Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
I adore protective Brian. Considering that he is in a non-commited un-defined non-relationship, he always goes above and beyond to care for Justin.
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: February 29, 2016 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
I liked the story. Brian paying $19K to fly to LA- priceless. The seizure story line is good and got them together.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2016 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great story. Brian loves him so much.
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2015 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
great story
thank you for sharing
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and thank you for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2015 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
I am glad you wrote this and posted it! This short story covers all of Brian's current relationships and portrays them accurately and succinctly which is so hard to do with so few words. Your writing is just so good! And sooo satisfying!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Sorry I am just answering this now. I must have missed it! Thank you for your kind words. :)
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2015 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi Anne! I LOVE this one. So well written. Your description of Brian's feelings is very accurate to me and I even had to laugh when Justin wakes up, he was kind of adorable ;) It's also great to see Justin's through this low self-esteem phase and Brian doing a grand gesture just to be there. Perfect. Thank you
Author's Response: Hi, Alois! I'm glad you loved it, Alois! Justin was kind of adorable wasn't he? My great-grandmother was extremely adorable the day after hers, even though her behavior was quite concerning (she had flatlined during her seizures so it was quite a scary moment.) However, the next day she was extremely sweet and pleasant and drawing on her pillow because she thought it was a book.
Brian probably could have waited for the flight with the layover, considering Justin was only awake briefly in the afternoon. However, I think that Brian's presence probably brought Justin comfort, even if he wasn't really aware of himself and Brian could never deny him of that. I think it probably helped Justin immensly when it came to his self-esteem as well.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2015 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Are you going to continue with more chapters? This story was different. I work at a hospita has a secretaryl, a guy had a seizure. It was the first time I seem one before. You don't realize what a person goes through. Thanks for the story.
Author's Response: I think that this will probably stay a one-shot but I am pleased that the readers have shown interest in more. Seizures are VERY scary. Sometimes scarier for the person watching rather than the person having one. People often don't even remember the experience and come out of it feeling exhausted/loopy/confused/weak. It varies from person to person and they can come on so suddenly.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! It means a lot!
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2015 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice seeing Brian care. And letting Justin know, however sideways.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2015 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
I don't know much about siezures but I enjoyed your story a lot. Bill
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I know some about the actual process but when it comes to the aftermath, it varies greatly from patient to patient so that's what made me nervous in writing this. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2015 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
You had me in tears with this one!
To me, it doesn't quite seem finished. I think I would like to see more of a resolution with regard to what the boys do next, and how Justin handles this with the family.
Author's Response: Aw, I didn't mean to! ;)
As of now, I plan on this staying a one-shot but if I ever get the need to add more on, I will let you all know. :) Thank you for reading, reviewing, and your interest in more!
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2015 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
I think you did a great job.
Just the right amount of angst. Brian and Ted have a special friendship that works well for them.
No no need to tell Jennifer yet until he's home. She can yell at him then, them let Deb have her turn.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was proud of the fic for the most part in the end, I just wondered if it had a point in the fandom lolol. I'm probably overthinking it.
I really love Brian and Ted's friendship as well. There's definitely a comradery between the two of them and they respect and care for each other immensly when it comes down to it.
I agree. I think Brian wanted that to be Justin's call on whether or not he told his mother he overdosed, since that would scare a mother terribly. He could probably get away with not telling her at all if he really wanted, since she doesn't know he was even admitted into the hospital, but Deb is a different story. Although, I think Jennifer would want to know and would be very concerned over what happened to her son.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2015 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you DID write this! Great one shot! I love stories where Brian shows how strong his love for Justin really is.
Author's Response: It was much longer than I anticipated. I was planning on a 3-4000 word story and it became twice as long. I do love it when Brian goes to all the lengths to makes sure Justin is safe. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2015 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well done! Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: No problem! I'm glad you liked it! :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2015 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this fic and I think we need a sequel with some angry Jennifer dialogue lol and maybe a return to the Pitts for the boys 👍👍
Author's Response: haha, I would if I didn't have so many WIPs! I'm glad you like it enough to read more though! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
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