Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Starlight (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2015 12:14 AM · On: Chemical Romance

A good drabble, but the last line spoilt the effect. The whole mood was romantic, erotic, and then the last line just seemed cold and scientific. Many readers won't know what "pheromones" are, and even if they do, that's not what people think about when they are about to have sex. Perhaps something alone the lines of: "He pushes me up against the wall, the back of the sofa, or the support beam, leaning his forehead into mine, capturing my lips, tuggin at my clothes as I unbutton his shirt. And through the mess of clothes, lips and tongues, I realize there's nowhere I'd rather be." Or something along those lines, sticking to the general theme of romance.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2015 03:00 AM · On: Chemical Romance

That's some chemical reaction!

Author's Response: Who says Brian not a romantic, he just don't know it... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2015 06:42 PM · On: Chemical Romance

That's the B&J we all know and love. Nice little story that captures their relationship.

Author's Response: That's the B&J we all know and love. Thanks that's so sweet... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2015 05:58 PM · On: Chemical Romance

Nice.

Author's Response: Thanks ~ Kathleen

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