father as they didn't think he would ruffle any feathers
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2017 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
Delighted to see an update! Poor Gus. At least his dads have stepped up to the plate and are just biding their time before they make the move for something of permanence. And then there's Michael. I just want to strangle him. He doesn't deserve Ben, but he's too selfish to see just how good he has it.
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
-Tiff
Author's Response: Tiff:
Gus has his fathers and he feels loved by them. I know his mothers are less than perfect. If only every child had parents like B/J.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2017 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
Will Michael ever understand that Brian has changed? He's not going to enjoy his life if he doesn't.
Author's Response: Michael may figure it out, - my muses haven't decided- but for now, he still isn't ready for Brian to be a father
Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2017 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
So love seeing updates for this story. Thankyou
Author's Response: appreciate that you took the time to tell me you are enjoying the story. It means the world to me to know that there are people reading the story.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2017 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
Michael grates on my nerves.
Who is left to tell him Justin and the kids come first before it finally sinks in?
The way he was talking about spending time with Jenny, it sounds more like he's becoming a part time dad.
Happy that Brian didn't even think to divulge his plans for Gus. It's nobody's business but his and Justin's.
Great update. Also glad Gus is so happy with Colin.
Author's Response: I have no love for Mikey. Soon, I feel that Brian and Justin will leave him behind. He has the same attitude toward JR that the munchers seem to have about Gus.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2017 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
Grr Michael never seems to get a clue. He is surrounded by people who love him but his selfishness is just too ingrained to see how much he has now.
Author's Response: I have always wondered about Ben- what does he see in Michael
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2017 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
Wow Michael is still an idiot. Thank god that Ben has a brain.
Author's Response: Ben has a brain but is he willing to put up with Michael? I always wondered what he saw in him.
Reviewer: MissMerlot (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2017 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 28- Mikey's Lament
Still loving this, look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: thanks for letting me know you are still enjoying and reading the story. Now off to write some more.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2017 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 27- When Worlds Collide
Thanks for the update. This Brian and Justin are cool and mature. They make great parents.
Author's Response: So glad you are still reading. Brian and Justin are committed to both their boys.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2017 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 27- When Worlds Collide
Yes - still interested in this universe. And those girls - Lindsay getting highlights is more important than Gus??? really - where is her head??? Gus deserves to be with his dads.
Author's Response: Lindsay is such a wasp and her looks come before Gus' activities--- ugh
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2017 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 27- When Worlds Collide
It's nice to see that everything is working out for Gus. I'm looking forward to the spaggetti dinner.
Author's Response: Spaghetti dinner- does this mean I have to write about dinner?- lol
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2017 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 27- When Worlds Collide
Really happy to see an update. I love this story. Poor Gus, his moms are duds! He is lucky to have B&J. Look forward to more when you have a chnace to update again. Bill
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful words of encouragment. Gus is so lucky to have his dads who make him a priority. The moms- not so much
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2016 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 26- A Family of Four
Loved this chapter. Hope everything works smoothly for Gus. Best wishes for your holidays!!! Bill
Author's Response: Bill- I apologze for not responding earlier- guess the holiday rush got the best of me- anyway hope your holiday was good- Gus will be happy that at least he comes first with his dads.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2016 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 26- A Family of Four
Brian and Justin seem to have it all worked out. Gus and Colin are lucky kids. Love how organized Justin is with his color coding.
Author's Response: sorry I didn't respond earlier- thought I did- Gus and Colin have the best dads- wish all kids coiuld have them as fathers
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2016 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 26- A Family of Four
It looks like things are working out for Gus. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Author's Response: Sorry I did not reply earlier- bad author- Gus is very happy- Yah
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2016 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 26- A Family of Four
Wow the girls will only work it out when it becomes a way of life
Author's Response: so sorry that I did not reply earlier- thought I replied to all, but did not- yeah the girls are very self centered
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2016 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 25- Gus' Wish
Lovely update. Brian certainly knows how to work Lindsay. Looking forward to your QAF gift offering.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Dee Dee:
Brian knows how to work Lindsay and after all these years he knows her tricks. Hope the stories that I write will be enjoyed. I have some ideas but need to get writing.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2016 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 25- Gus' Wish
Clever Brian. Both he and Justin have it all over the girls. They act like JT and Gus are a burden.
