Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2015 01:07 AM · On: Detective Sunshine
Mel in love with Brian? Hell has frozen over!!
I been getting weird looks from my family because I keep breaking out in giggles. Keep on updating this story. I LOVE THIS!
Sandy
Author's Response: I feel your pain Sandy. I actually was giggling like a demented person so much writing this chapter that my family may have me committed.
Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review
Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2015 01:06 AM · On: Detective Sunshine
OH HOLY CRAP! Mel?! More Please! LOL
Love it!
:)
Amy
Author's Response: Yeah, Mel. It had to be done. She's the one that'll cause Brian to lose his mind
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2015 11:52 PM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
This story is getting better and better. I'm reading this while I'm in bed and I had to run to the bathroom before I peed myself with laughter. Brian is having one hell of a nightmare of he's stoned out of his mind.
This is one HILARIOUS story. The part of Debbie threatening Mikey to break his superheroes was the point that made me run for the bathroom. OMG This is sooooo good.......
Looking forward to the next update with a box of tissues by my side.......
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response: Wow, so glad you're finding it funny. I'd hoped to make people laugh, but wetting the bed FAR exceeds my expectations :-)
Result!!!
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2015 06:16 PM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
LOL what a fun story. Who's the next one totally in love with Brian?
* hugs *
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. Chapter 4 gives us love's next victim
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2015 09:58 AM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
Ted and Brian ewwww. The next one Emmett. Hopefully Brian wakes up fast.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Yeah, Ted and Brian, pretty gross alright
Reviewer: puanani (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2015 08:51 AM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
Wow how mind blowing is this story. Geez 30 something still getting spanked by his
mom.. Now Ted . Hope this is a very bad dream. Stop torturing poor Brian more
torture on Michael.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting.
I'm afraid Brian will be tortured for a few chapters yet :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2015 06:50 AM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
OMG. First Mikey and now Ted? What will Emmetts story be about what happened?
Author's Response: No, Emmett is safe... for the moment anyway
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2015 06:43 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Oh this looks to be goooood! Tell me that Justin doesn't find out!
Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2015 02:46 AM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
Oh Lordy...Maybe Brian's in a coma (hopefully)? It's a fun story! Looking forward to more :)
Amy
Author's Response: Not a coma though if I cant get what I planned to work, that might be plan b
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2015 12:43 AM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
You're right about the comments. It is very distressing to wait for them.
And now is Ted? Definitely Brian is completely fucked up when Justin discover all that is happening.
You are torturing Brian? Well, the idea is that you are doing a great job.
Is there any alucinógino gas hovering in Pittsburgh? The next victim of this collective hallucination is Emmet? If Mel is reached by this hallucination, the torture will be complete. Roftl !!!!!!!
Hugs, Fatima.
Author's Response: You're half right Fatima. Not saying which half though :-)
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2015 12:34 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Oh, noooooooooooooo! Michael, no! As Brian can do this after all these years? I expect this to be a Brian nightmare or that Michael has used some exotic drug that is causing a lot of hallucinations. Or, Brian is having these hallucinations.
I can beat Michael to put some sense into his empty head?
Welcome to MW.
A hug!
Fátima.
Author's Response: Thanks Fatima. I think Justin might beat Michael to a pulp if he witnesses any of this.
Reviewer: Tas (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2015 12:33 AM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
hahahahahaha omg god i love this story
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Glad to know it made you laugh. It was funny in my head but I wasn't sure if the writing was.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2015 12:14 AM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
Well, that last part was certainly a surprise! I'm hoping this is all a bad dream on Brian's part; that's the only explanation I can come up with. But I found parts of this quite funny! Looking forward to more. And yes, review comments are very important to writers; helps to let them know that others are enjoying them. :) Thanks for posting on here. ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks Kim, I really appreciate it. I've read all your stories on MW, some multiple times, and they are awesome. From now one, I'll be sure to comment.
I'm glad you found it funny in places, I was worried :-)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2015 11:58 PM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
WHAT!?! oh hell no not Ted too...what the fuck,next Emmett will be trying to convince Brian that they're fucking too...smh
You really plan on torturing us huh lol.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Have been biting my fingernails off. I don't know how you writers deal with waiting for feedback. I will never again read something without commenting. It's fricking torture.
