Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2015 12:35 PM · On: The Danger of Knowledge Part I
This is good...really good.
You have captured Jennifer and Brian perfectly in this last scene. It could have been a scene from the show. All the story is great, poignant.
I always loved Jennifer.
BTW, I think there is a problem with the formatting? Not sure where it came from though. I read this with the other view.
Thank you for writing it. Looking forward to read more :)
Author's Response: Hi Alois
Thanks for your review. I am glad you felt it was true to the show. Yes, there does appear to be a problem with the formatting, but there doesn't seem to be anything I can do about it. You would have to change skin to be able to read it properly. Thanks again.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2015 04:31 AM · On: Part One: Jennifer Taylor Sees Too Much
I would have left a review for part two, but there wasn't a place for it, so I'll do it with Part I. True Brian can be ... well no nice, but how else would he survive the hurt. Everyone is talking bad about him. Will Jennifer be able to do anything about it?
Author's Response: Hi YumYum- you might not have been able to leave a review on Part II because of the formatting. You have to scroll across on the SurpriseMe skin to find the review section. Try using CSSZen. For some reason, the story doesn't fit onto one page. Thanks for reviewing anyway.
Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2015 12:57 AM · On: Part One: Jennifer Taylor Sees Too Much
Love this so much. Can't wait for the second part. Beautiful written.
Author's Response: Sorry for the shamefully late review, but I appreciate your comment. The second part was posted ages later, and I hope you enjoy that too.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2015 07:39 AM · On: Part One: Jennifer Taylor Sees Too Much
A very expressive insight into Brian, Showtime was entirely too subtle, in my view, in defining Brian. His many good points were as unverbal as he was.
Author's Response: That may be true. I have a second chapter posted, adnw ould be interested to see what you think. :)
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2015 08:45 PM · On: Part One: Jennifer Taylor Sees Too Much
Hindsight...
Oh Jennifer wait to you see what happens next. Justin didn't want "the obvious option", he just want a breather between rounds.
Author's Response: I think Justin did want the obvious option, because he had- either intentionally or unintentionally- forgotten that Brian did love him deeply. He wanted to play around and see whether he could secure a better bargain. The disastrous birthday present would have been a motivating factor too, as Ethan provided a romantic description of what he would have done for Justin were they together. I really think that Justin was deeply attracted to Ethan adn they did love each other. To what extent, I don't know- but Justin was 19 at this point and more than capable of choosing what he wanted. He did want Ethan, and I try to show that in this chapter. There is a second instalment posted if you would like to read.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2015 08:27 PM · On: Part One: Jennifer Taylor Sees Too Much
Great story. Interesting to see things from Jennifer's perspective. Looking forward to Chapter 2. Bill
Author's Response: Jennifer's perspective doesn't seem to be used much. I was inspired to choose her- instead of Brian- after reading a wonderful story on this site about Mrs Taylor. She is an interesting character, and I tried to include hints about her past life that run in contrast to the middle-class WASP environment she appears to be from. I have more chapters scheduled, but there is a second instalment if you have time.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2015 04:00 PM · On: Part One: Jennifer Taylor Sees Too Much
Well done and sadly true.
Author's Response: It is sad. Jennifer just doesn't understand how to see Brian at all, and when she does realize how much he loves her son, its too late. Argh, the pain!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2015 03:49 PM · On: Part One: Jennifer Taylor Sees Too Much
Wow what a sad tale, I can't wait to see how things get resolved.
Author's Response: Well, we already know how things get resolved! XD The second part has been posted, though! There will be additional chapters as this story needs more words than I originally planned.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2015 10:49 AM · On: Part One: Jennifer Taylor Sees Too Much
Wow that was wonderful I really am looking forward to the final chapter
Author's Response: At the time of writing, I didn't realize this would actually need more parts to make sense and show Jennifer's full character arc. I have finsihed the second part, if you are interested, and am working on the third in between RL. The third part is the hardest, because I need to document all her changes so it may be a while before that one sees the light of day!
Reviewer: chaval (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2015 10:19 AM · On: Part One: Jennifer Taylor Sees Too Much
J'ai adoré entrer dans la tête de Jennifer. Vivement la suite.
Author's Response: Merci beaucoup pour tes paroles sympas! J'avais fini la deuxième partie, et j'essaye d'écrire la troisième. Mais, c'est difficile! Merci!
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