Author's Response: The girls like the idea of kids but not the reality. Brian and Justin understood the reality before they made the leap. they are committed to Gus and Colin.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2016 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 25- Gus' Wish
Brian played it just right, the moms problemly not even miss Gus unless they need a baby sitter. Gus seems so happy I hope it works out
Author's Response: I think Brian understands Lindsay and played into her desire for things in her life to run smoothly. She is too blind to see the real picture.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2016 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 24- Dinner Sunday Night
Gus is so lucky his dads love him and listen to his thoughts, I think his moms just go thru the motions sometime.I think they love Gus but are just not cut out for two kids with both of them working crazy hours, and they don't have the give and take in their marriage as his dads do. I hope for once they put well being of Gus before strikeing out at Brian and Justin
Author's Response: I think you are right. I think the idea of a child was more the push rather than the reality. Children take time, effort and planning. Without these, there is utter chaos. True there can be chaos if there is planning but without it, there is always chaos.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2016 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 23- A Talk With Gus
Gus is being treated as a second class child I think the only reason Linz wanted Brian to be Gus's dad was for fanasty of being Mrs Brian Kinney and the money that went with it knowing he is married to Justin means her little dream is delayed maybe she can cause a rift between the lovers or pit the children against their dads. Linz is a bitch and both dads know it.
Author's Response: Yep I alluded to the same idea a few comments back. Lindsay always wanted to be Mrs. Brian Kinney and Gus is the closest she will get to having Brian as her mate.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2016 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 22= Aftermath
After a bumpy start at their beginning Brain has found talking, asking questions mattered. Now he and Justin know each other thoughts and the love they have for both sons is unconditional
Author's Response: Brian and Justin truly have an adult relationship- probably the only one of the gang that does.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2016 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 21- Gus' Visit
I don't understand Linz, she seems to keep Gus close as a barganing chip to get the money she wants from Brian. Yet she really doesn't use Gus for much except as a baby sitter for JR who is trial for anyone. Gus needs someone to let him be a child and that's exactly what his dads do. great update and a wonderful story.
Author's Response: I think Gus is a tool to Lindsay- a way to keep her fantasy of hetero life with Brian - the Dad, Lindsay the mom and Gus the baby. He is a bargaining chip to keep her fantasies alive.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2016 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 20- Best Laid Plans
Brian and Justin seem to address their problems and decided what action to take. this was a good update showing their willingness to work together.
Author's Response: Again, there is more to their relationship than sex- hard for many in the family to understand and accept that.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2016 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 19- Sleep Perhaps To Dream
Jenn is a smart lady and a loving one, the boys need their time together. I'm sure the family will be critical and believe they were correct all along---mettlesom group.
Author's Response: Jen understands and remembers what it is like to be a new mom- believe me, my "baby" is 27 and I still remember
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2016 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 18- Meeting Baby Colin
So glad Gus got to ride with his dads to meet Colin.Gus is such a sweet little boy and he doesn't seem jealous of the baby--his dads have made it clear he is still a very much loved little boy.Of course Lindz insist on going she is always intrusive like Debbie,Gus seemed in awe of how tiny Colin was, but still telling the baby he was his big brother and how he would share with him and teach him about things--a sweet meeting. great up date
Author's Response: The reality that the brother will cry and can't play will come soon enough, but for now, Gus is happy.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2016 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 17- Arrival
And now it starts! Gus has his baby brother,Brian and Justin a baby boy,and Jenn is at last a grandma all the people that count are wildley in love with this tiny little guy, and the family can go to blazes if they don't like it.Ted and Em will back the new family and the others just don't matter. Great up date
Author's Response: I like Emmett and Ted- mostly-
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2016 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 25- Gus' Wish
Fantastic update. Hope Brian's plans for Gus goes through without anything bad happening.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Author's Response: I wish I could say that updates will be sooner, but I can't. I think Brian's plan will go smoothly but there may still be bumps in the road.
Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 25- Gus' Wish
Awww this story is so lovely. I will go on reading it on and on. The explanations were very clear for a little boy; great. I love the team Brian-Justin-Gus and of course, baby Colin.
Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful praise. I love the story too. Just wish I had more time to update a little more regularly.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 16- New York
oh boy, it's baby time, can't wait! The boys had a few days to relax and being away from the Pitts and the family
Author's Response: Baby time- now the roller coaster begins
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 15- One Lst Adventure
Strange time for a trip, but Brian does things differtly. I like how they are putting distance between them and the family
Author's Response: again, this is a new trend- call it the babymoon- one last trip before the world gets turned upside down with a new life
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 14-Shopping for Baby
I knew for a wedding shower you could register, I didn't realize you could register for a baby shower,it won't take long for Brian to order on line cause the family really have bad taste
Author's Response: oh yes, you can register for just about anything now- when my daughter was pregnant, she registered for items that she wanted and needed for the baby- that way friends and family can buy the desired items.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 13- The Care and Feeding of A Baby
Lots of sex in this up date,can't wait for the baby to come ! great story,wonderful chapter
Author's Response: more sex- seems to be the theme lately- better do it now before the baby comes
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 12-- I Don't Know Nothing Bout Birthing No Babies
I always laugh how Justin wins his battles with Brian-- pure sexual blackmail .That is really a win win situation .
Author's Response: Justin just really hates Blowjobs- not
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth
Finally Gus seems to understand that daddy and Justin still love him. Brian finally gets to have sex--life is somewhat better
Author's Response: BRian/ sex- what more can I say- woot!!!
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath
Gus is trying so hard to please his dads, poor little guy just doesn't understand, his mother doesn't have time for him and now he wants to be sure that his dads do, thats some parenting by Lindsey she has done a bang up job of making him feel he has to try to earn his love.
Author's Response: Gus adores his father and I think the more Lindsay and Mel downplay and deminish Brian, the more he wants to be like his dad- a much better role model
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors
The fact that Lindsey thinks she can give Brian and Justin advice on child rearing is so far fetched I don't think she's much of a mother she puts herself and her wants and needs ahead of Mel Gus, and JR. She's the perfect example of a self centered person. If they want advice the only one capable is Jennifer not only does she know how to love but she knows how to show it. She would know better to butt in telling them how to raise a child she would only help if ask.She could certainly teach Lindsey and Debbie how to raise a loving and respectful child.
Author's Response: I totally agree. Lindsay and Mel are filled with the idea of children not necessarily the reality of raising responsible children who will one day take over the world
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 25- Gus' Wish
I love Brian in full business mode he has a game plan and Lindsay won't see it coming
Author's Response: Yep, you got it. Brian has a plan and LIndsay is so blind to everything.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster
How does Ben still live with that ass! He and Debbie mettle in everyones business and none of it concerns them.If they had all the wisdom and all the answer their lives would be far greater than they are.
Author's Response: I never understood the Ben/ Mikey show. Ben is highly educated professor who is strong, independent and self assured and Mikey is a child in a man's body; complete with jealousy, bad manners and no filter on his mouth.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 10:00 AM · On: Chapter - All About Gus
What a terrible thing to say to Gus, that Brian and Justin won't want him around after the baby comes, that won't have time for him--it is bad enough his own two mothers would say that to his face, but Debbie repeats the same thing don't they know how that hurts Gus. Debbie is just repeating something mikey has said and he hasn't told the truth since learned to talk.
Author's Response: I really think that the girls and Mikey know in their hearts that Brian will be a great dad and they want to try and talk themselves into belieiving he's otherwise. they, as usual are only thinking of themselves.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 6- It's Real
A smile on Brians face as Justin has one hell of a queen out! It's real for him and as he rants he also bounces off the wall, Brian better tie his lover down, it's a long time until the baby is born, he's about ten seconds from a major melt down and then Brian has a answer for him sex!
Author's Response: Brian's frequent answer is sex- and how we love being the fly on the wall.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 5- Peek a Boo
I feel kind of bad for Brian, Mel and Lindsey didn't include him Gus and he's made the decision not to go to Cynthias appointments. At least Justin tells him everything to keep in touch with what's going on
Author's Response: I understand Brian and I understand Cynthia and Justin. He's missing out on the OB appts but he also has to keep his relationship with Cynthia professional. There is only so much brain bleach to be applied.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 4- Surrogate
I've always liked Cyntha, a smart woman who puts her intelligence out there, not playing a good little employee who never voices her views and has Brian's back she probromely knows as much as Brian about advertising. A good choice for the guys
Author's Response: I din't want Daphne and I wanted them to know the mom- Cynthia was the perfect choice
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 3- Everyone Has An Opinion
I've never understood the friendships Brian is so smart and mikey is dumb as they come,Lindsey is a attention whore, she thinks she knows what best for everyone How in the world could Brian hold his temper they treat him awful.