Emmett, hmmm ... there's an idea :-)
Reviewer: nY Reader (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2015 03:17 PM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Intersting storyline. More please.
Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2015 11:11 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Oh God, I really don't like Michael. I hope Brian really is in the twilight zone and gets out FAST! I'm glad you decided to write your first story here. It's great and holds a lot of promise! Can't wait for more! :)
Amy
Author's Response: Thanks Amy, By the end of chpt 2, he'll get away from Michael, temporarily at least
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2015 11:09 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
OH NO. What happened here? Brian and Mikey. EEWW!! Could somebody hand me a barf bag cause my breakfast is threatening to come out the wrong way. EWWW!!
Not a big fan of Mikey, but still your story has a good beginning.
Keeping an eye out for the next update.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response: Thanks Soirsa, hope you managed to keep your breakfast down. I'm not the biggest Mikey fan either so never fear :-)
Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2015 10:39 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
This is a great beginning! Not very realistic, because I really believe that at the end of the show Michael was not in a puppy love anymore. But who knows wht would happen if thing with Ben didn't work out, he might as well come back to it. So, thank you for this first chapter and keep writing :) It's always good to welcome a new author here.
PS. I want to punch Michael. :D
Author's Response: Thanks Astrid. I agree with you about Michael. But you've actually guessed part of the reason he's acting like this. I hope the other part wont be too ridiculous. I didn't tag it properly but this is definitely supposed to be humorous and not angsty in a major way. I'm afraid people are expecting a serious story. Gulp !
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2015 08:34 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Welcome to MW.
OMG I hope this is only a bad dream. * sigh * Someone slipped something in Brian drink. This can't be happening. Michael you little shit, you are ... I've no words in English what Michael is. Can I kick his ass for doing this to Brian. And i know for sure he can't keep his mouth shut to the others. Bragging about it. Pfff this is a nightmare.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting.
You can definitely kick Michael's ass but you'll need to get in line... Justin may murder him :-)
Reviewer: Robin (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2015 07:33 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Great chapter!! But Michael grrrrrrr. What did he do to Brian, this is a nightmare.
Author's Response: Thanks. I laughed and cringed my way through writing it.
Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2015 05:19 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Love the story but Ewwwwww Brian and Michael please tell me it's a dream or Michael drugged him
Author's Response: It's neither, sorry, but I hope you won't be disappointed. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2015 05:14 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
NO NO NO NO! SAY IT AINT SO!
I CANT! PLEASE TELL ME MICHAEL SET THIS UP AND DRUGGED BRIAN AND HAS HIM THINKING THEY SLEPT TOGETHER!!!!! "PLEASEEEEEEE"
Author's Response: Michael drugged Brian and has him thinking they slept together.
Happy? :-)
And thank you for taking the time to comment. Really appreciate it.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2015 04:09 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Welcome to Whispers :)....What a hell of a first story, I'm not sure how Brian is going to get out of this one especially when Michael tells Justin all about it.
I certainly hope this winds up being one bad dream...more soon please.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I really appreciate it.
It's not a dream and no one is drugged though I feel like I should change that judging by the comments :-)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2015 03:50 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Shouldn't this have an anti-Michael tag?
Author's Response: Yes, it should and I thought I had. I obviously didn't do it properly. Hope you're not a big Michael fan :-)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2015 03:32 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Yikes! Horrifying! Was he drugged?
Author's Response: He'd kinda have to be right? But I confirm or deny nothing :-)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2015 02:45 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Hi, Kearney! Welcome to Midnight Whispers! Thanks for becoming a member, and for posting your story here. I'm intrigued! Great beginning! I'll be looking forward to what happens here, and to what Justin's and Ben's reactions will be. *Hugs* ~Kim
FYI, I made some minor formatting changes to your story, and corrected "Mickey" to the correct spelling of "Mikey." I also added Michael, Justin, Ben, and Brian as characters. Hope that's okay. And if you need a banner made, let us know. We have a list of banner makers that will be happy to help you.
Author's Response: Jeez, you don't hang around. That was quick. Thanks for the help and the info, much appreciated.
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