Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2016 10:43 AM · On: Versus Self
can't imagine I've miss this story last year!
pls come back to continue, this can't be a WIP
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2015 06:48 AM · On: Versus Self
When are we gonna see Ben?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2015 06:24 AM · On: Versus Self
Wow! That was some chapter.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2015 09:51 PM · On: Versus Self
Hi, Sharry! Sorry to hear about your computer troubles, but glad to see an update to this one. Very unique storyline, and I love a Brian in jealous mode. He talks a good talk, but he's definitely in denial mode here when it comes to a certain blond.
I'm going to love, too, seeing Ben and Brian battle it out for Justin's affections! Adore that idea! Looking forward eagerly to the next part. *Hugs* ~Kim
P.S. I assume your beta is still working out for you; if not, let me know. 😊
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2015 04:09 PM · On: Versus Self
I love this story! So glad you are back!
Reviewer: urugwaj (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2015 06:54 PM · On: Versus Suitors
buhahaha! They are soooooo teens! Very, very IC but I just see them as teens :) It's so funny to see Michael at Justin's side but I can manage it because your Michael sounds very believable so I hope that he really likes his brother :) Fantastic story!
Can't wait what Brian will do when another admirer will be a permanent part of their group ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading this, and for the nice words! And also, for the beautiful banner you provided this story :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2015 04:35 AM · On: Versus Suitors
*takes a deep breath* this chapter left Me feeling a bit uneasy...things are quickly going south and I don't see it getting better anytime soon with Ben's arrival.
Author's Response: I'd like to say it will get BETTER when Ben arrives :) *wink*
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2015 03:14 AM · On: Versus Suitors
Oh boy! Brian is jealous!
Author's Response: Can't he convince you otherwise?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2015 11:14 PM · On: Versus Suitors
I do think Brian is jealous.
Author's Response: Well, I think so, too. :D
Reviewer: ferris (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2015 08:53 PM · On: Versus Suitors
Good to see another installment of this very different story. There is a lot of set up, hopefully more action next chapter.
And want to say, I support your use of "semi retard" or any other terms you care to use. Writing is supposed to be a true expression of how the author thinks the characters would speak, think, and relate to one another. Hope you try to please yourself, and not let others, or even me, govern what you want to say.
Author's Response: Thank you for the nice words ferris :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2015 07:14 PM · On: Versus Suitors
Another interesting chapter, Sharry. I do love to see a jealous Brian at work, and I think Michael is already onto him. 😉
I sent you detailed instructions on adding the banner to your story. Please let me know if you need any further assistance on that. I will be looking forward to seeing where you take this story. ~Kim
Author's Response: Thanks :) Yeah, I love jealous Brian, too!
Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2015 12:24 PM · On: Versus Uknown
Interesting beginning, I love this kind of stories. I'm very glad you decided to write it - I can't wait to see the next chapters! Brian/Ben competition will probably be angsty and funny at the same time - I can't wait!
Author's Response: Thank you. I also love this kind of stories but I only found really few of them, so I decided to make one. I hope the next chapters would still hold your interest :)
Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2015 05:49 AM · On: Versus Uknown
This is going to be a really good story. It is different with Brian/Ben going after Justin. This should be really interesting.
Author's Response: Thankyou very much :) I think it's interesting too, hence, writing this.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2015 07:24 PM · On: Versus Uknown
This should be very interesting.
Author's Response: Uhhuh, I hope I could keep up with your interest :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2015 05:29 PM · On: Versus Uknown
I gotta say this look at the gang from Mikey's POV is different. Enjoyably so. Even the differences from cannon are neat. I'll be looking forward to future chapters. You go, Girl!
Author's Response: Thank you for the encouragement. It's duly noted! :D
Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2015 02:35 PM · On: Versus Uknown
O God ! I just commented after agesss. . Prolly cz it's been a while since I was actually attracted to a storyline. . I love it already !!
Author's Response: Thank you for liking it!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2015 12:20 PM · On: Versus Uknown
Welcome to Midnight Whispers, Sharry! And thanks for publishing your story on here. I just read the first chapter, and I think I'm going to really like this one.;) I particularly like the competition/jealousy angle of this story, and having Michael and Justin brothers is unique.;) I'll be looking forward to reading more of this story!
BTW, I deleted some of the information in the story notes, since it is already mentioned in the categories, and I added the disclaimer that is required with every new story. And I think for the most part your English is really good, considering it is not your native language. If you DO decide you would like a banner made or a beta to look over your chapters, we have a list of members willing to do that. Just look under my author name for the list, or contact me or Bob personally if you need any assistance. Again, welcome! ~Kim, Admin
Author's Response: Thank you! Have I told you I've read your stories, and for awhile, stuck to reading ONLY your stories. Guess I haven't. But, JSYK, I DO love the stories you've written :)
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