Author's Response: Brian will take a lot of abuse- ( back to his childhood) and he loves Gus so he is slightly fearful that he will lose that access. I dislike mikey, Mel and Linds- you can't tell from my writing ( lol)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 25- Gus' Wish
Great chapter. Brian played Lindsay perfectly. I hope Gus gets to spend most of his time with his Dads. Hate to think the story will end soon but hopefully there will be a sequel. Bill
Author's Response: Bill:
YOu flatter me. I love this story and I never thought it would be this long- I originally thought maybe 8-10 chapters- here on chapter 24 and 1+ year later it's still going- glad you liked the update.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 03:58 AM · On: Peter Pan and Wendy
Brian would be seriously crazy to have another child with Lindsey and he knows it, she barely lets him have Gus, she treats Gus like a barganing chip to see how much she can get out of Brian--lunch had great incite from her point of view no wonder Brian wanted to laugh in her face.
Author's Response: Brian sees right through Lindsay and I'm so glad Justin didn's even contemplate her for the surrogate.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 03:43 AM · On: Decisions
I can't belive as much as I've read of this wonderful story I failed to review, I thought I had and checked reviews and failed to find my reviews. I'm starting at the begining so I can respond and let you know how wonderful your work is. I was happy B&J want a baby all the family act like Brian couldn't take care of a goldfish when he's always helping them with problems and money.He deserves their respect, as does Justin.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to go back to the beginning to review. It really means a lot. I think Brian wants the family to believe he can't care for anything.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 25- Gus' Wish
Brian is a genius!
Author's Response: I do believe he is.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2016 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 24- Dinner Sunday Night
Sweet. Both Brian and Justin make Gus feel important and worthy of their time. They explain things to him and care ask for his input. Great parents,
Author's Response: We would all hope that all parents are this way with their kids.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 24- Dinner Sunday Night
They do appear to be making things work out. Let's hope Melanie and Lindsay have no problems with Gus living with Brian and Justin.
Author's Response: The beauty of it is hopefully they won't really figure out that Gus isn't there a lot.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 24- Dinner Sunday Night
Great chapter Gus is growing fast and his world is often changing because the girls are making him anxious. Brian and Justin will need to be careful how they broach the subject with the girls
Author's Response: I think the girls are not paying attention to Gus and Brian is super sensitive to his needs, especially now that Colin is here.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2016 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 24- Dinner Sunday Night
you are keeping us waiting for "the conversation" I can't imagine it will go well. Really happy to see an update for this great story. Thanks, Bill
Author's Response: I hope "the conversation" will be as good as everyone ( my readers) want it to be. Sorry for htedealy in posting, but RL does get in the way.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2016 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 23- A Talk With Gus
Thanks for a real good story. I love Brian and Justin as parents.
Author's Response: Thank you. I wasn't sure about writing this story but it seems to be one folks really like.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 23- A Talk With Gus
Can't wait to read abut Brian conversation with the Munchers. I wonder of they will be happy to let Gus come and live with B&J. Probably they will be sorry to lose a babysitter. I was really happy to see a new chapter, love this story. Bill
Author's Response: Bill:
So glad you continue to enjoy this saga. I think the conversation with the munchers will be interesting. My muses have not decided what will happen yet.
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2016 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 23- A Talk With Gus
So glad I was able to bribe your muses to keep writing this lovely story. Gus needs to be where he is loved and can be a child. It will be interesting to see how Brian handles this.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: My muses expect regulare feeding and watering. They tell me they like popcorn and pasta too. Every child deserves to be loved.
Reviewer: Josie (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2016 07:41 PM · On: Decisions
Love your story. I loved how Justin stood up to Lindsey. I'm so anti Lindsey. She's always been a manipulative witch. I never could understand how Mel couldn't see thru all here bullshit, she's supposed to be a good lawyer. That dinner is going to be interesting. Waiting to see when Michael will be poking his 2 cents in.
Author's Response: So sorry, not to have responded- I'm usually better about it. No excuse. Glad you are enjoying the story. I don't like Lindsay or Mel and really feel that they are two faced snakes-they want Brian's money and use him to support their lifestyle. It costs money to have children but they both have good jobs.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 23- A Talk With Gus
Let's hope the girls agree. Gus deserves better.
Author's Response: I think there will be a fight or at least a semblance of one.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 23- A Talk With Gus
Fabulous chapter. Shame that Justin didn't record Colin rolling over for Brian. One parent sometimes miss those mile stones in a baby's life. Glad that Brian had a talk with Gus and hope the solution works out for all of them.
Author's Response: In the days before video cameras, parents just had to wait to see it themselves, but I'm sure that Justin and Brian have many milestones on camera. Of course, they could just want to experience parenthood and not always be on the ready. I hoep the solution works too.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2016 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 22= Aftermath
Always happy to see a new chapter!! Poor Gus, I hope B&J find a solution to the issue. Looking forward to more of this great story. Bill
Author's Response: WRiting is slow right now- RL is just too darn busy, but Brian and Justin are just as busy so everyone will find a solution to the problem.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2016 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 22= Aftermath
It won't make any difference if they have the girls for dinner or not. First they'll think that Brian is putting on a show just for them. Then they'll spew their usial bullshit that they're Gus' parents and Brian has no say. Then they'll bring up Colin and how with the baby around there will be no time for them to pay attention to Gus. It's going to be difficult and could get nasty. Gus will be caught in the middle Looking forward to the next chapter..
Author's Response: Have you been talking to my muses?- just kidding- I think Gus will be the key to all of the problems
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2016 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 22= Aftermath
Interesting solution. Wondering if it will work with the girls. They don't seem open to B or J's suggestions.
Author's Response: We will have to see what works or doesn't work. It should be an interesting dinner.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2016 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 22= Aftermath
Brian almost turned back to his old habits. But he stopped at drinking and found another solution. Then he solved the problem, more or less. A great chapter all around.
Author's Response: Thank you- Brian realizes that drink doesn't solve anything, just puts the decision making off for a while.
Reviewer: Patty (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2016 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 21- Gus' Visit
I'm really glad you're still writing this. I have had a talk with your muse and she said that it's to soon to end this and to continue to keep going with this story. She also told me that you should write a sequel when you finally finish this one. But that won't be for a while. Sorry I bribed her with some baked Goods! Lol we don't want this story to end. We love the interactions with the parents and the kids. More please!
Author's Response: Thank you and I appreciate you letting me know you are enjoying the story. My muses must like the story as well as they keep whispering more stories in my ear. Unfortunately, life is super busy and I don't have nearly teh time I used to have to write, but patience will bring a new chapter. It is half way written so hoepfully in another week or so it will be finished so my awesome beta can read it through.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2016 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 21- Gus' Visit
They're finding their way. Hiring Sam was a great idea. I wouldn't want to be in the girl's shoes once brian gets wind of the conversation Justin and Gus had that afternoon. Might be time to look into partial or full custody.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2016 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 21- Gus' Visit
They're finding their way. Hiring Sam was a great idea.
I wouldn't want to be in the girl's shoes once brian gets wind of the conversation Justin and Gus had that afternoon. Might be time to look into partial or full custody.
Author's Response: Brian is not going to be happy- It shall be interesting to see what he does.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2016 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 21- Gus' Visit
Please,please,please keep writing this story. Want to see more of them as a family. It's way to soon to end it. We are enjoying this very much.
Author's Response: I will continue to write as long as folks are still reading. Of course, the muses have to contunue to tell me stories. S glad that you are enjoying the story. Thanks for letting me know.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2016 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 21- Gus' Visit
To answer your last statement first NOOOOOOOOO listen to your muses they have much more to say!!!
Anyway in the next chapter can you slap Lindsay please she is ignoring her own child omg grrr
Author's Response: I will listen to my muses and I hope to continue to write so that my readers will continue to read. It shall be interesting to see what happens with LIndsay.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2016 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 21- Gus' Visit
Great chapter. I was so happy to see a new chapter. Glad Gus is opening up to Justin. I'm sure he or Brian will talk to the Moms. Love this story. Bill
Author's Response: Thanks Bill. It means a lot to know that an accomplished writer enjoys my work. I lvoe the interaction between Justin and Gus
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2016 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 21- Gus' Visit
It's disappointing to see that the girls treat Gus like a babysitter rather then their first born son. I'd love to be a fly on the wall when Justin has that discussion about that. Love how Justin and Brian take time out for Gus. I'm sure Colin is loving his big brother singing to him.
Author's Response: It is disappointing, but I think LIndsay caves into Mel and since Mel really resents Brian's part in Gus' life, he allows Gus to shoulder the responsibility of being a babysitter.
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2016 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 21- Gus' Visit
I have been whispering in your muses ears. We are not ready for this lovely story to be finished. I loved this update. Poor Gus living with his Moms. He needs to be living with the men in his life. Justin sure knows how to handle Lindsay. Wait till Brian hears about Gus and Justin's conversation. Thanks for continuing this wonderful story.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Dee Dee:
So glad to see you are still reading the story. WEll your whispers must be very powerful. I keep thinking the story is over but the muses have other ideas. Justin is so tired of Lindsay's manipulations, and especially when Brian isn't around, he doesn't hesitate to tell her off. It should be interesting to see what they do about the situation.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2016 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 21- Gus' Visit
Really REALLY am enjoying this! I loved the way Justin put Lindsey in her place! Witch! Gus' side of things really broke my heart. Mel and Lindz are basically treating him like a built-in babysitter. How about giving her 'father' some ACTUAL responsibility?! But NOOOoooooo that's too much like doing the RIGHT thing! I find it absolutely appalling that with all of Lindsay's judgmental bullcrap and sanctimonious pronouncements that SHE and her partner the ones actually being neglectful of their child's needs, not Brian and Justin. I can't wait for that crow-sized helping of humble pie to be served up to Lindsey!
Thanks for posting! 'Fatherhood' is ADDICTIVE!
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful and thoughtful comments. I don't like Lindsay- maybe I should put anti Lindsay in the comments- but oh well. I have always thought she was very manipulative of Brian. I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story- even though it is taking a long time to write. At least my posts are getting more regular now.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2016 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 21- Gus' Visit
I'm glad your muses keep you adding more to this. I'm really enjoying it.
Author's Response: Thank you. Muses are funny- I think they are done talking and they talk some more. Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2016 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 20- Best Laid Plans
Loved how they talked out a solution to their problems. Brian is becoming as mature as Justin! Hehe.
Author's Response: Thanks- I like that they are communicating like couples should. At this point in their relationship, I would hope they would be willing and able to problem solve.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2016 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 20- Best Laid Plans
Definitely a good plan the boys need to prioritize their time as well
Author's Response: Thanks- It is nice to have the financial means to afford that type of child care. Thanks for your continued support and comments.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2016 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 20- Best Laid Plans
Another great chapter. Loved Cynthia solvng the problems at Kinnetk and Brian and Justin working thru the home issues together. Looking forward to more. Bill
Author's Response: Cynthia is very competent and knows that Brian needs to be assured that things move smoothly at work. They are talking and compromising as all folks needd to do.
Reviewer: Patty (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2016 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 20- Best Laid Plans
I love this story a lot. I read that you only have a few more chapters left. Say it ain't so. Lol Please don't end it soon. We want more of there life together as a family. Maybe even see them together as the baby goes to first six years or so and see Brian and Justin's interaction with them. Whatever you do just wanted to say love the series.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I keep thinking it is going to end, but then my muses tell me there is more to the story. I guess it would really depend on my readers and if they continued to read and enjoy the story. Nothing worse than writing a dead horse. I might decide to end this story after the baby hits a certain point and then begin a new story for them. Not sure.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2016 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 20- Best Laid Plans
How nice that they've come up with a plan!
Author's Response: I think the key is that they are talking and came up with a plan. In the past, they sometimes forgot to talk to each other.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2016 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 19- Sleep Perhaps To Dream
Lots of time to read. Love this chapter.
Thanks *hugs*
Author's Response: Sorry didn't respond earlier. So glad you had time to catch up and let me know you are enjoying the story. I quick reply that you are enjoying the story means a lot to me. Thanks
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2016 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 19- Sleep Perhaps To Dream
Aww. I loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you. It means a lot that you let me know.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2016 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 19- Sleep Perhaps To Dream
Having Colin home isn't as easy as they thought. Having someone else watch Colin at night a couple of times a week would help with that sleep deprivation. Wish I could have had that.
Author's Response: I think all of us who are parents would have loved to have enjoyed someone watching the newborn a few times a week. Once the newness of parenthood wears off, maybe they will be willing to let Jennifer stay over.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2016 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 19- Sleep Perhaps To Dream
I am surprised Brian hasn't insisted on a overnight nanny as well but then again Justin would have have overruled him as he wants to be the parent/carer lol.
Author's Response: Both Brian and Justin want to be parents to Colin. I think Brian may be better equipped to deal with the lack of sleep as evidenced by his history of many late nights and then going in to work early in the morning.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2016 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 19- Sleep Perhaps To Dream
Happy to see an update. Babies are exhausting. I think all new parents have t find that out on their own. Fun chapter!! Bill
Author's Response: Thank you. I hoped to update it sooner but wasn't able to do so. Next chapter is almsot finished so it shoudl be ready by hopefully next week. BAbies are exhausting; even 26 years later, I can still remember bringing home a new baby.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2016 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 18- Meeting Baby Colin
Nice chapter. Gus was very cute with Colin and Lindsay was Lindsay, as Cynthia said at least she was civil. Thanks for the update, can't wait for more. Bill
Author's Response: Thank you. I love the T-shirt that Gus insisted on wearing. Lindsay is still threatened by the new baby, but she recognizes she needs to keep some of those thoughts to herself.
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2016 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 18- Meeting Baby Colin
Thanks for the chapter. It started off with Brian calling Colin,
‘Sonnyboy’. Very clever. That told me so much about the Colin
Brian connection and its future.
Thanks for the story, we have come a long long long way.
DavidR
Author's Response: Your welcome. Brian really wants this child, but we have to remember that not everyone is convinced that this is the case.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2016 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 18- Meeting Baby Colin
Dam Lindsay such a jealous minx! Gus is so cute lol
Author's Response: Gus is so excited to have a brother and he's old enough to realize his dad and Justin won't exclude him just because there is a new baby.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2016 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 18- Meeting Baby Colin
It's nice that Gus is happy to have a baby brother. I thought Deb was a bit low key about it all. Love that Cynthia isn't going to take anything from certain people when they come visit.
Author's Response: Cynthia is very protective of Brian and wouldn't have offered to have their child if she didn't see that he really wanted this baby. Gus is so excited and Deb- well that is to be seen. Deb isn't as threatened by Colin as Mikey and Lindsay. She is happy for Brian but I think she is still a little leary about Brian's committment.
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2016 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth
Poor Gus, hearing many bad things.
Author's Response: I hate that the family talk when he's around and think he doesn't hear
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2016 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath
Gus is trying to be subtle but something is going on and it's becoming visible...
Author's Response: He's 10- subtlety isn't a skill he really has yet
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors
Brian's biting back "Like you did when you encouraged Justin to go to New York".
So good to read that; take that Lindsey!
Author's Response: Brian gets fed up with Lindsay
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster
You have guessed Michael right; I liked how Ben replied and how he knows he will hear again about the baby. Poor guy.
Even Melanie is seeing the changes in Brian's behavior.
Author's Response: Brian has grown up - the gang just hasn't all agreed
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 10:03 PM · On: Chapter - All About Gus
Ha ha ha, Gus' idea to live with his fathers: what a good solution! Get rid of the girls and spend qualilty time with the boys.
Author's Response: Gus would love to do tha- we shall see what happens
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 6- It's Real
I loved "baby's finding our lube": I could only imagine Lindsey's face if she heard that!
And also how Brian brought Justin back to reality with his "I think a good fuck is in order" to end their "lesbianic discussion".
Author's Response: There are some fun lines in the story
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 5- Peek a Boo
Shy baby: we don't know what it will be yet.
Author's Response: baby is secretive
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 4- Surrogate
This is a really good idea; it's great that Cynthia proposed that solution.
Author's Response: I love having Cynthia as the surrogate
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 3- Everyone Has An Opinion
Let's feed the muse: I like how you manage the reactions of Michael and Lindsay; if it's coming from Justin, it's obviously a wrong idea; if it impacts Brian's life, it's even worse.
I guess we will have some fun chapters coming up.
Author's Response: Micahel and LIndsay are big pains-
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 07:20 PM · On: Peter Pan and Wendy
Lindsay is going to be a pain in their asses (again).
Author's Response: as she always is
Reviewer: The SNO (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2016 07:03 PM · On: Decisions
This is an existing start; It's really nice that Justin had this talk with his mom. She respects Brian and of course her son.
Author's Response: I think as the series moved forward we saw Jennifer's support for Brian and Justin
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2016 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 16- New York
Fantastic update. What a lovely short vacation for the two of them.
Wow, the little one is on the way, excitment for all, esp. Brian and Justin.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Author's Response: JoAnn:
Very exciting for everyone- Cynthia's been pregnant forever- lol- baby is on its way
Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2016 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 16- New York
Exciting part - can't wait for the next chapter. I really really really hope you'll be writing more about their llife after the baby is born - yes? Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you- Next chpater is at the beta's. I haven't decided if the story will continue or not- but I will still be writing stories of our two men.
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